~Wrong man~ ~Part 31 ~ FINAL PART!
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Re: ~Wrong man~ ~Part 31 ~ FINAL PART!
Aaaw, poor you Laura..
I'll explain a bit to you. All those things are connected with the fact that something is changing there all the time.
I hope it helped a bit because I don't want to comment much my writings, so I wouldn't reveal anything what will happen there.
I'll explain a bit to you. All those things are connected with the fact that something is changing there all the time.
I hope it helped a bit because I don't want to comment much my writings, so I wouldn't reveal anything what will happen there.
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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I suck in hints, but I got this one xD
Now I wanna know what's changing *silent hint*
Now I wanna know what's changing *silent hint*
Re: ~Wrong man~ ~Part 31 ~ FINAL PART!
Heli wrote:Aaaw, poor you Laura..
I'll explain a bit to you. All those things are connected with the fact that something is changing there all the time.
I hope it helped a bit because I don't want to comment much my writings, so I wouldn't reveal anything what will happen there.
Yes poor me
Thanks Heli you helped to me a bit *hug*
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Naaw bless
It was nice of Ony and Javi not to say that she was crying (:
Great part!
It was nice of Ony and Javi not to say that she was crying (:
Great part!
Re: ~Wrong man~ ~Part 31 ~ FINAL PART!
Sweet guys! Waiting for more!
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Aww Javi and Ony are really sweet.
And I'm still curious to what will change.
This was a really good part. More! (today a new one )
And I'm still curious to what will change.
This was a really good part. More! (today a new one )
Re: ~Wrong man~ ~Part 31 ~ FINAL PART!
Imke, you're now so excited when I told I'm posting part per day..
Part 18
Much later that day I went finally to downstairs. Obviously guys were still at the studio because I saw nobody. I continued my way to the basement and I found them there.
- You’re still working here? I asked like nothing would have happened before.
Mikel looked at the clock. – Hey, guys, I think it’s enough for this day. We’ve worked the whole day today. Let’s continue tomorrow.
- What if we’ll make this song ready? I think it won’t take long, Basty suggested.
- Blah. Ok, Mikel answered.
I went to kitchen to make some food for us. It seemed that it was time to do the groceries soon. Shortly after I had started to cook, Ony came to help me again.
- What happened at the studio this morning? Ony broke the silence.
Why he had to start with this again? I didn’t want to talk about that.
- The song was so touching that I started to cry. And when Javi came in he noticed that I was crying and comforted me. Then I left away because I didn’t want to explain the whole thing to Mikel and Basty.
- They were a bit surprised when you left away so quickly.
- I’ve been so stressed out because of my book. And now I’ve this project. So, I think it’s all because of stress. It’s bursting out of me with crying moments and angry mood, I explained.
- Well, Javi already yelled at me because I didn’t notice that you were crying.
- Really? I asked surprised. – It was sweet of him. But I tried to be as quiet as possible because I didn’t want anybody to see me crying.
- But you don’t need to stress about our book. It doesn’t need to be ready as soon as possible. Just write when you feel like writing. I don’t want that you’re stressing too much just because of our book, Ony said.
- I know, and I’m not stressing about your book, just my own one, because I didn’t have time to recover between these projects. But I’ll be ok soon, don’t worry, I smiled to Ony.
- That’s good to hear, Ony smiled back.
We ate the dinner and everybody acted normally. I was happy that nobody asked about my previous behaviour. Maybe Ony had said something to them or then they realized that themselves.
I was so tired that I took a shower early and went to my room. I wrote little but soon I gave up. This day wasn’t my best days. I was already going to sleep when I realized that I had left my ring somewhere. I had taken it away when I made the food. But I remember that I was wearing the ring after the dinner. Only possibility was that I had forgotten it to bathroom. I went to downstairs and opened the door of the bathroom.
- Oh, sorry. I didn’t know you were there. I’m sorry, I stuttered when I saw Javi brushing his teeth only towel on his waist.
- It’s okay. I was already going away soon, Javi answered.
- No, I was just wondering if I left my ring somewhere here. It should be near the sink, I explained.
- This one? Here you go, Javi gave my ring to me.
- Thanks a lot. And sorry for disturbing!
- Like I said, it’s ok, Javi smiled.
I climbed fast back to my room. My heart was beating fast, I was breathing fast too. I couldn’t get the image of Javi standing half naked at the bathroom out of my head. What the hell was happening with me?
Part 18
Much later that day I went finally to downstairs. Obviously guys were still at the studio because I saw nobody. I continued my way to the basement and I found them there.
- You’re still working here? I asked like nothing would have happened before.
Mikel looked at the clock. – Hey, guys, I think it’s enough for this day. We’ve worked the whole day today. Let’s continue tomorrow.
- What if we’ll make this song ready? I think it won’t take long, Basty suggested.
- Blah. Ok, Mikel answered.
I went to kitchen to make some food for us. It seemed that it was time to do the groceries soon. Shortly after I had started to cook, Ony came to help me again.
- What happened at the studio this morning? Ony broke the silence.
Why he had to start with this again? I didn’t want to talk about that.
- The song was so touching that I started to cry. And when Javi came in he noticed that I was crying and comforted me. Then I left away because I didn’t want to explain the whole thing to Mikel and Basty.
- They were a bit surprised when you left away so quickly.
- I’ve been so stressed out because of my book. And now I’ve this project. So, I think it’s all because of stress. It’s bursting out of me with crying moments and angry mood, I explained.
- Well, Javi already yelled at me because I didn’t notice that you were crying.
- Really? I asked surprised. – It was sweet of him. But I tried to be as quiet as possible because I didn’t want anybody to see me crying.
- But you don’t need to stress about our book. It doesn’t need to be ready as soon as possible. Just write when you feel like writing. I don’t want that you’re stressing too much just because of our book, Ony said.
- I know, and I’m not stressing about your book, just my own one, because I didn’t have time to recover between these projects. But I’ll be ok soon, don’t worry, I smiled to Ony.
- That’s good to hear, Ony smiled back.
We ate the dinner and everybody acted normally. I was happy that nobody asked about my previous behaviour. Maybe Ony had said something to them or then they realized that themselves.
I was so tired that I took a shower early and went to my room. I wrote little but soon I gave up. This day wasn’t my best days. I was already going to sleep when I realized that I had left my ring somewhere. I had taken it away when I made the food. But I remember that I was wearing the ring after the dinner. Only possibility was that I had forgotten it to bathroom. I went to downstairs and opened the door of the bathroom.
- Oh, sorry. I didn’t know you were there. I’m sorry, I stuttered when I saw Javi brushing his teeth only towel on his waist.
- It’s okay. I was already going away soon, Javi answered.
- No, I was just wondering if I left my ring somewhere here. It should be near the sink, I explained.
- This one? Here you go, Javi gave my ring to me.
- Thanks a lot. And sorry for disturbing!
- Like I said, it’s ok, Javi smiled.
I climbed fast back to my room. My heart was beating fast, I was breathing fast too. I couldn’t get the image of Javi standing half naked at the bathroom out of my head. What the hell was happening with me?
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Maybe she have fall in love to Javi but she doesn't realize that herself...
Amazing part
Amazing part
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Oh Javi
Again in my mind there is a mess
First Ony and now Javi
Great part
Again in my mind there is a mess
First Ony and now Javi
Great part
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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So I'm here only messing your heads...? Ouch...
I can say that everything will be clear in the end, I think.
I can say that everything will be clear in the end, I think.
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Luuuuv.... that what it is all about!
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Should it be something else then?
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Yeah, you shouldn't have told me cause then I wouldn't be so annoying.
I couldn’t get the image of Javi standing half naked at the bathroom out of my head.
Who could manage that?
I really liked this part!
Moooore! (I know when I can read the next part )
I couldn’t get the image of Javi standing half naked at the bathroom out of my head.
Who could manage that?
I really liked this part!
Moooore! (I know when I can read the next part )
Re: ~Wrong man~ ~Part 31 ~ FINAL PART!
Haha, you aren't annoying at all.
It always cheer my day when I'm reading your comments here.
It always cheer my day when I'm reading your comments here.
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Heli wrote:Should it be something else then?
Nope, but it could be
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Thanks girls!
Part 19
D’Nash had a performance in Barcelona one evening. They left already in the afternoon to prepare their performance. And also Ony left with them to centre of Barcelona. So I would be alone the whole evening. And actually it was the best option for me. I haven’t told to anyone that exactly two years ago my husband died. Last year I visited his grave but now I was here, so it wasn’t possible. But I could keep my own silent moment for him now, because guys weren’t here. I could remember him in peace.
D’Nash would perform in one night club. After their gig they decided to spend some time at the club. But soon Javi got bored to be there. He wasn’t at the mood of dancing or listening to music so loud. So, he said to others that he would go back home already. Others decided to stay still at the club. Javi took a taxi to home and soon he arrived there. But the whole house seemed to be empty. All windows were dark, there wasn’t even a light at the terrace. Javi opened the front door. Darkness continued in the house too. Javi put the light on at the hall. The house was quiet. Javi went towards the living room. He saw some tiny, tiny light coming there.
- Hey, why are you sitting here in the darkness? Javi asked.
I didn’t answer anything. I just stared at the candle on the table and sat on the couch my arms wrapped around my legs.
- Ana? Is everything okay? Javi asked now worried.
- I’m fine, I whispered.
- But you don’t look like it. Tell me if something is wrong, Javi said and sat next to me.
- There’s nothing wrong, I argued back.
- Hey, don’t lie to me, Javi said and turned my face to him. – I can see that something is wrong. And you’re crying again, Javi noticed.
He put his arm around my shoulders and pulled me near him. He was comforting me once again. I lent my head against Javi’s shoulder still staring at the candle.
- You seemed to be so lonely when you were sitting here. Tell me what’s wrong, Javi asked once again.
I felt lonely too when I had been alone here. Some way it felt better now, when Javi was next to me. I felt that somebody was caring about me. After long silent moment I started to tell why I had been sitting here in the darkness only one candle as my light. I told the same things which I had told to Ony before. But he didn’t know that my husband had died exactly two years ago. Now Javi knew more about my secrets than Ony.
- It would be great if this thing could stay only between us, I said finally.
- Of course. I won’t tell this to anybody. Just tell me if I can do something for you, Javi said.
- Just be there, that’s enough, I answered.
There we sat side by side on the couch, in the silent darkness staring at only one candle which made strange patterns on the opposite wall. It was first time when I felt comfortable with someone in the silence. The only exception was my dead husband. I could feel that Javi was sorry for me and wanted to cheer me up. Even he didn’t say it aloud I could feel it. I haven’t felt it with anyone else here. It was first time when I didn’t need to force myself to speak something. This silence between us felt just so natural, normal thing.
I don’t know how long we had sat there but I noticed that my eyes were closing all the time.
- I think I should go to sleep now, I said and stood up carefully.
Javi stood up also. – Are you better now? he asked.
- Yes. I’m much better now. Thanks a lot, I smiled a bit.
- That’s good to hear. Sweet dreams, Javi said and hugged me and kissed gently my forehead.
- Thanks, I mumbled against his shoulder.
I walked to my room and left Javi in the living room.
I went under the covers and let my thoughts free until then. I didn’t know anymore what was happening with me. It had been so natural to sit with Javi there. I don’t know, my head was totally messed up right now. I knew I should clear my head as soon as possible but I didn’t have any idea how and when. I hoped my head would be clearer after long sleep. But it wasn’t. My head was just one big mess many days until Ony helped me to clear it at least a bit.
Part 19
D’Nash had a performance in Barcelona one evening. They left already in the afternoon to prepare their performance. And also Ony left with them to centre of Barcelona. So I would be alone the whole evening. And actually it was the best option for me. I haven’t told to anyone that exactly two years ago my husband died. Last year I visited his grave but now I was here, so it wasn’t possible. But I could keep my own silent moment for him now, because guys weren’t here. I could remember him in peace.
D’Nash would perform in one night club. After their gig they decided to spend some time at the club. But soon Javi got bored to be there. He wasn’t at the mood of dancing or listening to music so loud. So, he said to others that he would go back home already. Others decided to stay still at the club. Javi took a taxi to home and soon he arrived there. But the whole house seemed to be empty. All windows were dark, there wasn’t even a light at the terrace. Javi opened the front door. Darkness continued in the house too. Javi put the light on at the hall. The house was quiet. Javi went towards the living room. He saw some tiny, tiny light coming there.
- Hey, why are you sitting here in the darkness? Javi asked.
I didn’t answer anything. I just stared at the candle on the table and sat on the couch my arms wrapped around my legs.
- Ana? Is everything okay? Javi asked now worried.
- I’m fine, I whispered.
- But you don’t look like it. Tell me if something is wrong, Javi said and sat next to me.
- There’s nothing wrong, I argued back.
- Hey, don’t lie to me, Javi said and turned my face to him. – I can see that something is wrong. And you’re crying again, Javi noticed.
He put his arm around my shoulders and pulled me near him. He was comforting me once again. I lent my head against Javi’s shoulder still staring at the candle.
- You seemed to be so lonely when you were sitting here. Tell me what’s wrong, Javi asked once again.
I felt lonely too when I had been alone here. Some way it felt better now, when Javi was next to me. I felt that somebody was caring about me. After long silent moment I started to tell why I had been sitting here in the darkness only one candle as my light. I told the same things which I had told to Ony before. But he didn’t know that my husband had died exactly two years ago. Now Javi knew more about my secrets than Ony.
- It would be great if this thing could stay only between us, I said finally.
- Of course. I won’t tell this to anybody. Just tell me if I can do something for you, Javi said.
- Just be there, that’s enough, I answered.
There we sat side by side on the couch, in the silent darkness staring at only one candle which made strange patterns on the opposite wall. It was first time when I felt comfortable with someone in the silence. The only exception was my dead husband. I could feel that Javi was sorry for me and wanted to cheer me up. Even he didn’t say it aloud I could feel it. I haven’t felt it with anyone else here. It was first time when I didn’t need to force myself to speak something. This silence between us felt just so natural, normal thing.
I don’t know how long we had sat there but I noticed that my eyes were closing all the time.
- I think I should go to sleep now, I said and stood up carefully.
Javi stood up also. – Are you better now? he asked.
- Yes. I’m much better now. Thanks a lot, I smiled a bit.
- That’s good to hear. Sweet dreams, Javi said and hugged me and kissed gently my forehead.
- Thanks, I mumbled against his shoulder.
I walked to my room and left Javi in the living room.
I went under the covers and let my thoughts free until then. I didn’t know anymore what was happening with me. It had been so natural to sit with Javi there. I don’t know, my head was totally messed up right now. I knew I should clear my head as soon as possible but I didn’t have any idea how and when. I hoped my head would be clearer after long sleep. But it wasn’t. My head was just one big mess many days until Ony helped me to clear it at least a bit.
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Not only in my head is a big mess
Where is Ony???? I need his help too
Btw amazing part
Where is Ony???? I need his help too
Btw amazing part
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So great part
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Ooo, how sweet
Moooore??
Moooore??
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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So touching... so beautiful....
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Thankies!
Part 20
The next day after D’Nash’s gig in Barcelona went totally over me. I was tired because I couldn’t sleep with all those thoughts rounding in my head. My eyes were red and swelled up because I had cried so much. I was walking around the house just like a ghost. Luckily others had stayed long at the club. Because when I woke up everybody was still sleeping. I avoided others as much as I could. I stayed long time at my room. But it would have seemed weird if I had stayed the whole day behind the door of my room. I forced myself to go downstairs and spend some time with guys. I acted as normally as I just could and luckily nobody noticed anything weird in my behaviour.
Some days later I was still deep in my thoughts. I didn’t like to be at the cottage anymore when guys were there. I stayed a lot in my room, excusing that I wanted to write in peace. Also I had started to go for long walks on the beach. I enjoyed the peace of the nature a lot. There I had possibility to think everything even it was only in vain. My head was still totally confused about everything. There was a little hill where I used to go many times. On the top of the hill was a big stone, just like a bench. I sat on the stone and watched the sea. How waves reached the beach, how it happened over and over again.
It was a bit windy day, the sky was full of clouds. Luckily it didn’t rain. I was sitting on the stone once again. But this time I couldn’t be alone. It was Ony who disturbed my own peace.
- You’re sitting here quite often, he said and sat next to me.
- Yes. It’s so peaceful here. Nature is near here, I answered.
- You’ve been quite quiet these days, Ony said then.
- I’m just trying to clear my head, that’s all, I explained.
- Is something happened then? Ony asked.
- Well, I don’t know. Maybe, maybe not, I hesitated.
- Do you want to tell me what’s bothering you?
- I don’t know. Maybe it would be good idea because I’ve thought so long these things all alone. Maybe you could give me some good advice.
- Of course it depends on what’s bothering you. But I can try.
Then I told what was rounding in my head. How good it had felt to be with Javi. And I didn’t know how I should feel about Javi now. Ony listened to me quietly and gave me the chance to talk without interrupting me. When I finished I waited what Ony would say.
- Well. I really can’t say what you should do. But like you said I can give advice to you. Spend more time with him so you can know him better. Then you’ll know if he’s that kind of man you think he is, Ony said finally. – Avoiding him isn’t really helping you.
- Yeah, maybe I should really do that, I said finally.
- Not maybe. Do it. It’s not so bad at spend great time with us. Just forget those thoughts and enjoy our and especially Javi’s company. Maybe your friendship will grow something deeper, Ony winked.
- Thanks a lot. You really are good friend! I said and hugged Ony.
- Of course I’m doing everything I can for my friends, Ony smiled and hugged me back. – So let’s go back to cottage. Javi is waiting for you!
- Hey, I didn’t mean that you should start to tease me right away!
- But it’s so nice to tease people who have fallen in love, Ony laughed.
- Hey! I’m not fallen in love with him! I yelled. – I’m just interested in him, I continued a bit quietly.
- But it means the same, Ony argued.
- No, it definitely doesn’t mean the same! I argued back.
Talking like that we finally arrived at the cottage. I was grateful for Ony that he had cheered me so much. Now I felt much better. I was that happy girl who had arrived at this cottage weeks ago. And now I really had something important to do here. I wanted to know Javi much better.
Part 20
The next day after D’Nash’s gig in Barcelona went totally over me. I was tired because I couldn’t sleep with all those thoughts rounding in my head. My eyes were red and swelled up because I had cried so much. I was walking around the house just like a ghost. Luckily others had stayed long at the club. Because when I woke up everybody was still sleeping. I avoided others as much as I could. I stayed long time at my room. But it would have seemed weird if I had stayed the whole day behind the door of my room. I forced myself to go downstairs and spend some time with guys. I acted as normally as I just could and luckily nobody noticed anything weird in my behaviour.
Some days later I was still deep in my thoughts. I didn’t like to be at the cottage anymore when guys were there. I stayed a lot in my room, excusing that I wanted to write in peace. Also I had started to go for long walks on the beach. I enjoyed the peace of the nature a lot. There I had possibility to think everything even it was only in vain. My head was still totally confused about everything. There was a little hill where I used to go many times. On the top of the hill was a big stone, just like a bench. I sat on the stone and watched the sea. How waves reached the beach, how it happened over and over again.
It was a bit windy day, the sky was full of clouds. Luckily it didn’t rain. I was sitting on the stone once again. But this time I couldn’t be alone. It was Ony who disturbed my own peace.
- You’re sitting here quite often, he said and sat next to me.
- Yes. It’s so peaceful here. Nature is near here, I answered.
- You’ve been quite quiet these days, Ony said then.
- I’m just trying to clear my head, that’s all, I explained.
- Is something happened then? Ony asked.
- Well, I don’t know. Maybe, maybe not, I hesitated.
- Do you want to tell me what’s bothering you?
- I don’t know. Maybe it would be good idea because I’ve thought so long these things all alone. Maybe you could give me some good advice.
- Of course it depends on what’s bothering you. But I can try.
Then I told what was rounding in my head. How good it had felt to be with Javi. And I didn’t know how I should feel about Javi now. Ony listened to me quietly and gave me the chance to talk without interrupting me. When I finished I waited what Ony would say.
- Well. I really can’t say what you should do. But like you said I can give advice to you. Spend more time with him so you can know him better. Then you’ll know if he’s that kind of man you think he is, Ony said finally. – Avoiding him isn’t really helping you.
- Yeah, maybe I should really do that, I said finally.
- Not maybe. Do it. It’s not so bad at spend great time with us. Just forget those thoughts and enjoy our and especially Javi’s company. Maybe your friendship will grow something deeper, Ony winked.
- Thanks a lot. You really are good friend! I said and hugged Ony.
- Of course I’m doing everything I can for my friends, Ony smiled and hugged me back. – So let’s go back to cottage. Javi is waiting for you!
- Hey, I didn’t mean that you should start to tease me right away!
- But it’s so nice to tease people who have fallen in love, Ony laughed.
- Hey! I’m not fallen in love with him! I yelled. – I’m just interested in him, I continued a bit quietly.
- But it means the same, Ony argued.
- No, it definitely doesn’t mean the same! I argued back.
Talking like that we finally arrived at the cottage. I was grateful for Ony that he had cheered me so much. Now I felt much better. I was that happy girl who had arrived at this cottage weeks ago. And now I really had something important to do here. I wanted to know Javi much better.
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