El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
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emilia
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Thank you girls....Soon more
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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No.. nononononononononononononononononnonononononononono! Please! Na-ah! Don't tell me she'll get an accident
Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
Who said that she will get accident?
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Laura wrote:Did you already forgot what will happen?
^that made me slightly suspicios(sp?)
Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
As I thought
Well there will be accident.... lalalala.....i haven't said anything
Well there will be accident.... lalalala.....i haven't said anything
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
Me wanna more....now
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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emilia wrote:Me wanna more....now
I agreee ! ::
She has bday tomorrow, so she'll be in good mood and post maaaany parts, I hope
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Laura wrote:Did you already forgot what will happen?
Well nop
Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
Part 24
Finally I came home. Mikel car wasn‘t there. I went to the house to back doors that nobody would see me. When I came to my room I locked the doors. That moment I just wanted to disappear from there. All night I sat near the window crying. I haven’t slept even for 15 minutes. I was born under unlucky star. First my parents dead and why did I came here? Mikel didn’t came back home for a whole night. I understood that when in the morning I went to his room. His bed was untouched. I was so nervous. I went downstairs. Downstairs I saw Chimena and Mikel parents.
- Mikel haven’t slept at hoe whole night. Maybe you should call to police? I asked.
- Don’t be afraid Monika. He always did that so he will come back until New Year. Said his mum.
- But he is your sun. You don’t care about him at all.
- He is not a small kid. We won’t run after him all the time. Father said.
I started to cry more. Nobody wanted to help me to search him.
- I know that you are a couple but you have to live with the mind that he is real Casanova. Mother said.
- No he is not.
- Oh yes he is. I don’t know to whom he is like this. Father said.
- You made him like this. I said.
- Monika, don’t start again the same.
I turned and ran to my room. I couldn’t stop crying. To my room came Rosa and gave me some pills to calm down.
- Drink it….maybe it will help. She said.
- It won’t bring Mikel back.
- It will help to you. Soon I was sleeping. In my dream I saw Mikel and he was running from me. I tried to woke up but at first it didn’t helped. I started to move and I opened my eyes. I stood up and went to Rosa.
- How are you? You have slept about 6 hours.
I didn’t said anything just sat.
- Monika if you can please turn on TV. There should be News.
I turned in on.
- In today’s News you will see: was found a very rich family son car. Driver is still missing. Somebody kidnapped 5 years old girl, other news, sport and weather. Few hours ago police found car with open doors.
I lifted my head.
-By the car numbers this car owner is Mikel Hennet Sotomayor.
- What?
- Until now no one from his family haven’t called to police that their son is missing. Is the guy dead or kidnapped nobody knows that. Police continues their job. More news about this in tomorrow’s news.
- My baby car. Rosa said.
- I said to them that they should search him. I said and ran to the living room.
- Have you heard the News?
- Yes. Police is searching Mikel. Said mum.
- Aren’t you going to do anything? I asked.
- What you will offer to do? Help to police to do them job? Hell no. better found something to do and don’t think about this. Said dad.
- If he is dead? I asked.
Then in mothers eyes appeared tears.
- She is right. I can’t just sit like this. He is our son. Mother said and started to cry more.
- I will call to police to found out some news. Dad said.
I was waiting what they will say to him.
- They don’t have any news yet. They said that we have to wait and believe in worse.
- No, no just not Mikel. He can’t just leave me. I said.
Chimena hugged me.
- Everything will be ok. Mikel is strong. She said.
Hours were passing really slowly. Passed another day and no news. Came Christmas morning. From a wardrobe I took a box where was Mikel present. There was a ring with my name on it. I looked to the clock and saw that it was only 6 a.m. My mobile started to ring. It showed that it was Mikel.
- Mikel where are you? I asked.
- This is police. We found men and it was last number that he called for.
- How is he? I asked.
- He is good, still alive. Have few injures it seems for the car, but they didn’t went to far because petrole ended. We would like to know who you are to him.
- I am his girlfriend.
- Ok then.
- Can I came and see him?
- Sure.
Police man told me hospital address. Before leaving I said everything to Rosa and left. I wanted to see Mikel. In my heart I was afraid to see him with injuries. When I came to the hospital I asked in what room he was. When I saw him, there were lots of wires near him. On his face and body were bruises. I went to him and kissed his forehead.
- Thanks to god that you are alive. I said.
- But I can guess that you would be happy that I wouldn’t.
- What are you talking? I asked.
- While driving down the street I saw how some guys where hitting a girl. I don’t know why but I thought it was you. I wanted to help to her and now look at me.
- Poor you…it seems that hurts to you everywhere. I said.
- Nobody hurt so much as my heart. Everything is over between us, so please leave me.
- As I can see I can’t change anything. Can I say one thing and do two things?
- Just hurry up.
- Today is Christmas.
From my bag I took present to him.
- It’s your Christmas present. On this ring you will find my name. I gave it to him.
- Now it’s yours s you can do with it whatever you want. Second thing…can I kiss you before leaving?
Mikel nodded. I came closer to him and kissed him. He answered the same. Down my cheek ran a tear.
- I am leaving. I will came back where I started. I will be servant again. But I want you to know that I always love you. I said and left.
- I don’t want to come back where I staretd. I also will love you Monika all my life.
I tried to be strong. In the street I met Ony.
- Hey. What happened? He asked.
- How you dare to ask what happened? You ruined my life. I said and went.
- They broke up. Ony said a bit sad.
Maybe he should go and say everything to Mikel? That is was his fault….but no….he has to go until the end. Monika will be his. Mikel was lying and not moving. Hurted everywhere. Mikel lifted his hand and kissed the ring.
- Now and forever in my heart. He said.
To Mikel room came Basty.
- How are you?
- Bad…with broken heart….
- What are you talking about bro?
- Monika don’t love me…she loves Ony
- Are you sure? Basty asked.
- I saw that in my eyes.
Finally I came home. Mikel car wasn‘t there. I went to the house to back doors that nobody would see me. When I came to my room I locked the doors. That moment I just wanted to disappear from there. All night I sat near the window crying. I haven’t slept even for 15 minutes. I was born under unlucky star. First my parents dead and why did I came here? Mikel didn’t came back home for a whole night. I understood that when in the morning I went to his room. His bed was untouched. I was so nervous. I went downstairs. Downstairs I saw Chimena and Mikel parents.
- Mikel haven’t slept at hoe whole night. Maybe you should call to police? I asked.
- Don’t be afraid Monika. He always did that so he will come back until New Year. Said his mum.
- But he is your sun. You don’t care about him at all.
- He is not a small kid. We won’t run after him all the time. Father said.
I started to cry more. Nobody wanted to help me to search him.
- I know that you are a couple but you have to live with the mind that he is real Casanova. Mother said.
- No he is not.
- Oh yes he is. I don’t know to whom he is like this. Father said.
- You made him like this. I said.
- Monika, don’t start again the same.
I turned and ran to my room. I couldn’t stop crying. To my room came Rosa and gave me some pills to calm down.
- Drink it….maybe it will help. She said.
- It won’t bring Mikel back.
- It will help to you. Soon I was sleeping. In my dream I saw Mikel and he was running from me. I tried to woke up but at first it didn’t helped. I started to move and I opened my eyes. I stood up and went to Rosa.
- How are you? You have slept about 6 hours.
I didn’t said anything just sat.
- Monika if you can please turn on TV. There should be News.
I turned in on.
- In today’s News you will see: was found a very rich family son car. Driver is still missing. Somebody kidnapped 5 years old girl, other news, sport and weather. Few hours ago police found car with open doors.
I lifted my head.
-By the car numbers this car owner is Mikel Hennet Sotomayor.
- What?
- Until now no one from his family haven’t called to police that their son is missing. Is the guy dead or kidnapped nobody knows that. Police continues their job. More news about this in tomorrow’s news.
- My baby car. Rosa said.
- I said to them that they should search him. I said and ran to the living room.
- Have you heard the News?
- Yes. Police is searching Mikel. Said mum.
- Aren’t you going to do anything? I asked.
- What you will offer to do? Help to police to do them job? Hell no. better found something to do and don’t think about this. Said dad.
- If he is dead? I asked.
Then in mothers eyes appeared tears.
- She is right. I can’t just sit like this. He is our son. Mother said and started to cry more.
- I will call to police to found out some news. Dad said.
I was waiting what they will say to him.
- They don’t have any news yet. They said that we have to wait and believe in worse.
- No, no just not Mikel. He can’t just leave me. I said.
Chimena hugged me.
- Everything will be ok. Mikel is strong. She said.
Hours were passing really slowly. Passed another day and no news. Came Christmas morning. From a wardrobe I took a box where was Mikel present. There was a ring with my name on it. I looked to the clock and saw that it was only 6 a.m. My mobile started to ring. It showed that it was Mikel.
- Mikel where are you? I asked.
- This is police. We found men and it was last number that he called for.
- How is he? I asked.
- He is good, still alive. Have few injures it seems for the car, but they didn’t went to far because petrole ended. We would like to know who you are to him.
- I am his girlfriend.
- Ok then.
- Can I came and see him?
- Sure.
Police man told me hospital address. Before leaving I said everything to Rosa and left. I wanted to see Mikel. In my heart I was afraid to see him with injuries. When I came to the hospital I asked in what room he was. When I saw him, there were lots of wires near him. On his face and body were bruises. I went to him and kissed his forehead.
- Thanks to god that you are alive. I said.
- But I can guess that you would be happy that I wouldn’t.
- What are you talking? I asked.
- While driving down the street I saw how some guys where hitting a girl. I don’t know why but I thought it was you. I wanted to help to her and now look at me.
- Poor you…it seems that hurts to you everywhere. I said.
- Nobody hurt so much as my heart. Everything is over between us, so please leave me.
- As I can see I can’t change anything. Can I say one thing and do two things?
- Just hurry up.
- Today is Christmas.
From my bag I took present to him.
- It’s your Christmas present. On this ring you will find my name. I gave it to him.
- Now it’s yours s you can do with it whatever you want. Second thing…can I kiss you before leaving?
Mikel nodded. I came closer to him and kissed him. He answered the same. Down my cheek ran a tear.
- I am leaving. I will came back where I started. I will be servant again. But I want you to know that I always love you. I said and left.
- I don’t want to come back where I staretd. I also will love you Monika all my life.
I tried to be strong. In the street I met Ony.
- Hey. What happened? He asked.
- How you dare to ask what happened? You ruined my life. I said and went.
- They broke up. Ony said a bit sad.
Maybe he should go and say everything to Mikel? That is was his fault….but no….he has to go until the end. Monika will be his. Mikel was lying and not moving. Hurted everywhere. Mikel lifted his hand and kissed the ring.
- Now and forever in my heart. He said.
To Mikel room came Basty.
- How are you?
- Bad…with broken heart….
- What are you talking about bro?
- Monika don’t love me…she loves Ony
- Are you sure? Basty asked.
- I saw that in my eyes.
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
You stupid moron! FFS! He just can't let her walk into Ony's arms! Dude! Open your eyes! Jeeze..
Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
Gosh, Mikel.... Why he's so stubborn...huh....More.....
Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
Well I hope that soon he will open his eyes.....
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
Sis.... Didn't you forget something....? Maybe to post more...?
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Really good story
More? =))
More? =))
tuLicia- Number of posts : 401
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Oh yeah....post more
Thanks Tulicia
Thanks Tulicia
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
You will get part 25 into two parts.....Sorry no time now to type whole part....but in the evening i will have it and you will get second part of 25
Part 25 (first part)
- Have you talked with her about it? Basty asked.
- No….I asked her to leave me alone. She said that she will be a servant as she was before and she…. Then was silent from Mikel.
He understood that Monika loves him and that he made a big mistake.
- Why you are so silent? Did you understood that you made a mistake?
- No…. I don’t make mistakes….well this time I already made it…but it’s too late to change something.
- For love is never too late.
- What are you talking about? Basty asked.
- When you kissed Laura I really was angry. I thought that she betrayed me, but we talked and then I understood that it was your work.
- Well yeah….I am sorry.
- You have to listen Monika….Everybody knows that Ony likes her, so he made it on purpose.
- Now she thinks that I am idiot.
- Then show to her that you are not.
- Go to my home…in my room you will found a box there is a present to her. Give it to her and say to her that I love her a lot and that I want to talk with her.
- Then I will go.
Basty left Mikel. Rosa opened doors. I was at the kitchen when he arrived. Basty went to Mikel room, took a box and found me.
- Hey Monika. Basty said.
- Hey….
- This is for you…
- You don’t have to. I said.
- It’s not from me…it’s from Mikel…he asked me to give you this. He loves you.
I took that present and throw it away.
- Tell to joben that I already forgot him and servants don’t need presents from him. Also tell to him that he would get well soon. I am sorry but I have a lot of work.
Basty didn’t said anything to me and left. I waited until doors clutched and then took Mikel present. My hands and heart was trembling. Slowly I opened box…there was another one…and then another one. On everyone was written I love you. It made me smile. In the last one I found heart. Near it was golden necklace with key. Also I found there a note: My heart is locked. That lock doesn’t let her beat normally. Open it, because it beats only for you. I putted key into the lock and turned it. It slowly opened and there was Mikel photo with words: I will always love you. Down my check ran a tear. Mikel took my heart for all my life, but I have to forget him. I putted that heart back to the box and the put it to my drawer.
- Nobody will found it here. I said.
Though it was Christmas I didn’t felt it. Came New Year day. That day Mikel had to come back from hospital. With uniform I was cleaning his room. Doors opened. With Mikel came Basty. Mikel showed to him that Basty would leave us alone. I was still cleaning his room.
- Hey Monika….. He said.
- Good day joben. How do you feel?
- When I saw you way better.
- Your room is ready
- Why you are like this with me?
- About what are you talking?
- About our love… Mikel said.
- There wasn’t such a thing…I just used you.
- You are lying.
- No joben. You know very good that poor girls search good company. This time wasn’t lucky.
Mikel shocked his head.
- No…no and again no… You love me as I love you.
- I am sorry… I have a lot of work and no time to listen you.
Mikel grabbed me.
Part 25 (first part)
- Have you talked with her about it? Basty asked.
- No….I asked her to leave me alone. She said that she will be a servant as she was before and she…. Then was silent from Mikel.
He understood that Monika loves him and that he made a big mistake.
- Why you are so silent? Did you understood that you made a mistake?
- No…. I don’t make mistakes….well this time I already made it…but it’s too late to change something.
- For love is never too late.
- What are you talking about? Basty asked.
- When you kissed Laura I really was angry. I thought that she betrayed me, but we talked and then I understood that it was your work.
- Well yeah….I am sorry.
- You have to listen Monika….Everybody knows that Ony likes her, so he made it on purpose.
- Now she thinks that I am idiot.
- Then show to her that you are not.
- Go to my home…in my room you will found a box there is a present to her. Give it to her and say to her that I love her a lot and that I want to talk with her.
- Then I will go.
Basty left Mikel. Rosa opened doors. I was at the kitchen when he arrived. Basty went to Mikel room, took a box and found me.
- Hey Monika. Basty said.
- Hey….
- This is for you…
- You don’t have to. I said.
- It’s not from me…it’s from Mikel…he asked me to give you this. He loves you.
I took that present and throw it away.
- Tell to joben that I already forgot him and servants don’t need presents from him. Also tell to him that he would get well soon. I am sorry but I have a lot of work.
Basty didn’t said anything to me and left. I waited until doors clutched and then took Mikel present. My hands and heart was trembling. Slowly I opened box…there was another one…and then another one. On everyone was written I love you. It made me smile. In the last one I found heart. Near it was golden necklace with key. Also I found there a note: My heart is locked. That lock doesn’t let her beat normally. Open it, because it beats only for you. I putted key into the lock and turned it. It slowly opened and there was Mikel photo with words: I will always love you. Down my check ran a tear. Mikel took my heart for all my life, but I have to forget him. I putted that heart back to the box and the put it to my drawer.
- Nobody will found it here. I said.
Though it was Christmas I didn’t felt it. Came New Year day. That day Mikel had to come back from hospital. With uniform I was cleaning his room. Doors opened. With Mikel came Basty. Mikel showed to him that Basty would leave us alone. I was still cleaning his room.
- Hey Monika….. He said.
- Good day joben. How do you feel?
- When I saw you way better.
- Your room is ready
- Why you are like this with me?
- About what are you talking?
- About our love… Mikel said.
- There wasn’t such a thing…I just used you.
- You are lying.
- No joben. You know very good that poor girls search good company. This time wasn’t lucky.
Mikel shocked his head.
- No…no and again no… You love me as I love you.
- I am sorry… I have a lot of work and no time to listen you.
Mikel grabbed me.
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
Mikel came back Jaja.....
Naww, now i need to wait until evening to get more... gosh..
Naww, now i need to wait until evening to get more... gosh..
Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
Can't wait for the second part !
This one was great !
This one was great !
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Tadaaaa.... Mikel is finally opened his eyes... but Moni is as stubborn as a goat..
tuLicia- Number of posts : 401
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Tuli, Mikel made her suffer.... But let's hope that everything will be ok
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Monikute wrote:Tuli, Mikel made her suffer.... But let's hope that everything will be ok
defence girl
tuLicia- Number of posts : 401
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Re: El libro de vida ~ Special edition Part 41 THE END~
Stuborn as a goat? Hahahaha xD
Now Mikel is playing smart and Monika is playing dumb.. What's wrong with them? They change from feelings like from shoes.. ¬¬
Psst! It's evening now! What about some more?
Now Mikel is playing smart and Monika is playing dumb.. What's wrong with them? They change from feelings like from shoes.. ¬¬
Psst! It's evening now! What about some more?
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