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Post  ~Mar~ on Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:35 pm

I know my other fanfic isn't finished yet, but I had an idea for an another story.. Just give me your opinion about it.. Maybe I'll post more.. Dunno for sure..


Prologue



It was spring. Exely it was the first real warm day. I was riding home from school. I had putted my jacket in my schoolbag and was listening to my mp3 player. Spanish music echoed trough my head. Just two more weeks and I had a exchange project: I should live in Spain for six months. I was looking forward to it. I already knew where I was going to sleep: at a family in Cádiz.

How stupid of me.. I forgot to introduce myself. Well.. Hola! My name is Marjolein, everybody calls me Mar, and I’m 18 years old. I live in Holland. I think it’s the most boring country on earth.. But even when it’s boring, it’s nice to live here. Okay.. Enough about me.. Let’s go back to that day:
I really couldn’t wait to go to Cádiz. Just two weeks and then.. Something I won’t forget for the rest of my life was going to happen.
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Post  Kath on Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:37 pm

I've already said to you that you should post it Razz
it sounds f.a.b. MrGreen
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Post  Laura on Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:41 pm

Sounds great!!!!! Smile Smile Wink
Post more please!!!!!!! bounce bounce Wink

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Post  ~Mar~ on Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:45 pm

Bussy with part 1 amigas
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Post  Sergo on Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:46 pm

sounds good Very Happy
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Post  demi on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:02 pm

good Razz
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Post  ~Mar~ on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:19 pm

Part 1

'A-Amanda! A-Amanda!'
My bed was filled with that song.
'Damn.. Where's my moblie!'
I was trying to open my eyes. I lifted up my pillow and took my phone.
'Hello?'
No one answered.
'Joehoe! Somebody home?'
I tried. Still no reaction.
'Well.. Than not..'
I threw it back and turned around. I just closed my eyes when..
'A-Amanda! A-Amanda!'
I took my phone and looked at the display. No wonder nobody gave a reaction.. No one had called me.. It was my alarm..
'Oh.. Blonde..'
I got out of bed and putted my clothes on. Today was the day. Finally I was going to Spain. Fi-nal-ly! My friends were getting a little bit crazy because of me. As soon as we heard about the project, it was all I could talk about. I smiled when I thougt about their faces when I started to talk about how exiting it was, and that I couldn't wait. I looked at the clock.
'Damn! 6.45! I have to hurry up.'
For once again I was talking to myself.
'Marjolein! Phone for you!'
My mom screamed upstairs.
'Comming!'
While I was trying to put my T-shirt on, I walked downstairs. I almost missed a step, so I jumped.
'Goodmorning! Here.. Henriët for you.'
I took the phone.
-'Buenos días amiga! Qué tal?'
I walked out of the kitchen.
-'Buenos días! Sí! Muy bien! Y tu?'
-'Bueno,bueno.. Tell me.. Why do you call?'
-'How late do we have to be at school?'
-'At 8.00.. You almost forgot it, didn't you?'
-'NO!'-It sounded fake..-'Ok..Ok.. Yes..'
-'HA! I knew it! But I have to go now.. Or I'll be late!''
I hung up and walked back into the room. I gave the phone back to my mum and sat down at the kitchen table.
'Are your bags packed?'
'Dad! OF COURCE! It would be a little bit stupid if they weren't.. I'll get them after my breakfast..'
Quick I ate it and walked back upstairs.
'DO NOT SCARE!'
The first suitcase fell down the stairs. Followed by no. 2 and 3. Then a bag fell, but it didn't made any noise. I saw it comming... I really did.. But it was still unexpected..
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Post  Kath on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:23 pm

hahahah the alarm bit made me laugh Laughing
what did you see coming? but was still unexpected? whaaaat?
moooore :p
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Post  ~Mar~ on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:25 pm

Weelll.. silent Wait untill I wrote part 2.. Laughing
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Post  Laura on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:25 pm

Alarm clock Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
Who came????????Please post more!!!!! Smile Smile

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Post  ~Mar~ on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:52 pm

I will.. I will.. But I have to write it first.. Laughing
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Post  Prisca on Fri Apr 25, 2008 11:10 pm

ohh the alarm clock Laughing Laughing

i wanna know what happened What a Face
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Post  Sabine on Fri Apr 25, 2008 11:38 pm

Great! Very Happy

Funny, I have Amanda as alarm-tone Cool
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Post  ~Mar~ on Fri Apr 25, 2008 11:41 pm

Ghehe.. Me too! Very Happy The only thing in the whole wide world that wakes me up is Amanda Cool xD
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Post  Prisca on Fri Apr 25, 2008 11:41 pm

me too Laughing
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Post  emilia on Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:46 pm

Great Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  demi on Sat Apr 26, 2008 2:39 pm

the alarm Laughing what did happen more Razz
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Post  Prisca on Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:17 pm

moreeee
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Post  Hen «3 on Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:52 pm

Ooh moree?? xD
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Post  ~Mar~ on Mon Apr 28, 2008 2:57 pm

Part 2

'MARJOLEIN!'
O-oh.. Here it comes... My dad furious..
'How often-..'
'haven't I told you NOT to throw your stuf down the stairs!'
'And-..'
'This is the last time young lady!'
'Exacly!'
I sighed. He always told me the sme damn thing when I did something. Carefully I walked into the room. I barely could hold my laugh. My dad's face was a little bit white. My mom had to chuckle.
'Did my suitcases scared you, dad?'
I asked with a huge smile on my face. He muttered something like: 'Damn suitcases' and sat back down behind his pc. I walked back into the hall and putted my suitcases in the livingroom. I did an imitation of my angry dad.
'Marjolein!'
'Whaat?! Just joking!'
My mom smiled.
'Who's gonna drive me to school? I'm not goingby bike with all my luggage.. I don't think that it's even posible!'
My mom smiled.
'I'll drive you to school. Maybe your dad wants to come with us?'
'Dad?'
I asked as nice as posible.
'Yes?'
'Do you wanna come with mom to say goodbye when I leave?'
'What do you think! Of cource I wanna come. My daughter doesn't go everyday to Spain for six months!'
I smiled and got my jacket. My backpack stood ready. Everything I needed for the busride was in it: My mp3 player, bateries, camera, mobile, candy, something to drink, a book and my notebook. My dad caried my luggage to the car. And with one last look trough the house I closed the front door of my live here, and opened an other door. One to a big adventure.
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Post  Laura on Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:20 pm

Great part!!!!! Smile Smile Wink Wink Cool Cool
I want more Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Cool Cool

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Post  Prisca on Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:29 pm

yes.... now the life in spain Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  emilia on Mon Apr 28, 2008 5:02 pm

great Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Kath on Mon Apr 28, 2008 6:51 pm

OFF TO SPAAAAAAAAAAIN! salute

more por favor Razz [hahaha that rhymes xD]
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Post  Sergo on Mon Apr 28, 2008 6:53 pm

SPAAAAIN geek
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