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Post  Mindex on Thu Nov 13, 2008 12:09 am

I know, Heli Laughing mut mul on aavistus pig It's ok, you don't need to say anything... so just shut up! xD I really don't even want to know beforehand! Laughing
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Post  Laura on Thu Nov 13, 2008 10:31 am

~Mar~ wrote:She musn't try to forget him, she must talk with him Angel

The same here, totally agree with Mar Smile Smile Smile
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Post  NETTTE on Thu Nov 13, 2008 7:01 pm

And I agree with Mar and Laura Smile Smile
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Post  Heli on Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:09 pm

Part 24

After coming back home other work things had filled my days so there could be days when I didnít write the book at all. And thatís why it took over two months before the book was ready. And after that I had to read it over again if I noticed there any mistakes. My days had been so full that I had had less and less time to think about Javi. Thatís why he followed me in my dreams. So, I couldnít get rid of him even I wanted.

Finally I decided to give the books personally to guys. That was only because I wanted to see Javi. I was so curious if he had changed or not. Somewhere deep in my heart I wanted to believe that he would have changed and would have realized that I was here too. Although my brain tried to tell me that it was stupid to believe so. Why he would have changed? He hasnít seen me over two months. That was long time and everything could happen during it. But I was stubborn and wanted to think only with my heart this time.

First I gave the books to Mikel and Basty. They were glad that I had finally finished it and promised to read it as soon as possible so we could start printing the books. I remembered also that they would send the pic of the front cover of the book to printing house. So they could do that kind of covers for the book like guys wanted.

Then I decided to go and give the next one to Javi. I rang the doorbell quite nervous. Would something change after this meeting?
- Oh, hi! I havenít heard anything of you long time, Javi said gladly when he finally opened the door.
I was going to answer but then I heard somebody shouting from the flat.
- Javi!!? Whoís there? I heard woman shouting and coming to door also.
- This is Ana. Sheís writing the book about DíNash. And this is Camilla, my girlfriend, Javi introduced us.
I put fake smile on my face and greeted Camilla friendly.
- So, come in! We havenít talked so long time, Javi said.
- Iím not staying long, I answered. Ė I just wanted to give you this.
- The book is finally ready? Javi asked gladly. Ė How great!
Camilla had left us alone for my luck.
- Yeah. If you could read it and then tell me if thereís something wrong.
- Ok. Iíll do it. But how are you? You left so quickly from Barcelona that we didnít have time to talk at all, Javi answered. Ė Why you left so quickly?
- You really donít know why I left? Then you must be totally blind, I said.
I was so angry at myself now. Why I had been so stupid and thought that Javiís feelings would change to something else.
- What? I really donít know. Tell me, Javi asked confused.
- Donít blame me if Iím messing your life with telling this. It was you who wanted this, I warned. Ė Itís weird that you didnít notice how interested I was in you. I tried to show it to you so many ways, but you didnít notice it. You were treating me like a friend all the time.
Javiís face was quite amazed when he finally realized what I meant.
- SoÖYouÖYou mean that you fell in love with me? Javi asked surprised.
- Well, you can use those words too if you want.
- But why didnít you tell anything about this to me?
- Would it have changed something then? I asked and continued when I saw how Javiís look changed.
- That I was thinking too. No, it wouldnít have changed anything. I knew that I couldnít change your feelings so I gave up and left back to Madrid.
- So you left because you couldnít be there with me? Javi asked.
I didnít say anything, just nodded my head.
- So, are you still feeling the same, after two months?
- Thatís why I wanted to see you. I wanted to know if I was still feeling the same. And I can say that nothing has changed.
I saw that Javi was really surprised what he had heard. I decided to leave him alone now.
- I still need to give the text to Ony. So I think weíll see at the publishing ceremony then, I said. Ė Goodbye.
- Bye, Javi answered still watching me surprised.
I walked quickly to my car. I needed Ony now more than ever.
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Post  emilia on Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:01 pm

Why I feel that Ony would be right man to her? Not Javi...
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Post  ~Mar~ on Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:40 pm

O, Javi you blind pineapple-head! WTF

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Post  x Imke x on Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:50 pm

Oh goose! Shocked I had to read 4 parts! Laughing But it's ok. Cool It was my own fault. Laughing

I wonder what Javi is going to do, now she confessed. Rolling Eyes And my first impression of Camilla is not good. Laughing She seems really naggy. Razz

Anyway, I loved all parts! Very Happy More! What a Face bounce
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Post  ~Mar~ on Thu Nov 13, 2008 11:07 pm

x Imke x wrote:Oh goose! Shocked I had to read 4 parts! Laughing But it's ok. Cool It was my own fault. Laughing

I wonder what Javi is going to do, now she confessed. Rolling Eyes And my first impression of Camilla is not good. Laughing She seems really naggy. Razz

Anyway, I loved all parts! Very Happy More! What a Face bounce

Agree with Imke. Except the goose-part xD

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Post  Laura on Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:46 pm

~Mar~ wrote:O, Javi you blind pineapple-head! WTF

Now two pineapple heads in D'Nash, Mar Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
Javi is really blind Mad Mad Mad
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Post  ~Mar~ on Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:28 pm

Laura wrote:
~Mar~ wrote:O, Javi you blind pineapple-head! WTF

Now two pineapple heads in D'Nash, Mar Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
Javi is really blind Mad Mad Mad
I wanna know what will happen next bounce bounce

Haha xD Yeah Razz

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Post  x Imke x on Sat Nov 15, 2008 3:30 pm

More? Razz
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Post  Mindex on Sat Nov 15, 2008 7:18 pm

Ooooh.. finally he knows! What a Face Lissššlissšššlissššššš!!! Razz
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Post  Heli on Sat Nov 15, 2008 7:29 pm

Laughing Well, here's more! Razz

Part 25

Javi was still sitting at the kitchen. He couldnít believe his ears at all. That Ana loved him. How he hadnít noticed anything? Now he started to realize how blind he had been. All those little hints seemed so clear right now after Ana had told everything.
- So, what she wanted to say to you? Camilla asked.
- She just told about this book, Javi answered slowly.
- She didnít tell anything really important?
- No, not actually, Javi answered deep in his thoughts.
- Javi, donít lie to me please. I heard everything. So, do you love her?
Javi looked at Camilla scared. Why he hasnít realized that Camilla was here too.
- Of course not. Weíre just friends. You know that I love only you.
- But you were together at the cottage where even I couldnít come with you even I wanted, Camilla complained.
- She worked with us, so thatís totally different thing. And besides Basty, Ony and Mikel were there too. So nothing could have happened there because house was full of people, Javi explained.
- I donít know. I want to think about this. And maybe we should think once again if itís wise to move together, Camilla answered finally.
Javi stared at her in amazement.
- Are you trying to say that because Ana told about her feelings, WE should think this again?
- Yes. I noticed that I donít know you so well that I could rust you so much that we could live together.
- But thatís ridiculous! I donít love Ana, weíre just friends!
- Sorry, but I canít be sure about that. Even I wanted to believe you I just canít. I have my own suspicions, Camilla answered. Ė So Iíll go now. And please, donít call me, Iíll call you when Iím ready.
Javi stared at Camilla mouth wide open. He couldnít say anything when Camilla took her jacket and left to her own flat.

This all was happening only because Ana opened her mouth. Everything would be totally fine if she had kept her mouth shut. Javi started to feel angry because Ana had told her secret to him. Why she had to mess his life now, when everything seemed to go well? It wasnít his fault that he couldnít love Ana. He couldnít change his feelings. It would be only lying then. This was totally unfair. Now he was suffering too about this situation when everything had been said out loud. Javi wouldnít have wanted to even know anything about this. If he had noticed this before, maybe everything would be better. He decided to call Mikel if he knew anything about this.

- Did you know that Ana had feelings against me? Javi asked straight away.
- Oh, you noticed it until now? Yes, I knew about it, Mikel answered.
- Only because Ana told me it few minutes ago. And Camilla heard that and now she left ďto think about thingsĒ. And how do you know about it?
- I noticed it when Ana was at the cottage with us. We all knew about it except you, Mikel answered.
- And now she has probably ruined my life because she opened her mouth.
- Hey! Donít blame her. She hasnít done anything wrong. You should think you own behaviour too. You canít know how much she has suffered because you were so blind and didnít notice anything.
- How could I have known anything because she didnít say anything?
- I donít know. But we others noticed it. So maybe itís your fault thenÖ
- Thanks a lot. You really are good friend, Javi said annoyed and hanged up.

Everything was going so wrong right now. It would have been much better if Ana hadnít told anything about this thing. What you donít know, donít harm you at all.
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Post  ~Mar~ on Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:16 pm

Stupid- WTF I don't like Camila and Javi is still a pineapple-head WTF Very Happy

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Post  Mindex on Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:22 pm

Neutral Dunno what to say... Camilla is smart though Laughing Javi isn't Laughing
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Post  emilia on Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:23 pm

So great part Very Happy
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Post  Laura on Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:49 pm

Javi is not only blind, but stupid too WTF WTF WTF WTF
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Post  Heli on Sat Nov 15, 2008 10:06 pm

That's only way how people usually act when they hear something like that.
I have noticed it.. Rolling Eyes

But thanks girls! Very Happy
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Post  NETTTE on Sat Nov 15, 2008 10:37 pm

Javiii, he's blind Neutral Neutral
Great part!! Very Happy
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Post  Heli on Sun Nov 16, 2008 5:56 pm

Part 26

At the same time Ana was driving to Ony. She was fighting against tears which were trying to escape under her eyelids. Finally she stopped in front of Onyís house. She rang the doorbell. Ony opened the door and she walked straight away in and sat down on the couch and buried her face to her hands.
- Okay, what Javi has done this time? Ony asked and came to sit on the couch too.
- I told him everything, I mumbled through my hands.
- You told him that you love him? Ony asked.
- Exactly.
- And how he reacted? Ony asked carefully.
- He was totally surprised. He couldnít believe me at first.
- Why you decided to tell him? I thought it would be better if he didnít know.
- Because I saw him with his girlfriend. That made me so angry to myself that I wanted Javi would suffer a bit too. I just hope that Camilla, his girlfriend, didnít hear what I said, I explained.
- I hope that too. It might cause too many problems, Ony said.
- And actually you were right. Camilla was really beautiful, just like a model. I donít wonder at all that Javi chose her instead of me.
- Hey, now stop feeling pity for yourself. Youíre great woman and Javi doesnít know what he looses, Ony said.
- Well, at least I wasnít good enough for Javi, I mumbled.
- Now stop that! Ony told and grabbed my hands and forced me to look at him. Ė Itís not your fault that Javi doesnít love you. Understand? He canít appreciate enough your good sides. The best piece of advice I can say to you is that you should forget him.
- But itís harder to do so, I smiled sadly.
- I know, I know. But try it, okay? Ony asked and hugged me.
- Ok, Iíll promise. I really donít know what I would do without you.
- Probably you would realize these things sooner or later yourself.
- Think later, actually too late, I smiled.
- Hey, thatís goo sign. Youíre already smiling, Ony smiled.
- And thatís all because of you, I confessed.
- EhÖYou make me blush, Ony complained.
- Itís only sweet when men blush, I laughed.
- Youíre already laughing now, Ony grinned.
- Oh, I almost forgot. Read this and tell me if thereís something wrong, I said and gave DíNashís ready book to Ony.
- This is already ready? Wow, Iíll read it soon, Ony promised.
- Good. I think Iíll go home now. I have still much work to do.
- Alright. Just remember that nothing is your fault. Try to forget him.
- I know. Iíve gone through much worse things so I think I can survive also now, I smiled.
- Yeah, thatís true. Take care, Ony said.
- You too! Bye! I answered.
- Bye! Ony said back.

I drove back home. The truth was that I had acted much happier to Ony than I really was. I didnít want to worry him too much. I had been so angry myself when I realized that Javi had girlfriend. Why I was so stupid that I thought he would have changed? I was so mad at myself during those days. I couldnít leave those things alone, I had to think about them all the time. I think I managed to find at least hundred different ways how everything would have ended better. But everything was in vain, I couldnít change anything anymore. I was too late, everything had already happened now. I didnít know if it was wise move or not to tell Javi about my feelings. But I was so mad then that I wanted to take revenge on what I had felt because of Javi. I hoped Javi could feel at least a bit the same kind of confusion what I had felt. It was totally fair in my opinion that he could suffer a bit also. Of course it was childish, but I couldnít help it.
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Post  Laura on Sun Nov 16, 2008 6:05 pm

Ony is so sweet Smile Smile Smile
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Post  emilia on Sun Nov 16, 2008 6:51 pm

Great part Very Happy I love you
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Post  ~Mar~ on Sun Nov 16, 2008 6:53 pm

Ony is such a sweetheart I love you

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Post  Mindex on Sun Nov 16, 2008 7:01 pm

She should be with Ony and not to think about that blondehead Javi Rambo MoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEE! bounce
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Post  Heli on Sun Nov 16, 2008 7:41 pm

Thanks! Smile
Minna, it's not that simple.. Rolling Eyes Wink
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