*The Story Of A Girl* ... PART 70 - The End.

i had that careers thing tonight, so i didnt get chance...
and my internet is about to be cut off
i will try for a part tomorrow but i have effing German oral questions

oooh ok... i can wait

Okido Good luck

I forget that not everyone got 2 weeks of holiday like me

I can wait.

i will try for a part tonight, but dont bet on it (:

better than nothing

i hope tomorrow we have a new part

today definitely!!

Oh thank you!!

great... i can't wait

nor me

YAYNESS.

Glad you are all so eager for the next part, but dont get your hopes up for what will happen

Sorry guys, my mum was being a cow last night and cut the internet off at nine and i was jusst about to post a part....

So here it is.

Part 57

I put on my nicest dress and played with my hair until every strand was in the perfect place. My make up was perfect and I had to admit, I looked the best I had done in a long time. I was ready for this party whatever may happen. I just hoped that Bella’s fingers had turned a ghastly shade of yellow quickly. I heard Mikel calling me so I took a deep breath and went downstairs.
- Your gimp is here… He said to me.
- MIKEL! You are so mean!
- You are calling me mean!? Compared with the nice guy who cheated on you with your sister… yeah I am really really mean.
- You know I didn’t mean it like that…
- I know, but still.
- I better be going, are you sure you don’t want a lift?
- Yes. I will take my Audi.
- That means you wont be able to drink! I teased him.
- Hmm…
- Are you sure you don’t want a lift?
- Yes, I am sure. Silent protest remember Mikel. Silent protest. He muttered to himself.
- Ok then, see you there!
- Yep. See you there…

I left the house and walked up the drive to were Ony was waiting in his Audi TT with the top down. We were going to ride in style. I saw his blonde hair glowing in the sun an blowing in the wind. He was wearing an open white shirt and black trousers. A God.

- Hi Ony! I beamed at him.
- Hi…
- How are you?
- I’m ok. Get in.
I wasn’t going to have to be told twice. He looked me up and down with a weird look in his eye and turned back to look at the road. We drove for a few minutes in silence.
- What have you been up to?
- Nothing much. Went to the gym.
- Cool, what machines did you go on?
- The usual…
- Oh ok…
He was being a bit odd with me, and I didn’t know why.
He put the radio on, some crappy station with “Golden Oldies”.
That was not fun.
We carried on driving until we pulled up a gravel drive. The road was long and twisty. Surrounding the road was fields upon fields of green grass filled with flowers. It was stunning.

- This place is beautiful! I said.
- Yeah.
- Ony is there something wrong?
- No.
- Are you in a mood with me?
- No.
- You are being very monosyllabic.
- Oh.
- For heaven’s sake!! Whatever I have done, I am sorry.
- Ok.
- Fine.
- Fine.

We arrived at this huge house, old but beautiful. I could see a huge marquee in a field and plenty of cars parked around it. I could see Basty’s and Javi’s. There was a red carpet leading up into the marquee with long thin candles either side. Ony got out of the car without saying a word and started to walk towards the red carpet. I followed. I was definitely seeing a different side to him. I reckon he was just having a bad day, he is usually so lovely.

We walked down the red carpet and into the marquee. Inside it didn’t look like a giant tent, it looked like the inside of the poshest, most expensive hotel in the whole of Spain. It was magnificent! There was a dance floor, a bar, tables for eating and a lead table where Ony went to sit down. I followed him again.

On this huge table there sat Basty and his girlfriend [who I later found out was called Molly] and Javi and Bella. Everyone seemed to have a date so I wondered who Mikel would bring…
Bella and Molly were deep in conversation and Javi was twiddling his thumbs. Basty was sat talking to some dude…

Ony sat down on the other side of Basty and joined in the conversation with the dude. Javi saw me and came trotting over.

- Hey! He smiled at me.
- Hello.
- How are you?
- I’m ok, you?
- I’m fine.
- It looks like Bella is having a good time.
- Yeah, she gets on really well with Molly.
- Good stuff…
- Yeah.
Should I tell Javi that Ony was being weird with me? I was deliberating this in my head why suddenly Ony came over and grabbed me by the waist and pulled me closer to him. He started kissing me on my neck, soft and gentle. - Ony. I giggled. He whispered - I’m sorry I was a bit off with you earlier, I just didn’t really want to come to this party… When he had finished talking he put his hands around my neck and started to French kiss me. Oooh this was gooood! It was the best kiss we had had in a long time.
- Do you forgive me? He asked.
- Yes.
- Good. And he kissed me again, just as passionately as before.
- Excuse me Alisha, Javi butted in. You have an Ony on your face…
- Oh sorry Javi! Ony was trying to be as nice as pie, but you could tell in his voice he was faking it. I didn’t see you there. I hope you didn’t mind our little PDA.
- Not. At. All. Javi said in a hard voice.
Hang on… Was Ony trying to make Javi jealous? I wouldn’t put it past him not to. I reckon this was what Mikel was on about, with Ony trying to win be back to get at Javi… I didn’t mind, I don’t think. I enjoyed the kisses. I think it would be good to make Javi jealous… and then he might think Bella was a shit-head.
I thought Javi was about to try and get one back at us when he called Bella over, and started to kiss her like Ony had kissed me. It was so obvious. I had a sneaking suspicion that it did not bother Ony. Was it just me of Javi and Bella kissing? I think so.
Suddenly Ony launched into another kiss, and it was just as passionate. Suddenly we heard a voice from behind us. It was Mikel.
- Alisha, Javi and Bella. Please stop, we have to go sit back up at the table. His voice was kind of serious. I noticed how he missed Ony out.

So we all went back up to the table and started listening to boring speeches about how the tour was going to be great and do wonders to their careers etc. etc. etc. Then suddenly Ony tapped his glass and asked for silence. He stood up ready to say something.

- I would just like to say thank you to you all for coming tonight, but most of all I would like to say thank you to my fabulous, caring and total amazing girlfriend who is a great kisser, Alisha. He smiled from ear to ear and I went the colour of a tomato. Cringe. What was worse was that he grabbed me by the hand and pulled me up and kissed me again! Exactly the same as before.

I heard Ony mutter to himself - In you face! He must be on about Javi.

The evening carried on with games like this. It started off good, I got amazing kisses and Javi was hopefully thinking less and less of Bella. But then it got too much. When Ony asked me to dance again, I know he wanted it to be another saucy dance to show Javi what he was missing. I did happen to notice that Javi was around so I didn’t see the point. I just wanted a nice slow dance where I could rest my head on his chest, smell his cologne and hear his heart beat.

I couldn’t do another minute of trying to make Javi jealous. I had to go outside and clear my head.

argh kath! This story is so good but it's so long! It's taking me so long to catch up! I still haven't caught up yet but i want to tell you anyway that it's a fantabulous story and i love it! I just hope that soon i'll get the time to just sit and read it all the way through!

It's amazing..Poor alisha.. Ony is using her to make Javi jealous..Serious..What's his problem?!

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What the.... ... FUCK!!!

What in hell is wrong with Ony!!! He is using Alisha to make Javi jealous?! And Alisha doesn't mind?! WHAT IS WRONG WITH THOSE PEOPLE!!! I hope those actions stop soon C'mon it's a party not some who-can-make-the-other-jealous-enough-by-kissing-in-front-of-his-face-competition!!
Man this is some shitty stuff

But the part was amazing though!
My speech is done, amen.

- Oh sorry Javi! Ony was trying to be as nice as pie, but you could tell in his voice he was faking it. I didn’t see you there. I hope you didn’t mind our little PDA.

Nice as pie?


Ony needs some serious therapy.

Ony has some serious problem now.

great part
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ony

this man doesn't convice me

Hopefully Javi will go outside and talk to her.

Sorry Priya, glad you like it though

Nice as pie, erm, British slang again... kinda just really nice, coz pie is really nice!

Thanks for reading guys

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I'll try for another part tomorrow