Spoilt Girl Story... (Part 19) The End
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Re: Spoilt Girl Story... (Part 19) The End
GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!!
She's going..to tell him...
I want more sis...please
She's going..to tell him...
I want more sis...please
Re: Spoilt Girl Story... (Part 19) The End
Great part!
I wanna know Mikel's reaction..
I wanna know Mikel's reaction..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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.. thanks..... yeah.. he's reaction,,,
Tinute- Number of posts : 352
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This is so good. Hopefully his love will heal her.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Part 17
I came near the door wich was open.... and heart someone‘s voice.... man‘s voice.... wich was singing some Spanish song... but i couldn‘t understand.... it wasn‘t enough loud....
I came closer... and door opened.... Mikel saw me and stud up fastly....
- Hola!... (he kissed me into cheeks) came here.. i‘ll show you something. ( he said and grabed my hand)
- What.......wh?.... ( I was saying.. when we went into another room..... and I stoped..... I saw a thounsand candles... and roses....)
He tur around and look at my ...
- ... I don‘t understand.... you.. said you have to finish some song... ( I said and looked at him confused..)
- You are the best song ever,,... (He said and kissed me slowly..) – will you say something.... (he asked and look et me..)
I was looking at him.... and tried to make right decision.... make good sentence.... the right way to say everything for him... I felt how my eyes started to be wet....
- Hey...... what‘s wrong..... ? ( he then asked and came closer to my.)
- It‘s not good...... ( I whispered ..)
- I understand you..... you will finish school and all that stuf... but.. you can study here... and we would be together..... ( he said and look at me smiling)
- You don‘t get it.... You.. you don‘t know anything.... ( I said and wanted to go away.. but Ony‘s words stoped me.... „he have to know all truth,.“...)
- What,...?.. oh.. I understand... you have boyfriend..... ? ( he said and looked at me a bit angrily..)
- No..... i don‘t.... ( i said and wanted to continue my speach.... but he didn‘t let me..)
- So why.... you are lesbian.... or you are dying... or.. I don‘t understand... ( he looked at me and started to laugh...)
After he's last words...... „Or you are dying?“... I was standing still.. and couldn‘t say anything... I felthow my heart started to beat faster.. and faster...
- Yes..... ( I whispered)
He looked at me... starngly.... and very confused....
- wh.... what?... ( he was shocked...)
Few minutes.... we were standing there and couldn‘t say anything..... I turn around and was started to go.... i wanted to gone... to shout.. to die now.. at this moment.... It‘s was so hard to see him suffering...
- Why... you didn‘t say for me...? ( he asked then)
I turn around and looked at he‘s eyes...But I couldn't see anything throw the tears....
- Doctors said that I have to live normal life.. and I was doing it.. and then you appear in my life..... and....
I was searching words....I wanted to say that I love you.. and I don't want to leave you... but... reality is too cruel......
I turn around.. and started to run... run as fast as I can....
I came near the door wich was open.... and heart someone‘s voice.... man‘s voice.... wich was singing some Spanish song... but i couldn‘t understand.... it wasn‘t enough loud....
I came closer... and door opened.... Mikel saw me and stud up fastly....
- Hola!... (he kissed me into cheeks) came here.. i‘ll show you something. ( he said and grabed my hand)
- What.......wh?.... ( I was saying.. when we went into another room..... and I stoped..... I saw a thounsand candles... and roses....)
He tur around and look at my ...
- ... I don‘t understand.... you.. said you have to finish some song... ( I said and looked at him confused..)
- You are the best song ever,,... (He said and kissed me slowly..) – will you say something.... (he asked and look et me..)
I was looking at him.... and tried to make right decision.... make good sentence.... the right way to say everything for him... I felt how my eyes started to be wet....
- Hey...... what‘s wrong..... ? ( he then asked and came closer to my.)
- It‘s not good...... ( I whispered ..)
- I understand you..... you will finish school and all that stuf... but.. you can study here... and we would be together..... ( he said and look at me smiling)
- You don‘t get it.... You.. you don‘t know anything.... ( I said and wanted to go away.. but Ony‘s words stoped me.... „he have to know all truth,.“...)
- What,...?.. oh.. I understand... you have boyfriend..... ? ( he said and looked at me a bit angrily..)
- No..... i don‘t.... ( i said and wanted to continue my speach.... but he didn‘t let me..)
- So why.... you are lesbian.... or you are dying... or.. I don‘t understand... ( he looked at me and started to laugh...)
After he's last words...... „Or you are dying?“... I was standing still.. and couldn‘t say anything... I felthow my heart started to beat faster.. and faster...
- Yes..... ( I whispered)
He looked at me... starngly.... and very confused....
- wh.... what?... ( he was shocked...)
Few minutes.... we were standing there and couldn‘t say anything..... I turn around and was started to go.... i wanted to gone... to shout.. to die now.. at this moment.... It‘s was so hard to see him suffering...
- Why... you didn‘t say for me...? ( he asked then)
I turn around and looked at he‘s eyes...But I couldn't see anything throw the tears....
- Doctors said that I have to live normal life.. and I was doing it.. and then you appear in my life..... and....
I was searching words....I wanted to say that I love you.. and I don't want to leave you... but... reality is too cruel......
I turn around.. and started to run... run as fast as I can....
Tinute- Number of posts : 352
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Naf..
So sad part..
So sad part..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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awww...so sad
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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OMG
This is so sad
This is so sad
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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this was very sad
but great part
but great part
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Aaaaw
You will have to explain why no more new parts... Friday
You will have to explain why no more new parts... Friday
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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yeah... we want new part
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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WOW Sergo...you please more in lithuanian... Now Tina must write new part
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we need a new part....
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Part 18
Knock on the door.....
It opened.....Ony came into my room with a cup of green tea.....
- Good morning..... ( he said and kissed me into cheek and gave it to me)... – how you feel today..?(he asked and sat on the chair near my bed)
- (I sat comfortable......) – Physical or emotional?..... ( i asked and lay my head)
- Both.....
- Good.... and terible....( I said and siped tea)
He looked at me and didn‘t say anything.... he knew.... that it‘s hasrd to speak about that for me...
- You are livining with me ..... and... In general... i don‘t know anything about you...... ( He said and started to smile..)
- What do you want to know? ( I asked and smiled back)
- Everything.... your hobbies.... preferences, likes, boys.... ( he started to laugh)
- Hobbies.... hm... likes..?...... I can answer in these question... with one word..... ( I said and look intrigue)
- What is that word..?
- ............. Dance.... ( I smiled).....
- You like dance..? ( He said confused..)
-
I wanted to answer... but door belt interrupt....I look at Ony as like he look at me....
- I think... it will be him..... ( Ony said and stud up..)
- If it is... I will open.... ( i said and stud up fastlty..... )
I went near the door and stoped..... – concentrate......i said to myself........ i closed my eyes... and felt warm and cold shivers...... then open the door..... i was almost saying.... Hi...... when my eyes started to grow....... terrace was full of sunflowers..... and he was standing in the midle of them... with one white flower......
- You..... ! ( I whispered silently....)
- Me..... (he answered..... and came closer..) – look I want to say.... ( he was trying to speak... but I saw that it‘s hard..)
- I will understand you..... ( i said and lay my head..)
- (He looked at me confused..) – I .. I don‘t understand..... ?
- I said it‘s nothing if you don‘t want to be with me..... ( i said and turn around prepareted to go..)
- Wait!.. (he yelled).... what do you mean....? I don‘t want to leave you.... (he said and turn my face into he‘s)
- What.....? ( i asked and felt how my eyes started to be wet..)
- Love....... I need you.. more than before.... (he said and embraced me...)
- You...... are you serious.... ? ( i asked still with tears in my eyes..)
- ( he looked at my eyes....) I will be... if you will promise me one thing .. ( he said and clean my tears..)
- what...? ( i asked and started to smile..)
- That... you will never stop smiling... and ..... Now....... you would kiss me... ( he said and started to smile......)
I was looking at him... and couldn‘t believe..... yesterday... i though..... that everything will be ded.... he‘s feelings..... memories of me... and now....... i touched he‘s face and kissed slowly.....
Knock on the door.....
It opened.....Ony came into my room with a cup of green tea.....
- Good morning..... ( he said and kissed me into cheek and gave it to me)... – how you feel today..?(he asked and sat on the chair near my bed)
- (I sat comfortable......) – Physical or emotional?..... ( i asked and lay my head)
- Both.....
- Good.... and terible....( I said and siped tea)
He looked at me and didn‘t say anything.... he knew.... that it‘s hasrd to speak about that for me...
- You are livining with me ..... and... In general... i don‘t know anything about you...... ( He said and started to smile..)
- What do you want to know? ( I asked and smiled back)
- Everything.... your hobbies.... preferences, likes, boys.... ( he started to laugh)
- Hobbies.... hm... likes..?...... I can answer in these question... with one word..... ( I said and look intrigue)
- What is that word..?
- ............. Dance.... ( I smiled).....
- You like dance..? ( He said confused..)
-
I wanted to answer... but door belt interrupt....I look at Ony as like he look at me....
- I think... it will be him..... ( Ony said and stud up..)
- If it is... I will open.... ( i said and stud up fastlty..... )
I went near the door and stoped..... – concentrate......i said to myself........ i closed my eyes... and felt warm and cold shivers...... then open the door..... i was almost saying.... Hi...... when my eyes started to grow....... terrace was full of sunflowers..... and he was standing in the midle of them... with one white flower......
- You..... ! ( I whispered silently....)
- Me..... (he answered..... and came closer..) – look I want to say.... ( he was trying to speak... but I saw that it‘s hard..)
- I will understand you..... ( i said and lay my head..)
- (He looked at me confused..) – I .. I don‘t understand..... ?
- I said it‘s nothing if you don‘t want to be with me..... ( i said and turn around prepareted to go..)
- Wait!.. (he yelled).... what do you mean....? I don‘t want to leave you.... (he said and turn my face into he‘s)
- What.....? ( i asked and felt how my eyes started to be wet..)
- Love....... I need you.. more than before.... (he said and embraced me...)
- You...... are you serious.... ? ( i asked still with tears in my eyes..)
- ( he looked at my eyes....) I will be... if you will promise me one thing .. ( he said and clean my tears..)
- what...? ( i asked and started to smile..)
- That... you will never stop smiling... and ..... Now....... you would kiss me... ( he said and started to smile......)
I was looking at him... and couldn‘t believe..... yesterday... i though..... that everything will be ded.... he‘s feelings..... memories of me... and now....... i touched he‘s face and kissed slowly.....
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ohhhh mikel
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Finaly..Finaly you wrote new part!!!
It was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this story!!!!
Daugiau???
It was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this story!!!!
Daugiau???
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