Turnaround - Part 40 The End :P

Sis i like your story
don't cry sis ...everything'll be good

Gazel wrote:Sis i like your story
don't cry sis ...everything'll be good

xiiiuuuuuuuu

Sergo wrote:When will we get more?

tomorrow.... and a pig??

Sorry sis i stopped

AW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS PART WAS REALLY GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gazel wrote:Sorry sis i stopped

i was kidding sis.... i need your opinion....

working on the next part...

I love this story Pris!! Continue!! I want more!!

Sis we want to read more more

thanks Pri

Part 4 -

My only expression was: Oh crap!! .
He laughed, I laughed and he gave me a hug.
He says to me on my ear:
- Like I said we can’t throw away our dreams…
I cleaned the tears of my face. I putted a smile on my face, thinking to myself maybe the day wasn’t lost.
- How did you know I was here?? – I asked surprised
-Well, I have some little voice in my head that told me.
-A voice maybe called security man. Oh boy I feel so stupid for had acting like this. Sorry, I couldn’t stop this entire scene. This was so important to me.
-Don’t say that. If you didn’t act like crazy I couldn’t see that you were here. But I guess you don’t wanna spend all time here seating or you do?
- I don’t but now I don’t have anything to do.
- I thought that you wanted to meet the boys but…
-Are you joking? I would give everything for that.
-So let’s go…
-Can you help me? I can’t raise me up… – we were laughing. He gives me his hand.
-1,2,3 Up…
-Ouch my ass… – I was almost raised when Mikel’s hand slides from mine and I fall again.
-Sorry, so much sorry… - He said to me worry
- It’s ok, but this time I don’t need your help. I don’t want to fall again.

So I followed Mikel into the corridor that leads to the backstage in el corte ingles.
The other boys were together in a room, drinking and eating while were talking.
-Finally you are here. I thought you maybe have been kidnap by some crazy fan – Javi said that without seeing me.
-No, but I kidnap one – Mikel said that and the boys turn is heads to see who is the girl.
- I can’t believe we wait all this time because you were talking with a girl – Ony said muttering.
- And since when, that is a problem for you??- Mikel answered back
- Since I wanna leave this place.- Ony was with a mad face and turned his back to Mikel
- So leave it, you don’t need my legs to go and you know this city so you don’t get lost. – Mikel putted out his tongue.
- Boys, stop it!! - Basty yelled – You are scaring the girl with your bad moods.
I was thinking to myself if I did the right thing coming with Mikel. In my heart I knew for sure this was the moment I always dreamed but then I saw Ony with such bad humour that I got afraid.
- Sorry boys for ruin this private moment. I will leave this place since I am disturbing your peace. Bye, nice to meet you Mikel. – And I turn myself to the door and started walking. Again Mikel pulled my hand.
-No don’t leave. Sorry for that bad humour from Ony, I don’t know why he is acting today like this. Like I was saying when we come in the room, boys this is… wait I don’t know your name
- You didn’t ask. – I said laughing – My name Raquel.
-Hi Raquel, very nice your name, nice to meet you – says Basty given to me a kiss on my cheek and Javi did the same. Only Ony just said a “hi” like he was doing a favor to someone.
-So where did you come from?? – Javi asked me.
-I come from outside – I laughed and the Javi too.
-That you come from outside I can see, but from which country??
- Try to guess it
- Well, maybe you are from France??
- No… you are close
- Germany??
-No… now you are far
- Stupid boy, she is from Portugal – Ony yelled – Or you think that Raquel sounds french or german…
- I know that, I was kidding with her… You are daft today man, just be shut up if you don’t wanna be kicked.

Soooo great part :doublethumbsup

Ony and he's bad mood..
Anyway, great part!

Great. Mikel is so nice. But Ony

ony sucks, i agree

thanks a lot girls

Great part

OMG
Pris, please more..
That was great....no...awsome...no...FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!
And Ony...
But Mikel..

thanks a lot...

yeah, mikel is sweet...

i adore Ony in this story

really??

Ony sucks

at least one person likes him

Why is he so mad?

i guess he had a bad day...

but this is so... charming that he madness ... i love him ... i said it

Poor Ony

Now more

Tinute wrote:but this is so... charming that he madness ... i love him ... i said it

i hope that he changes

more more more more more more please