Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
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The end? Or.. {Prologue}
I know my other fanfic isn't finished yet, but I had an idea for an another story.. Just give me your opinion about it.. Maybe I'll post more.. Dunno for sure..
Prologue
It was spring. Exely it was the first real warm day. I was riding home from school. I had putted my jacket in my schoolbag and was listening to my mp3 player. Spanish music echoed trough my head. Just two more weeks and I had a exchange project: I should live in Spain for six months. I was looking forward to it. I already knew where I was going to sleep: at a family in Cádiz.
How stupid of me.. I forgot to introduce myself. Well.. Hola! My name is Marjolein, everybody calls me Mar, and I’m 18 years old. I live in Holland. I think it’s the most boring country on earth.. But even when it’s boring, it’s nice to live here. Okay.. Enough about me.. Let’s go back to that day:
I really couldn’t wait to go to Cádiz. Just two weeks and then.. Something I won’t forget for the rest of my life was going to happen.
Prologue
It was spring. Exely it was the first real warm day. I was riding home from school. I had putted my jacket in my schoolbag and was listening to my mp3 player. Spanish music echoed trough my head. Just two more weeks and I had a exchange project: I should live in Spain for six months. I was looking forward to it. I already knew where I was going to sleep: at a family in Cádiz.
How stupid of me.. I forgot to introduce myself. Well.. Hola! My name is Marjolein, everybody calls me Mar, and I’m 18 years old. I live in Holland. I think it’s the most boring country on earth.. But even when it’s boring, it’s nice to live here. Okay.. Enough about me.. Let’s go back to that day:
I really couldn’t wait to go to Cádiz. Just two weeks and then.. Something I won’t forget for the rest of my life was going to happen.
Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
I've already said to you that you should post it
it sounds f.a.b.
it sounds f.a.b.
Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
Sounds great!!!!!
Post more please!!!!!!!
Post more please!!!!!!!
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Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
Part 1
'A-Amanda! A-Amanda!'
My bed was filled with that song.
'Damn.. Where's my moblie!'
I was trying to open my eyes. I lifted up my pillow and took my phone.
'Hello?'
No one answered.
'Joehoe! Somebody home?'
I tried. Still no reaction.
'Well.. Than not..'
I threw it back and turned around. I just closed my eyes when..
'A-Amanda! A-Amanda!'
I took my phone and looked at the display. No wonder nobody gave a reaction.. No one had called me.. It was my alarm..
'Oh.. Blonde..'
I got out of bed and putted my clothes on. Today was the day. Finally I was going to Spain. Fi-nal-ly! My friends were getting a little bit crazy because of me. As soon as we heard about the project, it was all I could talk about. I smiled when I thougt about their faces when I started to talk about how exiting it was, and that I couldn't wait. I looked at the clock.
'Damn! 6.45! I have to hurry up.'
For once again I was talking to myself.
'Marjolein! Phone for you!'
My mom screamed upstairs.
'Comming!'
While I was trying to put my T-shirt on, I walked downstairs. I almost missed a step, so I jumped.
'Goodmorning! Here.. Henriët for you.'
I took the phone.
-'Buenos días amiga! Qué tal?'
I walked out of the kitchen.
-'Buenos días! Sí! Muy bien! Y tu?'
-'Bueno,bueno.. Tell me.. Why do you call?'
-'How late do we have to be at school?'
-'At 8.00.. You almost forgot it, didn't you?'
-'NO!'-It sounded fake..-'Ok..Ok.. Yes..'
-'HA! I knew it! But I have to go now.. Or I'll be late!''
I hung up and walked back into the room. I gave the phone back to my mum and sat down at the kitchen table.
'Are your bags packed?'
'Dad! OF COURCE! It would be a little bit stupid if they weren't.. I'll get them after my breakfast..'
Quick I ate it and walked back upstairs.
'DO NOT SCARE!'
The first suitcase fell down the stairs. Followed by no. 2 and 3. Then a bag fell, but it didn't made any noise. I saw it comming... I really did.. But it was still unexpected..
'A-Amanda! A-Amanda!'
My bed was filled with that song.
'Damn.. Where's my moblie!'
I was trying to open my eyes. I lifted up my pillow and took my phone.
'Hello?'
No one answered.
'Joehoe! Somebody home?'
I tried. Still no reaction.
'Well.. Than not..'
I threw it back and turned around. I just closed my eyes when..
'A-Amanda! A-Amanda!'
I took my phone and looked at the display. No wonder nobody gave a reaction.. No one had called me.. It was my alarm..
'Oh.. Blonde..'
I got out of bed and putted my clothes on. Today was the day. Finally I was going to Spain. Fi-nal-ly! My friends were getting a little bit crazy because of me. As soon as we heard about the project, it was all I could talk about. I smiled when I thougt about their faces when I started to talk about how exiting it was, and that I couldn't wait. I looked at the clock.
'Damn! 6.45! I have to hurry up.'
For once again I was talking to myself.
'Marjolein! Phone for you!'
My mom screamed upstairs.
'Comming!'
While I was trying to put my T-shirt on, I walked downstairs. I almost missed a step, so I jumped.
'Goodmorning! Here.. Henriët for you.'
I took the phone.
-'Buenos días amiga! Qué tal?'
I walked out of the kitchen.
-'Buenos días! Sí! Muy bien! Y tu?'
-'Bueno,bueno.. Tell me.. Why do you call?'
-'How late do we have to be at school?'
-'At 8.00.. You almost forgot it, didn't you?'
-'NO!'-It sounded fake..-'Ok..Ok.. Yes..'
-'HA! I knew it! But I have to go now.. Or I'll be late!''
I hung up and walked back into the room. I gave the phone back to my mum and sat down at the kitchen table.
'Are your bags packed?'
'Dad! OF COURCE! It would be a little bit stupid if they weren't.. I'll get them after my breakfast..'
Quick I ate it and walked back upstairs.
'DO NOT SCARE!'
The first suitcase fell down the stairs. Followed by no. 2 and 3. Then a bag fell, but it didn't made any noise. I saw it comming... I really did.. But it was still unexpected..
Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
hahahah the alarm bit made me laugh
what did you see coming? but was still unexpected? whaaaat?
moooore :p
what did you see coming? but was still unexpected? whaaaat?
moooore :p
Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
Alarm clock
Who came????????Please post more!!!!!
Who came????????Please post more!!!!!
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ohh the alarm clock
i wanna know what happened
i wanna know what happened
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Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
Great!
Funny, I have Amanda as alarm-tone
Funny, I have Amanda as alarm-tone
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Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
Ghehe.. Me too! The only thing in the whole wide world that wakes me up is Amanda xD
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
Part 2
'MARJOLEIN!'
O-oh.. Here it comes... My dad furious..
'How often-..'
'haven't I told you NOT to throw your stuf down the stairs!'
'And-..'
'This is the last time young lady!'
'Exacly!'
I sighed. He always told me the sme damn thing when I did something. Carefully I walked into the room. I barely could hold my laugh. My dad's face was a little bit white. My mom had to chuckle.
'Did my suitcases scared you, dad?'
I asked with a huge smile on my face. He muttered something like: 'Damn suitcases' and sat back down behind his pc. I walked back into the hall and putted my suitcases in the livingroom. I did an imitation of my angry dad.
'Marjolein!'
'Whaat?! Just joking!'
My mom smiled.
'Who's gonna drive me to school? I'm not goingby bike with all my luggage.. I don't think that it's even posible!'
My mom smiled.
'I'll drive you to school. Maybe your dad wants to come with us?'
'Dad?'
I asked as nice as posible.
'Yes?'
'Do you wanna come with mom to say goodbye when I leave?'
'What do you think! Of cource I wanna come. My daughter doesn't go everyday to Spain for six months!'
I smiled and got my jacket. My backpack stood ready. Everything I needed for the busride was in it: My mp3 player, bateries, camera, mobile, candy, something to drink, a book and my notebook. My dad caried my luggage to the car. And with one last look trough the house I closed the front door of my live here, and opened an other door. One to a big adventure.
'MARJOLEIN!'
O-oh.. Here it comes... My dad furious..
'How often-..'
'haven't I told you NOT to throw your stuf down the stairs!'
'And-..'
'This is the last time young lady!'
'Exacly!'
I sighed. He always told me the sme damn thing when I did something. Carefully I walked into the room. I barely could hold my laugh. My dad's face was a little bit white. My mom had to chuckle.
'Did my suitcases scared you, dad?'
I asked with a huge smile on my face. He muttered something like: 'Damn suitcases' and sat back down behind his pc. I walked back into the hall and putted my suitcases in the livingroom. I did an imitation of my angry dad.
'Marjolein!'
'Whaat?! Just joking!'
My mom smiled.
'Who's gonna drive me to school? I'm not goingby bike with all my luggage.. I don't think that it's even posible!'
My mom smiled.
'I'll drive you to school. Maybe your dad wants to come with us?'
'Dad?'
I asked as nice as posible.
'Yes?'
'Do you wanna come with mom to say goodbye when I leave?'
'What do you think! Of cource I wanna come. My daughter doesn't go everyday to Spain for six months!'
I smiled and got my jacket. My backpack stood ready. Everything I needed for the busride was in it: My mp3 player, bateries, camera, mobile, candy, something to drink, a book and my notebook. My dad caried my luggage to the car. And with one last look trough the house I closed the front door of my live here, and opened an other door. One to a big adventure.
Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
Great part!!!!!
I want more
I want more
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yes.... now the life in spain
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
OFF TO SPAAAAAAAAAAIN!
more por favor [hahaha that rhymes xD]
more por favor [hahaha that rhymes xD]
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