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*Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end

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Post  Mindex Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:10 pm

So... I decided to start posting the 2nd version of the story called Angel. This is a bit difficult to start, because the beginning is exactly the same than in the Angel, so I'm not going to post it again here. If you don't remember it, you can read the parts here. https://naughtynashgirls.forumotion.com/fanfics-archive-f14/angel-part-20-finished-t573.htm
I'll start posting this in a part where the story will change and go to another direction... I hope this is not too confusing... Rolling Eyes

Part 15

He caught me and stopped me.
- What? I asked tears in my eyes.
- You're not fine, he said seriously.
- It's not your business, I said quietly, swallowing my tears.
- It is. I hurt you, I can see it.
- Javi. This is totally my mistake. I had no idea how I'd feel afterwards, so just let me be, ok.
I'll be ok, but I need time, I said and hoped he'd let me go now.
- Are we still friends? he asked and looked like he was going to cry.
- Of course...
He looked so sad, so I hugged him, caressed his hair and kissed his cheek.
- This is not your fault, don't worry, I whispered to his ear, - And next time we eat ice-cream, I'm going to lick your face, I grinned and poked him to his belly.
- Ouh! he pretended it hurt and laughed then, - You won't!
- I will! I grinned.
- We'll see about that! he grinned back.
- I gotta go, see ya! I said and waved and left.
- Susana! he yelled after me.
I turned to look back.
- Take care! he said and waved too.
I smiled and then went home.
When I was back in my room, I fell down on my bed and started crying. I didn't know how I could live without him, but I had to try. At least I could be near him even if I couldn't live with him...

I didn't see him for the next two weeks. He was busy with gigs and training and I was busy with my studyings. I would finish them soon and I was really stressed out. So I didn't have much time to think about that night with Javi in daytime. The nights were a torture for me. I had dreams about him almost every night and if I stayed awake, I kept thinking about him all the time. I was so thankful for the mornings... I had to be ready for the new day and to think about something else.

A month later my studyings were finished. We had a small party. My closest friends were there and D'Nash of course. They were still our neighbours and also good friends of ours. Javi and I were again like before, just the best of the friends, though in a while it was hard for me, to be so close to him and not allowed to touch.

Javi and I were again the last ones to celebrate. It was already 4 a.m. when we were still awake. We were in our backyard sitting and drinking wine and of course talking and laughing.
I was happy that he was there with me. Of course I would have been much happier if he loved me, but I had to accept this situation.
- So, what are your plans now, when your studyings are finished? Javi asked then.
- Don't know yet. I haven't looked for a job yet, even if I should have, I replied.
- Why not?
- Don't know. But I will.
- So, you're a teacher now, Javi grinned.
- So?
- What do you wanna teach me? he teased me.
I covered my face with my hands. I almost started crying. I didn't want him to see it.
- Did I say something wrong? he got worried.
- No... I just... just... I'm too drunk, you know, I tried to laugh.
- Hey... what's wrong? he asked and put his arm around my shoulder.
- I guess I've just been too stressed out and... well... now I'm free of school and everything and..., I explained, but I knew that wasn't the real reason.
- Poor you, Javi said and caressed my back, - But don't worry, things are fine now.
- I know... I'm relieved... I think...
Then he suddenly gave a kiss to my cheek.
I looked at him and he looked at me.
- Your eyes are so sad, Javi said quietly.
I said nothing. I couldn't speak.
He touched my hair, my cheek and then he kissed me. My heart almost stopped. I never thought I could kiss him again like this, but it just happened. His lips were so soft, they knew exactly what they were doing, no hesitation... it was a perfect kiss and then he stopped.
- This was my present to you, he said and hugged me, - I hope you'll find the man of your dreams, because I hate to see you so alone.
That was the last thing I could stand. I bursted into crying and I couldn't stop it. Javi got a bit scared.
- Susana? Hey... what's wrong? Tell me..., he said and I heard he was worried about me.
I managed to calm down a bit.
- Javi... the man of my dreams... I can never have him... I'll be alone always, I whispered.
- No... what are you talking about, you haven't met him yet... you just can't know it yet.
- But I know...
- Susana, listen to me! You're a wonderful girl and the man who gets you is a lucky man! he tried so hard to cheer me up.
I got up. I couldn't stand it anymore.
- Where are you going? Javi asked and got up as well.
- It's late and I need to sleep, I said and looked at him.
- Can I come with you? he asked without grinning.


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Post  Heli Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:21 pm

Yees.. Finally I can read this.. Razz
So, when more..? Laughing Teasing starts right away.. xD
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Post  ~Mar~ Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:25 pm

Naw.. I love you
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Post  Mindex Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:29 pm

Cool Well, this was almost the same than in the 1st version... except the last sentence.... Cool So, maybe I could post something new... let's say... right now? Suspect
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Post  ~Mar~ Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:30 pm

POST!! bounce
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Post  Heli Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:32 pm

YEEEEEESSS!! MrGreen
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Post  ~Mar~ Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:34 pm

Ghehe.. We're the only two who read this
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Post  Mindex Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:34 pm

Hehe... Laughing ok.. are you ready?? pig

Part 16

- I... aaa.... what are you talking about? I was confused, - I thought we had a deal.
- You love me, don't you? he asked looking at me.
- Why do you think so... I've never said..., I started.
- I love you too, he said quickly.
- ...anything like... what? I stared at him like I couldn't believe my ears.
- I love you too, Susana, he repeated and was still looking at my eyes.
- But... but... I... you... you can't, I stuttered confused.
- Why not? If you can, I can as well, he replied.
- But I don't...., I started, but couldn't finish my sentence this time either.
- Why can't you admit it? Javi asked and took my hand to his.
- We are just friends..., I said and my brains refused to believe his words... that he loved me. It couldn't be true.
- Things can change, my friend, Javi said and caressed my cheek.
I could only stare at him. My heart was beating so fast. Could we be more than friends after all.
- Do you love me? he asked then.
- I... well..., I mumbled.
Why saying it was so damn hard.
Javi didn't wait for my answer. He just took my head between his hands and pressed his lips against mine. He kissed so gently that it almost made me crazy. It was a long kiss.
- So, do you love me? he whispered after the breath taking kiss.
- Yes... I love you, I replied quietly. I was feeling a bit weak.
I never imagined this could go this way.
Javi hugged me gently and kissed my neck. I could smell his scent again. I felt I was getting drunk of it. I was shivering.
- Your room or mine? he smiled then.
- Mine... it's closer, I grinned and then we sneaked quietly in the house, upstairs to my room.
He took my hand and we sat down on my bed.
- I have thought about you a lot, he said and looked at me.
- I haven't done anything else than thought about you, I confessed.
His face came closer. Those wet lips so close to mine.
- You make me crazy, he whispered, - I want to be so much more than just a friend.
His lips reached my lips. I felt so happy. It was hard to believe it was true.
He showed me how much he loved me and this night was even better than the first one.
After everything I fell asleep in his arms feeling loved, needed, safe, happy... I couldn't ask for more.
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Post  ~Mar~ Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:37 pm

Naaaaaaaw.. I love you MrGreen
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Post  Heli Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:41 pm

Of course we're ready.. And the two readers are better than nothing.. Laughing
Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaww what part.. I love you Laughing
So surprising comment.. Laughing
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Post  ~Mar~ Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:42 pm

Agreed Laughing
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Post  Mindex Mon Jul 14, 2008 12:45 pm

Haha! xD
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Post  Hen «3 Mon Jul 14, 2008 1:39 pm

MOREE! I always wanted know how Javi was as he loved her Very Happy amazing!! Very Happy
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Post  x Imke x Mon Jul 14, 2008 5:26 pm

Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw!!!!!! MrGreen
That was soooo sweet!! Beating heart Reminds me a bit of a dream I had last night. xD Although it didn't look much like this story. Laughing Still. Razz
Anyway, more. Razz If there is coming more. Laughing

Edit; You've got 4 readers now. pig
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Post  Laura Mon Jul 14, 2008 6:41 pm

It's so sweet I love you I love you I love you
I was so waiting this story Cool Cool
I want more bounce bounce
Please,Minna Angel Angel Angel
You have got 5 readers Razz Razz Razz
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Post  NETTTE Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:53 pm

Oo, sweeet!! Beating heart
More, more, more, lisääää!!

You have got 6 readers Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Mon Jul 14, 2008 8:11 pm

aawwwwwwwwwwww finally a cute part from javi Razz Razz .

7 readers Laughing Laughing
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Post  emilia Mon Jul 14, 2008 8:24 pm

Naaaaawwww I love you I love you

8 readers Very Happy
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Post  Mindex Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:21 pm

Haha! Laughing Well, thank you... i guess you wanna have some more... Smile
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Post  ~Mar~ Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:22 pm

Uhhmm.. scratch YES! bounce
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Post  Prisca Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:24 pm

of course Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Mindex Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:26 pm

Laughing Laughing Ok... here you are! Cool

Part 17

I woke up when someone was caressing my hair. I opened my eyes and met Javi's face close to mine. He smiled.
- Good morning, sweetie! he said and kissed my lips.
I checked the clock. It was a quarter to 2 p.m.
- Or afternoon, I grinned.
Javi took me in his arms.
- I've missed you a lot, Javi whispered, - You know... after that night we spent together I haven't been able to get you out of my mind.
I listened to him confused... what was he saying.
- I wanted so much to say to you... that I was falling in love with you and that I wanted to be with you, but I was scared... You were talking about friendship... that we are friends and that we have to forget what happened. I thought you didn't love me... and I was afraid that if I confessed my feelings, I'd spoil everything between us.
- Then why did you confess after all? I asked.
- Because I felt that maybe you loved me anyway, even if you talked about friendship. I decided to find out... whether it was for the good or for the bad. And I think you have to be a friend, before you can be anything else. It's so easy to be with you now when we know a lot of things about each others. If I hit a girl and took her into the bed right away, everything would base into sex. I might find out later that she's really not my type. I don't want to do such a thing. Knowing someone very good and loving her... you know... everything feels so much better then.
- What did you think about me then? On your birthday I mean, I asked.
- I was surprised, but what you said, made sense. We were two lonely persons who needed tenderness, but the way you treated me... you really acted like you loved me. I felt it and I felt I loved you too. I wanted you so much on that moment. But the things you said afterwards, made me so confused. I thought maybe it was better then just to stay friends like you said.
- I should have told you, but I was afraid, I confessed.
- Afraid?
- The same as you. That you wouldn't feel the same... and I didn't want to spoil our friendship. I thought it would be better to be friends than losing you all.
- We seem to think the same way, Javi laughed quietly.
I smiled. I felt his hand caressing my back.
- Yes... and finally I can say it to you without afraiding of anything, I said and looked at his green eyes.
He looked at me and caressed my cheek.
- I love you, I said.
- I love you too, he replied and kissed me gently.
It was a start for another passionate moment.
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Post  ~Mar~ Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:29 pm

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Naaaaaw!! I love you
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Post  Hen «3 Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:47 pm

Aaahw how sweet Very Happy
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Post  girl1035 Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:43 pm

this is so great
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