Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END

Monikute wrote:haha. I'm sure that it's not true that Mikel make her vomit anyway,great part so more more and more!

All the time you are sure

Laura wrote:

Dimitra_Ony wrote:

Laura wrote:

Dimitra_Ony wrote:Great part!!! I don't know why, but I don't like that Manuel guy

Manuel........? At the moment he is way better then Mikel

Yeah, but I just don't like him, he is too good to be true, something like that!!

And you like Mikel like this?

No, but he's just trying to tell her that he loves her, that's why he is acting like that!!! But that Manuel guy....nop, I don't know why but I don't like him!!!

i never trust in guys called Manuel

and mikel, he could be more nice

great part

Prisca wrote:i never trust in guys called Manuel

and mikel, he could be more nice

great part

And why you don't?

because i know i guy named Manuel and i hate him

Loool

Mikel has the mind of a rapist atm xD

Part 12

Monika started to push him more.
- Let me go. You won't make me do this.
Suddenly mikel sat on the end of the bed.
- What I am doing? If you don't love me, I won't make you do that.
He stood up.
- Where are you going? Monika asked.
Mikel didn't said anything. Monika stood up and went to him.
- Don't leave me alone. Said Monika.
- I am sorry, but I have to go. He said, kissed her forehead and left.
Few hours Monika was crying, but remembered that she has to meet with manuel. From the capboard she took dress, dressed up and left. Manuel was already waiting for her.
- Hey! It's nice so see you again. He said.
- Me too.
- Let's go to the bar.
- Sure. She said.
When they came to the bar Monika saw that Mikel, also is there. And he is not alone. Monika and Manuel sat.
- There is your boyfriend and he is not alone. said Manuel.
- I already saw him.
- Whom is that blonde girl?
- I don't know, I saw her first time. Monika said.
- He looks a bit strange.
- I think he is drunk.
- Do you wanna make him jealous?
- Will you help me? Monika asked.
- Sure. Let's go dance.
They went to dance and Mikel saw Monika.
- Now I will kiss you. Manuel said.
Manuel kissed her, but she didn't answered the same. Monika looked to Mikel ans saw that at the same time he was kissing thet blonde. She couldn't keep anymore. Monika went to them, separated and hit to Mikel that hard that he fall down with chair. He was so drunk, that he didn't understood what's happened. Monika ran out of that bar. She didn't saw clearly where she was running, because her eyes were full of tears. Monika ran to the beach and started to walk to the water. Thanks to God that Manuel came after her, so he took out her.
- What a hell are you doin? He asked.
- I can't keep it anymore. She said.
Manuel helped her to go back to hotel. He left. After 15 minutes Mikel came back with that blonde girl. When she saw Monika, she went out. Mikel went to have a shower and after it he went to balcony. Monika was sitting on the bed when she heard that Mikel was crying. She stood up and went there.
- Mikel...... She said.
- Why you are all wet? He asked.
- Well...... I wanted.....
- Don't say that you wanted to kill yourself.
Monika just nodded.
- You don't care about me. She said.
- Monika I love you and if you were done that I would kill myself too.
- Your lip. You are bleeding.
- Your hit was very strong. He said.
- I shouldn't do that.
- No you should. I deserve that and more.
- Don't talk like this.
- Do you liked that kiss? He asked.
- No. I didn't answered to him. It was Manuel plan to make you jealous. And that blonde?
- I didn't knew what I was doing. Mikel said.

Mikel deserved it yeah I hope everything will be okay between them..

~Mar~ wrote:Mikel deserved it yeah I hope everything will be okay between them..

Mmmmhhhhhh....... for a while that's for sure

Great part

Thank you
I have to go, but I am still here

Yeey....Monika hit Mikel, I would Loooove to see that!!! I still don't like that Manuel guy, and I felt sorry for Mikel, he may act like that, but he loves her, and I'm by his side!!!

this two... all this and now they are ok

- Your lip. You are bleeding.
- Your hit was very strong. He said.

lmao xD

Thanks girls for your comments

Dimitra_Ony wrote:Yeey....Monika hit Mikel, I would Loooove to see that!!! I still don't like that Manuel guy, and I felt sorry for Mikel, he may act like that, but he loves her, and I'm by his side!!!

I don't like him too!! Stupid Manuel...
But great part!!
More soon??

Thanks Nette
And more really soon

i can't wait

Part 13


Monika stood up and wanted to go, but Mikel grabbed her hand and hugged her.
- I love you, I love you and I am so stupid.
- Please, don't talk just kiss me.
Mikel kissed her.
- Now there is some blode on your face. He said.
- Let's go to the room. I will bring medecaments.
Mikel was sitting on the bed when Monika came.
- Ouch. He said.
- I know that it hurts. She said.
Mikel took medicaments from Monika's hand and put it away.
- And what's now? She asked.
- I am sorry. Mikel was repeating and kissing Monika.
- I know that I made a big mistake that I said that I am busy. You never disturb to me. He continued.
Monika was just listening and enjoying his touches and kisses. That night felt like it was them first time. They were doing everything slowly and softly. They both had a fear to hurt each other. In the morning. When Monika woke up, Mikel wasn't sleeping. His fingers were playing with Monika's hair.
- Morning angel. He said and kissed her.
- Morning. Why we are acting like this and huting each other?
- I don't know, but I don't wanna that it happen again. I wanna to have you as a wife and have a daughter.
- Do you propose to me? Monika asked.
- Yes. Do you wanna be my wife?
- I do. She said and smiled. Can you answer me one question?
- Sure.
- Why daughter and not son?
- Because all the time I imagine us with daughter.
- Imagine? Come on tell me.
- Little girl, brown hair and beautiful green eyes.
- She is really cute. And I have to tell for you one thing.
- Have you hiden from me something?
Then Monika felt bad, ran to the toilet. She came back.
- I made you vomit? Mikel asked.
- No. I think well not me, but Andrea thinks that.....
- What Monika? Tell it. He said.
- That I am.....
- You are?
- Pregnant.
- You are pregnant? Mikel asked and jumped out of the bed.
- Well I don't know.
- I can't believe it. I am going to be a dad.
He lay down and touched her tummy.
- Hey my darling. He said.
- If I am pregnant she won't hear you, buut maybe it's boy.
- You are pregnant and it's girl. I feel it and we can found out that.
- How? Monika asked.
- I am going to a pharmacy. He said.
- But maybe you won't get it, because you are man.
- I will. He said and left.
After 10 minutes he came back and gave a pregnancy test to Monika.
- Go and do it. He said.
- Ok my love.
Monika went and after 15 minutes she came back.
- And? Mikel asked.

Is she pregnant?? Is she pregnant??
Great part!!

As I said that you will found out it in part 14. Than it means next part

i like his determination to be a girl

i hope she is pregnant....

*i just love babies *

Wow, this was the best part ever!!!! I want to know if she's pregnant!!!! Tell us tell us.....plzzzzzzz I can't wait until tomorrow!!!!