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Post  Laura on Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:12 pm

Well here it goes new fic from me. Until I have some ideas I am keeping on writting, but I don't know for how long I have it Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
Like always I hope that you will like it........


Prologue

Four girls and four boys never thought that they will found they true love and that all the time it will be so near them.

MONIKA- when she is in good mod she is naughty like a child (she has lots of crazy ideas in her head), but when she is serious don't mess up with her.

LAURA- she is soul sister of Monika (they are best friends), very naughty, but sensitive (nobody have saw her crying, because she tries to hide it).

DIMITRA- from the first look she is very calm girl, but when she is with her friends, she feels like fish in water, nobody can stop her talking.

MINNA- she can be calm, serious and naughty. Loves Laura's brother from the first time she saw him.


ONY- maybe he is blonde, but he is very smart. He is serious, but when he is making something crazy than hold on. Ony is searching a girl of his dreams, but he don't know that she is right by his side.

JAVI- sweet like teddy bear, Laura's brother. He is very sincerity. If somebody huts him, he can forgive it, but he will never forget that. Very cheerful and charm.

BASTY- he is like a father, very serious from first look. He like's Laura, but he don't have enough courage to tell it, also he is cheerful.

MIKEL- naughty like a child, but sometimes serious like real man, has very good sense of humour. If wonderful smile dissapears from his face than it means that something happened. Very friendly, but at the moment he is not thinking about girls.


Should I stop or continue?

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Post  Dimitra_Ony on Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:18 pm

I think that question shouldn't be there!!! plzzzzz continue!!!!! Worship
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Post  Monikute on Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:19 pm

Stupid question,CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Razz Razz Razz
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Post  Mindex on Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:20 pm

Continue of course!! MrGreen I'm curious to know what will happen! bounce
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Post  emilia on Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:25 pm

Of course you have to continue Very Happy
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Post  ~Mar~ on Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:42 pm

CURIOUS!! bounce MOOOOREE!!

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Post  x Imke x on Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:03 pm

Oooh this sounds nice! Cool
Continue, por favor! Very Happy
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Post  Monikute on Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:13 pm

So we are waitingggggggggg Laughing
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Post  x Imke x on Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:16 pm

Exactly! Batman
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Post  tuLicia on Sun Aug 31, 2008 10:57 pm

Monikute wrote:Stupid question,CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Razz Razz Razz

yes... very-bery stupid question! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Post  Prisca on Mon Sep 01, 2008 3:50 am

oohhhh..... i want more Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  NETTTE on Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:08 pm

Sounds veeery good Very Happy
And yeah I agree with others, that was very stupid question!! Of course you have to continue!! Very Happy
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Post  Laura on Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:36 pm

Part1

Morning in Alvarez Colinet home.
I woke up in the morning and looked to my clock.
- Damn it. It's 10:30. I have overslept. I said.
I stood up and ran to the bath, but somebody was there. I sarted to knock but nobody answered. After few minutes I heard that somebody started to sing. It was Javi.
- Javi hurry up. I shouted.
He didn't answered.
- Javi come on move your ass I am late.
- Now I won't open the doors. He said.
- Don't be like a child. I said.
- I am not, but I am older.
- So what? I asked. Please just hurry up and when I will leave then you can be here all day.
- You are so kind, but no. He said.
- Mikel came. I said.
- Really? He asked and opened doors.
Then I ran to bath, pushed him out and closed the doors.
- You treat me like a fool. He said.
- Because you are...... I said and shut up.
- What have you said?
- I love you bro.
I was having a shower when I heard that Javi was talking with somebody.
- I think that she wont came. He said.
-..............................................
- At the moment she is having a shower.
-................................................
- Ok Monika I will tell to her that you are mad on her.
He hung up.I took a glass full of water, opened the door and pour it on Javi. Well that moment I thought that he was there, but there was Basty.
- Oh shit. I said.
- He went to put your mobile phone to your room. Basty said and scaned me from head to feet.
I was only with towel.
- And thanks for the shower. He continued and started to laugh.
- I am sorry basty, I though that.....
- I know that here will be javi. He said.
Then came Javi and started to laugh.
- Have you had a shower with her? He asked.
- Well no it was for you. Basty said.
- I said that she is crazy. Javi said.
- Shut up. I said, hit to Javi and went to my room.
- Don't eat her like this. Javi said.
- I am not eating her. Basty said.
- I am not blind, I see that you like her.
- No I dont. Basty said and blushed.
- Let's go to have some coffee.
- Sure.
- Monika called to you. Javi shouted.
- I know. Have you gave T-shirts to Basty? I asked.
- Yeah. He said and I heard that they went down stairs.
I dressed up and took my phone.
- Finally you call. Said Monika.
- I am sorry I have overslept and.....
- Will you come?
- Of course I will.
- Thats great
- Has Dimitra and Minna came? I asked.
- Just only Minna. Dimitra is late too.
- Ok then see you. Bye
- Bye

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Post  ~Mar~ on Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:40 pm

Hiji! Javi's a funny brother Razz

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Post  Mindex on Mon Sep 01, 2008 10:11 pm

xD Great part! So funny! xD Thumbs Up Moremoremore! MrGreen
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Post  Prisca on Tue Sep 02, 2008 12:54 am

javi is funny lol!
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Post  Dimitra_Ony on Tue Sep 02, 2008 12:21 pm

Rofl I love this part, I could read it again and again!!! xDDDD Laura you're great!!! Worship
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Post  emilia on Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:05 pm

Great part Very Happy
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Post  Monikute on Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:37 pm

Oh,so great.MORE Very Happy

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Post  Laura on Tue Sep 02, 2008 7:48 pm

Thanks girls! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Post  Prisca on Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:08 pm

when u will give us more??? Razz
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Post  x Imke x on Wed Sep 03, 2008 12:28 am

LMAO! Javi! xD loll He's funny. Laughing
Omg she poured over Basty. Rofl
Funny and great part! Laughing Moooore! What a Face
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Post  x Imke x on Wed Sep 03, 2008 6:50 pm

Soo? Razz
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Post  Laura on Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:47 pm

Part 2

I went down stairs and found them in kitchen. I took Javi's cup and started to drink coffee.
- It's mine. He said.
- I know. I said.
- I will make for you.
- No yours is very tasty.
- Where are you going? Asked Basty.
- I am going to meet with Monika, Minna and Dimitra.
- You saw them yesterday in school.
- Javi they are my best friends. I said. Ok i am going.
- Bye. Said Basty
- Bye see you later. I said and left.
- She is real angel. Said Basty.
- As I thought that you like her.
- Well I think that I love her.
- So why you don't say it for her? Asked Javi
- I am afraid that maybe she don't like me.
Door bell rang.
- I am going to open the doors. Said Javi.
- Ok.
Past 15 minutes and I came to the shopping centre. Straight way I went to cafe were girls were waiting me.
- Finally you came. Said Monika.
- Even I came earlier. Said Minna and all started to laugh.
- I am really sorry. I have overslept and Javi went to bath also I made Basty wet..... Crazy morning.
- Slowly slowly...... what have you done to Basty? Asked Dimitra.
- Well I thought that there was javi and I pour water on him but then I saw that there was Basty. I said and rolled my eyes.
- Poor Basty. Said Monika.
- Poor me, because I have such a brother like Javi.
- He is wonderful. Said Minna.
- Oh sorry I forgot that you love him. I said.
- When we will have answers from universities? Asked Dimitra.
- In june, but I hope that we all will study in Spain. Said Monika.
- Or maybe in Greece the most important that together. I said.
- I don't wanna study in other country. Said Minna.
- Me either. Said Monika.
- Well Minna don't wanna leave Javi, but if you wont tell to him about your feelings he wont do anything. And whats about you? I asked.
- Well.... Monika said.
- Just don't say that you are in love too. Dimitra said.
- Maybe. Monika said.
- Whom is he? I asked.
- He is ...... Mikel. Said Monika.
- At the moment he is not searching a girl, I have heard when they were talking. I said.
- Like all the time I fall in love with not a right person. Said Monika.
- Never say never. Said Dimitra
- What have you planned for next friday? I asked.
- Nothing. Said Monika.
- Me too. Said Dimitra.
- You Minna? I asked.
- Nothing. She said.
- What do you offer? Asked Dimitra.
- Celebrate Javi's birthday. I said.
- But he hasn't invited us. Minna said.
- But he will because on one invitation I saw your name. If he invites you then he will invite all.I said and smiled.

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Post  Monikute on Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:51 pm

Party!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hosanna Hosanna Hosanna Hosanna Crazy party loll MORE

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