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Post  Laura on Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:42 pm

Prologue


You think that hapiness is in this world, but saying it you are wrong. I can prove it, but better I wonít do that. Just listen my story which is full of dark days and rain. And about sunÖ.she must hide somewhere or maybe she wasnít here at all. Bereavements, abuses, and humiliationÖ..until what it can guide?



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Post  Monikute on Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:45 pm

CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Post  emilia on Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:58 pm

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Post  Laura on Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:05 pm

Thank you girls....First part as soon as possible Smile Smile

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Post  Monikute on Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:43 pm

JUPYYYYYYYYY cheers

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Post  ~Mar~ on Sat Feb 21, 2009 3:03 pm

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Post  Laura on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:46 pm

Laughing Laughing First part soon

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Post  NETTTE on Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:24 pm

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Post  Laura on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:39 pm

So here goes first part, sorry that is small, next parts will be bigger, promise.


Part 1


December. Where i live is not snowing. Winters here are quite warm. I was born in poor family. When I was small, I had to work, to help to my parents. God is very cruel to me. Six months ago my parents died in car accident. I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Monika. In this world I am alone like finger. It was hard to live alone. One day I got a letter from old family friend Rosa. When I was small, she went to work to Madrid. Until now she is working in rich family. She was a nanny of their children. In that family are three children. Two brothers and sister. The oldest child already left home, the middle girl is still studying and the youngest, real parentís child is my age. Rosa told me, that they are searching a servant, because the old one couldnít keep anymore, so she left. I really needed that job, so I decided to try it. I packed my things and for all money that I had I bought a ticket to Madrid. From when I was small I wanted to visit that city. They journey was really tiring. When bus arrived Rosa already was waiting for me. We walked to that house on foot, because I said that I wanted to see the city, but for real I didnít had any money. When we came I saw big gates.
- We came. Said Rosa.
- This house is so big. I said.
We went through the gates and I saw six cars.
- Those two are misters, this one is Diego, that missís Chimena and this joben Miguel, but donít call him like this, when he came back from England he is Mikel. Said Rosa.
- As you will say. I said.
- This family is brilliant, but the junior is ruing everything. From when he was small he has everything. He wanted to be a model, so parents send him to England and now he is very high, so be careful with him.
- Is he so lame? I asked.
- When you will see him, then you will understand and you wonít have any questions. Said Rosa.
We walked in from the back doors. There was kitchen, but nobody was there.
- Wait, I will tell to them, that you are here. Said Rosa.
Where she left me, there she found me, when she came back.
- All Hennet Sotomayor family is waiting you in the living room. She said.
I took a deep breath and we went.
- Buenos Dias. I am Monika Hernandez. I said.
- Nice to meet you Monika. Said miss.
- As we heard you want to work here. Said mister.
- Yes I reall need this job, but if you think that I am bad for it I will understand. I said.
- Donít talk like this, you are very polite girl. Said one of the brothers.
- I like her. Said girl.
- Could we end this nonsense? Asked other brother.
- Could we get something polite from you? Asked father.
- God she is just a servant.
- She is a human as we all are. Said mother.

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Post  Monikute on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:49 pm

Oh Mikel.....spoiled boy...huh...... Rolling Eyes Suspect
Maybe more.....

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Post  Laura on Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:21 pm

More as soon as possible Razz Razz

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Post  emilia on Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:37 pm

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Post  ~Mar~ on Sun Feb 22, 2009 1:55 pm

'Mikel is an spoiled brat' *sings* Razz
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Post  Laura on Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:31 pm

Thanks girls Smile Smile
More today Cool Cool

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Post  Laura on Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:41 pm

Part 2

- She is only a servant. And that is not the same as us. Said Mikel.
- I am sorry that I will interrupt, but joben is right, we are really different, because poor people have hearts and rich donít. I said.
- Monika accept you. You will start to work here from tomorrow. Rosa will show to you house and every week you will have a free day. Said mister.
- I am really thankful to you. I said.
- Come on Monika. Said Rosa.
We passed Mikel.
- Donít try to take of your things soon you will leave. He said.
We went upstairs. Rosa showed to me where whose room is. The last room was Mikelís. In his room was real mess.
- The most job I have here. Rosa said.
- Already understood that. I said.
- Soon they will have dinner could you help me and clean here? She asked.
- Sure. I said and she left me alone.
On the bed, on the floor and on the table where lots of magazines. I took them all and putted in one place. I started to make up his bed when I heard that somebody whistled.
- You know your figure is really good. Mikel said.
I looked to him for a while and came back to my work.
- When I talk with you look at me. He said.
- Joben Miguel I donít have time to talk. I said.
- Just call me like this one more time and you will lost your job.
- I am sorry joben Mikel. I said.
He took one of the magazines and again made a mess. Then he lay down on the bed.
- Could you wait until I will finish? I asked.
- This is my home and my rules.
After his words I started to clean other things. I took all dirty clothes and wanted to take it down stairs when he said.
- From now on you will clean my room all the time and also you will do everything what I will say. Got it? He asked.
- Yes, I am not deaf. I said and went down stairs.
I said to Rosa what Mikel wanted.
- If he wants that let it be, but be careful with him. He see only himself.
I nodded and went back to his room. When I entered I heard that water was running. He was having a shower. I cleaned everything that was left and then he came out of the bathroom only with a towel.
- Choose clothes to me. He said.
I opened his closet and took clothes that I liked the most.
- Good taste. With me you will go to shops. Sometimes I will buy something to you, because you can only dream about such a clothes.
- I donít need anything from you. I said.
I turned to go.
- Did you have my permission to leave? He asked.
- Havenít you heard that I start to work here only from tomorrow, so keep your permissions to yourself.
I left.
- I will have problems with him, but I will teach him how to walk on the ground itís enough to fly. I said it to myself.
I went to Rosa.
- Do you need any help? I asked.
- You already helped me with cleaning Mikel room. She said.
- Then I will go to the garden. I said.
There I found peaceful place and sat on the bench. I liked to be alone. From that place I saw pool very good. Near it was missís Chimena. She saw me and showed that I would come to her.
- Do you want something miss? I asked.
- First call me Chimena. She said.
- I canít. I said.
- Try for me. I am sure that we will become really good friends.
- ButÖ. I said.
- No, buts. I have just one real friend that not use me, because I am rich. And tell me what do you think about our family. She said.
- You are wonderful family.
- Even Mikel? He is a real pain in ass. She said.
- But never is late to change him. I said.

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Post  ~Mar~ on Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:50 pm

Twisted Evil He needs to learn a lesson hahaha MrGreen

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Post  Laura on Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:58 pm

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Post  Heli on Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:22 pm

Ooooh... This sounds interesting! Wink
Can't wait for more! Razz
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Post  Laura on Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:23 pm

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Post  Laura on Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:27 pm

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Post  Monikute on Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:18 pm

Oh gosh....spoiled brat Laughing Laughing He will regret...hehe Twisted Evil
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Post  Laura on Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:38 pm

Part 3

- You think so? Well maybe you will be able to do it, because I canĎt be with him anymore. He thinks that he is the best in whole world. Chimena said.
- Have he been like this all the time? I asked.
- No, just when he became teenager. When he was small he was a real angel.
- Itís hard to imagine. I said.
- I donít like that here you will work as a servant. Be my assistant. You wonít need to wear a uniform and all the time you will be with me.
- I am really sorry, but you are late. Mikel took me as his servant. I said.
- I will talk with him. And look he is coming. She said.
Mikel looked at us.
- Can we talk? Chimena asked.
- Come on. Mikel said.
- Better I will leave you alone. I said.
- No, this conversation will be about you.
- Whatís now? Mikel asked.
- As I know you took her as a servant.
- Yes and? I donít have time for this nonsenseís. He said.
- Well it seems that you will have to take Rosa back, because I will take Monika. Chimena said.
- Dream about it, I was first. She cleans well and her tape is good as well. He said.
- Donít argue, I can be for both. I said.
- No. Both said at the same time.
- You are mine. Mikel said.
- I am not a thing. I said.
- Donít insult her. Said Chimena.
- Go to the hell. Mikel said and walked away.
I was just standing.
- Welcome to our life. She said.
- It seems that he donít have feelings. I said.
- Itís true. Because he is the youngest he didnít got enough love from parents. That time parents company was at the top.
- And what about the girls? I asked.
- He has them only for one day or girls just wants his money, but he knows who is who. He needs calm, sensitive girl as you, that she would love him. Chimena said.
- I am sorry, but at this point I canít help he is not my type.
- I have to introduce you with my best friend Laura.
- As you will say.
- She has a brother. Itís good that he didnít lose his mind as mine.
- Well Mikel is not that bad, I hope so. I said.
- They are very good friends, but I donít know why Mikel doesnít try to be like he. She said.
- Does Mikel have only one friend? I asked.
- No, they are four best friends. With one of them Laura is in love.
- I donít feel very good. I said.
- Why? Chimena asked.
- Well I am only a servant and you tell to me everything. I said.
- You will be my assistant and not a servant. I feel that you are different. She said and smiled.
- No. I said.
- You are like an guardian angel that came to protect our family.
- I am not angel. I said.
- Again he. Chimena said.
- Letís go. Mikel said.
- Where? Chimena asked.
- I havenít said to you.
- As you will say joben. I said.
He went to the cars. Mikel had newest Audi Q5. When he opened the car, I wanted to open my doors, but he done that.
-ButÖÖ I said.
- You are still women. He said.
I think that I was right, that he wasnít that bad, just somebody have to show it to him.
- Now we will go to sport club. He said
- And why did you take me? I asked.
- That you would spend less time with Chimena. To be with her is nothing good. She could leave our home sooner as Diego done that. Mikel said.
From his words I understood that he wants to get all the parents love.

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Post  Monikute on Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:43 pm

Poor Mikel, he needs love Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
Well, it was such a great part..and more.... Rolling Eyes

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Post  Laura on Mon Feb 23, 2009 4:45 pm

Thanks sis Smile Smile
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