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Post  Heli on Mon Oct 20, 2008 11:59 am

So, here I'm again with my brand new story. Wink
I hope you'll like this, because this story has special meaning for me...
Here it goes:


Prologue

- JAVI !!! Can you please concentrate on this? Mikel asked annoyed.
- What? Oh, sorry. I was deep in my thoughts, Javi apologized.
- We noticed that. But we need to practice as well. You know that the next concert must be perfect, Basty said.
- Like the all following ones, Javi muttered quietly.
- What did you say? Mikel asked.
- Nothing, Javi repeated quickly. Ė Can we take a break? I want to suggest something to you.
Boys sat down and every of them took one water bottle. Dancing was hard and sweaty job.
- So, what have you planned? I have noticed that you have been thinking of something long time, Basty asked.
- I think we should write a book, Javi said simply.
- Do WHAT? Mikel and Basty asked mouth wide open.
- And about what? Basty asked.
Javi shook his head. Basty and his blonde moments.
- About DíNash of course, Javi said.
- But I donít understand why? Mikel asked still surprised.
- Well, many famous bands have written a book. So, why we donít do that also? Fans would know what kind of people we really are, Javi explained.
- And do you think that the book would sell enough? Basty asked.
- I do. We have lots of fans. Iím sure that theyíll buy the book. And especially those who have never met us.
- Are you going to write that book by yourself? I mean Iím not good at writing or any that kind of stuff, Mikel asked.
- I think we could ask some real writer who could write it, Javi answered.
- Do you really think that we are going to tell everything we feel to unknown person? Basty asked.
- Of course not. Itís a book about our music and our band. Of course we arenít going to put any personal details to it, Javi said.
- I donít know. I just donít understand why we should write a book. We have enough things to do without your idea, Mikel said.
- If you just could think about it. I would be grateful for that.
- Okay. Iíll promise to think about it, Basty agreed finally.
- Mikel? Javi asked.
- Yes. Iíll think about it too. But now, letís continue. We have a lot of what to practice, Mikel said.
Javi sighed. Somehow he knew that his idea wouldnít get any support from Basty or Mikel. They were too suspicious. But he knew who would understand him totally. Javi decided to call that person straight away after practicing. He knew that his idea was good. He just needed to convince others too.
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Post  ~Mar~ on Mon Oct 20, 2008 12:23 pm

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Post  Mindex on Mon Oct 20, 2008 1:49 pm

Yayyy!!!! Banana Finallyyyyyyy!!!! Dance The prologue is gooood.... geek just can't wait for more! bounce
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Post  emilia on Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:30 pm

I like this Very Happy
Me wanna more bounce bounce
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Post  NETTTE on Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:47 pm

New story, new story, new stoooooooooryyyyyyyyy!! Banana Banana
More, more, more, more!! bounce bounce
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Post  Laura on Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:08 pm

finally story from you Heli
Banana Banana Banana Banana
The prologue sounds amazing and I wanna more bounce bounce bounce

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Post  mikelfan4eva on Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:31 pm

amazing

more soon??? bounce bounce bounce bounce
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Post  Heli on Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:00 pm

Thanks girls! Smile
I dunno when I'm posting more... When I have time, I guess...
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Post  Laura on Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:01 pm

Thats ok...take your time....we will wait Wink Wink

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Post  Dimitra_Ony on Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:04 pm

That sounds beeeeeery interesting!!!! MrGreen Me want more MrGreen
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Post  Kath on Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:21 pm

Aww this sounds well cool Razz
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Post  Prisca on Tue Oct 21, 2008 2:00 am

ohhhhh i loved this prologue... such a nice idea =) =)
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Post  mikelfan4eva on Tue Oct 21, 2008 12:00 pm

take you time Very Happy Smile
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Post  Heli on Tue Oct 21, 2008 1:16 pm

Part 1

I knew already when I was little girl that I was different, different than others. At the kindergarten other kids were playing together when I was alone. I donít mean that others teased me. No, it was my own decision. I liked to play alone. Adults were a bit worried about me. I didnít have many friends. But nothing was wrong with me. I was a normal child. Except I wanted to be alone.

And the same continued at school. But there I had some friends and I spent the breaks with them. But I wasnít with my friends at my free time. Then I was home, alone. I read lots of books and did everything nice, alone. Because I didnít complain about that at all, my parents didnít meddle in that. I was satisfied, so everything was fine. At school I was also quiet and those who didnít know me may thought I was shy. But I wasnít. I answered when somebody asked me something. And I said my opinions if I thought it were necessary. I hated pointless talking. And some girls in my class were champions of it. If I didnít have anything to say, I was quiet.

Teachers had understood that I wasnít shy or I didnít know answers even I didnít put my hand up every time teacher asked questions. Many times when nobody else knew the answer, it was me who needed to say the right answer. And usually I had something else to say about the things what we were talking about. I donít mean that I was wise. I just read a lot and I did my homework every day.

At first when my classmates didnít know me well, they tried to use me. When they realized that I really made my homework, they wanted to copy them from me. And because I was a good girl I didnít let them to do that. Then they started to tease me. They called me different kind of names. But it ended soon. Because I started to call them names also. And I have to say that mine was much better and crueller. Teasers were only boys so soon I got all girls in my class behind me. When boys realized that they stopped teasing me. Little by little they started to respect me on their own way.

Under my last years at comprehensive school I started to write. My teacher had said how talented I was, so I decided to write something. First my stories were short and quite simple. But when I realized how much I actually liked writing, my stories started to be longer and more complicated.

I had known for a long time that the writing was the best way for me to express my thoughts and feelings. Now I had found a way how to tell what I felt. I was bad when it came talking. I couldnít express myself with talking. I was bad at it. But on the other hand I was good at explaining things. Like one Spanish lesson once proved.
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Post  ~Mar~ on Tue Oct 21, 2008 2:03 pm

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Post  emilia on Tue Oct 21, 2008 2:28 pm

This was like someone's real life...
Great part Very Happy
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Post  Laura on Tue Oct 21, 2008 3:05 pm

It's amazing.... I love it
More!!!!! bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce

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Post  Kath on Tue Oct 21, 2008 3:52 pm

Interesing! Razz More?
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Post  NETTTE on Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:33 pm

emilia wrote:This was like someone's real life...

I agree, sounded a bit familiar for me..
Great part!! Very Happy
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Post  Mindex on Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:36 pm

Yahweh! Cool I wish I could read M.O.R.E. than just these short parts.... bounce
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Post  Heli on Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:46 pm

Thanks girls! Smile
Minna, those short parts are better than nothing, right? Wink
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Post  Mindex on Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:59 pm

Yees, but Rolling Eyes well... nothing... silent I'm too bored to explain anything today... Neutral Just keep posting! Razz
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Post  x Imke x on Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:56 pm

OMGOSH! Another (surely amazing) story of Heli!!!! What a Face What a Face What a Face

I loved the prologue and part 1! Wink Very Happy
I want... no I need some more! Razz but only if you have time ^^
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Post  Prisca on Tue Oct 21, 2008 11:48 pm

ohhh this part was so nice..... me likes it Smile Smile Smile
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Post  Heli on Wed Oct 22, 2008 11:12 am

la_nette wrote:
emilia wrote:This was like someone's real life...

I agree, sounded a bit familiar for me..
Just because it's easier to write about things which could happen in real life. And besides, it sounds much more believable then.. Wink


Part 2

- Which one you would appreciate in this world? Or which one you couldnít live without?
a) Wisdom
b) Love
c) World peace.
And I want real arguments, teacher asked.
It was hard question in Friday afternoon. Everybody wanted only to go home to spend weekend. Finally few answered ďworld peaceĒ and gave some arguments. Then teacher asked herself from some pupils. Everybody answered same way. I saw that teacher started to look hopeless.
- Ana, what do you think about this? teacher asked and looked straight to me.
I had guessed this. So I had my answer ready.
- Why everybody want world peace? Of course I understand that it would be great if we didnít need to read news about wars and other bad things. But my point of view itís not the most important thing. Weíre living in Spain. The threat of war is really small here. We donít need to worry about that. But youngsters from for example Iraq would definitely choose world peace because they know what war is. We donít.
Then, wisdom. Do we really need to be wise to live in this world? I donít think so. I think those who have simple mind can appreciate little beautiful things in this world. Things what we, so-called normal people donít see. We can live here even we wouldnít be such a genius. So, my answer is love. Nobody can live without love. We all have relatives and friends in our life. They are our neighbours. We canít survive without them. I canít imagine a life without people who love me and who I love. We all need a person who loves us and who we can love, at least a one. Our life would be empty without any love. Then any wisdom or world peace wouldnít help us, I stopped my explanation.
Teacher just stared at me. Obviously she hadnít except any answer like that. That was just my luck.
- That was very clearly argued opinion. We all should do just like Ana did, give enough reasons, teacher said.

From that day I knew what I wanted to do. I wanted to share my thoughts and my opinions with others. Many, many years later when I had been in university and been at work, I did what I have always wanted. I wrote a book. I became a writer. Under few years I became a famous writer. I published one book. I was 22 years old then. The book was called ďNothing else than meĒ. I was invited to many places to talk about my book and my writing process. I was signing books in many book stores around Spain. And two years later I published my second book. And thatís when I finally met DíNash.


There will be longer parts, these first ones are just so short because I need to explain some things first..
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