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Turnaround - Part 40 The End :P

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Post  Prisca Sat Mar 22, 2008 3:03 am

the next one to this it will be the last one...

Part 39

With his car he drove fast to the airport to see if he can catch her before the plane leaves. He was almost in the airport when suddenly the streets were full. Traffic at that time is very strange and almost impossible but it was true. Being in the middle of traffic would turn impossible to catch Raquel. So he turned for other streets and parked the car there. He started to run like if his life was about to be taking. Minutes later he was on the airport looking for the plane. So many planes were leaving but he founds the one to Lisbon. Just a few minutes and that plane would leave the airport. He asked to one of the hostesses for each side of the airport he should go. She told him he should go to the left, but that he was late, the plane is leaving right now. He didn’t care with that and he ran to there. He lost his hopes when by the big window he saw the plane starting to fly. He was with his hands on the window, his eyes couldn’t believe that he was too late and now the love of his life was gone. He seated on the chair looking to the sky…
- What are you doing here? - I was behind of him with my hand on his shoulder. He quickly turned back to me.
- I thought I lost you forever in that plane.
- And you should have lost me. If my life wasn’t so lost in this moment I would take the plane.
-No, no. Don’t say that babe
- Don’t call me that. I’m not your babe anymore. And I shouldn’t even be talking to you. With all the shits you said to me in the hospital and you didn’t stop to hear what I had to say.
- But Mikel told me all the truth.
- But you had to hear him instead of me. So it’s all over forever. There isn’t no turning back. And you followed with your life with that girl so…
- No. I didn’t follow and that girl you are talking she is nothing to me. She kissed me and that didn’t mean anything. Believe in me!!
- Now I should do like you did to me, I shouldn’t believe in you. But I don’t know why, I believe in you. – I said this sitting on a chair.
He seated on the chair next to me and he putted my head on his shoulder stroking my hair.
- I’m so glad that you stayed here. I couldn’t watch you leaving without saying a big sorry for all I told to you. When Mikel told me all that happened to you my world just crashed down. And about the baby, oh god, if you didn’t have lost it you would make me the happiest man in all world. But I don’t want you to think in that. I just want to know if you forgive me and if you stay here forever with me being my girl.
- I forgive you because you are the love from life, the only man you made me happy in all my life. And you are regretful, so we can try again to live together happily and forever, like the fairy tales.
- Omg, thank you so much babe
- Please, don’t say nothing more now, just hold me very tight…
We passed some of the night in the airport looking to the sky by that big window…

Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  Gazel Sat Mar 22, 2008 3:27 am

Sad Sad Sad Sad

ah ony ah No

if ony hurt Raquel again, i'll kill him Turnaround - Part 40 The End :P - Page 35 853544
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Post  Prisca Sat Mar 22, 2008 3:30 am

you are bad tonight sis Laughing Laughing
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Post  girl1035 Sat Mar 22, 2008 10:14 am

This was bloody good. Very Happy
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Post  Kath Sat Mar 22, 2008 10:44 am

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw MrGreen
that is the cutest! Thumbs Up
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Post  Laura Sat Mar 22, 2008 11:57 am

It's wonderful :doublethumbsup Need more Wink
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Post  emilia Sat Mar 22, 2008 12:29 pm

aawww ony is so cute Very Happy
so great part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  x Imke x Sat Mar 22, 2008 4:35 pm

Mikel's talk with Ony was great Razz Laughing

Naaaw they're back together!! Very Happy
I just hope Ony won't be stupid again Neutral

Anyway great parts!! Very Happy Moooore??? MrGreen
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Post  Prisca Sat Mar 22, 2008 4:46 pm

so next part... that i will post someday... it will the be last Laughing Laughing

and thanks girls Smile Smile
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Post  Heli Sat Mar 22, 2008 6:19 pm

Aaaw.. They're together now.. MrGreen
Great part! Wink
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Post  Sergo Sat Mar 22, 2008 6:30 pm

Naaw MrGreen pig
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Post  Prisca Sat Mar 22, 2008 6:56 pm

Part 40 and last one

A few hours later we decided to come back to home. It was about 4 in the morning, and the only lights we had were from the lamps. Ony drove back to home and I slept in the back seat.
- Babe, wake up! – He said touching carefully my shoulder
- Let me stay here. It’s cold outside. – And I turned my back to him.
- Come on. I can’t sleep on the car or tomorrow my body will be all broken. And I’m sure you prefer sleep in a bed that in this mini back seat.
- But I’m mini too.
- And I am a big man, so get out.
- Ok, ok… - And I stepped out – brrrr is so cold Ony, open the damn door.
And he started to look for his keys in all the pockets he had but no keys.
- What are you waiting?? – I asked impatient
- I can’t find my keys, I think I forgot my keys on the backstage.
-Damn it, so ring the bell
- Maybe the boys are sleeping.
- They wake up
- And wake up angry
- So you prefer sleep on the door?
- Yes…
-Yes, the hell… - I rang the door – Now just wait for someone to open
We waited minutes but no one appeared. I rang again, but still nothing.
- What the hell? They don’t are at home. They usually do a lot of this?
- This what? Not sleep at home??
- Yes…
- Well, sometimes we stayed later in the night at disco dancing and…
- And doesn’t matter… What we do now? You don’t want to sleep on the car.
- Maybe if we jump the wall in the back we can enter by the backyard and maybe the doors are there open. What do you think?
- You leave that open??
- Sometimes, yes.
- Don’t you know that exist robbers??
- Yes, but this is a calm place…
- So good that my father took me from here without anyone seeing…
- Ok, don’t remember that. We try or not?
- No better option...so yes
Ony jumped first and then help me.
- Look out the grass, it is all wet and you can fall or in the ground or in the po…
Too late my sneakers slipped on the grass and I thrust aside Ony so he fell on the pool.
- Sorry hun..
- Xiuuu don’t say nothing, I warn you and you slip, if I knew this would happen I wouldn’t warn you. – He said this getting out of the pool and walking to the glass door – It’s closed
- Break the glass, we will not stay here.
- Nope..
-Nope, why??
- Because even I broke the glass, the persianne behind is close.
- Oh no. What we do now?
- Now you sleep in the car and I will sleep here.
-You are all wet to sleep outside and I don’t want to sleep alone. We both sleep here on the mattress.
- I’m all wet. I don’t want to wet you.
- I have on my bag, the real Madrid shirt that fits you because the size is XXL. – And we laughed.
- Ok, I will take it from the car. Wait me.
A few minutes he was back already with the shirt dressed and brought another jacket for me.
We both lie on the mattress holding each other, even Ony stilled all wet. But I didn’t care I just squeeze my legs in his legs and put the jacket over us, and we slept the rest of the night like that.
The sun started to appear when the boys backed to home. They saw Ony’s car parked in front of the house so they thought he was already at home.
- The door is locked – Javi said to the others
-Strange! Because Ony never closes the door by key – Mikel said with a surprised face.
They walked him and started looking for him but they couldn’t find it.
- This house is so dark – Javi said – Mikel open the doors of the living room.
And he walked to them opening like Javi asked. He made a lot of noise but we two didn’t wake up, we were so tired.
- Where do you think Ony is? - Mikel asked to Javi when he heard someone sneeze – Who sneezed like a girl right now?
- Not me – Javi and Basty said
- But you heard it, don’t you?
- No – And then again a sneeze sound
- See, someone sneeze and the sound came from the backyard. – And he walked to there and the boys followed him. I sneezed again. I was getting with flu because sleeping outside and close to Ony put my back all humid – Be quiet, look to that two, so cute.
And he picked up from the floor a leaf and started tickling my nose. With my hand I scratched the nose but Mikel tickled again. This time I moved my face and my body to Ony’s side, our mouths were touching each other so he automatically started to kiss me, without opening the eyes.
- Love is so blind – Mikel said and we two finally open our eyes and wake up. When I saw that the boys were looking for us, I push the jacket for the top covering up our faces.
-Oh no! No, no! Not a porn movie at this hour – Mikel said and we all laugh….


Never turn your back to the love… you don’t know if it will appear again…



The End… oppsss sorry, to be continued…. Razz Razz Razz
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Post  emilia Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:01 pm

sooo great part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Kath Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:02 pm

Laughing Laughing Laughing
when ony fell in the pool! and the tickling of the nose!
great way to end a great story! MrGreen
cant wait for the continuation! Thumbs Up
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Post  Prisca Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:03 pm

thanks girls... MrGreen MrGreen MrGreen
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Post  girl1035 Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:05 pm

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
This was so great. Very Happy When continuation?
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Post  Prisca Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:12 pm

when i finish it... Razz Razz i only have 4 pages of it Razz Razz
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Post  Heli Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:16 pm

Aaaw, sweet ending! Thumbs Up
This whole story was really amazing!
Can't wait for the continuation... Wink
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Post  Tinute Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:19 pm

omg.. so AMAZING.....Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:28 pm

-Oh no! No, no! Not a porn movie at this hour

Laughing Laughing
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Post  Prisca Sat Mar 22, 2008 7:30 pm

Razz Razz Razz
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Post  Laura Sat Mar 22, 2008 8:10 pm

Woow amazing ending Shocked Thumbs Up Waiting continuation Wink Wink
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Post  x Imke x Sat Mar 22, 2008 8:56 pm

CONTINUATION!!! cheers
Sorry, was the first thing I could say Laughing

Now...

That was an awesome end!! Very Happy
Ony falling in the pool!! Razz Laughing

Can't waaait for the continuation!!! What a Face
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Post  **Unnur** Sun Mar 23, 2008 12:01 am

Great ending Very Happy cant wait for the continuation Smile

hah the nose tickling xD It was once done to me, and it was very uncomfortable Razz but still funny Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Sun Mar 23, 2008 12:55 am

thanks a lot girls... Smile Smile Smile
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