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Post  Laura on Tue May 20, 2008 9:36 pm

Prologue


Hello. I have decided to tell my and my brother life story, but I donít know from where should I start. Well first I will introduce myself. I am Manuela Hennet Sotomayor. I was born in 1987 in Puerto de la Cruz, Tenerife, but I grew up in London. When I was two years old my father and my brother (he was four years older than me) died in accident. Then my mother didnít wanted to live anymore, but she had me. She decided to leave Spain and to go to England to start a new life. She got married with rich businessman. After three years she felt pregnant and now I have a little sister. Well she is not that little now. She is 18. My new father never loved me. I think that my mum after fatherís death stopped loving me too. Everything what I do or every step I make is wrong for her. Thatís why I have decided to live on my own. When I have just finished school I asked her to buy apartment for me and she bought it. I didnít have any money, so I started to work as dance teacher after university. Dance it was the only thing that I was living for. The whole my day was planned. In the morning university, after it dance classes and in the evening night clubs where I was relaxing.



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Post  Monikute on Tue May 20, 2008 9:38 pm

Continue hon and DON'T stop Shocked Shocked Razz Thumbs Up
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Post  emilia on Tue May 20, 2008 9:50 pm

Please continue...DON'T stop
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Post  Prisca on Tue May 20, 2008 11:42 pm

ohh this was great... give us more Smile Smile
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Post  Aida on Wed May 21, 2008 8:59 am

Continueeeeee!! Very Happy
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Post  Laura on Thu May 22, 2008 6:04 pm

Part 1


After dance classes Tom came to talk with me. He also there works as a teacher.
- Every day your moves are better and better. Said Tom.
- Well, thanks. I said.
- Your group is very lucky to have such a teacher like you.
- Itís nice to hear it.
- Have you heard about Street dances? Asked Tom.
- What is it?
- As I can see you havenít heard about it.
- No, I havenít.
- There dance only the best and you are one of them. You should go there.
- It sounds interesting. Where is it?
- Well these years in Madrid, Spain.
- Oh Spain. Why I havenít heard about it?
- Because itís illegal. If police will get information where it is going to be they will arrest everyone.
- It sounds dangerous, but I like it.
- So will you go?
- I donít know maybe, maybe not.
- Why?
- Well I donít have where to go and the university.
- There lives my sister Paula, so you could stay in her home and if you would like you could stay to live there. There is a lot of universities.
- That would be great. I am tired of such a life. Every time the same. I need something new. I will think about it and I will tell you tomorrow.
- Ok I will wait. Said Tom.
My mobile phone started to ring. It was Chelsea my best friend.
- Hey, Manuela where are you? I am waiting here for you about 15 minutes.
- Oh, I am sorry. I was talking with Tom. I am coming.
- Ok, I am waiting.
- Well, I have to go. Chelsea is waiting for me. I said.
- Ok, go. See you tomorrow. Said Tom.
Chelsea was waiting me in her car. When I open the door the music was playing very loudly.
- Can you turn it off? I shouted.
- What? Asked Chelsea.
I sat into her car and turned off the radio.
- That. I said.
- Why you turned it off?
- You know music for today itís enough.
- Oh, ok. So how was your day? She asked.
- The same like all.
- So where you want to go?
- Can you drive me to my motherís house? I asked.
- Yes, sure.
- Today Tom said one thing and I like it.
- What he has said?
- About Street dances. I said.
- What is it?
- As he told there dance only the best.
- Itís place for you. Where is it going to be?
- In Madrid, Spain. I said.
- Will you go?
- I donít know.
- If I were you, I would go.
- Itís easy to say for you.
- You need something new and everyone knows it.
- Well, maybe.
- Of- course there will be one problem for you where to stay.
- Tom sister lives there and he told that I could stay in her home.
- Then there is no problem. Go and donít think anymore. Well we arrived. She said.
- Thanks. See you tomorrow. I said.
- See you.

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Post  Prisca on Thu May 22, 2008 6:10 pm

oohh illegal street dances... great Razz Razz Razz
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Post  emilia on Thu May 22, 2008 6:12 pm

Great Very Happy
i like it Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  NETTTE on Thu May 22, 2008 6:18 pm

Great part Very Happy
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Post  Monikute on Thu May 22, 2008 6:31 pm

mhm...it's just a start Razz Razz Razz Razz
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Post  Laura on Thu May 22, 2008 7:00 pm

Thanks girls Smile Smile Smile

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Post  Laura on Sat May 24, 2008 10:03 pm

Part 2


Chelsea drove away. I went to the door and knocked. Sabine opened the door. She is my sister and she was the only one who was waiting me.
- Finally you came. She said and hugged me. I missed you a lot. I am going crazy in this home without you. She continued.
- I missed you too. I said.
- Come in itís a bit cold outside. Said Sabine.
I came in, put all my stuff near doors and we went to the living room.
- Hi mother. I said.
- Finally you are here. She said and walked to the kitchen. She didnít hug me. It seems that she hasnít missed me. We havenít seen each other for two weeks.
- You know you became very rude. Said my step father.
- Oh I forgot to say hello for you. Hello Simon. Happy? I asked a bit angry.
- Of- course. He said with a fake smile.
I turned around and walked to the dinning room. Sabine came after.
- Why I came here? I asked.
- I hate them too. I am a bit jealous for you. Said Sabine.
- Why? My life sucks.
- You live on your own, you are great dancer and you donít have to see them everyday.
- Yeah I live on my own, but I have to work, because when I left home she is not giving money anymore.
- But you are happier than me.
- The happiness of my face went out the same day when Simon came.
- Do you remember your father?
- Not a lot. Just his green eyes and I know that he really loved me and my brother. I wish they were here.
Then mother came into the dinning room.
- Please sit and eat until is hot.
- Ok. I said.
- So, Manuela tell me how was your day? Asked mum.
- Well like always. University, dance classes and home.
- It seems that your life sucks. Said Simon.
- You know, no. I love my life, because I donít have to see you stupid face every day.
- It seems that you didnít know how to grow up this lady. He said.
- Oh come on Simon donít say that you care how I am acting, because I wonít believe it. You just care only about yourself. How many times you asked mother if she needs something?
- WellÖ. He said.
- Never. Because you are an asshole. When I said it I felt so good.
- Manuela, please stop. Said mother.
- She is not like you Suzan. It seems that she is like her father.
- Donít mention my father. He loved his children. You have only one and you donít love her.
- ManuelaÖ.. Again said mother.
- She is telling the true. He doesnít love me. Said Sabine. He hasnít been in my kindergarten or even school parties. Just only you and Manuela. It seems that I donít have a father.
- Well, well my own daughter is against me. So if you donít like living with us you can go to live with Manuela.
- She can go to live there because I am leaving.
- Finally. Said Simon, stood up and left.

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Post  Prisca on Sat May 24, 2008 11:49 pm

ohh a family fight
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Post  emilia on Sun May 25, 2008 12:31 pm

Family fights are not nice
but great part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Hen ę3 on Sun May 25, 2008 2:41 pm

Great part!
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Post  Monikute on Sun May 25, 2008 6:46 pm

JUPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Familllly war Razz Razz Razz Simon... Evil or Very Mad mom... Evil or Very Mad Sabine Cool ...Manuela Rolling Eyes cyclops Anyway...good part..more Twisted Evil
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Post  Heli on Sun May 25, 2008 8:07 pm

This sounds really interesting..
Great start! Wink
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Post  Prisca on Sun May 25, 2008 9:16 pm

i want more Razz Razz Razz
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Post  Laura on Sun May 25, 2008 9:38 pm

Part 3


When he left few seconds there were silent. I felt so good that I have said everything to him what I wanted. Maybe now he will act different. Mother started to talk.
- Where are you leaving? To the other city? She asked.
- No. To the other country. I said.
- Where?
- To Spain. I said.
- Have I heard well? To Spain?
- Yes you heard well. There.
- You canít go there. She said.
- Why not?
- You canít and that is my last word.
- I will go and it doesnít matter is your last or first word.
- Manuela I beg you.
- Why you are so scared? Is there something that I donít know?
- No. She said.
- So, I canít go there? I know that it was hard for you to forget everything, but I am going there.
- What are you going to do there? She asked.
- I am going to work there. I lied to her.
- What? Asked mother.
- As a dance teacher. I said.
- And how your university?
- There are a lot of universities. I said.
- Ok. Go, but I thinkÖ..
Mother stopped when Simon came back to the dinning room.
- You are still here. He said.
- As you can see. I said.
- When she wonít be here, tell me.
- I am going so you can stay. I said and stood up.
- Manuela donít go. Said Sabine.
- When you are leaving? Asked mother.
- Tomorrow I will know exactly.
- See you tomorrow. Said Sabine and hugged me.
- Yeah ofĖcourse. Bye.
I took my stuff and left. It was dark outside. There werenít a lot people in the street. All way to my apartment I was thinking why my mother didnít want to let me go to Spain. I am sure that there is something that I donít know. Suddenly my thoughts interrupted phone ringing.
- Yes?
- Hey, Manu! Where are you? Asked Chelsea.
- Near my apartment. I said.
- Maybe you wanna go to night club?
- Thanks for asking, but no.
- Why?
- I am very tired. I want to go sleep.
- But tomorrow you have a free day. You donít have to go to university.
- Yeah I donít, but tomorrow in the morning I am going to talk with Tom.
- Have you decided? Asked Chelsea.
- Yes.
- So, what is your decision?
- I am going to Spain.
- Thatís good for you. She said.
- Have you planned something for tomorrow? I asked.
- Well after university I am free.
- Ok then. Tomorrow at 3 p.m. at the cafť near the city centre.
- Ok. Bye.
- Bye.
I came in and dropped all my stuff near doors. I was very tired to put everything into right places. I just went to my room, lie down on my bed and fall asleep.

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Post  Prisca on Sun May 25, 2008 9:41 pm

mum has a secret Suspect Suspect
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Post  emilia on Sun May 25, 2008 9:47 pm

Great part Very Happy Very Happy
what her mom know?
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Post  Laura on Sun May 25, 2008 9:55 pm

Thanks girls Smile Smile Smile Smile
Well her mum knows that....... Razz Razz Razz Razz

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Post  Monikute on Mon May 26, 2008 3:28 pm

I know the truth.... Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes her mom....don't want to say..that...in Spain... Rolling Eyes Razz mhm..you will see..
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Post  Prisca on Mon May 26, 2008 3:46 pm

i think i have an idea Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  Heli on Mon May 26, 2008 5:56 pm

I have idea too... Rolling Eyes silent
Great part! Thumbs Up
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