The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Oh. Great part. thx Julia. And MORE please.
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Give us more noow
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Part 5
-Yes, how can I help you..? (I tried to pretend I don’t know him. A stupid idea I now but at that moment I didn’t think of anything better)
-Don’t pretend you don know me-he said a bit angrily,- I know you remember me… (Oh shit here goes my “brilliant” plan..
-Oh, it’s you.. Hi.. (I tried to be serious but I couldn’t stop smiling).
- you know I have a name.. (he was acting sarcastic)
- I, I cant remember it.. (yeah right, how could I forget I’v been saying in to myself the whole week…
-Well that I better should go…(he said and had a smile on his face, but you could almost see it)…
-No..(I almost shouted… Ups, damn… I putted my hands on mouth)
- Cha, so you care, do you… (he said and came very close to me.. so close I could feel the smell of his perfume.. The coldness oh his jacket witch was all wet… )
-Not one bit.. (liar liar pant’s on fire… Sounded in my head)…
-Really? (his face was so close to mine, I tried to turn my face from him but his eyes had my eyes captured, no mercy)
-Re..really… (my voice was so trembling I could almost hear it my self. And than he kissed me…the passion that united our lips were unspeakable… When the kiss was over he touched his forehead with mine and said In a slow, calm voice:
- Why are you pretending to be so cold I know you can refuse me..
- And why is your heart beating like crazy? (I felt as his heart was beating so hard it almost jumped out of his chest.. But on one hand he was right.. I couldn’t refuse him… But hey ho could… He was perfectly built… I felt his strong arms near my waist…
- Because my heart beats like this every time you are near me…
I wanted to say something but the shop keeper came in to the building, she was talking to someone on the phone… She saw as and smiled… Antonio slowly stepped a few steps back but he was still so close…
-So am where were we… (I started to speak)
- I brought you your purse…
- oh, thanks, I thought I lost it…
- Your welcome, so what shall we do?
- What do you mean?
- Oh came on… I like you and you like me…
- It’s not that simple… I..I already told you, I’m not boy-material…
- But you can’t hide from every guy that likes you forever… (he said and looked at my eyes… His eyes were so sincear and simple… At that moment I saw that all his arrogance was just a way to protect him self…)
- who are you afraid of? I said and took his hand.. my brain told to stop but my heart said to go on…
- What do you mean? (but from his voice I realized that he knows exactly what I mean)..
-Why are you pretending to be something your not…
- I don’t know.. I’m afraid to be hurt…
At that moment I felt his pain… I wanted to confirm him but I just didn’t know how… So the words just poured out of my mind…
- I would never hurt you…(He looked at me and glossed my hand…)
Here you go girlies, oh and thanks for the comments... :pirat:
-Yes, how can I help you..? (I tried to pretend I don’t know him. A stupid idea I now but at that moment I didn’t think of anything better)
-Don’t pretend you don know me-he said a bit angrily,- I know you remember me… (Oh shit here goes my “brilliant” plan..
-Oh, it’s you.. Hi.. (I tried to be serious but I couldn’t stop smiling).
- you know I have a name.. (he was acting sarcastic)
- I, I cant remember it.. (yeah right, how could I forget I’v been saying in to myself the whole week…
-Well that I better should go…(he said and had a smile on his face, but you could almost see it)…
-No..(I almost shouted… Ups, damn… I putted my hands on mouth)
- Cha, so you care, do you… (he said and came very close to me.. so close I could feel the smell of his perfume.. The coldness oh his jacket witch was all wet… )
-Not one bit.. (liar liar pant’s on fire… Sounded in my head)…
-Really? (his face was so close to mine, I tried to turn my face from him but his eyes had my eyes captured, no mercy)
-Re..really… (my voice was so trembling I could almost hear it my self. And than he kissed me…the passion that united our lips were unspeakable… When the kiss was over he touched his forehead with mine and said In a slow, calm voice:
- Why are you pretending to be so cold I know you can refuse me..
- And why is your heart beating like crazy? (I felt as his heart was beating so hard it almost jumped out of his chest.. But on one hand he was right.. I couldn’t refuse him… But hey ho could… He was perfectly built… I felt his strong arms near my waist…
- Because my heart beats like this every time you are near me…
I wanted to say something but the shop keeper came in to the building, she was talking to someone on the phone… She saw as and smiled… Antonio slowly stepped a few steps back but he was still so close…
-So am where were we… (I started to speak)
- I brought you your purse…
- oh, thanks, I thought I lost it…
- Your welcome, so what shall we do?
- What do you mean?
- Oh came on… I like you and you like me…
- It’s not that simple… I..I already told you, I’m not boy-material…
- But you can’t hide from every guy that likes you forever… (he said and looked at my eyes… His eyes were so sincear and simple… At that moment I saw that all his arrogance was just a way to protect him self…)
- who are you afraid of? I said and took his hand.. my brain told to stop but my heart said to go on…
- What do you mean? (but from his voice I realized that he knows exactly what I mean)..
-Why are you pretending to be something your not…
- I don’t know.. I’m afraid to be hurt…
At that moment I felt his pain… I wanted to confirm him but I just didn’t know how… So the words just poured out of my mind…
- I would never hurt you…(He looked at me and glossed my hand…)
Here you go girlies, oh and thanks for the comments... :pirat:
kleckutis_lt- Number of posts : 278
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Great part. Love it.
And obviously Sergos method works, so I will use it: Give us more noow
And obviously Sergos method works, so I will use it: Give us more noow
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
poor ony
loved this part
loved this part
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Just have a little patienceeeeeeeeeee
I mean it wouldnt be interesting if I would post all the story at once..
Oh and by the way does any of you know when will the other forum work?
I mean it wouldnt be interesting if I would post all the story at once..
Oh and by the way does any of you know when will the other forum work?
kleckutis_lt- Number of posts : 278
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Im wondering the same about it. It has been sooooooooooooo long. And i miss it.
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Oh oh oh oh!!
This part rocked!
I wanna knows what's gonna happen next!
Give us more noow!
This part rocked!
I wanna knows what's gonna happen next!
Give us more noow!
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Really great!
More please!
More please!
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Part 6
- Thanks, for your comfort… I really appreciate it… (he smiled and I smiled back)
There was a minute of silence but It was disturbed by a phone call…
- I’m sorry, I have to answer it… (he said and I saw sadness in his face)
- That’s ok, I will wait… (I said and smiled)
When the conversation was over he came to me with a sad face…
- Sorry, but I have to go now.. My manager called… But hey you should come to our performance…
- Well I don’t know I have a lot of work and…
- Come on… For me? (he maid a silly begging face and I started laughing) –I take that as a yes..
- Well ok ok… In what group do you play?
- Am.. (he looked a bit shocked that I didn’t know that) D’nash… Do you know it?
- Oooh D’nash… Yeah I know (I had no idea really but I just played along)
- So we are playing a week later in the center palace…
- I’l be there…
- So till then right?
- Yeah bye… (he lined towards me and wanted to kiss me, but he accidently pushed a dress doll and it fell on the ground… The moment was ruined and Antonio was embarrassed)
- I guess I should just leave now( HE said and smiled but I saw that he was feeling uncomfortable…
- Yeah I guess you should go(I smiled back)….
The same evening…
I’m sitting in my room, looking at the card the women gave me today… My mind is going wild- call or not call? I closed my eyes and lied on the bed… But an unpleasant flashbacks came to me.. All the girls making fun of me… And the voice oh kids calling me a ugly duck… That’s it- I said to myself- I picked up the phone and called the woman… We agreed to meet tomorrow in her office…
The next morning…
I woke up pretty early to get prepared for the meeting… I washed my hair I putted make up, witch I usually don’t use… And I went off… I was so nervous… I came to her office… There were to men in the cabinet with the woman… When I came in one of the man said:
- Oh my god! She’s perfect!
- I told you so(the woman said and smiled)
- honey came here… Lets take some shoots shall we ?
-Am..( I was confused) ok..
The photo shoot took time… Everybody was running by me and giving me dresses, putting several make up… and stuff… When the photo shoot was over the woman said that she will call in a couple of days…
Days passed by, but I didn’t get any answer… But one day I received a call for her. .She told me to come to her office right away…
- Thanks, for your comfort… I really appreciate it… (he smiled and I smiled back)
There was a minute of silence but It was disturbed by a phone call…
- I’m sorry, I have to answer it… (he said and I saw sadness in his face)
- That’s ok, I will wait… (I said and smiled)
When the conversation was over he came to me with a sad face…
- Sorry, but I have to go now.. My manager called… But hey you should come to our performance…
- Well I don’t know I have a lot of work and…
- Come on… For me? (he maid a silly begging face and I started laughing) –I take that as a yes..
- Well ok ok… In what group do you play?
- Am.. (he looked a bit shocked that I didn’t know that) D’nash… Do you know it?
- Oooh D’nash… Yeah I know (I had no idea really but I just played along)
- So we are playing a week later in the center palace…
- I’l be there…
- So till then right?
- Yeah bye… (he lined towards me and wanted to kiss me, but he accidently pushed a dress doll and it fell on the ground… The moment was ruined and Antonio was embarrassed)
- I guess I should just leave now( HE said and smiled but I saw that he was feeling uncomfortable…
- Yeah I guess you should go(I smiled back)….
The same evening…
I’m sitting in my room, looking at the card the women gave me today… My mind is going wild- call or not call? I closed my eyes and lied on the bed… But an unpleasant flashbacks came to me.. All the girls making fun of me… And the voice oh kids calling me a ugly duck… That’s it- I said to myself- I picked up the phone and called the woman… We agreed to meet tomorrow in her office…
The next morning…
I woke up pretty early to get prepared for the meeting… I washed my hair I putted make up, witch I usually don’t use… And I went off… I was so nervous… I came to her office… There were to men in the cabinet with the woman… When I came in one of the man said:
- Oh my god! She’s perfect!
- I told you so(the woman said and smiled)
- honey came here… Lets take some shoots shall we ?
-Am..( I was confused) ok..
The photo shoot took time… Everybody was running by me and giving me dresses, putting several make up… and stuff… When the photo shoot was over the woman said that she will call in a couple of days…
Days passed by, but I didn’t get any answer… But one day I received a call for her. .She told me to come to her office right away…
kleckutis_lt- Number of posts : 278
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Thank you Julia. Your story is really awesome. Can we expect more tommorow?
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kleckutis_lt- Number of posts : 278
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Great. Thank you.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
she will be accepted for sureee...
great part... moreeeee
great part... moreeeee
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Ohhh I loved this part
How can se NOT know d'nash?
Ok ok... I want more Surprise,eh?
How can se NOT know d'nash?
Ok ok... I want more Surprise,eh?
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Really great!
More!
More!
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Part 7
When I came in to her office she was holding the Vogue magazine in her hands… I came closer and OMG I was o the cover of it… And I looked good… I was speechless.. The woman saw My surprise and smiled…
-You are going to be a star, she said…
Meanwhile Ony, Mikel and the other’s were walking in the city having fun…
Ony-You know guys I have met someone…
Mikel-Who?
Ony-Maybe A girl..! Your such a little freak (He said and punshed Mikel’s arm than they both laughed)..
Basty- SO quick, tell us about her… ? What is her name?
Ony- Her name is… Julia (a smile appeared in his face)
Javi- Is she pretty?
Ony-She’s gorgeous…
Mikel- Guys, you are such dorks, the beauty doesn’t matter, it’s the inside that counts…
Ony-Who are you, and what have you done with Mikel? (there was a huge laughter wave after this)..
Basty-Will you introduce us to her…
Ony-Yeah she’s com…. (ony stopped and stared at a advertisement)
Mikel- What? The girl.. Yeah she’s amazingly gorgeous isn’t she?
Ony- No you don’t understand, its…its..Julia…
Mikel- yeah you already told us about her…
Ony- No you dumb head that girl on the advertisement… She’s the girl I’v met.. It’s Julia..!
Mikel- dream on… (he said and laughed )
Ony-the weird part is, she thinks she’s ugly.. .:/
Basty- I still don’t believe you know her…
Ony- Well I’ll shut your mouths up when she shows up at the concert…
Basty- yeah, dream on…
Ony-argggg…. (but they started laughing soon.. )
The next few days was like a dream.. Dream I always had in my mind but I was afraid of it… For the first time in my life I felt pretty.. But Antonio was on my mind all the time… The night before the concert I had a lot of thoughts- to go or not to go… I didn’t trust man so I thought he was just joking with me… But.. but the kiss… It had to mean something… It couldn’t be anything to him if he came back… Ech… I was almost made my mind not to go but… but I was longing of his kiss… I tried to threw this thoughts away but.. I couldn’t.. his brown eyes were always in my mind… I felt asleep thinking about him… I was soo tired after all the photo shoots…
The next morning…
I slowly opened my eyes… looked at the clock and…
- FUCK…..I’m LATE>……… ARG.. I shouted.
When I came in to her office she was holding the Vogue magazine in her hands… I came closer and OMG I was o the cover of it… And I looked good… I was speechless.. The woman saw My surprise and smiled…
-You are going to be a star, she said…
Meanwhile Ony, Mikel and the other’s were walking in the city having fun…
Ony-You know guys I have met someone…
Mikel-Who?
Ony-Maybe A girl..! Your such a little freak (He said and punshed Mikel’s arm than they both laughed)..
Basty- SO quick, tell us about her… ? What is her name?
Ony- Her name is… Julia (a smile appeared in his face)
Javi- Is she pretty?
Ony-She’s gorgeous…
Mikel- Guys, you are such dorks, the beauty doesn’t matter, it’s the inside that counts…
Ony-Who are you, and what have you done with Mikel? (there was a huge laughter wave after this)..
Basty-Will you introduce us to her…
Ony-Yeah she’s com…. (ony stopped and stared at a advertisement)
Mikel- What? The girl.. Yeah she’s amazingly gorgeous isn’t she?
Ony- No you don’t understand, its…its..Julia…
Mikel- yeah you already told us about her…
Ony- No you dumb head that girl on the advertisement… She’s the girl I’v met.. It’s Julia..!
Mikel- dream on… (he said and laughed )
Ony-the weird part is, she thinks she’s ugly.. .:/
Basty- I still don’t believe you know her…
Ony- Well I’ll shut your mouths up when she shows up at the concert…
Basty- yeah, dream on…
Ony-argggg…. (but they started laughing soon.. )
The next few days was like a dream.. Dream I always had in my mind but I was afraid of it… For the first time in my life I felt pretty.. But Antonio was on my mind all the time… The night before the concert I had a lot of thoughts- to go or not to go… I didn’t trust man so I thought he was just joking with me… But.. but the kiss… It had to mean something… It couldn’t be anything to him if he came back… Ech… I was almost made my mind not to go but… but I was longing of his kiss… I tried to threw this thoughts away but.. I couldn’t.. his brown eyes were always in my mind… I felt asleep thinking about him… I was soo tired after all the photo shoots…
The next morning…
I slowly opened my eyes… looked at the clock and…
- FUCK…..I’m LATE>……… ARG.. I shouted.
kleckutis_lt- Number of posts : 278
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
This is soooooo great. Thx Julia.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
your wellcome I feel kinda weird writing about a girl with my name, but it's better for me, cuz I allways forget names
kleckutis_lt- Number of posts : 278
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Lovelyy..
Great part!
Great part!
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
great part.. loved
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Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)
Amazing parts!!! :D
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