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The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)

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Post  Tinute Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:54 pm

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Post  kleckutis_lt Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:35 pm

PART 19
The other day I woke up pretty late and Mikel was not at the bed near me… I got up and dressed myself… When I went downstairs I saw Mikel sitting in the kitchen, drinking coffee. From his eyes I saw that something was wrong… He lifted his eyes and saw me…
- You finally woke up huh?
- Yes… ( I said and sat down near him) What’s wrong?
- I’m leaving the country with D’nash.. .
- For a couple of days? (but I perfectly realized that it would take much longer.. )
- It will take a half-year… If not longer..
- What? No.. you are kidding right? (I smiled but the smile was sad)
- Unfortunately I’m not… (He said and got up.. then started walking towards the fireplace. )
- Everything is ok… ( I tried to comfort him so I hugged him from the back) Everything is ok… ( and a tear rand down my cheek)
He turned and looked at me… I saw that he also had tears in his eyes… HE hugged me…
- I wont go… A day without you is a torture.. .I’m afraid of even thinking of a half-year…
- Baby.. you have to go… It’s your future.. your dream…
- My dream is here with you… Not somewhere…
Tears fell and fell…
- Oh I almost forgot( he said and started searching his pockets) Ah here it is… (He took out a heart shaped necklace and gave it to me…) I thought and thought about your yesterday words… And when I walked trough the shop I saw this and… Open it…
I opened it and there was words: Our love will never dye… on one side and : Michael & Julia on the other side… It was amazing…
- I.. I love you.. more than anything in this world… (I said and hugged him)
- I love you more than my life.
We started kissing… passionately… The rest of the day was perfect.. we spent it together… We went everywhere we could… It didn’t matter… the important thing was that we were together… The next morning I woke up but Mikel was not in the bed… I found a note near by:
My love… I’m sorry that I left without saying so long… But I couldn’t bare the pain of goodbye.. So I didn’t wake you up… I barred you up in thousands of kisses before I went away.. My heart brakes to leave you but… I will come back.. I will call everyday I promise…
Kisses, Mikel… I jumped out of the bed and looked trough the window… I saw how he sat in to the taxi… I putted anything I could find at the moment and ran trough the door… But the taxi didn’t notice me and drove away… I saw another taxi and sat in it…
- Follow that taxi.. !! I yelled…
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Post  girl1035 Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:37 pm

Great. Finally new part. It was great. MORE
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Post  Tinute Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:38 pm

omG..this is so AMAZING !!!!!!.. need more... need more... need more.... need more.....
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Post  Prisca Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:40 pm

wwwooowwwww she is following him Shocked Shocked Shocked
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Post  Heli Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:04 pm

Shocked She is following him.. What a Face
Great part! Thumbs Up
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Post  emilia Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:15 pm

sooo great Very Happy Very Happy
moreeee Razz
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Post  Rania Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:21 pm

Thanks for posting a new part Very Happy
It was a great part
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Post  Sergo Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:47 pm

finally a new part Very Happy



daugiau Laughing
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Post  Basty girl Thu Jan 17, 2008 10:29 pm

Great part Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up You should write more In love In love
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Post  kleckutis_lt Thu Jan 17, 2008 11:55 pm

- PART 20
After 20 minutes my taxi was by the airport…We got caught in a traffic press so we couldn’t catch Mikels taxi.. But somehow we made it to the airport. I saw mikel running. HE didn’t notice mebecause I was far behind him and he was obviously late… I chased Mikel trough all the airport hall… He was by the departure but I was able to catch him before he gave his ticket… He turned back and saw me… He was in shock… I hugged him really tight…
- You didn’t thing I would let you go so easy did you? ( then I gave a thousand kisses to his cheeks, his lips ) He was glad to see me… And after a couple of minutes he was in the plane… sitting in the comfortable chair next to basty and looking trough the plain window… I on the other hand was still standing in the airport hall, crying… It was so hard to let him go for so long…
2 months later….
Ech, I’m sitting in the coffee with my friends…. I’m sitting and thinking about Mikel… about these past two months.. they were so hard… He calls me everyday.. but these past months stole his face from my eyes… his voice from my mind… his touch from me… Memory of him has started to fade away… Everyday coming back to home from work was a torture… My home now is so blank… so empty… Laughter doesn’t sound in these 4 walls anymore…. But my mind is interrupted by a phone call… ach, these calls…. Mikel calls…. That’s how I live these days… From a phone call to a phone call…. I pick up the phone… the sound of his voice… it’s sooooo mmm…. God how I have missed it…. I hear him saying hello and I start crying immediately…
- Baby.. Don’t cry… please… I want to be there to comfort you so badly…
- It’s just that I miss you so much… I’m going nuts without you…
- My love… I miss you too…. Baby… sorry I have to go… I will call you later.. bye kisses..
- Bye…
Long after he hang up the phone I stared at the phone… Stared with a blank expression in my face… my friend… Anne, came and sat down by me…
- Mikel called huh?
- Yeah… (I started wiping my tears)
- But I don’t understand one thing… Why don’t you go to visit him?
- Well he is very busy and…
- Stop making exusses and just go to him...
- I can’t go so easily… I …
- Do you love him?
- Yes.. more than anything…
- Than go…
- But…
- You know what? I will go with you…
- Oh are you serious?
- Yes… I am…
- Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa….. (I hugged her and kissed his cheek) – You are the best… ( I kissed her cheek again)
- Ok stop now… My cheek is all wet and people are looking at us…
We started laughing… the preparation was easy… as soon as I came back home I called the airport info and asked about the earliest plain to Portugal… Packed my portmanteau… and anxiously waited for tomorrow to come…
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Post  girl1035 Fri Jan 18, 2008 12:29 am

Great. Thx Julia.
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Post  Basty girl Fri Jan 18, 2008 12:54 am

Oh.. it's so sweet santa santa
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Post  Prisca Fri Jan 18, 2008 2:37 am

ooohhh, i wished the part from portugal was true lol! lol! lol!


great part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Heli Fri Jan 18, 2008 12:14 pm

Oooh.. She is going to Mikel.. MrGreen
Great part!
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Post  emilia Fri Jan 18, 2008 3:23 pm

Sooo great part Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Fri Jan 18, 2008 4:35 pm

Ooooh excitiiing What a Face
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Post  Tinute Fri Jan 18, 2008 8:02 pm

so cute...... Very Happy Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Rolling Eyes .. waiting for next part!!!!!
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Post  kleckutis_lt Sun Jan 20, 2008 12:07 am

Part 21
The next day…. The flight felt so long… It looked like the plain will never land… But finally.. I was in Portugal… Anne was holding my hand all the time because I was nervous like never before… I took the heart shaped necklace to my hands and it filed me with hope… As we drove in the taxi I called the boys producer and asked in witch hotel they are staying… He told me the name of the hotel… I was trembling more and more… the thought that I will see Mikel soon was driving me nuts…
Anne was calming me down all the time… Finally.. the hotel… I take few steps from the taxi… And than I wait a minute… I look at the hotel closely… I sight and walk towards the entrance… minutes pass by and I’m by his room door… I knock… silence.. I knock harder this time… I hear someone shouting COME IN…. Ach it’s his voice… his amazing voice… I slowly open the door… mikel is standing with only jeans on him… He is standing his back turned to the door… I ran to him and I lay him on the bed before he can realize what is happening… I kiss him… again and again and again…. To his lips.. his cheek.. his neck… everywhere… when I finally give him a second to breath he sais:
- Where did you get here from? I mean wow..>! I didn’t expect to see you here… WOW.. IT’s such a nice surprise…! My love I am so glad you are here… ! ( then he buried me with kisses). But something caught my intention. There was someone in the shower…
- Who is in the shower?
- What? Oh shit…! It’s (but a girl came from the shower only with a towel on her…. In one second.. one little eye blink my heart broke… ) – I can explain.. he said…
I didn’t know what to do.. tear immediately covered my face…. I took the necklace that he gave me… I ripped it of my neck and threw it to him… And I ran trough the door…. I ran not even knowing the way out… Mikel took the necklace and ran after me… I ran and ran… he was almost behind me and then I tripped.. I tripped by the entrance stairs and fell on my knees… At that I lost all of my strength… I just knee there and cry… cry endlessly… Mikel ran to me and knee near me… he could almost catch his breath… His face was all covered with tears…
- Please let me explain… I love only you…
- stop talking.. I don’t want to hear anything…. ( than I stood up and started running in to the street.. the traffic vas crazy… car over car… Mikel had fear in his eyes… and he started chasing me… just when I had one stop to be chorused by a car he caught me…. He caught me and took me in his arms….
His lips were saying these words : I will not loose you again, I will not loose you again… over and over again he said these words…
- You care? – I said?
- Haven’t I proved to you million times that I care about you more than my one life… that girl was Basty’s girlfriend… she took a shower in my room because her was broken.. that’s it… please take my heart back.. if you still love me? ( he was holding the necklace in his arms.- our love will never dye remember? My love for you is as strong as it could be… I love you.. and I can hout it to everyone… ( and he started shouting on the middle of the street… ) I LOVE YOU! JULIA I LOVE YOU!
- I love you too… ( I whispered to his ear) And bit his lip…
- Oh how I’v missed these lip bitting of yours ( than we both started laughing)
THE END
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Post  Rania Sun Jan 20, 2008 12:38 am

The end? Shocked So soon? It doesn't matter, it was a great end and an amazing story!!!
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Post  Prisca Sun Jan 20, 2008 1:11 am

this was a great end Shocked Shocked Shocked
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Post  Aida Sun Jan 20, 2008 2:07 am

Great story Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Sun Jan 20, 2008 2:51 am

I thought Mikel was a cheater first Shocked Laughing

Oh nooo the end came too soon Sad I want daugiau Cool
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Post  girl1035 Sun Jan 20, 2008 8:31 am

Wow. Great end. But I want daugiau.
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Post  Basty girl Sun Jan 20, 2008 2:37 pm

Nice end, this sory the is the best of all
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