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The Fifth One - PART 30. (FINISHED!)

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Post  Onyone Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:28 am

I decided to write a new fan fic
and here is the prologue
I just putted people in..
and if you don't wanna be in, then tell me

ooh and Ony isn't the main boy in the story Wink
he plays a big role but not the biggest
you'll see who

characters of the girls
Sergo
Imke
Priya
Katja
Hen
Pris
Kath
Natasha
Julia
Tina
Heli
and maybe more I forget now
and maybe I put more girls in when I need roles

Prologue
Sergo is 16 when she goes to a concert of D'NASH.
After the concert she sings in the toilet with the music which is on.
When she goes outside, she meets a man.
He is producer, and is impressed of her voice, especially the way it fits with the voices of the boys.
She enters the band as a female singer, and together with them she experiences a lot...

continue or stop?


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Post  Kath Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:31 am

Stop? Suspect naaah!
sounds good Very Happy more pleaseeeee MrGreen
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Post  Onyone Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:33 am

thanks Kath Smile

and if some of you wanna be in, just tell me and tell something about yourself
I guess I can make up roles for everyone
not so big as Sergo but yeah
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Post  Eveline Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:34 am

continue please Very Happy

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Post  Kath Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:36 am

oooh yeah! can i be in por favorrrr MrGreen
what do ya wanna know?
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Post  Onyone Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:37 am

things like personality and appearance
if you don't wanna tell here PM
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Post  emilia Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:41 am

This sounds good so don't stop...
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Post  Kath Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:45 am

Might as well say here Rolling Eyes Laughing
Ich habe braune lange lockige Haare und blaue Augen Razz
*pleased with ones self*
ich bin average height und size (completely forgotten the german Rolling Eyes)
erm... personality. thats a tough one...
random, romantic, make myself laugh a lot Laughing kinda smart & hardworking, love music (is that even personality?Suspect)...
and all edible things that are orange make my hyper Cool Laughing
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Post  Onyone Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:25 pm

you're in

I post next part this afternoon
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Post  Prisca Mon Jan 28, 2008 6:14 pm

the prologue looks cool... i want to read moreeee Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Aida Mon Jan 28, 2008 6:59 pm

Continueee!! Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Mon Jan 28, 2008 7:02 pm

omg i'm in a story Shocked MrGreen
continue MrGreen
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Post  Kath Mon Jan 28, 2008 7:42 pm

MrGreen woop woop - cant wait for the next part Thumbs Up
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Post  Onyone Mon Jan 28, 2008 8:35 pm

Part 1
‘Capaaaaz de todoooooo,’ it souded out loud, 5 hyperactive girls were singing with the music, they were together on holiday with the parents of two of the girls. One of the girls had dark hair and wore a black with gold skirt. Sergo really felt nervous. She always had that for concerts or other things she was looking forward to, and that only passed when it started. On her head was a cap which said in big red letters D’NASH. She started too early with singing – but she also didn’t had headphones on – and she pushed the girl with the Ipod where two of the girls listened to.
‘Are we almost there Imke?’
‘No,’ her friend said who stopped for a while singing. Her hair was made straight for today. She had a big smile on her face and her hair was bound together in a horsetail.
‘We aren’t even in Toledo, Sergo.’
‘My sense of direction,’ Sergo said and lifted up her shoulders. It didn’t bothered her a lot, but how earlier they were, the better it was. Imke pressed on a few buttons of her iPod, trying to make the sound louder. Left of her a girl with long brown, wavy hair, she was movind her head on the rhytm of the music. She wore long black trousers and a red t-shirt which said in big black letters ‘I Love You Mi Vida’ Under it, it said her name, Kath, in idyllic letters. On the sleeves stood also like on Sergo’s cap D’NASH. The girls were on their road to a concert of D’NASH, a Spanish group, with good lyrics, where they were all five big fans of. Sergo smiled when she thought of the four boys.
‘Isn’t this skirt too short?’ a girl with curly blond hair asked, who sat on one of the seats in front of the seats where Sergo, Imke and Kath sat. She was Kath’s sister. The girl next to her, with red hair shook her head.
‘They are on stage, smartie, if they want to look under it they have to lay down.’
The girls giggled about that idea, but the girl fruggled nervous at her skirt, which was a bit too short.
‘I said you had to put on a dress,’ Sergo said. On her trousers she wore a black top with golden sparkles. Her friend looked at her.
‘Would you have putted it on?’ she replied, thinking of the red with black dress which was on the bed now. Sergo shook her head with a grin. ‘I don’t like dresses, Pris.’
‘By the way, Imke, can you please put on ‘En Medio De La Calle? I need to hear it,’ the other red-haired girl said who was named Katja said.
Imke started with her iPod again, while Kath gave her one of the headphones.
‘Thanks,’ Katja said and sang with the first words of the song.
‘We are going to see them!’ Sergo suddenly yelled.
‘Finally,’ it sounded from all the girls’ lips.
‘Did someone took the CD with her?’ Kath asked, who missed the music, now she didn’t had a headphone anymore. ‘Sergo, don’t you have it in your discman?’
‘Oh yes,’ Sergo said, who couldn’t live long without her favourite music with her all the time. She took it out of the blue bag and looked at the autograph on it, from Mans Zelmerlow one of her other favourite singers.
‘I hope so, there is at least one with it today,’ she said while she handed the CD to the dad of Kath and Pris. He brought them to the concert.
‘I hope so they give a signing session,’ Pris said and her hand again went to her skirt. Imke putted her iPod off when the first sounds of ‘Casi’ went through the car and pushed Sergo.
‘We are almost in Aranjuez, so only a little while.’
Sergo felt the nervousness in her stomach and thanked her stressness that she doesn’t got any breakfast, because she would have thrown up for sure.
Imke was right, after a few minutes they entered the real Madrid, and after three minutes more they found the stadium where the performance would be.
Though it wasn’t 11 o’clock yet there was already a small group of fans at the fences…
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Post  Sergo Mon Jan 28, 2008 8:40 pm

Oooooh exciting What a Face

Måns Zerlmerlöw Cool
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Post  Kath Mon Jan 28, 2008 8:43 pm

MrGreen MrGreen aaaah this is soo good!
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Post  Prisca Mon Jan 28, 2008 8:45 pm

amazing..... Cool Cool Cool
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Post  x Imke x Mon Jan 28, 2008 8:57 pm

YAY I'M IN IT!! cheers cheers Thaaaanks ooh and you put my iPod in it too Cool my iPod feels really honoured now Laughing Laughing

Great part!! Very Happy More!!! MrGreen
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Post  Prisca Mon Jan 28, 2008 8:58 pm

yeah i forgot to say... thanks for putting me MrGreen MrGreen MrGreen
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Post  Onyone Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:05 pm

thanks girls
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Post  Sergo Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:20 pm

want moooore Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:22 pm

me tooo
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Post  Kath Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:25 pm

me threeee!
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Post  emilia Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:51 pm

oh i'm in..thank you Very Happy
great part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Eveline Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:52 pm

this is great Very Happy more please

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