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Spoilt Girl Story... (Part 19) The End

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Post  Monikute Tue Jan 29, 2008 9:16 pm

GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!! Shocked Shocked Shocked
She's going..to tell him... Shocked
I want more sis...please Love struck
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Post  Heli Tue Jan 29, 2008 9:23 pm

Great part! Wink
I wanna know Mikel's reaction..
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Post  Tinute Tue Jan 29, 2008 10:25 pm

Laughing Laughing .. thanks..... yeah.. he's reaction,,,Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Twisted Evil
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Post  girl1035 Tue Jan 29, 2008 10:49 pm

This is so good. Hopefully his love will heal her.
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Post  Tinute Sun Feb 03, 2008 2:02 pm

Part 17

I came near the door wich was open.... and heart someone‘s voice.... man‘s voice.... wich was singing some Spanish song... but i couldn‘t understand.... it wasn‘t enough loud....
I came closer... and door opened.... Mikel saw me and stud up fastly....

- Hola!... (he kissed me into cheeks) came here.. i‘ll show you something. ( he said and grabed my hand)
- What.......wh?.... ( I was saying.. when we went into another room..... and I stoped..... I saw a thounsand candles... and roses....)

He tur around and look at my ...

- ... I don‘t understand.... you.. said you have to finish some song... ( I said and looked at him confused..)
- You are the best song ever,,... (He said and kissed me slowly..) – will you say something.... (he asked and look et me..)

I was looking at him.... and tried to make right decision.... make good sentence.... the right way to say everything for him... I felt how my eyes started to be wet....

- Hey...... what‘s wrong..... ? ( he then asked and came closer to my.)
- It‘s not good...... ( I whispered ..)
- I understand you..... you will finish school and all that stuf... but.. you can study here... and we would be together..... ( he said and look at me smiling)
- You don‘t get it.... You.. you don‘t know anything.... ( I said and wanted to go away.. but Ony‘s words stoped me.... „he have to know all truth,.“...)
- What,...?.. oh.. I understand... you have boyfriend..... ? ( he said and looked at me a bit angrily..)
- No..... i don‘t.... ( i said and wanted to continue my speach.... but he didn‘t let me..)
- So why.... you are lesbian.... or you are dying... or.. I don‘t understand... ( he looked at me and started to laugh...)
After he's last words...... „Or you are dying?“... I was standing still.. and couldn‘t say anything... I felthow my heart started to beat faster.. and faster...
- Yes..... ( I whispered)

He looked at me... starngly.... and very confused....

- wh.... what?... ( he was shocked...)

Few minutes.... we were standing there and couldn‘t say anything..... I turn around and was started to go.... i wanted to gone... to shout.. to die now.. at this moment.... It‘s was so hard to see him suffering...

- Why... you didn‘t say for me...? ( he asked then)
I turn around and looked at he‘s eyes...But I couldn't see anything throw the tears....
- Doctors said that I have to live normal life.. and I was doing it.. and then you appear in my life..... and....

I was searching words....I wanted to say that I love you.. and I don't want to leave you... but... reality is too cruel......
I turn around.. and started to run... run as fast as I can....
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Post  Heli Sun Feb 03, 2008 2:50 pm

Naf.. Sad Sad
So sad part..
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Post  girl1035 Sun Feb 03, 2008 3:10 pm

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Post  emilia Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:22 pm

awww...so sad Sad
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Post  Sergo Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:49 pm

OMG Shocked Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

This is so sad Sad
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Post  Monikute Mon Feb 04, 2008 8:03 pm

OMG Shocked Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad
It's so sad Crying or Very sad
Why...why that...please...DAUGIAU Rolling Eyes Crying or Very sad
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Post  Prisca Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:10 am

this was very sad Sad

but great part Very Happy
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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 8:13 pm

Aaaaw Sad Sad Sad
You will have to explain why no more new parts... Friday Neutral
Laughing Razz Wink
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Post  Prisca Wed Feb 06, 2008 8:16 pm

yeah... we want new part Razz Razz
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Post  Monikute Fri Feb 08, 2008 7:02 pm

And we want new part NOW!!! Rolling Eyes
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Post  Sergo Fri Feb 08, 2008 7:34 pm

DAUGIAU!!!
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Post  Monikute Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:07 pm

WOW Sergo...you please more in lithuanian... Wink Now Tina must write new part Rolling Eyes Razz
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Post  Sergo Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:10 pm

she has to Laughing
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Post  Monikute Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:12 pm

Oh yeah Razz
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Post  Prisca Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:06 pm

we need a new part.... Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Monikute Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:22 pm

Come on Tina, write write!!!! Rolling Eyes We're waiting!!!!!
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Post  Tinute Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:52 pm

Part 18

Knock on the door.....
It opened.....Ony came into my room with a cup of green tea.....

- Good morning..... ( he said and kissed me into cheek and gave it to me)... – how you feel today..?(he asked and sat on the chair near my bed)
- (I sat comfortable......) – Physical or emotional?..... ( i asked and lay my head)
- Both.....
- Good.... and terible....( I said and siped tea)
He looked at me and didn‘t say anything.... he knew.... that it‘s hasrd to speak about that for me...

- You are livining with me ..... and... In general... i don‘t know anything about you...... ( He said and started to smile..)
- What do you want to know? ( I asked and smiled back)
- Everything.... your hobbies.... preferences, likes, boys.... ( he started to laugh)
- Hobbies.... hm... likes..?...... I can answer in these question... with one word..... ( I said and look intrigue)
- What is that word..?
- ............. Dance.... ( I smiled).....
- You like dance..? ( He said confused..)
-
I wanted to answer... but door belt interrupt....I look at Ony as like he look at me....

- I think... it will be him..... ( Ony said and stud up..)
- If it is... I will open.... ( i said and stud up fastlty..... )

I went near the door and stoped..... – concentrate......i said to myself........ i closed my eyes... and felt warm and cold shivers...... then open the door..... i was almost saying.... Hi...... when my eyes started to grow....... terrace was full of sunflowers..... and he was standing in the midle of them... with one white flower......

- You..... ! ( I whispered silently....)
- Me..... (he answered..... and came closer..) – look I want to say.... ( he was trying to speak... but I saw that it‘s hard..)
- I will understand you..... ( i said and lay my head..)
- (He looked at me confused..) – I .. I don‘t understand..... ?
- I said it‘s nothing if you don‘t want to be with me..... ( i said and turn around prepareted to go..)
- Wait!.. (he yelled).... what do you mean....? I don‘t want to leave you.... (he said and turn my face into he‘s)
- What.....? ( i asked and felt how my eyes started to be wet..)
- Love....... I need you.. more than before.... (he said and embraced me...)
- You...... are you serious.... ? ( i asked still with tears in my eyes..)
- ( he looked at my eyes....) I will be... if you will promise me one thing .. ( he said and clean my tears..)
- what...? ( i asked and started to smile..)
- That... you will never stop smiling... and ..... Now....... you would kiss me... ( he said and started to smile......)

I was looking at him... and couldn‘t believe..... yesterday... i though..... that everything will be ded.... he‘s feelings..... memories of me... and now....... i touched he‘s face and kissed slowly.....
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Post  Prisca Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:56 pm

ohhhh mikel Beating heart Beating heart
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Post  Monikute Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:59 pm

Finaly..Finaly you wrote new part!!! Razz
It was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked
I love this story!!!!
Daugiau??? Rolling Eyes
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Post  Sergo Fri Feb 08, 2008 10:04 pm

OOH!! Beating heart Beating heart
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Post  Monikute Fri Feb 08, 2008 10:10 pm

Sergo..your reaction is great Razz Razz Beating heart
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