My life....Part 4 The End
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NETTTE
emilia
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
There is only one part left and maybe i could post that later today...
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
Registration date : 2007-11-27
Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Part 4
Basty and I had been together almost for a year. And I was so happy with him because he was the right guy for me. But then I get to know one girl and I spent time with her quite much. And it was a huge mistake. She had friends who were dangerous and they did all kind of bad things. When I was with them I did also bad things, like robbed places, hit people and stuff like that. Basty tried to help me but I didn't want his help at all.
But then I really did a huge mistake. We had planned we will rob a huge house and it was empty. People who lived there were on a holiday. Well, we thought so, but we were wrong. They were at home and sleeping when we went in. The others went upstairs and I stayed downstairs. I didn't find anything what we could have taken and then I saw a man. He was in the kitchen and then he saw me. He took his phone and called to the police. I didn't think anything when I took my gun and shoot him. I went shock when I realized that I really killed that man. I dropped my gun and sat down. I just looked at that man. Meanwhile my so called friends went away and they left me there. Soon the police came and they arrested me.
Police took me in to the policestation and I told them everything. Later Basty came to meet me and we talked.
-Why you did it?-Basty asked.
-I don't know. I just went in panic and I didn't think anything. But I told to the police everything I knew about my so called friends. So maybe I don't have to be in a prison so long. -I said.
-I will wait for you until you are free again because I really love you.-Basty said and hugged me.
-Thank you... And I love you. -I said and I started to cry.
One week later I got my sentence and it was four years in prison, because it was my first time and I told to the police everything I knew about the others.
I hugged Basty for the last time and I cried.
Well that was my story for now. I still have to be here in prison two years and then I'm free. I hope that Basty wait for me because he promised that to me. I really love him and I wanna be with him.
THE END
Basty and I had been together almost for a year. And I was so happy with him because he was the right guy for me. But then I get to know one girl and I spent time with her quite much. And it was a huge mistake. She had friends who were dangerous and they did all kind of bad things. When I was with them I did also bad things, like robbed places, hit people and stuff like that. Basty tried to help me but I didn't want his help at all.
But then I really did a huge mistake. We had planned we will rob a huge house and it was empty. People who lived there were on a holiday. Well, we thought so, but we were wrong. They were at home and sleeping when we went in. The others went upstairs and I stayed downstairs. I didn't find anything what we could have taken and then I saw a man. He was in the kitchen and then he saw me. He took his phone and called to the police. I didn't think anything when I took my gun and shoot him. I went shock when I realized that I really killed that man. I dropped my gun and sat down. I just looked at that man. Meanwhile my so called friends went away and they left me there. Soon the police came and they arrested me.
Police took me in to the policestation and I told them everything. Later Basty came to meet me and we talked.
-Why you did it?-Basty asked.
-I don't know. I just went in panic and I didn't think anything. But I told to the police everything I knew about my so called friends. So maybe I don't have to be in a prison so long. -I said.
-I will wait for you until you are free again because I really love you.-Basty said and hugged me.
-Thank you... And I love you. -I said and I started to cry.
One week later I got my sentence and it was four years in prison, because it was my first time and I told to the police everything I knew about the others.
I hugged Basty for the last time and I cried.
Well that was my story for now. I still have to be here in prison two years and then I'm free. I hope that Basty wait for me because he promised that to me. I really love him and I wanna be with him.
THE END
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
Registration date : 2007-11-27
Re: My life....Part 4 The End
In dutch I would say: Kort maar krachtig
In english: That was.. Short.. But good (: Me loved this story
In english: That was.. Short.. But good (: Me loved this story
Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Yeah it was short story
Thank you for reading
Thank you for reading
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
Registration date : 2007-11-27
Re: My life....Part 4 The End
ohhh this was short but very nice... i loved
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
Age : 34
Location : Portugal
Registration date : 2007-11-08
Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Agree with girls short, but super duper amazing
Thanks Katja
Thanks Katja
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
Age : 31
Location : Lithuania
Registration date : 2008-02-16
Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Thank you so much :D:D
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
Registration date : 2007-11-27
Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Woow, it was short, but... Woow... Yeah, wow...
Great story!!
Great story!!
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
Age : 28
Registration date : 2008-05-16
Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Thank you so much
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
Registration date : 2007-11-27
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