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Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]

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Post  x Imke x Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:36 pm

Here is going to be my new story which will be really finished! Very Happy
The main character is just a random person, so nobody from this forum Wink
It is also mostly about Javi Laughing Laughing

So here's the prologue Wink I have no idea when part 1 will be posted Laughing

30 April 1983 05:55

Two babies are born at the same hospital in the same place at the same time. No, they aren't twins. Just two different women having a baby.
Two babies, a boy and a girl. Their mothers didn't know their children will have a very special bond together.

Birth card:

Name: Francisco Javier Álvarez Colinet
Date of birth: 30 April 1983
Time of birth: 05.55 am
Place: Sevilla
Parents: Francisco & Maria Colinet

Birth card:

Name: Chasity D'Anoire
Date of birth: 30 April 1983
Time of birth: 05.55 am
Place: Sevilla
Parents: Juan & Simona D'Anoire


So tell me what you think about this Very Happy
Btw I have no idea what a birth card exactly looks like Rolling Eyes I thought also the weight and length must be on it but oh well.. whatever Laughing


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Post  Kath Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:17 pm

oooooh sounds intersting Cool
i wonder what the bond will be Very Happy
first part please!! Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  girl1035 Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:19 pm

I think this will be bery interesting. And since it is about Javi Im saying POST 1st PART.
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Post  Heli Sat Feb 16, 2008 5:26 pm

Sounds really interesting! Wink
Waiting for the 1st part! Cool
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Post  Sergo Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:25 pm

FINALLY! cheers
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Post  x Imke x Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:28 pm

Thank you! MrGreen
Ok, here part 1 Wink

Part 1

Summer 1984
Age: 1


It was bloody hot but with a warm summer breeze.
'Juan! Is the airconditioner fixed yet?' Simona asked while waving the newspaper to her face to get some fresh air. It was the middle of the summer and 44 Celcius. Simona put her daughter in the cradle in the coolest corner of the room.
A few babies died again this week because of the heat. She was afraid the same would happen to her own child.
'Not yet! Who is so crazy to fix the airconditioner with this temperature?!' Juan said while reading last week's newspaper. He was too busy with working because there was a robbing in the electronica shop he worked at. The mess was huge so there was a lot to clean up. Now that it all was done he was too tired to fix some airconditioner. 'What if our baby dies because you are too lazy to get off your butt?' Simona said. Juan just sighed and start reading the next page. 'Men,' Simona muttered, 'never can do two things at the same time.'

'Francisco! Look at this!' Maria shouted. Francisco took a look from behind the door and laughed. 'My little Javier! What have you done to your face?'
The kid's face was covered with brown chocolatesauce. 'Pappa! Choco!' the boy jabbered and took the tube of chocolatesauce. He pinched it with his small fingers and some of the sauce jumped out and splatted into his father's face. His mother giggled so did the baby.
'That's my boy!' Francisco smiled and licked some sauce from his face.

Tadaaa Laughing
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Post  x Imke x Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:28 pm

Sergo wrote:FINALLY! cheers

Finally she notice it! Laughing
And I've posted part 1 Laughing
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Post  Sergo Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:37 pm

I read it... Cool Again Laughing
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Post  x Imke x Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:40 pm

Yep again Laughing And you will read much more AGAIN! Laughing
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Post  Kath Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:46 pm

44 celcius! jeeze thats hot!! Shocked Shocked
choco sauce Laughing Laughing
great part.. MOREEEEE! Razz
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Post  girl1035 Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:48 pm

Great. lol Javi and chocolate is eternal love.
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Post  Aida Sat Feb 16, 2008 7:14 pm

Greaat part MrGreen
I can imagine little Javi with chocolate all over his face Cool Laughing Laughing
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Post  x Imke x Sat Feb 16, 2008 7:42 pm

Rolling Eyes

Part 2

8 september 1987
Age: 4


'I'm so excited! Our girl is going to the kindergarten for the first time!' Simona said with sparkling eyes. Chasity clapped in her hands and laughed. Well, it was more like screaming. She knew something fun was going to happen today. Juan put Chasity in the buggy and put her white glimming shoes on. She wore a pink t-shirt with baby-pink cotton pants. 'Hat!' she said and reached for her flower hat. Her father took it and gave it to her. She put it on herself. Her short, red curls jumped from under the hat. It looked funny but adorable. 'Let's go then,' Simona smiled and pushed the buggy forwards.

'Javier! Come here!' Maria yelled. The little boy ran through the kitchen with again a tube of chocolatesauce in his hands. He screamed of fun and there was chocolatesauce everywhere. 'Naughty boy! Come to mommy!' Maria smiled. Javier didn't listen and ran on. But what he didn't see was his train toy on the floor. He struggled and fell. He immediately cried. 'Oh poor little man!' Maria said and took her child in her arms. 'Ma-a-a-a-ma!' he cried and pressed his face in her jacket. 'Oh no! We're coming late!' she said shocked, lifted Javier up in her arms and ran out of the house to the car.

Chasity sat down and took a plastic car toy. 'Brum! Brum!' she said and drove the car with her hand around her. Suddenly a big boy stood next to her and pushed her rudely away. Then he took the car and threw it at her head. Chasity immediately began to cry. Then she saw a hand reaching in front of her. She looked up and saw a boy with black hair. She grabbed his hand and he helped her up. Chasity wiped the tears away from her cheek. Then the boy gave her a black car toy. She took it and looked with big eyes at him.
'I am Javier,' the boy said and took another car. 'Hello Javier, I am Chasity,' she smiled. They played a while together with the cars. They laughed and ride the cars over each others arms, legs and heads, making car noises.
'Chasity?' Javier asked, when Chasity was busy riding her car over his nose.
'Yes?' she replied.
'Do you want to be my friend?'
'Yes!' Chasity smiled, still riding the car over his nose.
'Javier?' Chasity then asked.
'Yes,' he also replied.
'Do you like chocolatesauce?'
'Yes! How you know?'
'My car is under the chocolatesauce! Your face is all covered with this!' Chasity laughed.
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Post  Onyone Sat Feb 16, 2008 7:45 pm

i love this
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Post  girl1035 Sat Feb 16, 2008 7:59 pm

Mama mia. If I ever saw Javi with his face covered with chocolate, I swear there would be nothing to stop me from kissing it away. Anyway this part was great and Im awaiting the next parts.
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Post  Aida Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:00 pm

Aaaaaaaaw MrGreen So sweeeeeeet MrGreen
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Post  Heli Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:23 pm

Aaaaww.. Sweet little Javier.. Laughing
Great parts! Wink
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Post  x Imke x Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:42 pm

Ok the last part for tonight! Laughing

Part 3

3 june 1999
Age: 16


The phone rang.
'Hello?'
'Is this Chasity?'
'Yes, who's this?'
'The booman!'
'Heh?'
'You don't even regonise your best friend's voice?!'
'Javi!'
'Wow! She knows!'
'Bastard. Why you're calling?'
'Could you come over to my place?'
'Yeah sure,' Chasity said and hang up.
'Mom! I'm going to Javi!' she yelled.
'Again? You went yesterday too!' her mom frowned while she was busy making a salad.
'Yeah but...'
'And the day before yesterday.'
'I know but...'
'And last Friday, Thursday, Wednesday.'
'MOM!' Chasity shouted.
'Yes?'
'Let me finish! I know but we're best friends! And best friends come over a lot!'
'YEah but not every day! Have you got any idea how many times I had to cook for 4 persons instead of 3?'
'I love you mom!' Chasity smiled, kissed her mother's cheek and went out.
Simona smiled. 'It doesn't surprise me if they ever become more than best friends,' she said to herself and cut an onion in two pieces.

Chasity ran over the pavement to the neighbour's house. She walked over the path and rang the bell. The door opened immediately and Javi stoofd in the door opening. 'That was quick!'
'Duh! I'm living next door!' Chasity rolled her eyes.
Javi grinned and opened the door some further so that Chasity could walk in.

Hope you liked this one Wink Tomorrow I think the next part Very Happy


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Post  Onyone Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:46 pm

loved this
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Post  Aida Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:50 pm

I love this story MrGreen
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Post  girl1035 Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:59 pm

great part. but the name of this story scares me.
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Post  Sergo Sat Feb 16, 2008 9:22 pm

wtf her name is Chasity? Shocked

didn't notice Razz
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Post  Rania Sat Feb 16, 2008 9:24 pm

Imke this story is GREAT!!!
I love it Smile
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Post  Heli Sat Feb 16, 2008 10:59 pm

Oooh.. Cool
Great part again! Wink
Moree! MrGreen
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Post  Kath Sun Feb 17, 2008 12:36 am

aaaaw this is so cute!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
i Beating heart this story MrGreen
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