*The Story Of A Girl* ... PART 70 - The End.

that would be very cool

I'll put my thinking cap on for a continuation... but it probably wont happen till after 23rd of June

ok

23rd of june isn't very far

No i guess not

Serious.. Ony needs a kick in his ass.. Hopely somebody will do that..

Great part!

Kath wrote:Maybe Ony did, maybe Ony didnt...

Ony did it!
Alisha is just so naive.

More?

I'm saying nout

I'll try for another part this afternoon/evening

O yeah..

Awesome.

*sigh* Ony Ony Ony ... He made Alisha fall in love with him so much that she doesn't think anything bad about him anymore
Why she think so bad about Javi? She must forget about the f*cking song and listen to her best friend!!
Neuk Ony!!!
If she finds out and later she still goes on with him I'm gonna kick her ass as well!

Great part! ... M?

Great Parts more?

ooh i didn't realise there for a new part so that means i got 2 parts in a row! Woohoo!! And they're greeeaaaattt!! But ony...

If that was true what Javi said, that Ony kissed with some other girl.. He is such a** though Alisha kissed with Javi too then .. And i don't believe Javi as he says he likes her just as friend..

when will we read more???


that asshole

Hopefully soon... i'm writing now

cool

Part 61

I had enough change in my purse to be able to afford a taxi home.
- 3 Monsoon Calle por favor… I asked the Taxi driver.
- Si…
We drove along for about 5 minutes and I was about to pass out from the stench. This dude had serious B.O.
- Do you mind if we open a window?
- Si.
Was that the only word this man knew?
FINALLY we arrived home. I got out of the car and paid the smelly man. I turned to head towards the house but the man said something that wasn’t si.
- Mikel Hennet?
- What about him?
- He live there?
- Yes.
- You live there?
- Yes.
- You his girlfriend?
- No. I am his sister. Step-sister.
- Si.
- Anything else?
- Si.
- What?
- Can I come inside?
- Fuck no! You’ll stink the house out!
The man looked offended.
- Si.
- Oh, I am sorry. That was extremely rude of me… I’m just having a bad day.
- Si.
- Can you PLEASE stop saying si?
- Si.
I took a deep breath.
- Is that all? I asked.
- Si.
I turned on my heal and left. Now I was pissed.
Even more pissed than before.
That’s a lot of pissed.

I opened the front door and I heard hushed voices.
They were coming from the living room.

I went in and as soon as I opened the door the whispering stopped.
It was Mikel and Javi.
Oh great. Now Mikel knew.

Javi got up. - I better be going.
- Talk to you later mate! Mikel stuck his thumb up.

I help the door open for Javi and as soon as he went through it I slammed it and marched up stairs.


- OI! I heard Mikel shout.
- Don’t take this the wrong way, but FUCK OFF!!
- Ok, that is it. I have done NOTHING to you, there is no need to hurl abuse.
- Whatever.
- Javi told me what happened.
- I bet he did!
- I think he is telling the truth.
- Yes, but you also think you are hot. You are wrong on both occasions.
- Ooooh low blow!
- You deserved it.
- I don’t deserve it! That is my point! You are pushing your friends away, and now your family. All for a frickin blonde.
- Oi! No hair colour digs.
- Fine. But seriously. You will end up with no one.
- I will have Ony. I LOVE him. He LOVES me.
- You wish…
- I don’t have to wish, it’s the truth!
- HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU THAT HE DOESN’T LOVE YOU!! HE IS A TWAT, AND DOESN’T KNOW THE MEANING OF LOVE. AS SOON AS YOU HAVE NO ONE ELSE, HE WILL LEAVE YOU. HE HAS CHEATED ON YOU WITH YOUR SISTER FOR FUCKS SAKE! GET IT INTO YOUR THICK SKULL!!!!!
- Please may you kindly leave my room, I am on the phone. I was being deliberately calm, that would cheese him off. It worked.
- oh for FUCKS sake!! That was my last warning… you are on you own now!!!

At least he was gone for now… He can never stay mad at me for long, he will be back to normal in a day.

I dialled Ony’s number.
Voicemail.
I bet he is at the gym again.

i know that gym

i hate him sssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooo much

He has a gym in his bedroom? And the chick is some sort of the exercising tool or something? I hate him.

Well sex burns like 360 calories an hour or something like that, so maybe

- Can I come inside?
- Fuck no! You’ll stink the house out!

HAHAHAHA!!!

Why she doesn't listen to Mikel?! Maaaaann

At the gym?! HAHA! Don't make me laugh He is busaaay with a chickaaay

Ony makes me feel really angry And Alisha too

Oh, he's at the "gym" huh?

he is always at the gym

he doesn't do anything more that be in the gym