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Post  Laura on Mon Nov 03, 2008 12:06 am

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Post  Heli on Mon Nov 03, 2008 7:37 pm

Part 14

The week with Ony went fast. Actually during that week we became friends. It was Onyís fault if we start looking guilty for that. Ony was so social and talkative person that he always wanted to be with me and talk. Sometimes it was difficult for me because I had used to have my own space around me. I have used to be alone. But I tried my best because I didnít want to leave Ony alone if he wanted to talk. But when about half of the week had gone I had to tell Ony that I missed time to be alone too. It felt like we would have been married.

- Ony, I think I need to tell you something, I said once when we were sitting at the living room together.
- Ok, Iíll listen to you; Ony said and looked at me.
- Iíve noticed that youíre very social person and you like to talk a lot with me and spend time with me, I started.
- ButÖ? Ony asked with his eyes.
- But Iím not that kind of person. I like to be a lot alone. I donít need other people around me like you do, I explained.
- Why you didnít say anything about this before? I would have given your own space to you, Ony asked.
- I donít know. Maybe I wanted to be polite and tried to please you, I confessed. Ė It wouldnít have been fair against you to be alone when I wanted to keep my own space.
- It was really sweet from you, Ony smiled. Ė But it isnít nice either if you donít feel well. So, say when Iím too much here so Iíll leave you alone, okay? Ony suggested.
- Ok. Itís a deal, I smiled.
- Good. Now, do I need to know something else about you? he smiled askew.
- HmmÖDo you mean that I would have closet full of secrets? I joked. Ė No, I think you already know everything necessary.
- HahahÖOny laughed. But can I ask something?
- Of course you can. Youíve already asked so many questions that you donít need to ask any permission to do it, I smiled.
- It just came in my mind when you were talking about those secrets. Have you ever thought that you could fall in love again?
I looked at Ony long time. Ė How the heck you ended up to falling in love from secrets? I asked disbelieved. Ė You are weird.
- I donít know. It just came to my mind, Ony answered.
- Of course Iíve thought about it and I donít believe that it isnít an impossible thing. If it happens then it happens. But Iíve noticed that there are some good sides about living alone, I said.
- So, you think you can find as good man as your previous husband was? Ony wanted to specify.
- I wouldnít say so, I said thoughtfully. Ė My husband was only one of a kind. He understood me totally and thatís the biggest reason why I miss him so much. We both were quiet and we didnít need to speak all the time. If I can find that kind of man someday, Iím very happy then, I explained.
- Ah, alright. Thanks for the answer. But now Iím going to leave you alone. So you can have your own time too, Ony winked.
- Thanks, I smiled.
Ony left somewhere, I guess to the studio. I stayed in the living room with my own thoughts.

The rest of the week went really nicely. I enjoyed much of it because now Ony remembered to leave me sometimes alone. But even so, we talked much and our friendship grew deeper every day. It would be a bit shame when Javi, Mikel and Basty would come back. Probably they would break this tranquillity. But on the other hand it was nice to have more life to this house.
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Post  emilia on Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:19 pm

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Post  Laura on Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:41 pm

Love it I love you I love you I love you
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Post  Mindex on Mon Nov 03, 2008 10:25 pm

Dance moremoremoooooreeeeeeeeeemore geek
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Post  mikelfan4eva on Tue Nov 04, 2008 12:40 am

aww great parts.

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Post  Heli on Tue Nov 04, 2008 9:19 pm

Part 15

Finally it was the day when DíNash should come back from their tour. It was already evening when I finally heard that a car drove to our yard and the doors of the car smashed shut.
- Weíre finally back; we heard the shout from the hall.
I went to hall together with Ony.
- Nice to see you again, I said and hugged each guy.
- Ony! Nice to see you also here, Javi said happily.
They went to talk something a little aside.
- So, everything has gone fine? Mikel asked from me.
- Yes, of course. We havenít had any problems, I smiled.
- So, I think itís time to me to leave here, Ony said when he came back to us with Javi.
- Why? I asked surprised.
- Well, Iíve already told my part for the book. And now you can continue together, Ony explained.
- But youíre still part of DíNash. You were one of them who created this band. I think you should be here Ďtil the end. Please, really, really pretty please, I asked blinking my eyes.
- You should know Ony that Ana is really good at getting everybody to do what she wants, Basty winked.
- WellÖEeerrmÖ If you really want that Iíll stay here, Ony said.
- Yeess! Thatís great; I clapped my hands for excitement. Ė Thanks for the right decision, I said and kissed Onyís cheek.
- Hey, did I miss something here? Basty asked surprised.
- What do you mean? I asked.
- You kissed Onyís cheek, Basty repeated.
- Yeah, just because he made the right decision. Now we can really do the book because everybody is here, I said.
- Oh, wellÖWhateverÖBasty muttered and obviously left to his room.
- What was that? I asked confused.
- Maybe he thought that you two have something going on, Mikel said and looked at me and Ony.
- Well, do you? Javi came inside the conversation too.
- Donít be silly! Weíre just friends, or what Ony? I answered.
- Yes. Just good friends, Ony admitted.
- Oh, good friendsÖJavi repeated sarcastically.
- Well. We were here together a week. So, you have to get along with the other person, I explained. Ė And why are you so suspicious? Is it forbidden to give a kiss on the cheek? I mean, weíre doing it all the time when we meet each others in the streets or weíre saying goodbyes. Itís not a big deal, I continued.
- Wow. That must have been longest speak youíve ever said when Iíve been near to you, Mikel said.
- And thatís only because Iím so pissed off right now.
- Iím sorry. I should know that Ony wouldnít do anything like that, Javi apologized.
- Itís okay. Iím just a bit bad mood myself.
- Letís just forget this and letís be friends again, Mikel said.
- Yes. Friends, I smiled to Javi.
He smiled back.

Mikel and Javi went to their rooms to take their stuff there. I went to kitchen and started to make food for us. I was sure that boys were hungry after all that travelling. Ony followed me.
- Can I help you? he asked nicely.
- Well. You could do the salad if you want, I suggested.
- What was that what happened in the hall? Ony asked while he was chopping the cucumber into small pieces.
- I really donít know. Maybe I shouldnít have kissed you, so anything wouldnít have happened, I thought. Ė Or then Basty didnít like the idea.
- Donít be mad at him. He has always looked after us. Heís just like dad for us, Ony explained.
- Iím not mad at him, just confused. But now I know why he acted like it. He just wanted to protect you from bad, bad writer-Ana; I joked and burst into laughter.
Ony laughed too.
- Whatís so funny? Basty asked and entered to kitchen.
- Nothing, I shook my head.
- Iím sorry that I acted that way at the hall. I donít know what came to me, Basty apologized.
- Itís okay. I already forgot what happened, I answered.
- Hey, whatís that? Seems tasty, Basty said and reached the food I was making.
- Get your fingers off it! Itís not ready yet; I said and slapped Bastyís hand.
-Youíre mean, Basty complained and left away.

That kind of time we spent together in the cottage. We all were friends, teasing and joking with each others. But like I said before: Todo va a cambiar. But any of us couldnít see the changes.
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Post  NETTTE on Tue Nov 04, 2008 9:41 pm

I wanna know what will change bounce bounce
Great part!! Smile Smile
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Post  Laura on Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:00 pm

Do I smell love??? scratch scratch scratch scratch
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Post  ~Mar~ on Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:04 pm

Dude! Stop being so vague! I suck with hints! bounce

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Post  x Imke x on Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:13 pm

whooo you're going fast with these parts! Shocked or i'm just slow Laughing anyway, i really like these parts! What a Face so funny when she slapped basty's hands. xD
i'm so curious to what will change!!! bounce

mooooooore dude! What a Face
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Post  Mindex on Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:19 pm

Laughing Grrrrreat part really! MrGreen Give us more! Razz
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Post  emilia on Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:41 pm

I really love this Very Happy
Me wanna more bouncebounce
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Post  Heli on Wed Nov 05, 2008 8:27 pm

x Imke x wrote:whooo you're going fast with these parts! Shocked or i'm just slow Laughing anyway, i really like these parts! What a Face so funny when she slapped basty's hands. xD
i'm so curious to what will change!!! bounce

mooooooore dude! What a Face
Laughing I'm posting part per day coz I'm already finished this story. So, I dunno if you're slow.. Laughing

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Post  Heli on Wed Nov 05, 2008 8:28 pm

Part 16

One evening I had gone for a long walk on the beach. When I came back and entered in the house, I heard guys talking in the living room. Or talking was actually wrong verb, it was shouting. They were watching surprisingly football, like every Spanish man. Real Madrid had made a goal. Little by little they calmed down and started talking again without shouting. They havenít heard that I had come in because of their loud voice. So I could watch them again without they knew anything about it.

Four guys who were friends, watching football together and enjoying each others company. Now I knew exactly how I was going to start the book. Luckily I had piece of paper and pen with me all the time, so I started to write. When I had put all my ideas to the paper I ran upstairs and started to write it to my laptop. New and better ideas were coming all the time so I had hardly time to write them.

Later I went back to downstairs where boys had already stopped watching football.
- Youíve already come back? Mikel asked.
- We didnít hear anything, Javi said.
- Mostly because of TV and you were shouting, I answered.
- But what do you think about his. I thought this would be the prologue of the book, I said and gave my laptop to them.

ďFour guys are watching football. Typical Spanish boys, shouting competition between them is a must during the match. They seem to be normal guys with normal hobbies. Theyíre all gathered together to spend some great time together. Laughing, talking, joking, and sometimes even talking seriously about something. Sounds pretty special friendship between those four guys. Special is the right word. Because they arenít only friends, they form a band called DíNash. Being a band has cemented their friendship even more. So, even they seem to be just normal guys, they actually arenít that. Theyíre members of famous Spanish boy band DíNash. This is a story of those four guys who were watching football one evening without any worries, just like normal peopleĒ

- Iím speechless, Basty said at first.
- This is awesome! I knew you would be the right choice, Javi said his eyes shining for excitement.
- This sounds really promising. Iím sure the whole book will be great, Mikel said his opinion.
- Some way itís touching, Ony started. Ė Because youíre comparing us to normal people and then you tell that we arenít normal and then you again say that weíre like normal people. It tells a lot about us. Because weíre normal people even weíre a band or theyíre nowadays, Ony corrected, like some people would think that weíre famous people. Or actually weíre famous but weíre normal guys at the same time. Sorry for my confusing answer, itís only a mess, Ony finished finally.
- No, itís not a mess. I understood you totally. And that I tried to describe, what you already said. That youíre just normal guys even youíre famous at the same time, I smiled.
- That I was exactly trying to say, Ony laughed.
- But if this book will be same kind of text like this prologue was the book will be really awesome! Mikel repeated.
- Hey, donít be so happy yet. Youíre allowed to be happy when Iíve finally finished this, I grinned.
- But Iím sure itíll be like I said, Mikel said. Ė Right guys?
- Yeah, youíre right, Basty said.
- We should celebrate this some way, Javi suggested.
Other guys agreed with Javi but I disagreed.
- We should celebrate when this book is finally ready, I explained.
- Why? Little win is a win also, Ony winked.
- You guys are impossible, I sighed and roller my eyes.
- SooÖIím making pancakes! Javi shouted and ran to kitchen.

I was happy that guys had liked my prologue. But on the other hand I wished they wouldnít be so happy and optimistic when I showed them something I had written. I had just started writing this book and everything could happen before the book would be ready. I would sigh for relief until when the book would be totally ready.
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Post  emilia on Wed Nov 05, 2008 8:42 pm

Yes I love this I love you
Prologue was so great Very Happy
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Post  ~Mar~ on Wed Nov 05, 2008 8:58 pm

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Post  Mindex on Wed Nov 05, 2008 11:47 pm

I laughed when Javi ran to the kitchen to make pancakes! Laughing Laughing
Yeh, the prologue was awesome! cheers
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Post  Kath on Thu Nov 06, 2008 12:23 am

*sigh* i wanna know whats gunna happpeeeennnnn. bounce
I would love to read this book! MrGreen
This is so great Razz
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Post  Laura on Thu Nov 06, 2008 10:31 am

I love it I love you I love you I love you
Agree with Kath,it really would be interesting to read this book Smile Smile
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Post  x Imke x on Thu Nov 06, 2008 2:21 pm

- SooÖIím making pancakes! Javi shouted and ran to kitchen.

Hahahahah!!! Laughing Laughing I could SO imagine that! xD xD

The prologue was very good! What a Face
Still wondering what's going to change though. Razz
And if you're posting each day a new part then... today there'll be a new part! What a Face cheers

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Post  NETTTE on Thu Nov 06, 2008 5:30 pm

The prologue was great!! Smile Smile
And I agree with Kath and Laura, it would be interesting to read the book Very Happy
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Post  Heli on Thu Nov 06, 2008 6:35 pm

Laughing Why don't we suggest to guys that they should write a book about D'Nash? xD
And Imke, you were right. pig Here's the new part:

Part 17

One morning was a special morning one way. Usually I had been the first person who had woken up. But this morning everybody else had woken before me. Kitchen was empty when I went to eat breakfast. Living room was empty also. So, when I had eaten my breakfast I went down to the basement. I found guys from the studio. They didnít notice me at all because I walked quietly.

The door of the studio was open. I peeked carefully to the studio and I saw Basty, Mikel and Javi singing in the record room. Ony was in the studio taking care of everything necessary. I didnít want to disturb them so I stayed at the door. This was the first time when I heard them singing in live. And that was something so amazing that I canít even describe it well enough. I guessed they were recording new songs for the third album. They all had great unique voice, but I must admit that Javiís voice touched me most of them. He had something in his voice which made me shiver. I could listen to his voice forever.

I didnít know if it was allowed to listen to them like this, so when the song ended I knocked on the door. Ony turned around.
- Hi, can I come in? I asked and smiled.
- Of course. How long have you been there? he asked.
- Not long. I just came here, I lied. Ė So is it possible to hear your songs? I asked when the others came to the studio too.
- Well, why not, Mikel answered.
- Thatís great! I canít wait to hear your new ones, I smiled.
- Just remember not to tell anybody about these songs, Basty reminded me.
- Of course I wonít tell anything to anybody.

Guys went back to the record room and I stayed there with Ony. Now they started with another song. It was slow ballad. Their voices fitted so well together. I started to cry, I couldnít help it. My cry was quiet, so Ony didnít notice it. He was busy while listening to guysí voices and giving advice and playing the music and taking some parts again.
I havenít ever heard so beautiful song than this was. This time also, Javiís voice sank deep in my heart and stayed there. The feeling was something I couldnít describe. I could have listened to his voice forever. But it wasnít possible.

Javi was the first one who entered in. Mikel and Basty wanted still sing some parts again. Javi noticed immediately that I was crying even I tried to hide it. He came to sit next to me and hugged me friendly.
- Hey, whatís wrong now?
- Nothing. That song just was so beautiful; I smiled and wiped my tears off.
Then Ony realized that something was happening there. He turned around.
- Whatís happening here? Why are you crying? Ony asked and looked at me worried.
- That song was just so beautiful, I explained and shook my head.
Javi was still hugging me.
- You can let me go. Iím fine already, I smiled.
- Are you sure? Javi asked still little worried.
- Yes. Iím ok, I repeated and smiled convincible.
I saw that Mikel and Basty were already coming back. I didnít want to explain them why I was crying.
- Iím sure your other songs will be great, I said quickly and left from the studio without saying anything else. I could feel how Javi and Onyís looks were burning my back.
- Why she was so busy? Basty asked when I had already gone.
Ony and Javi shook their shoulders.
- Maybe she just have bad day today, Ony answered finally.

At the same time I was already arrived at my room. I hid myself under the covers. I didnít know anymore why I was acting this way. What was wrong with me? Usually I cried seldom, something had to be totally wrong if I was crying. But now I had cried only because of one song. That had never happened to me before. What was happening with me?
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Post  Laura on Thu Nov 06, 2008 6:55 pm

We found out one question and now another one appeard Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
What's happening to her????? Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes scratch scratch scratch
Now my minds are really messed up Laughing Laughing
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