Real And Fake - Pris vs. Katja (finished!)
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Does this story has to be continued? cuz part 24 will be the end
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Re: Real And Fake - Pris vs. Katja (finished!)
Onyone Thu Jan 03, 2008 7:14 pm
3 friends..
so Hen, Imke and you
well then I'm filled in
so Hen, Imke and you
well then I'm filled in
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Re: Real And Fake - Pris vs. Katja (finished!)
Hen «3 Javi Thu Jan 03, 2008 10:41 pm
xxImkexx wrote:YAY!
Cool
Yeah the same
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Re: Real And Fake - Pris vs. Katja (finished!)
Onyone Thu Jan 03, 2008 11:58 pm
1. Pris
I walked with accurate steps over the square of the school, my friends behind me and I felt the looks of the boys in my back. But today I didn’t stopped to flirt. We walked straight to our spot, a table in the canteen, on the right side next to the bar. There sat Lorenzo, my ex, probably he didn’t knew that yet.
‘Hey chick,’ he said. Yes, it’s true, and I liked that before. But who greeted his girl with ‘chick’ like you are a chicken.
‘You didn’t got my SMS?’ I asked and sat down.
‘No, my cellphone is still at home, I didn’t heard anything from you this weekend, were you…?’
‘There is nothing between us anymore,’
He looked at me like I just slapped him in his face. L-O-S-E-R!!
‘But…’ he tried.
‘Sorry, Lorenzo, but I don’t love you anymore, and it’s unfair to act like I still love you while I have a other boy,’
He shook his head, a bit sadly. ‘But we stay friends, ok?’
‘Of course,’ I smiled. Yes right, dude, I thought, But ok to be honest he is one of the most popular boys in school, blonde, muscled and that kind of things. Amazing, but not for a too long time.
‘Are you alone now? No boy?’ Kath asked, my best friend since the first class. She had long, wavy brown hair, and big blue eyes. She also was intelligent, but not a nerd like the most people here on the gymnasium of Madrid.
‘Of course not,’ I smiled. ‘Because I met Friday night such a cute boy and you are never going to believe me when I say his name. But hey, where is Charlyse?’ I ignored the fact that Charlyse wanted to be called Charlie. She changed more and more into a boy, she even cut her hair and she never wore sexy tops anymore. And she was again too late.
‘Here I am!’ there she was, running, red cheeks and gasping. I shook my head by seeing so less charm. ‘I was with Trevor!’
Trevor was her boy, and my ex, he was now a gothic, too many black, always looking uninterested and so on.
‘Oh yes, with Trevor,’ I said uninterested. ‘And did he told anything interesting? Of course not, but I have something new…’
‘He has a new skateboard,’ Charlyse babbled, through my story. I looked at her cool.
‘I thought I was telling something,’
‘Yes, but you asked…’
‘You come running to us like some idiot, you clothes look like you shop at the Salvation Army because the hang so wide around you because you keep annoying us with your weight problems, while you don’t have any. And then you also interrupt us in our conversation?’
The other four girls nodded and looked at her accusing.
‘But…’
‘Oh, shut up!’
Charlyse busted into tears and ran away. Probably to Trevor…
If you don’t like this, I won’t continue
I walked with accurate steps over the square of the school, my friends behind me and I felt the looks of the boys in my back. But today I didn’t stopped to flirt. We walked straight to our spot, a table in the canteen, on the right side next to the bar. There sat Lorenzo, my ex, probably he didn’t knew that yet.
‘Hey chick,’ he said. Yes, it’s true, and I liked that before. But who greeted his girl with ‘chick’ like you are a chicken.
‘You didn’t got my SMS?’ I asked and sat down.
‘No, my cellphone is still at home, I didn’t heard anything from you this weekend, were you…?’
‘There is nothing between us anymore,’
He looked at me like I just slapped him in his face. L-O-S-E-R!!
‘But…’ he tried.
‘Sorry, Lorenzo, but I don’t love you anymore, and it’s unfair to act like I still love you while I have a other boy,’
He shook his head, a bit sadly. ‘But we stay friends, ok?’
‘Of course,’ I smiled. Yes right, dude, I thought, But ok to be honest he is one of the most popular boys in school, blonde, muscled and that kind of things. Amazing, but not for a too long time.
‘Are you alone now? No boy?’ Kath asked, my best friend since the first class. She had long, wavy brown hair, and big blue eyes. She also was intelligent, but not a nerd like the most people here on the gymnasium of Madrid.
‘Of course not,’ I smiled. ‘Because I met Friday night such a cute boy and you are never going to believe me when I say his name. But hey, where is Charlyse?’ I ignored the fact that Charlyse wanted to be called Charlie. She changed more and more into a boy, she even cut her hair and she never wore sexy tops anymore. And she was again too late.
‘Here I am!’ there she was, running, red cheeks and gasping. I shook my head by seeing so less charm. ‘I was with Trevor!’
Trevor was her boy, and my ex, he was now a gothic, too many black, always looking uninterested and so on.
‘Oh yes, with Trevor,’ I said uninterested. ‘And did he told anything interesting? Of course not, but I have something new…’
‘He has a new skateboard,’ Charlyse babbled, through my story. I looked at her cool.
‘I thought I was telling something,’
‘Yes, but you asked…’
‘You come running to us like some idiot, you clothes look like you shop at the Salvation Army because the hang so wide around you because you keep annoying us with your weight problems, while you don’t have any. And then you also interrupt us in our conversation?’
The other four girls nodded and looked at her accusing.
‘But…’
‘Oh, shut up!’
Charlyse busted into tears and ran away. Probably to Trevor…
If you don’t like this, I won’t continue
Last edited by on Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:03 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Real And Fake - Pris vs. Katja (finished!)
girl1035 Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:01 am
This is great. Please CONTINUE . 
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x Imke x Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:05 am
Wooow Pris! 
You are a bitch!! 
Great, and I want more!!
You are a bitch!! Great, and I want more!!
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Sergo Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:07 am
Iwas just gonna call her a bitch too
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Re: Real And Fake - Pris vs. Katja (finished!)
Onyone Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:34 am
2. Pris again
‘Alright, so I met a boy,’ I looked at my friends separate, you could feel the tension rising up. First Kath, with sparkling eyes, then Sergo with her brown eyes black/brown hair. Then came Hen with her blue eyes. And after that…
‘Imke!’ I said to the red-haired girl. ‘Your mascara ran out,’ I added shocked. How long wasn’t it like that? And who would have seen her already?
‘Oh, I already had such a worse day, first a bad hair day’ So that was why she wore a hat. ‘Then a broken nail and now this!’
‘It’s your horoscope girl,’ I said, shook my head and handed her a tissue. ‘The stars are against you,’ and she started cleaning her face.
‘But who is it?’ Kath asked unpatient.
‘Well, I was at the hotel to pick up dad, he had there something important, anyways not my business. And after that we drove along the studios of Madrid. And guess who came out of there?’ they all looked a bit stupid at me. You didn’t came easily there, but my dad’s friend worked there, so that’s why.
‘Ony!!’
At the same time they all started screaming.
‘Waaaaaah!! Ony’ it sounded through the canteen.
‘Girls, calm down!’ the woman from the bar said and looked annoyed at us.
‘Well, I step out from the car, and daddy greeted his friend and I went to Ony,’ I told. ‘And saturday we went to the cinema, and we kissed! He is so cute. He keeps saying I’m his true love and that he always believed in love at the first sight. So sweet! And ooh, he can kiss!’ I dreamed away and almost forgot my friend were still with me.
‘And now?’ Sergo asked.
‘Well, this afternoon we go into city,’ I answered.
‘So, exciting!’ Imke said.
I sighed. ‘Yes, I’m so totally in love.’
‘But he is so…. And his friends…,’ Kath said.
‘I’ll see what I can so,’ I smiled and winked.
‘So…’ Hen started. ‘Who is that?’ I interrupted her and pointed at a girl who sat down on another table, it clearly annoyed Trevor, but she looked angry at him and started eating. She dared.
‘She is new, she comes from Valencia,’ Imke knew. What? And I didn’t knew that?
‘Oh. Nicky or something like that, wasn’t it?’ I asked, they would never know I didn’t knew anything about this.
‘Katja,’ Hen said.
‘Almost the same,’ I replied.
‘I have maths with her, Raul helps her,’
My heart fell on the floor when I heard that.
‘Raul Florez?’ I asked.
‘Yes, which Raul we have here more,’
‘Then she got a good taste, we have to ask her tomorrow or she comes and sit her with us,’ I decided.
‘Alright, so I met a boy,’ I looked at my friends separate, you could feel the tension rising up. First Kath, with sparkling eyes, then Sergo with her brown eyes black/brown hair. Then came Hen with her blue eyes. And after that…
‘Imke!’ I said to the red-haired girl. ‘Your mascara ran out,’ I added shocked. How long wasn’t it like that? And who would have seen her already?
‘Oh, I already had such a worse day, first a bad hair day’ So that was why she wore a hat. ‘Then a broken nail and now this!’
‘It’s your horoscope girl,’ I said, shook my head and handed her a tissue. ‘The stars are against you,’ and she started cleaning her face.
‘But who is it?’ Kath asked unpatient.
‘Well, I was at the hotel to pick up dad, he had there something important, anyways not my business. And after that we drove along the studios of Madrid. And guess who came out of there?’ they all looked a bit stupid at me. You didn’t came easily there, but my dad’s friend worked there, so that’s why.
‘Ony!!’
At the same time they all started screaming.
‘Waaaaaah!! Ony’ it sounded through the canteen.
‘Girls, calm down!’ the woman from the bar said and looked annoyed at us.
‘Well, I step out from the car, and daddy greeted his friend and I went to Ony,’ I told. ‘And saturday we went to the cinema, and we kissed! He is so cute. He keeps saying I’m his true love and that he always believed in love at the first sight. So sweet! And ooh, he can kiss!’ I dreamed away and almost forgot my friend were still with me.
‘And now?’ Sergo asked.
‘Well, this afternoon we go into city,’ I answered.
‘So, exciting!’ Imke said.
I sighed. ‘Yes, I’m so totally in love.’
‘But he is so…. And his friends…,’ Kath said.
‘I’ll see what I can so,’ I smiled and winked.
‘So…’ Hen started. ‘Who is that?’ I interrupted her and pointed at a girl who sat down on another table, it clearly annoyed Trevor, but she looked angry at him and started eating. She dared.
‘She is new, she comes from Valencia,’ Imke knew. What? And I didn’t knew that?
‘Oh. Nicky or something like that, wasn’t it?’ I asked, they would never know I didn’t knew anything about this.
‘Katja,’ Hen said.
‘Almost the same,’ I replied.
‘I have maths with her, Raul helps her,’
My heart fell on the floor when I heard that.
‘Raul Florez?’ I asked.
‘Yes, which Raul we have here more,’
‘Then she got a good taste, we have to ask her tomorrow or she comes and sit her with us,’ I decided.
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emilia Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:39 am
this is great story
you are good writer...
you are good writer...
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x Imke x Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:42 am
Whoooooooo great part!!!
I know you have to go sleeping but
MOREEEE!!!!
I know you have to go sleeping but
MOREEEE!!!!
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Onyone Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:44 am
next part will be Katja instead of pris
so no bitchy stuff anymore for a while
so no bitchy stuff anymore for a while
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Kath Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:44 am
oooh! i like it
its fab!
its fab!
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Onyone Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:46 am
thanks girls
probably saturday more
probably saturday more
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Prisca Fri Jan 04, 2008 2:37 am
hmmm interessting.... i'm a bitch
and i loved!!!!!!!!!!
and i loved!!!!!!!!!!
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Prisca Fri Jan 04, 2008 6:03 pm
we need more............ as always
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