La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
oh.....everything is going to be very interesting...And that Gabrielle.. ....
Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Ooh.. She won the race again...
Girlpower..
Great part!
Girlpower..
Great part!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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She woooon Girls rock!
Curious to what that Gabrielle will do
More?
Curious to what that Gabrielle will do
More?
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Natalia and Diego were celebrating. Since Antonio hadn’t been beaten for few years, it was pretty good reason to celebrate.
“You need to be careful now.” suddenly Diego said seriously.
“Why?” Natalia didn’t understand.
“You won over Antonio. I could even say you won over Gabrielle. And this ain’t good. Gabrielle is upset. With your victory you showed to the people he is vulnerable. Now they feel less committed to him. There might even be revolution. If you win few more times, Gabrielle won’t any followers left.”
“What the hell are you talking about?” Natalia really didn’t understand anything.
“You really should start listening to me.”
“I do, but it makes no sense.”
“OK. I’ll try to explain it clearly. Gabrielle control Madrid’s underground and everyone if afraid of him because he leaves no space for other people. If there’s a great car driver he hires him or beats him. Depends on what is better for him at the moment. If there’s another drug dealer he simply kills him. Or if some man is dating a woman and Gabrielle or his brother want her, she is gonna be his. So when you beat his driver, you can be sure he will be after you.”
“But why? I just won the competition. The main race is far away.”
“It doesn’t matter for him. You’re a threat. You are giving these people a hope for better tomorrow. It’s something that definitely doesn’t fit into his plans.”
“I’m not easy to be beaten.”
“I hope so.”
“What if I wanna win over him?”
“Well, then I hope you know what you’re doing. This is gonna be tough.”
“I do.” Natalia said, said goodbye to Diego and left to her car.
Antonio was leaning to her car. He was obviously waiting for her. And he was so smart to stand to the door so she couldn’t get in without facing him.
“Get off.” Natalia said madly. But Antonio didn’t move. They were staring at each other and then Antonio left without a word. With a victorious smile on his face. Natalia got to her car but didn’t went off right away.
What was this supposed to mean? First Diego with his speech and now this Antonio with his freaking behaviour. Was it some sort of message from Gabrielle? Should I be worried? And why the hell is everyone so scared of him?
Natalia was scared. She has faced many situations in her life, but she had never met such a big animal as Gabrelle obviously was. After few minutes of thinking she started to drive home. When she came to her apartment, the door were open.
Natalia and Diego were celebrating. Since Antonio hadn’t been beaten for few years, it was pretty good reason to celebrate.
“You need to be careful now.” suddenly Diego said seriously.
“Why?” Natalia didn’t understand.
“You won over Antonio. I could even say you won over Gabrielle. And this ain’t good. Gabrielle is upset. With your victory you showed to the people he is vulnerable. Now they feel less committed to him. There might even be revolution. If you win few more times, Gabrielle won’t any followers left.”
“What the hell are you talking about?” Natalia really didn’t understand anything.
“You really should start listening to me.”
“I do, but it makes no sense.”
“OK. I’ll try to explain it clearly. Gabrielle control Madrid’s underground and everyone if afraid of him because he leaves no space for other people. If there’s a great car driver he hires him or beats him. Depends on what is better for him at the moment. If there’s another drug dealer he simply kills him. Or if some man is dating a woman and Gabrielle or his brother want her, she is gonna be his. So when you beat his driver, you can be sure he will be after you.”
“But why? I just won the competition. The main race is far away.”
“It doesn’t matter for him. You’re a threat. You are giving these people a hope for better tomorrow. It’s something that definitely doesn’t fit into his plans.”
“I’m not easy to be beaten.”
“I hope so.”
“What if I wanna win over him?”
“Well, then I hope you know what you’re doing. This is gonna be tough.”
“I do.” Natalia said, said goodbye to Diego and left to her car.
Antonio was leaning to her car. He was obviously waiting for her. And he was so smart to stand to the door so she couldn’t get in without facing him.
“Get off.” Natalia said madly. But Antonio didn’t move. They were staring at each other and then Antonio left without a word. With a victorious smile on his face. Natalia got to her car but didn’t went off right away.
What was this supposed to mean? First Diego with his speech and now this Antonio with his freaking behaviour. Was it some sort of message from Gabrielle? Should I be worried? And why the hell is everyone so scared of him?
Natalia was scared. She has faced many situations in her life, but she had never met such a big animal as Gabrelle obviously was. After few minutes of thinking she started to drive home. When she came to her apartment, the door were open.
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Exciting! more
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Amazing!!!! Need more
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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This is sooo exciting!!
Curious for more!
Curious for more!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Wow that Gabrielle really sounds dangerous
I just hope he's not gonna do anything to Natalia
Antonio.... Don't like him
Sooo exciting! Moooore?
I just hope he's not gonna do anything to Natalia
Antonio.... Don't like him
Sooo exciting! Moooore?
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
That Gabrielle is a coward
What will he do to Natalia if she wins?
Wtf.... Is Antonio, Ony?
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What will he do to Natalia if she wins?
Wtf.... Is Antonio, Ony?
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omg... i love this story because all this freaky men...
so goodddddddd
so goodddddddd
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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This is really interesting and exciting
Door was open?
Was someone been there?
Shall I ask more?
Door was open?
Was someone been there?
Shall I ask more?
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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OHOHOHOHO
Some really good story!!!
I feel like reading a book... More, pleeeeeeease
Some really good story!!!
I feel like reading a book... More, pleeeeeeease
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Thank you girls.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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when will there be more?
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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gimme 3 hours please. then you will get more.
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The waiting is over.
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Natalia couldn’t believe her eyes. Nothing was on its’ place. She just sat down on the couch and was staring at the mess. Suddenly her phone started to ring. She answered it.
“Say nothing. You weren’t robbed. I needed to make sure your flat isn’t monitored. And I also think it’s time to know that there’s another agent undercover. I can’t tell you who it is ‘coz he might be now on Gabrielle’s side. And, please, be careful. We don’t know what Gabrielle is planning.” he said and hung up.
Awesome. What’s gonna be next? Me marrying some asshole? And who the hell is the agent. Antonio? Or even Diego? I’m screwed.
Natalia was lying on the couch for a while and then she got up and started to clear the mess. Soon she fell on the couch and was sleeping how she was tired. When she woke up the other day, she saw someone standing in the room and watching her.
“What the hell are you doing here?” she asked madly.
“You should lock the door.”
“Who are you?” Natalia was still half sleeping so she didn’t see the guy properly.
“I thought you could remember me when you beat me few times.”
“Antonio?” Natalia was forced to open her eyes.
“Oh yes. She remembers.” he made surprised face.
“What are you doing here?” Natalia repeated her question.
“I want revenge.”
“And I wanna sleep.” Natalia really wasn’t in a mood for talking. She got up and wanted to go away, but he pushed her back on the couch and sat on her.
“I want my revenge.” he said again.
“Wait for the race on Friday. You’ll get as many rounds as you want.”
“Who said I wanna race with you?”
Now Natalia got scared. Antonio was smiling really strangely. His head was slowly coming closer to her. It felt like a flesh from a clean sky when he kissed her. For a few seconds Natalia didn’t know what is going on, but when she realized it, she stopped kissing him and slapped his face really hard. He looked at her surprised and the he touched his lip with his finger. The blood was on it.
“So you wanna play it hard, don’t you?” he got angry.
“Get outta here!” Natalia said loudly.
“We’ll meet again and I won’t be as nice as I was today.” Antonio said and sent to Natalia an air kiss. She got sick of it. Now she was sure that he isn’t the other agent.
Marco brought to Gabrielle some info he dig about Natalia. Gabrielle wasn’t please with these information, but Javi was.
“She’s pretty good you know?”
Gabrielle didn’t say anything about it. He loved and respected his bro’s choices and opinions.
“This Friday it will be us or her.”
“What?” Javi didn’t understand his brother.
“The race. She against Antonio.”
“What?” Javi couldn’t believe his ears.
“You don’t agree?”
“No, it’s just that …”
“What?” Gabrielle wanted to know what is on his bro’s mind.
“She’d be good toy.” Javi finally said.
“What do you mean?” Gabrielle was even more curious.
“If I can get to her, I can influence her and she wouldn’t be a threat anymore.”
“Maybe you’re right.” Gabrielle admitted after a while.
“Please.” Javi made puppy eyes.
“OK then. I’ll send someone to kidnap her.” Gabrielle said.
“No. I wanna do it my own way.”
“Whatever.” Gabrielle gave up.
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Natalia couldn’t believe her eyes. Nothing was on its’ place. She just sat down on the couch and was staring at the mess. Suddenly her phone started to ring. She answered it.
“Say nothing. You weren’t robbed. I needed to make sure your flat isn’t monitored. And I also think it’s time to know that there’s another agent undercover. I can’t tell you who it is ‘coz he might be now on Gabrielle’s side. And, please, be careful. We don’t know what Gabrielle is planning.” he said and hung up.
Awesome. What’s gonna be next? Me marrying some asshole? And who the hell is the agent. Antonio? Or even Diego? I’m screwed.
Natalia was lying on the couch for a while and then she got up and started to clear the mess. Soon she fell on the couch and was sleeping how she was tired. When she woke up the other day, she saw someone standing in the room and watching her.
“What the hell are you doing here?” she asked madly.
“You should lock the door.”
“Who are you?” Natalia was still half sleeping so she didn’t see the guy properly.
“I thought you could remember me when you beat me few times.”
“Antonio?” Natalia was forced to open her eyes.
“Oh yes. She remembers.” he made surprised face.
“What are you doing here?” Natalia repeated her question.
“I want revenge.”
“And I wanna sleep.” Natalia really wasn’t in a mood for talking. She got up and wanted to go away, but he pushed her back on the couch and sat on her.
“I want my revenge.” he said again.
“Wait for the race on Friday. You’ll get as many rounds as you want.”
“Who said I wanna race with you?”
Now Natalia got scared. Antonio was smiling really strangely. His head was slowly coming closer to her. It felt like a flesh from a clean sky when he kissed her. For a few seconds Natalia didn’t know what is going on, but when she realized it, she stopped kissing him and slapped his face really hard. He looked at her surprised and the he touched his lip with his finger. The blood was on it.
“So you wanna play it hard, don’t you?” he got angry.
“Get outta here!” Natalia said loudly.
“We’ll meet again and I won’t be as nice as I was today.” Antonio said and sent to Natalia an air kiss. She got sick of it. Now she was sure that he isn’t the other agent.
Marco brought to Gabrielle some info he dig about Natalia. Gabrielle wasn’t please with these information, but Javi was.
“She’s pretty good you know?”
Gabrielle didn’t say anything about it. He loved and respected his bro’s choices and opinions.
“This Friday it will be us or her.”
“What?” Javi didn’t understand his brother.
“The race. She against Antonio.”
“What?” Javi couldn’t believe his ears.
“You don’t agree?”
“No, it’s just that …”
“What?” Gabrielle wanted to know what is on his bro’s mind.
“She’d be good toy.” Javi finally said.
“What do you mean?” Gabrielle was even more curious.
“If I can get to her, I can influence her and she wouldn’t be a threat anymore.”
“Maybe you’re right.” Gabrielle admitted after a while.
“Please.” Javi made puppy eyes.
“OK then. I’ll send someone to kidnap her.” Gabrielle said.
“No. I wanna do it my own way.”
“Whatever.” Gabrielle gave up.
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uuuh interesting
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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JAVI
“She’d be good toy.” Javi finally said.
Bad boy, Javi, bad boy!
But the story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!! Totally... Me likey
Now more?
“She’d be good toy.” Javi finally said.
Bad boy, Javi, bad boy!
But the story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!! Totally... Me likey
Now more?
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