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Post  ~Mar~ on Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:08 pm

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And it better has a good ending Batman

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Post  Laura on Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:36 pm

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Post  ~Mar~ on Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:50 pm

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Post  Monikute on Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:54 pm

Wow, so great part. I wanna more and more :d

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Post  Laura on Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:01 pm

Part 72

- Do you feel something to him? Dimitra asked.
- Well i like him and.... I said.
- And thats all. And what did you saw in Basty, i donĎt get it. Monika said.
- Why did you married with Raul? Minna asked.
- Basty left Anna for you. Said Dimi.
- He made me suffer. I said.
- And now you are doing the same with Raul. Said Monika.
- I will love him. I said.
- What a hell is going on with you Laura? Do you think what are you talking? It will be impossible unless you wouldnít have baby. Monika said.
- Itís good that you all are lucky. You have guys that love you and I donít. I will talk with Raul and I will ask divorces. Then you wonít kill me with your words. I said.
- Have you fall from the tree? Monika asked.
- MaybeÖ..
- Donít make mistake after mistake. Your son will need a father. Monika said and her cell started to ring.
It was Mikel. He asked where we were and said that soon he will come. After 15 minutes he came, but not alone. He came with Basty.
- Oh God. Monika said.
- I better will go. I said.
- No, show to him that you donít care about him. Monika said.
- Hey Laura. Basty said.
- Hi. I said.
- How is baby? He asked.
- Really good, moving.
- Who is going to be? Basty asked.
- Boy. I said.
- Raul is really happy. He was dreaming about son. Monika said.
- Itís enough of those fairytales. Mikel said.
- Mikel will you shut up? Monika asked
Mikel bended to Monika: you know that Basty is father.
- Itís the biggest nonsense I have ever heard. Monika said.
- As I can see nothing changed. Basty said.
- Letís talk about something else or I will leave. I said.
- Would you like to search clothes for the baby? Dimi asked.
- Thatís good idea. I said, we stood up and went.
- As I can see you canít be calm and donít ruin anything. Said Minna.
- Will you go too? Mikel asked
- Yes. Do you have a repetition today? Monika asked
- No, today I am free.
- Letís meet later. Monika said and kissed him
- Congratulations you will have a son. Mikel said.
- I am so happy. Basty said.
We spend few hours at the shop, but I felt tired so I came back home. There I found Raul and he was drunk.
- Look who came. He said.
- Whatís happened? I asked.
- You want to know whatís happened? I gave papers for divorces. He said.
- Why? I asked.
- You donít love me and I am tired of it.
I didnít knew what to say to him. I just went to my room and packed my things, then I called to Javi and he came to take me.
- Whatís happened? Javi asked.
- Nothing we just had small argue.
- How he can do that? You are pregnant.
- How I missed my room. I said.
I went to my room and called to Monika.
- Whatís happened? Monika asked.
- Nothing special just I came back to my old home. I said.
- Why?
- Raul gave papers for divorces. Ok thatís all what I wanted to say. Bye.
I really needed to relax, so I lay down and fall asleep.
- Who called? Mikel asked.
- Laura, she is getting divorces.
- Finally. Mikel said.
- Donít try to call to Basty. Monika said.
- As you will say my angel. Said Mikel and kissed her.
- MikelÖ.
- Donít say that you donít want that.
That moment they heard how a door bell rang.
- Somebody came. Monika said.
- We are not at home.
Somebody started to knock very hard
- What a hell is going on?
Mikel went to open the doors and there was Raul.
- Where is Monika.
Monika came.
- I am here.
- Can you help me? Raul asked.
- For what?
- I donít know what I should do. I married her and take name of father to her baby.
- As I knew. Mikel said.
- Do you really gave the papers to divorces? Monika asked.
- Yes, but now I think that itís mistake. I donít know what to think. Said Raul.

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Post  emilia on Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:07 pm

Interesting...Very interesting Very Happy
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Post  Laura on Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:10 pm

Thank you Smile Smile Smile

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Post  Monikute on Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:22 pm

Poor Raul... ;( ;( ;(.....
Everything is very complicated...
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Post  ~Mar~ on Sat Feb 21, 2009 3:08 pm

Stop.. confusing me.. I mean.. I don't know what I mean Laughing

I do know I want more Razz DAUGIAU MrGreen

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Post  Laura on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:14 pm

Part 73

- Why you have done that? Monika asked.
- I donít know. Maybe I want to give to her freedom. She has ability to be happy. Raul said.
- And you donít?
- I have, but just not with a girl that doesnít love me.
- But maybe everything will change. Monika said.
- When?
- Maybe when baby will be born.
- No, because then Basty will spent lots of time with him. Raul said.
- But donít say to him true. Monika said.
- It would be the same if you would hide my baby from me. Mikel said.
- Itís impossible to hide anything from you. Monika said.
- What should I do? Raul asked.
- Go home and wait for divorces. Said Mikel
- Shut up Mikel. Said Monika.
- As you want that Laura would be happy, I want the same to Basty. Mikel said.
- Donít argue for my fault. Said Raul.
- Itís not your business. Said Mikel and went to the work room.
- Let me talk with her. And do you want to get her back? Monika asked.
Raul didnít knew what to answer and he left. Monika went to work room.
- Have you called to Basty? Monika asked.
- Not your business. Mikel said.
- So now we will argue?
- We can try.
- Come on shout on me, I will try to survive.
- Stop ok.
- I even havenít started. Monika said.
Mikel looked to Monika with those sweet green eyes.
- I canít anymore. She said.
- What are you talking about? Mikel asked.
Monika went to him and sat on his lap.
- Your eyes, your smile I canít resist for you.
- Secret magic. Mikel said.
- Magic you say.
- Yep.
Mikel kissed Monika and a bit bitted to her lower lip.
- We should thing about the date of our weddings. What do you think? Mikel asked.
- I would agree even and tomorrow.
- But will it be enough time for you?
- I donít need anything.
- Will it be enough of two weeks? Mikel asked.
- Sure, tomorrow I will go with Laura you look dresses.
- Thatís wonderful. Mikel said and kissed Monika.
In the middle of the night I woke up with a terrible pain in my belly. It seemed that, that pain will kill me. I started to shout somebody and Javi with Minna came to my room.
- Whatís happened? Minna asked.
- It hurts a lot. I said.
- We have to take her to the hospital.
- I will call to Raul he is father. Said Javi.
- Not to him, call to Basty. I said.
- Why? Javi asked.
- Just call. Said Minna.
Slowly I went down stairs and Minna took me to the hospital.
Javi didnít understood why he has to call to Basty, so first he called to Raul. He said that he will come as soon as possible and also asked to call to Basty. Javi understood that he doesnít know something. He called to Basty and left to the hospital. I didnít understood what was going on. There were walking lotís of people with white clothes and nobody said to me anything. And that painÖÖwas taking all my forces. At the same time at the hospital showed Basty and Raul. Doctor was talking with Minna.
- Whatís happened? Asked Basty.
- She is going to gave a birth to baby and there is a possibility that he can die, but we will do everything that we can. Dortor said and then went.
- You will say it to him? Minna asked.
- Yes. Said Raul.
- What are you talking about? Basty asked.
- This moment you have to know the true. This baby father is you. Said Raul.
- As I though. Basty said.
Every moment I felt weaker, until I was unconscious. After 15 minutes doctor came back to them.
- We have bad news. Who is husband and baby father? Doctor asked.
- I am her husband and he is baby father. Raul said.
- What a situation.
- Why news is bad? Basty asked.
- Survive can only one, so you have to choose your wife or your baby.
Both felt how tears came to them eyes.
- Hurry up. Said Minna.
- You choose, I gave papers to divorces. Said Raul.
- Save Laura, she is the only one that I love in this world. Basty said.
Came Javi.
-How is she? Javi asked.
- They tries to save her life. Said Minna.
- And how is the baby? He asked.
- Survive can only one.
- Oh God why this all for us. Javi said.
- Because there was lots of lie in our life. Said raul.
Passed two hour and there wasnít any news.
- When I took her here was 3 a.m. and now is 5 a.m. and nothing. Said Minna.
Everybody was walking with sad faces. About half past 6 came doctor. As Basty just saw him he almost ran to him.
- Happened miracle. We saved both. Mother is a bit weak, but baby is strong and healthy he is 2,356 kilos.
- Thanks to God. When I can see them? Basty asked.
- Baby now and mother later, because she need to take a rest. Doctor said.

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Post  emilia on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:21 pm

Awwwww I love you
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Post  Monikute on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:47 pm

Maybe more? Rolling Eyes

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Post  ~Mar~ on Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:16 pm

O my.. What a drama! Shocked
And now? Neutral

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Post  Laura on Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:17 pm

And now the last part epilogue if you want Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes

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Post  ~Mar~ on Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:23 pm

*hides behind keyboard* Do it, I want to know with who she will spen her life now

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Post  Laura on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:24 pm

Epilogue

I woke up and put my hands on my belly and I understood that he wasnít there. The only one thing was in my head that I lost it. I wanted to scream from pain, but I was too weak. There wasnít anybody around me just silent which was killing me. Doctor took Basty where was baby.
- This is your son. Doctor said and showed to little angel.
- He is so small. Said Basty.
- Well he is only 7 months, but he will grow up.
- Is really everything ok? Basty asked.
- Yes, do you want to hold him? Doctor asked.
- Sure.
Basty took baby and kissed his forehead.
- For a while you can go to the mother. Said doctor.
I was lying and looking to one point, when suddenly doors opened and came Basty with something in his hands.
- Hey babe. We missed you a lot. Basty said.
- We? I asked.
- Yes, me and our son. He said and lay down baby near me.
- I didnít lost him. I said.
- He is very small, but very strong.
- Like daddy. I said.
Basty didnít said anything more, he was just looking to me.
- Is Raul here? I asked.
- Yes he with Minna and Javi are waiting there. Basty said.
- Can you ask him to come here? I need to talk with him. I said.
Basty nodded and went.
- Hey. I said.
- Show me that miracle.
- I hope you wonít mind if I will gibe to him your name. I said.
- Sure and can I know why? Raul asked.
- Well you said that he is miracle and you are miracle to me if not youÖ.
- SssshhhhÖ.I will let you be happy. Said Raul and asked Basty to came.
Raul took mine and Bastyís handís and gave to us.
- RaulÖÖ. I said.
- That time together was fantastic, I liked to be with you, but you donít love me why should I make you suffer? You love each other and now you have son. He needs your love, because he is really small.
- And how you? I asked.
- If you wonít mind I wish to be a god father of the baby.
- Sure. Said Basty.
- You and Monika. I said.
- Ok I will go now. One day I will come to look how are you.
- You are always welcome. I said.
Raul left.
- For our son I gave his name, I hope you wonít mind. I said.
- Sure not my love. Basty said.
- Is Monika here? I asked.
- No, because is really early and nobody has said to her. I am so happy. Why you didnít said to me true? Basty asked.
- I thought that I will forget you when I will marry with Raul, but it didnít worked out. I said.
- How do you fell now? Basty asked.
- Still a bit weak, but when the most important men are with me, well Monika and Javi is missing, but still I feel happy. Could you give to me your phone?
Basty gave to me phone and I called to Monika. Monika heard that her phone was ringing.
- YesÖ. She said in sleepy voice.
- I am sorry that I woke up you. I said.
- Whatís happened? Monika asked.
- I am at the hospital and I already have baby.
- What? Why I donít know anything?
- Everything happened really fast.
- So what? Soon we will come. Monika said and hung up.
She waked up Mikel and they went to the hospital.
- Thanks that nobody called to me. Monika said.
- I forgot. Said Minna.
- What room? Mikel asked.
- 218. Said Javi.
Monika opened doors and saw Basty.
- What are you doing here? Monika asked.
- I am with Laura and my son. Basty said.
- Go from here, he is not yours. You made her suffer and for your fault she canít be happy. Said Monika.
- Raul left her and it was his decision.
- Sis calm down. I said.
- I canít be in one place with him. He broke your heart and you forgive him.
- I love him.
- He didnít knew how to leave Anna so he made you pregnant that would be easier to him. Monika said.
Monika came closer to see baby.
- Aww he is so sweet. She said and Mikel came after her.
- He is so small. He said.
- Better donít say this to anybody, he has just been born plus too early. And I want such a. Said Monika.
- About it we will talk later. Mikel said.
- Yeah right.
- So when the weddings? Mikel asked.
Basty looked to me.
- After divorces.
- Can I keep him? Monika asked.
- Sure Raul go to your aunt. I said.
- Raul? Monika asked.
- Yes this name fits to him. I said.
Passed 4 days and we came out of the hospital. Monika was so happy. She was planning her weddings, butu she couldnít choose dress. She liked 6.
- You know I am tired. Said Dimitra
- Buy all and then you will be able to change it after an hour. Said Minna.
Finally she choose a dress. Mikel was totally ready for weddings and finally that day came. They said to each other yes.
~Minna and Javi~
- Everybody is so happy. Said Minna.
- And you not? Asked Javi.
- Me too, because I have you.
- Would you like to be my wife? Javi asked.
Tears appeared in Minnas eyes.
- I do. She said.
- Do you hear two hearts beats like one.

~Monika and Mikel~
- I am in dream. Monika said.
- And you are dreaming me.
- I still remember when you found out that i love you.
- All my life I will be thankful to Laura. Just only with her help two hearts beats like one.

~Dimi and Ony~
- She was choosing that dress so long and now she even donĎt care about it. Said Dimitra.
- You are all the same. Said Ony.
Dimitra softly hit to him.
- I am just joking, you are the only one to me.
- I have something to say to you.
- Something is wrong? He asked.
- You are going to be a dad.
- I love you. Can you hear that rhythm? Two hearts beats like one.

~ Me and Basty~
- Finally we are together. I have never thought that we will have to suffer so much that we would be together. Basty said.
- Such a life. I said.
- Now we will be together forever.
Basty took my hand and putted it on his chest, I made the same with his hand.
- What do you hear? He asked.
- Silent.
- And in silence?
- Two hearts beats like one.




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Post  ~Mar~ on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:31 pm

So.. Romantic.. Sad O my.. Beating heart

Amazing story sis, I LOVED it from begin till the very romantic ending of it..
Thans for writing it Laura

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Post  Monikute on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:32 pm

WOW!!!!! Such an amazing story!!!! Thanks for it sis cheers

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Post  Laura on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:37 pm

Awwww thank you girls Sad Sad Sad Sad
I am so happy that you liked it and that there were somebody that read it from the begining until the end.....

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Post  emilia on Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:03 pm

Awwww Beating heart
So lovely ending Very Happy
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Post  Laura on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:08 pm

Thank you Smile Smile Smile

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Post  Mindex on Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:53 pm

Finally I finished all the parts What a Face This was a good story! Wink Thumbs Up Thanks for writing it!
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Post  Laura on Tue Feb 24, 2009 7:30 pm

Thank you Minna. It's really nice to hear it Smile Smile

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