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Post  ~Mar~ on Thu Aug 13, 2009 2:22 pm

Mwahaha xD Mikel, and Basty Laughing And then javi xD Gosh, Laura, this was funny lol!
Mikel serious should stoptalking nonsense Batman It ruins my mood, and the happiness of the part ^3^
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Post  tuLicia on Thu Aug 13, 2009 4:39 pm

Laura wrote:
- Do you think the same as I think? Javi asked.
- You want chocolate cake. Basty said.
- No. Javi said.
- Then it means that not about the same. Basty said.

lol! lol! lol! lol! lol!

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Post  Laura on Thu Aug 13, 2009 7:05 pm

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Post  Laura on Thu Aug 13, 2009 9:09 pm

Par 36



I turned to Mikel. His face was different. There everybody was able to see pain. Mikel became white. That sharp pain came back to his head. He putted his hands on his head and blood started to run from his nose.
- Mikel whatís happened? I asked worried.
Mikel didnít said anything to me just lowered his head with hands on it.
- Somebody please bring some ice and towel. Please hurry up. I said.
It was not far away that Mikel would faint. Suddenly that sharp pain disappeared. I helped to Mikel to clean the blood.
- Everything is ok with me. He said.
- While looking at you, I would not say that. Basty said.
- Mikel you need to go to the doctor. Ony said.
- With such a things you can't joke. Javi said.
- Itís only blood. Mikel said.
- Blood donít come anytime he want, there are something wrong. Heli said.
- Look how you scared Monika. Donít forget that she is not alone and that she can lost her baby. Laura said.
- Ok, ok for her I will go there. He said.
- I will go with you, that near hospital you would not turn to the other side and when you would come home you would not say that everything is ok. I said.
Mikel didnít liked that.
- Letís go to the bathroom. I said.
We went to the bathroom.
- Sunshine, everything is ok with me. He said.
- Mikel stop it you are not small child.
My head started to spin.
- Whatís happened? He asked.
- You make me nervous. My head started to spin.
- Donít be nervous.
- How you can ask me this? Blood started to run from your nose it means that something is wrong with you. I love you and I want that everything would be fine with you.
- But...
- No buts and dot. Now will be as I will say. And yesterday when you were pale I think it was the same just you didnít wanted to say that to me. But with not telling you make me more nervous.
- There wonít be as you wish
- If you want to have healthy child and if you want to have him at all you will have to do what I will say, because I am not going to ruin everything just because you are stubborn. I donít want to loose my baby and you.
- Ok, ok you won.
- Ok, now you are clean. What you would do without me? I asked.
- I would die. He said and started to laugh.
Mikel touched my face.
- You are real angel.
I kissed him.
- And whom thought that everything would be like this. You were rich guy, that was higher then anybody else and I was only a servant, but the most important that my heart belongs to you. I said.
- And mine to you.
- Letís go to them, that they would not be angry.
- But I want to be with you and taste your lips.
- Only when we will come back home. I canít see the other way.
So we came back. Repetition continued. Guys were acting normally so everything was perfect and Javi was happy. After everything we came back home.
- I am so tired. I said.
- But not me.
I turned to him.
- Well maybe a little bit. He said.
- I will go and lay down a bit.
- Maybe you want something? Mikel asked.
- Thanks for asking, but no thanks.
- As you wish.
- Will you go with me? I asked.
- Can I?
- Mikel!!!!!
- I am only joking.
- Your jokes is not funny at all.
We went to our room and I started to take my clothes of.
- Maybe you need some help? He asked.
- And i am not joking. He continued.
- Well if you can and you want then yes.
- Come to me. He said.
I came to him. Then Mikel putted his hands under my blouse. Soon she was on the floor.
- You are so fast. I said.
- There is nothing to wait for.
- Oh yes there is. Wait for me now is my turn.
My hand was warm so when I touched him his body trembled. I smiled. I took of his T-shirts and opened his belt.
- Stop, my turn. He said.
- My turn, your turn. Like small kids.
- I would argue about this with you.
Mikel opened my jeans.
- And now I will go to have a shower. I said.
- No way, I wonít let you that, because I want other thing.
- Eat? Drink?
- Yes I want to eat you.
- Now you are doing that with your eyes.
I kissed him to his cheek and went.
- Again she fooled me. Just wait Monika. He said.
I turned the water on and closed the doors of shower. Soon I felt hands on my waist.
- And now will be as I will say. Mikel said.
- Really? And what will happen now? I asked.
- You will see.
Mikel started to kiss me and I answered the same.
- I am happy that I have apartment with big shower.
- What? I asked.
- I am just joking. He said and started to laugh.
- Itís not comfortable here for that.
- And we donít do that here. We will take a shower and continue that in the room.
- Oh so thatís your plan.
- Were you waiting something else? Mikel asked.
- No, because I know what you want.
- Donít tell me that you see that so clearly.
I didnít said anything to him just gave him the sponge.
- Come on. After it I will wash you. I said.
- Sure. Mikel said and started to touch me softly.

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Post  Monikute on Thu Aug 13, 2009 9:15 pm

Naughty Mikel Laughing
I just don't like that pain. It will make troubles.... Mad
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Post  ~Mar~ on Thu Aug 13, 2009 9:17 pm

Naww...
O-oh, bleeding nose.. Ish not good, not good at all.. Neutral

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Post  Laura on Thu Aug 13, 2009 9:22 pm

Mikel is very stubborn, thats why he will have problems. Mad
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Post  tuLicia on Fri Aug 14, 2009 1:15 am

that's not good... really not good... he is real stubborn! and naughty too Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Post  Laura on Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:35 pm

Part 37


Sometimes Mikel was tickling me.
- As I can see you think only about one. I said.
- Yes about new family. Finally I will have it for a while. Mikel said and again he felt bad.
- Maybe I will go. He said.
- Do you geel bad again? I asked.
- No, everything is ok.
Mikel went to the room and stood near the mirror. He was whole pale. Mikel felt disgust for himself.
- How Monika, can love me like this? I am dying, I feel that.
Mikel sat on the bed and started to cry. I came.
- What's happened? I asked.
- I am scared.
- Of what? I am here with you.
- That there is something serious to me.
- No, everything will be ok with you.
I felt how tears came to my eyes.
- I am not useful if I am sick. Mikel said.
- You are useful to me, I need you.
- But I am sick.
- For that is medicaments and doctors, I love you.
I hugged him and Mikel hugged me very tight.
- Tomorrow we will found out, so today don't think about it.
- I want to see how our baby will grow up.
- Why you always think about worst? You will see and by yourself you will grow up our children.
When Mikel wasn't believing in that so it was hard for me to believe in it too. We were just sitting.
- Don't cry. I said and cleaned his face from tears.
I started to touch his hairs softly and Mikel fall asleep in my arms. He forgot about that what he wanted. Soon I also fall asleep. That night I didn't had any dreams. We both woke up at the same time.
- Are you ready? I asked.
Mikel took deep breath.
- Yes...will be as will be.
- Everything will be ok.
We went to the hospital and doctor took us inside.
- What's wrong mister Hennet? Doctor asked.
Mikel looked so scared that he didn't said any word.
- He has sharp pain in his head and blood comes from his nose. I said.
Doctor found Mikel medical card.
- We need to do to you some tests, because now when I look at you, you seem to be healthy.
Mikel stood to go.
- I am healthy. He said.
I grabbed his hand.
- They will test you. I said.
Doctor went with Mikel and I stayed to wait. Mikel wanted that I would go together with him, but other people wasn't able to go there. I had only to hope for the best. My heart started to tremble. Passed an hour and they came back.
- We done everything what he had to and results will be after an hour. You can wait here or come tomorrow. Doctor said.
- Tomorrow... Mikel said.
- We will wait. I said.
- I don't like hospitals. He said.
- I know, but I am pregnant so now we have to come here more often.
- Did you had first check? Doctor asked.
- No. I said.
- So maybe you want to know the time and while looking at baby daddy will be happier.
- I really want that and you Mikel? I asked.
- I want that too. He said and smiled a bit.
- I beg you for a moment be happier, you will see our baby.
- I think that first and last time.
I didn't said anything to him because I was tired of repeating the same all the time. We went to the next room.
-This is your baby. He is very small. Here you can see head, legs, hands. Doctor said.
Mikel felt better.
- He is so tiny. Mikel said.
- You are pregnant 8 weeks. After 6 months you will have your baby in your hands. Doctor said.
- Thank you Monika for this miracle.
- If not you we would not have it.
- Well....
- Now wait I will take first photo and I will go to take the results.
Doctor didn't took long. He came back with everything. Doctor gave to Mikel photo.
- When you were small did you had head shock? Doctor asked.
- Well yeah. When I was 6 I had fight with my sister, she pushed me and I hurted my head.
- But I didn't saw any sews by doctor. Doctor said.
- Parents didn't knew about that, I wanted to save her.
- By saving her you made bad to youself.
- What do you mean? I asked.
- In your husbands head blood don't circulate well.
- Will I die? Mikel asked.
- If it would be tumour then I would not have other choise as say yes, but as it not we can solve it with medicaments.
- Thanks God. I said.
Mikel didn't looked happy at all. Doctor wrote the name of the medicaments that we had to buy.
- Give me I will buy them. I said.
- No, you don't have to. I will do that by myself.
Mikel took that note from my hand sand when I didn't saw he trough it away. Passed two months. Everyday I was asking if Mikel was taking the medicaments. He was saying that yes, but he was lying. Every night Mikel was talking with baby. He was so happy. Head pains ended, well I thought so.
- So those medicaments don't help to you? Basty asked.
- I don't take them. Mikel said.
- Did you lost your mind?
- Like this will be better.
- Monika is pregnant and she needs you as Laura needs me. Basty said.
- What are you talking about?
- I think that we made it.
- Congratulations! I still can't forgive to myself what I have done to her.
- The most important that she forgive to you. Mikel come back to your mind.
They were walking in the city and Mikel stopped near one of the book shops. There he saw book called " El libro de vida". I was that book author. Near the book was written that it was the most popular book. " Now about that will know everybody" Mikel thought.
- This is one of the reasons too. Now everybody will know about that. Mikel said.
- She didn't wrote that it was real story. Basty said.
- It's too late.
Mikel came back home.
- Congratulations, your book is very popular. He said.
- What? The package! I said.
I quickly found it and opened. There was my book.
- From where did you found out? I asked.
- I saw it in book shop when I was with Basty.
- How is Laura? I asked.
- I think that fine, because she also will become a mummy.
- Really? Can you take me to her?
- Sure, just let me take the keys.
Mikel took my hand and we went outside. When we sat in the car, I turned radio on and I started to sing. Mikel sang along with me. We both were happy. Mikel wanted to kiss me.
- Later Mikel, look to the road.
He turned his head to road and soon happened what he wasn't expecting. Sharp pain reached Mikel's head. He let go wheel and putted his hands on his head. Car lost control. That moment in front of us showed car. It was going staight to us an there was accident. I opened my eyes and looked to Mikel. There was lot's of blood around him. I putted my hand on my belly and came out of the car.

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Post  tuLicia on Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:42 pm

oh,noo.... Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad
i've nothing to say Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad

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Post  ~Mar~ on Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:42 pm

NOOOOOO!! Mikel! You moron! You can't friggin die now! Shocked Lauraaa! You can't write it! I don't want to read how he will die! You'll make me cry..

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Post  Laura on Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:48 pm

It's already written Mar Sad Sorry can't change anything...you will be able to choose read it or not Neutral

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Post  ~Mar~ on Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:50 pm

Batman I'll read it.






with a box of tisues Laughing I don't think I'll keep it dry haha xD Just kiddin' sis Wink Your story's fab, I don't want to miss the end

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Post  Monikute on Sun Aug 16, 2009 4:44 pm

Not good....not good.... Sad Why Mikel threw away that note Evil or Very Mad
I just can say that i wanna read more.... Exclamation

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Post  Laura on Sun Aug 16, 2009 11:51 pm

Epilogue

I went foward and sat near the tree. From there I wasn't able to see what was going on near the car. Mikel opened his eyes and saw that I wasn't there. He looked through the window and saw other car. Then he came out of the car he and went to the other car but he didn't found that driver. So Mikel sat near the tree. Soon there was big explosion.
- No!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mikel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I shouted.
The explosion didn't touched me, because I was far away. Soon came ambulance and police. Ambulance took me to the hospital. There they gave to me some pills that I would calm down. To the hospital came Basty with Laura and Chimena with Ony. Police didn't said anything to them and came to me. I was already woke up.
- We wanted to talk with you about Mikel Hennet Sotomayor. Said policemen.
-Where is he? I asked.
- Can you recognise this ring?
He showed to me Mikel ring that I gave to him.
- Yes it's Mikel's. I said.
- We are sorry , but when cars exploded he died.
- No, just not Mikel!!!!!!! Thats not true!!!!!!!!!!!!
- The driver of the other car is in coma.
- I don't care whats happened to him. Mikel is gone!!!!!!!
Came doctor.
- Please leave her in peace, she didn't lost the baby so we won't let to loose it now.
- You are lucky. Doctor said.
- Lucky? I lost man that I loved.
Tears was coming to my eyes. Mikel wasn't here anymore with me. He ended his life simply like this. If he is not here, then I don't have either what to do here.................


~~~~~~ Took my hands, touched my heart
Held me close, you were always there
By my side, night and day
Through it all, baby come what may
Swept away on a wave of emotion
Oh weíre caught in the eye of the storm
And whenever you smile I can hardly believe that youíre mine
Believe that youíre mine

This love is unbreakable
Itís unmistakable
And each time I look in your eyes
I know why
This love is untouchable
A feeling my heart just canít deny
Each time I look in your eyes, oh baby
I know why
This love is unbreakable

Share the laughter, share the tears
We both know weíll go on from here
Cos together, we are strong
In my arms, thatís where you belong
Iíve been touched by the hands of an angel
Iíve been blessed by the power of love
And whenever you smile, I can hardly believe that youíre mine

This love is unbreakable
Itís unmistakable
Each time I look in your eyes
I know why
This love is untouchable
A feeling my heart just canít deny
Each time you whisper my name, oh baby
I know why

This love is unbreakable
Through fire and flame
When all this is over
Our love still remains ~~~~~~~


Congratulations for all the readers!!!! You are very lucky, because for you this story doesn't end in this place. As you know my book was without full ending. For mostly readers it ended in this place, but after all I decided to end my book and just only few people bought it full. You have opportunity to read it all too. So get ready. Life just begins.

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Post  tuLicia on Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:47 am

Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad

Laura,what have you done? i wont sleep because of you,now Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad

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Post  Laura on Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:48 am

What have I done? Rolling Eyes Shocked

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Post  Monikute on Mon Aug 17, 2009 1:34 pm

Wow, i was really surprised when i saw an epilogue Shocked
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Post  ~Mar~ on Mon Aug 17, 2009 2:34 pm

Dude.. Shocked
Mweh, I love Unbreakable by Westlife I love you
The epilogue was so sad.. Laura, you really have to post how it will end..
Heh, I didn't cry Razz

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Post  Laura on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:59 pm

Part 38


Slowly opened room doors and Chimena came in together with Basty.
- Mikel is gone. I said.
Chimena started to cry.
- How did the accident happened? Basty asked.
- He again had that sharp pain in his head and he let go the wheel. I said.
- But for a while he didn't had those pains. Chimena said.
- He wasn't taking those medicaments. Basty said.
- He lied to me. I said.
- I am fault that my brother died. Chime said.
- No Chimena. I said.
- Yes, if about that would knew our parents and he wouldn't have saved me, now everything would be ok to him.
- It means that it had to be like this. Basty said.
- How is your baby? Chimena asked.
- He is fine, just that he won't see his daddy. I said.
I was keeping my hands on my belly. Now when Mikel wasn't with me, baby was the most important. All my love and attention was to him. Everybody said that they will help to me as they can. Now I was spending lots of time with Laura. I was pregnant 8 months and she 6 months.
- What Mikel was waiting for? Laura asked.
- Son... I said.
- It seems that he felt.
- I wish that he would be with me. That he would feel how baby is moving.
- Now he protects you from heaven.
- And you Laura think that such a his protection is useful to us? I asked.
She was quite.
- That person...the other driver is still in the hospital. And you think that he is having life? Doctor said that he is alone in this world.
- Is that bad to him? She asked.
- Yeah...I can say that he is also almost dead. Only hospital apparates keeps him alive.
- Thats terrible.
- He had some problems with his head, doctors solved that problem, but he is still in coma.
- Poor guy, had the sames problems as Mikel. Laura said and then there stood silence.
- Mikel! He can be Mikel!
- It's only coincidence Monika.
- Le's go to the hospital. Laura, please.
When we went to the hospital but nobody let us to that guy room. Nobody of us knew him. Doctors only said that he was really bad. I asked Laura not to said about this to anybody and she promised. I sold the appartment that Chimena bought to me and gave her back the money. I stayed to live in Mikel appartment. Ony with Chimena helped to me to make baby room. There on the table I put lots of Mikel's photos. I wanted that baby while growing would know how his father looked like. The book was really succesfull. From it I got a lot of money and people is still bying it. Everyday I felt more how baby was moving. He was ready to come to this world. And one day it happened. In my arms I was holding little Miguel. His grandparents came to visit him. Baby was very calm.
- He is real Mikel, when he was small. He has his eyes. Said grandmother and started to cry.
- Mikel after himself left his son, that we would not forget him. Said grandfather.
- We will love him as we had to love Mikel.
They weren't really long with them grandson, because doctor asked them to leave us alone, because I had to rest.
- I beg you let me see that guy. I said.
- I can't, you don't know him.
- But I won't do anything to him.
To my room rushed nurse.
- To the patient from 245 is very bad. She said.
- That guy is dying. Doctor said and left me.
- 2...4...5.. I said.
Then I kissed baby's forehead.
- Son, let's hope that there is your daddy and that it was only a mistake. I wish that he is alive.
Doctor came back to me.
- How is he? I asked.
- Again better. Now we will take your son and later he again will be with you.
- Of course.
Nurse took Miguel. I came out of the bed. Though I was really weak, but still I went out of my room. My eyes quickly ran through the numers near the doors. Soon I found room where was written 245. Before going in I took deep breath. I opened the doors and went in.
- Oh my God...I can't believe in my eyes.... Mikel.
I went to the bed and kissed his lips.
- You are alive. Thank you God for this miracle.
I looked to the apparate and saw that his heart started to beat faster.
- You feel me... I will be here with you.
My head started to spin. I have just gave birth to my baby and for me it was enough of news today. But the most important was that both news were amazing. I wanted say to everybody that he is alive, but to his room came doctor.
- Miss Monika what are you doing here? You can't walk and be here. Doctor said.
- I have all rights. I said.
- Could you explain that to me? Doctor asked.
- There was a mistake. This guy is Mikel Hennet Sotomayor and not the driver from other car. I said.
- Are you sure about that?
- And you don't believe in me?
- Well you wanted to see him....
- Today his sister will come and you will ask her.
- Ok, ok, but now you have to come back to your room. You have to take a rest after giving birth to your son..
- No, I won't leave Mikel alone. You won't make me do that.
- Think about the baby, soon you will have to feed him. We will let to you come back.
- Will I be able to bring the baby here? I asked.
- I don't think so.
Together with me he went to my room.
- Your son is healthy. He is the most beautiful baby that has ever been born in this hospital. Now he is hungry. Nurse said.
Nurse left us alone. Miguel was really hungry.
- And now it's time for you to met with your daddy. He is in the next room waiting for his miracle.
Again I went to Mikel. I lyed baby near him.
- This is our son. I hope that you can hear me and feel him.
I took Mikel hand.
- We again are together. I won't let to anybody divorce us.
Doors opened and came Chimena.
- Doctor said that I can found you here. Show to me my nephew.
She came closer.
- No, thats impossible. He is dead... Mikel...
- There was a mistake. My heart was feeling that. For a while I wanted to visit this guy, but nobody let me in, because I didn't knew him. When they took Miguel I came here.
- From where do you have so many hope?
- I don't know, but if I would not come here, nobody would know that he is alive. I said.
- He is in coma.
- As doctor said that hospital apparates keeps him alive.
- My brother won't woke up.
- Don't talk like this. Maybe if me with Miguel will spend here more time, he will feel that he has what to live for.
- There won't be more miracles.

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Post  Monikute on Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:11 pm

Shut up Chimena! Mad Everything will be ok! bounce I know that!!!! bounce
I wanna read more! Rolling Eyes

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Post  Laura on Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:25 pm

Thank you sis fo yur comment Smile Smile
I think that there is left only 1 or 2 parts Shocked

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Post  ~Mar~ on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:13 pm

Stupid girl, there's always hope. Where's a will, there's a way Suspect
Loved the part Laura, made me think of Close but still out ofsight I love you

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Post  Laura on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:16 pm

Thank you Mar Smile I was listening to that song while typing the story Laughing

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Post  ~Mar~ on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:19 pm

Shocked You kidding me? Dude, I have a sixth sense Cool

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