Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END

Wow, great great great great, the greatest!!!! I love this storyyyyyy!!!!!

i hope that is true

I agree with Dimitra; Amazing story!

Thanks girls for you comments
Well I made my punishment


Part 9

- Nothing. Said Monika.
- Well give to hher medicaments and I am going, because with such a ilness I can't help. Andrea said.
Monika looked to her.
- See you later. She said.
when Andrea came back to room she didn't foung Ony there. Suddenly she felt somebody's wet hands on her body. She turned. There was Ony with A towel on his wrist.
- Why you took up so long? He asked and kissed Andrea's neck.
- I was talking with Monika.
- How is she?
- Now much better.
- What's happened to her?
- I think that she is pregnant, because she is feeling the same like me, when I was pregnant.
- I don't know how you felt. Ony said.
- Because you weren't with me and that was your brother's fault.
- But when you will be pregnant again, I will be with you.
- Promise? Andrea asked.
Then Ony pushed her to the bed and sat on top of her.
- Promise. He said and started to kiss her. Ans now let's play. He continued.
Andrea was Ony's.
- I am going to have a shower. Areyou going with me? She asked.
- I love to, but I am hungry.
- So you are going to order something?
- Maybe I will try to do something. He said.
When Andrea came out of the bath she felt that something was burning. She dressed up and went to look. At that moment Ony threw everuthing into rubbish.
- It's last time when I am making something. He said.
Andrea started to laugh.
- You offered thet. So are we going to eat to cafe or I should make something? She asked.
- Let's go to eat to cafe. He said.
- Ok my love. Andrea said and kissed him.
- I could go to shower with you it would be much better.
- Well now it's too late. She said and smiled.
andrea and Ony was eating when they saw that Monika and Mikel is coming too.
- Hey! How are you? Ony asked.
- Hi! I am very hungry. Monika said.
- What have you planed for today? Andrea asked.
- I think that we will stay in hotel. Said Mikel.
- And you? Asked Monika.
- We will go to the city centre. Said Ony.
Monika's mobile phone started to ring.
- Yes?
- where all the time are you? Asked man voice.
- Hey! I am in Malljorca. Monika said.
- When I have planned to visit my sister you went to have vacations.
- I didn't knew that. when you are coming?
- We are coming next week.
- With who are you coming? Monika asked.
- With Kevin. He missed you.
- Oh how is nice to hear it.
- How is Andrea and her baby?
- Well she is fine and Antonio is having fun with Andrea's husband parent's.
- Oh ok I got to go now. See you next week.
- Yeah sure. Missed you.
- Whom called? Asked Mikel.

Brother called? Need to look that dude up.. Me loved

WOW, great part!!! Mikel will be jealous now weee!!! Suspense!!!

the bro called


you were fast doing your punishment xD

Yeah I made it quite fast
I hope that I wont get any punishment

Great parts

Thank you

I really like your punishments Have to post TWO parts?! Great idea!!
And those parts were great!!
I think you won't post anything for a while, or..?

la_nette wrote:I really like your punishments Have to post TWO parts?! Great idea!!
And those parts were great!!
I think you won't post anything for a while, or..?

Try to think again
Of course I will, because I have to finish this story until I am going back to Lithuania

Laura wrote:

la_nette wrote:I really like your punishments Have to post TWO parts?! Great idea!!
And those parts were great!!
I think you won't post anything for a while, or..?

Try to think again
Of course I will, because I have to finish this story until I am going back to Lithuania

Oo, great!! I just thought you won't post anything for a while, because you posted 3 parts yesterday...

la_nette wrote:

Laura wrote:

la_nette wrote:I really like your punishments Have to post TWO parts?! Great idea!!
And those parts were great!!
I think you won't post anything for a while, or..?

Try to think again
Of course I will, because I have to finish this story until I am going back to Lithuania

Oo, great!! I just thought you won't post anything for a while, because you posted 3 parts yesterday...

I will post, because from 13 of August until 25 of August I will be without internet
And maybe I will post my new story, but dunno if you want

Laura wrote:

la_nette wrote:

Laura wrote:

la_nette wrote:I really like your punishments Have to post TWO parts?! Great idea!!
And those parts were great!!
I think you won't post anything for a while, or..?

Try to think again
Of course I will, because I have to finish this story until I am going back to Lithuania

Oo, great!! I just thought you won't post anything for a while, because you posted 3 parts yesterday...

I will post, because from 13 of August until 25 of August I will be without internet
And maybe I will post my new story, but dunno if you want

Of course we want to read it!!
Why you will be without internet??

la_nette wrote:

Laura wrote:

la_nette wrote:

Laura wrote:

la_nette wrote:I really like your punishments Have to post TWO parts?! Great idea!!
And those parts were great!!
I think you won't post anything for a while, or..?

Try to think again
Of course I will, because I have to finish this story until I am going back to Lithuania

Oo, great!! I just thought you won't post anything for a while, because you posted 3 parts yesterday...

I will post, because from 13 of August until 25 of August I will be without internet
And maybe I will post my new story, but dunno if you want

Of course we want to read it!!
Why you will be without internet??

Because on 13 of August i am going back to Lithuania and until 25 of August I wont have it because in my home in Lithuania it is turned off

me love this story. but how could Mikel return with medicaments so quickly?

girl1035 wrote:me love this story. but how could Mikel return with medicaments so quickly?

Thank you Tina
Well it seems that in pharmacy wasn't lots of peoples in the morning

I came back with many parts to read
I loved them all

and when more???

Welcome back Sergo
And more today

Part 10


- My brother. Said Monika.
- How is Mark? Asked Andrea.
- He is fine. Next week with Kevin he is coming to Spain. Said Monika.
- Who is that Kevin? Mikel asked.
- My brothers friend.
They ate. Andrea and Ony left to the city centre and Monika with Mikel came back to the room. Just they came back to room Mikel turned on computer.
- What's happened? Monika asked.
- Nothing. Mikel said.
- You changed when I said that my brother is coming.
- You seems to be very happy that your brothers friend is coming. He said.
- No I am not. What's happened to you?
- Can't you see that I am busy? He asked.
- Oh I am so sorry mister Hennet that I disturb to you.
Monika turned, went and hit with doors. She went out of the hotel. She didn't knew were to go, because she didn't knew city well. All the time she was mumbling.
- Just think he is busy. Nobody can disturb mister Hennet. He don't care about me at all.
- Doe's all the time such a beautiful girl is talking with herself? Asked man voice.
- What a hell? Monika asked.
- I am not a devil.
- And not an angel or maybe you fall down from the sky. Monika said.
That guy started to laugh.
- You know you have very good sense of humor.
- I don't wanna talk with anybody and even with person that I don't know.
- But we could meet. I am Manuel.
- I don't care if you are Manuel, Pedro or what ever.
She stood up and went.
- Thanks to God for this angel. Manuel said.
When Monika left Mikel was still sitting near computer. Past two hours.
- Where is she?
He turned off computer and went. Monika wasn't far away so Mikel found her soon. She was throuwing rocks to the sea.
- Finally I found you. He said.
- Leave me alone.
Mikel sat on the sand and also started to throuw rocks.
- I won't.
- Go from were you came.
- I don't wanna.
- Can't you see that I am busy? Monika asked.
She was really mad. Monika started to walk away. Mikel stood up and went after her.
- Will you leave me?
- No. Mikel said and grabbed her hand.
- I hate you. Let me go.
- I love you and I won't. Mikel said.
He kissed her and she bite to him.
- Ouch it hurts. He said.
- I don't care. Monika said.
She started to run from him. When she turned to Mikel she saw that he didn't followed her.

She bit him? That Manuel-dude is creepy

Wow, great part!!! She bit him??? She is crazy with all means Sorry Monika!!! Great part, I like this story very very much!!!

~Mar~ wrote:She bit him? That Manuel-dude is creepy

Why creepy?