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Post  Laura Sun May 17, 2009 6:42 pm

Oh yes I can...and I done that Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Post  NETTTE Sun May 17, 2009 6:54 pm

Yeah, but you can still fix the thing and post new part MrGreen
Doesn't that sound good, eh? MrGreen
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Post  ~Mar~ Sun May 17, 2009 7:31 pm

LAURAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA bounce Don't be such a meanie Sad I need to know who she chose, other wise I can't sleep ¬¬
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Post  Laura Sun May 17, 2009 9:48 pm

Yes? Laura is here Laughing Laughing Laughing
Yes I am meanie....and bla bla bla...call me what ever you want disgust
But no part today.....because I don't have time....soon I will go to sleep Tongue
And if you will behave nice...I will be nice too and you will get more Disco Disco
Btw Monika chose.... Monika chose....ha.....dream that I will say to you Tongue
But you can always try to guess Laughing Laughing
i would love to hear what do you think and why Smile
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Post  ~Mar~ Sun May 17, 2009 10:09 pm

She spent so much queality time with Mikel, why would she choose Ony? I think Mikel.. But.. Ony was friendly as well. Well, WAS yes xD Nope, Mikel. MrGreen

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Post  emilia Sun May 17, 2009 10:45 pm

Great great part Very Happy
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Post  Laura Sun May 17, 2009 10:49 pm

Thank you Smile
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Post  Laura Sat May 30, 2009 9:16 pm

Ok, so after long time Embarassed sorry...here comes new part Arrow Arrow

Part 21


Doors opened and Chimena walked in.
- Can I talk with you about Mikel? She asked.
- Did something happen to him? I asked
- No, he is just fine. I just wanted to ask if you feel something to him.
For a moment I was like a stone.
- Well I really like your brother. I said.
- As I thought. Monika don’t make a mistake. He will only use you.
- No, Mikel won’t do that, stop thinking about him like this.
- Open your eyes its true.
- If he will do that it will be only my problem.
- But I don’t want that you would suffer.
- Just one time look to him from other side. He is like all we are. He didn’t got enough love that’s why he was like that and now he changed. I said.
- For how long? Better you would choose Ony. He loves you from all his heart.
After these her words a tear rolled down her cheek.
- Chimena why you are crying?
- Everything is ok. She said.
- You love Ony right? I asked.
She just nodded.
- That’s the reason why I can’t choose him. I don’t feel anything to him and I will make you suffer. I feel something t other guy.
- Just not to Mikel… I want to see Ony happy. He loves you and just only you can make him happy. Please, Monika, for me.
- But like this I won’t be happy. Try to show your love to him. I said.
- You don’t understand me. Then she just turned around and left me.
- I love him. I said.
A warm feeling filled me inside. That moment I wanted to run to Mikel and say what I feel. I didn’t had to go anywhere because Mikel came here.
- Can I come in? He asked.
- Sure, I was ready to go to your room. I said.
- You know I felt it that’s why I decided to come here first.
- I understood one thing and I want that you would know it.
- What happened? He asked.
I felt how I blushed.
- Tell me what happened. You are red….
- Really? I asked and putted my hands on my cheeks.
- When I came back to my room I started to think about Ony and you. I said.
- So you wanted to tell me that you understood that you love Ony…Good girl Monika….
He turned to go, but I grabbed his hand.
- Not him, but you. I said and kissed him.
- Me? Really?
- Of course. When I came back to my room I was thinking only about you. I need you.
Mikel lifted me and turned around in the air
- I love you Monika. He said.
- Put me down.
Mikel done that. If you think that this moment when two persons that love each otter is together the story ended you are really wrong….. I can say that it only starts.
- I want that everybody would know about us. He said.
- But I don’t. I don’t like when people see that we are happy and then they are very jealous.
- Well ok. Our love and happiness we will keep to ourselves.
- Yes and did you knew that Chimena loves Ony? I asked.
- No, I hear this first time.
- Be good don’t say this to anybody, because I don’t want that she would know that I told this to you. We have to do something that he would leave me in peace and would like her.
- Yes we really need that. I will talk with Chimena.
- No, better I will do that. She can’t found out that you know her secret.
- Well yeah… you are right. But they will wait this moment the most important we are. He said and smiled.
- What do you have in your mind? I asked.
- Let’s go somewhere.
- Ok, but just give me few minutes to change my clothes.
Mikel was in living room when I came.
- You look just fantastic. He said.
That moment Chimena came from upstairs.
-Are you going somewhere? She asked.
- Yes. Mikel said.
- Monika I beg you think about what we have talked. She said.
- What have you said to her? Mikel asked. That she would leave me? He continued.
- Yes you are right.
- Thank you, you are real sister. Mikel said.
- you don’t love her.
- You don’t know what I feel.
- You even don’t know what is a real love Mikel.
- You are wrong, I know much then you. You all are the same my parents, you and even Pablo. He said.
I understood that if one of them will say one more word they will really be angry on each other for long.
- Mikel lets go. I said.
We left. I turned to Mikel and I saw tears in his eyes.
- Nobody wants to see me happy.
- I want that and I will help you.
- Ony will do everything that divorce us.
- What ever Ony…. We are made for each other. God sent me from Malaga here to be with you.
- Well yeah, but still in them eyes I am bad person.
- I know who you are and I love you. In my belly I can feel butterflies when you are near me.
- Butterflies you say…. Inside me there are about million of them.
-Here or here? I asked and started to tickle him.
- Stop it and don’t make me do this to you.
- I am not afraid of it. I said.
Mikel started to tickle me but I made serious face.
- Hey that’s not fare it’s not funny at all. He said and I started to laugh.
- And tell me when it’s funny?
Mikel came closer me.
- Like this. He said and pressed his lips at mine’s.
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Post  Monikute Sat May 30, 2009 9:24 pm

WOW! Gosh..... That was.....was......*a bit speechless*.... ADORABLE!!!!! Razz
Thank you soooo much for this long great part! Cool
More please.... (sure when you won't be busy)
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Post  ~Mar~ Sat May 30, 2009 9:44 pm

Naww... :3

Thanks sis (: Ish 'mazing part
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Post  Laura Sat May 30, 2009 9:52 pm

Thank you girls Smile Smile
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Post  emilia Sun May 31, 2009 1:25 pm

Such a lovely part Very Happy I love you
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Post  Laura Sun May 31, 2009 4:34 pm

Thank you Smile
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Post  Laura Thu Jun 04, 2009 9:04 pm

Part 22




- So where we will go? I asked.
- To the valley where is very beautiful. Not a lot people know that place. Mikel said.
- I like that idea, there we will be alone.
- Yes my love, alone.
We sat into the car and drove. Ony came back home.
- What’s happened bro? Laura asked.
- I hate Mikel. Ony said.
- I know that for a long…..
- He won… Monika fall in love with him….
- So what? You are beautiful guy and there are lots of girls that would love to be with you.
- But…..
- Just don’t say that you haven’t grown up from the age when you were small? Mikel has a new toy and you need new toy and all the time the same.
- Well no….I grown up already…..
- I don’t think so. Laura said and started to laugh.
- My younger sis wants to laugh from me, nice…very nice.
- Little boy… by the way she is too good for you.
- What do you mean? That Mikel is way better than me? Ony asked.
- No, but you are real Casanova admit it. You had lots of girls and as I know Mikel was in love just once. That girl broke his heart.
- And this is his problem that his heart is broken, just look what he had done to you.
- I knew that he didn’t loved me and I di9dn’t liked him, so I can say that he hadn’t done anything to me.
- Where did my sister disappeared? Ony asked. Give my sister back…he continued.
- I am right here bro….. look at Chimena, I can give 100 percent that you even haven’t seen how beautiful she is.
- To tell the true no….
- Of you little fool….
- What did you said?
That moment door bell rang.
- Somebody came. She said and started to laugh.
There was Basty and before Laura closed the doors Chimena ran there. Her eyes were red.
- What’s happened? Laura asked.
- Nothing…She said.
- Don’t lie….
- Is Ony here? Chimena asked.
- Yes….
- Then I better will go….
- What? But why? Did he done something to you?
- Yes…. He stole my heart. She said in silent.
Finally we came to the valley.
- It’s so beautiful here. I said.
- When summer is then is way beautiful then now.
- All city is like on a palm….
Mikel zipped his jacket and opened his necklace. We sat on the bench.
- I want that you would have this with you always, when I won’t be with you. He said and gave his necklace to me.
- What do you mean when you won’t be here? Don’t dare to leave me ever…..
- I feel something, but I don’t want t talk about it…
- About what Mikel? Tell whatever it would be.
- Two nights I had a dream that I was in accident and then that you were crying near my grave. This night I even was afraid to fall asleep.
- No it won’t happen….
Mikel putted his necklace on my neck.
- My I have to be your guardian angel…
- But not in heaven…you have to be here…… I said and down my cheek ran a tear.
- Don’t cry for me….
- I understood how I need you and I can tell to everybody that I love you.
Mikel hugged me.
- I will always love you no matter where I will be.
- You will be near me….always….
I hugged him harder and looked to his eyes.
- I won’t leave….It’s so good to have you near me my sunshine.
For a few minutes we were sitting in silent just hugged.
- Please tell me something or this silent will kill me. He said.
- Well….mmmhhhh…. I don’t know…
- You don’t have what to tell to me?
- Your eyes are wonderful. I said and laughed.
- Yours not only eyes, nose, lips but and you all are wonderful. God made you perfect….
- For sure…the most important that he gave is you.
- Here become a bit cold for me.
- Soon I will be as ice cube. I said and we both started to laugh.
- We have to do something. I said.
- Like what?
I touched him.
- You have to catch me. I said and ran away.
- Hey wait me….
We were running near the trees like small kids. Suddenly Mikel disappeared and I couldn’t see him.
- Mikel….. Mikel….. We play round-up and not hide and seek. Where are you? Mikel?
I still couldn’t see him anywhere. I made a step and Mikel hugged me.
- I got you. He said.
- I stared to think that something happened to you.
- Not yet…
- Stop talking like this….
- I am not immortal….
- Mikel…it was only a nightmare. Forget it.
- Well if you will kiss me….
I turned to him and kissed him.
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Post  Monikute Thu Jun 04, 2009 9:11 pm

WONDERFUL!!!!! Razz Razz Razz That's so sweet part.....
Please, more.....
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Post  Laura Thu Jun 04, 2009 9:12 pm

Thank you sis Smile Smile
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Post  ~Mar~ Thu Jun 04, 2009 9:28 pm

Aww.. <3* So cute! thanks sis, me gusta
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Post  Laura Thu Jun 04, 2009 9:35 pm

Thank you Cool
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Post  emilia Thu Jun 04, 2009 10:44 pm

Awww so cute I love you
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Post  Laura Thu Jun 04, 2009 10:48 pm

Thanks Smile
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Post  Laura Fri Jun 05, 2009 9:59 pm

Part 23



Chimena sat near Basty.
- I am going to make some coffee for all of you. Laura said.
- I will help you. Basty said.
They both went.
- What’s happened to her? Basty asked.
- She loves my brother.
- Oh…another couple…
- Ony likes Monika….
- But Monika is with Mikel and she loves him.
- I know that…
- So Ony can try with Chimena as I tried with you.
- You are very brave….
- I want something…
- Soon there will be a coffee.
- I don’t want coffee.
- Then you want something to eat?
- Don’t say that you don’t know what I want.
- Well….. Laura said and started to laugh.
Basty pushed Laura to the wall.
- I will say that I haven’t done anything.
Basty bended to kiss her but she turned her head.
- Water is ready.
- Something is boiling inside me too.
Then Basty turned Laura’s head and kissed her.
At the valley.
- We already have to think about presents. I already know what I will give to you. Mikel said.
- What? I asked.
- Of course that myself.
- That’s ok with me. Don’t forget to pack yourself in paper and put red ribbon.
Together we had really great time. Finally to my life came bright days, I hope that they won’t leave my life. After two days will be Christmas. Everybody were so happy. Time from time my heart were trembling. There were few problems with Mikel. At dances my couple was Ony. Mikel was angry for that and he even didn’t come there anymore. I when I come back home he never comes to see me. And that bet that he lost… he don’t care about that. He only sits at his room near the pc or he is not at home at all. This day meeting with Ony will just kill him. But about this day from the beginning. Ony for a few days where asking me to go out somewhere with him. But I didn’t agree for Mikel. Ony saw that there won’t be anything so he started to play.
- Please Monika agree… It’s going to be our first and last time.
- I can’t go with you because I am Mikel girlfriend. Would you like that your girlfriend would date with other guy? I asked.
- Don’t be afraid Mikel won’t found out. First and last time…
- Well ok… We will go to café and nowhere else.
- Deal… So I will take you….
- Have you heard what you have just said?
- I just wanted to check what you will say. He said and started to laugh.
- We will met at 6.
Doors opened and mikel came in.
- Today you can end your work earlier. What he is doing here? He asked.
- So I can’t even talk with her?
- You don’t have about what. So get out of here.
- See you later Monika. Ony said and winked.
- Is there something that I don’t know? Mikel asked.
- I don’t hide anything from you and won’t do that. I love you too much. Today I will meet with Ony at the café.
Mikel face changed.
- I done that because I don’t want that he would disturb us. It’s fist and last time.
- If you don’t love me so say so. It won’t hurt that much later.
- I love you. Something is going on with you. I said.
- I am loosing you.
- No Mikel. I said and started to cry.
Mikel wanted to leave me but then he heard that I started to cry. He came to me and hugged me.
- I am sorry. He said.
I pushed him.
- You don’t love me, everything is wrong to you.
Mikel grabbed me and kissed me. I hugged him very stong.
- Go, but look don’t hurt me.
- Will you come to take me? I asked.
- When?
- Half past 6. I don’t want to sit there for a long with him.
We come back home. All the way Mikel didn’t said anything. I went to change my clothes.
- I will take you there. He said.
Mikel looked not very good, almost like a robot. When I came Ony was already waiting for me. I asked for juices. We talked about different things and time from time I was watching at the clock. When I saw that it was half past 6 I said to him that it’s time for me to go.
- So soon? No Monika stay for little bit.
Ony turned his head and saw that Mikel was coming.
- It’s really time for me to go. I said.
- Well if you want so. Thanks for wonderful time together.
He came closer to me and kissed me. I pushed him.
- What a hell are you doing?
Mikel saw that. Everything died in him.
- As I see you are having really great time.
- No…he kissed me…there is nothing between us.
- Say this to my grandmother. I don’t believe…. I saw everything in my eyes. And you…. Mikel turned to Ony. I hate you. You ruined my life. He continued.
Mikel started to cry.
- Everything ended between us.
He turned and left us.
- Look what you have done.
- I am really sorry, I didn’t wanted that.
I started to cry and ran from there. Mikel drove from there. My heart started to tremble more for him. There could be accident and I could lose him for all the time. I was going down the street and from tears I couldn’t see the way.
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Post  Monikute Fri Jun 05, 2009 10:07 pm

Crap... That's bad.... And that Ony....oh gosh..... No
I'm waiting more to see what will happen....I hope it wouldn't take so long... ;D
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Post  Laura Fri Jun 05, 2009 10:11 pm

Did you already forgot what will happen? Shocked Laughing Laughing
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Post  emilia Fri Jun 05, 2009 11:04 pm

Oh no...so sad part...
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Post  NETTTE Fri Jun 05, 2009 11:12 pm

Oh no No not good, not good at all :s
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