Promise - Part 27 THE END
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Promise - Part1
Well.... It's my first story. I hope you will like it
Part 1
Friday. Finally last day in school and tomorrow starts summer holidays. Yesterday before going to sleep I forgot to turn on my alarm-clock, so I overslept. If not my mother I would have slept all day. She came into my room and started to shout:
- Laura, come on wake up, you are late!
- I am late? That’s impossible.
- Yes you are. It’s 7:40. I guess that you have forgot to turn on your alarm-clock.
I got up quickly, dressed up and left my home. On my way to school I met my best friends Karla and Tina. They were waiting for me.
- Finally, Laura! We thought that you won’t show up today. We were waiting here for you 20 minutes. Said Karla.
- Yeah. Where have you been? Asked Tina.
- Hi, girls! Yeah I know that I am late. I have overslept. I am really sorry.
- Sleepy-head. Said Karla and they both started to laugh.
- Oh come on girls!
- So, what have planed for summer holidays? Asked Karla.
- Well…… nothing.
- Do you remember, when I have told you about my cousin, which lives in Spain?
- Oh, that singer. Yeah I remember.
- Yesterday he called to me and asked if I want to come to Spain for holidays and I agreed. And also he told that I can take two of my friends. So, do you want to go?
- I would love to, but….. I don’t know what my mother is going to say. I think that she won’t let me go.
- She will let you. I am sure 100%. Your mother is very good. Said Tina.
- Yeah. Even Tina’s mother let her to go. So I think that with your mother there won’t be any problems.
- It would be wonderful. My dream to see D’Nash would come true.
- Not yours, but our dream. Said Tina.
We reached school at 8:10. When we came into the class we saw that the class is almost empty.
- Good morning, teacher! We are sorry that we are late.
- Oh, girls, don’t apologize. I am glad that you come.
The whole lesson I was thinking about journey to Spain. After lesson I have sent a message to my mother, but she didn’t write back to me.
Part 1
Friday. Finally last day in school and tomorrow starts summer holidays. Yesterday before going to sleep I forgot to turn on my alarm-clock, so I overslept. If not my mother I would have slept all day. She came into my room and started to shout:
- Laura, come on wake up, you are late!
- I am late? That’s impossible.
- Yes you are. It’s 7:40. I guess that you have forgot to turn on your alarm-clock.
I got up quickly, dressed up and left my home. On my way to school I met my best friends Karla and Tina. They were waiting for me.
- Finally, Laura! We thought that you won’t show up today. We were waiting here for you 20 minutes. Said Karla.
- Yeah. Where have you been? Asked Tina.
- Hi, girls! Yeah I know that I am late. I have overslept. I am really sorry.
- Sleepy-head. Said Karla and they both started to laugh.
- Oh come on girls!
- So, what have planed for summer holidays? Asked Karla.
- Well…… nothing.
- Do you remember, when I have told you about my cousin, which lives in Spain?
- Oh, that singer. Yeah I remember.
- Yesterday he called to me and asked if I want to come to Spain for holidays and I agreed. And also he told that I can take two of my friends. So, do you want to go?
- I would love to, but….. I don’t know what my mother is going to say. I think that she won’t let me go.
- She will let you. I am sure 100%. Your mother is very good. Said Tina.
- Yeah. Even Tina’s mother let her to go. So I think that with your mother there won’t be any problems.
- It would be wonderful. My dream to see D’Nash would come true.
- Not yours, but our dream. Said Tina.
We reached school at 8:10. When we came into the class we saw that the class is almost empty.
- Good morning, teacher! We are sorry that we are late.
- Oh, girls, don’t apologize. I am glad that you come.
The whole lesson I was thinking about journey to Spain. After lesson I have sent a message to my mother, but she didn’t write back to me.
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Good start waiting for more...
Tinute- Number of posts : 352
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Great beginning!
Sabine- Number of posts : 696
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very good...
more please
more please
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Nice start
Waiting for more
Waiting for more
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Singer cousin? Hmm..
Good beginning!
Good beginning!
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Sounds Interesting Waiting for more
gabrielle- Number of posts : 198
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Sounds very Good!
More! More! More! more!
More! More! More! more!
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Thanks girls! Soon I will post part 2
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Part 2
I didn’t knew what to think. The girls looked really happy, but not me. The last lessons where going really slowly. When the lessons finished girls started to talk what things they are going to take.
- I will take my guitar, clothes, make-up, my mp3 player and….
- Oh come on Tina it seems that you are going to live there and not for holidays. Said Karla
- Well you don’t know. Maybe I will fall in love with your cousin and I will stay to live there.
- You already love him.
- What? I already love him?
- Well….. Mmmmh……Just forget what I have said.
- Hey, girl what’s happened to you? You are very quiet and that is not for you. Said Tina.
- Well…. I am not going to Spain.
- What are you talking? Asked Karla.
- Just true.
- You even haven’t talked with your mother.
- Yeah I haven’t, but I have sent a message to her and she didn’t write back to me.
- Maybe your mother is busy and she don’t have a time. Said Tina.
- Just think about everything positive and everything will be alright. Said Karla.
- So where we have finished? Asked Tina.
- At that place what we are going to take. Said Karla.
- Oh, yeah. Also I am going to take my mobile phone, sunglasses…..
- Yeah, yeah. Just don’t forget to take your head. Said Karla and started to laugh.
- I won’t. Said Tina and she looked a bit angry.
- Well I think that the most important things that you have to take is a good mood, notebook, pen and cam. It’s possible that you are going to meet D’Nash.
- You are totally right. But not only we have to take it you too. Said Karla.
- If I will go I will. So girls are you coming to my home to drink some tea?
- Oh yeah we are! Said both.
- What time is it? Asked Karla.
- It’s 15:20. Come on girls don’t be shy. My home is your home. Let’s look into the fridge what my mum have left for us.
- So what we have? Asked Tina.
- Well, there is a pizza, some salads, chicken. So what do you want?
- I want pizza. Said Karla.
- Me too. Said Tina.
- Ok then take it and put it into the oven.
- Laura, look there is a letter to you from your mother.
- Can you give it to me?
- Here take it.
- Thanks.
The girls gave me a letter. I opened it. There was a note from my mother and three tickets.
- OMG!!!!!!
- What’s happened Laura? Asked Tina.
- Well…. there are three tickets to……. Spain. And it seems that I am going with you.
- As we said for you that everything it’s going to be ok.
- Yeah you were right.
So get ready Spain we are coming!
I didn’t knew what to think. The girls looked really happy, but not me. The last lessons where going really slowly. When the lessons finished girls started to talk what things they are going to take.
- I will take my guitar, clothes, make-up, my mp3 player and….
- Oh come on Tina it seems that you are going to live there and not for holidays. Said Karla
- Well you don’t know. Maybe I will fall in love with your cousin and I will stay to live there.
- You already love him.
- What? I already love him?
- Well….. Mmmmh……Just forget what I have said.
- Hey, girl what’s happened to you? You are very quiet and that is not for you. Said Tina.
- Well…. I am not going to Spain.
- What are you talking? Asked Karla.
- Just true.
- You even haven’t talked with your mother.
- Yeah I haven’t, but I have sent a message to her and she didn’t write back to me.
- Maybe your mother is busy and she don’t have a time. Said Tina.
- Just think about everything positive and everything will be alright. Said Karla.
- So where we have finished? Asked Tina.
- At that place what we are going to take. Said Karla.
- Oh, yeah. Also I am going to take my mobile phone, sunglasses…..
- Yeah, yeah. Just don’t forget to take your head. Said Karla and started to laugh.
- I won’t. Said Tina and she looked a bit angry.
- Well I think that the most important things that you have to take is a good mood, notebook, pen and cam. It’s possible that you are going to meet D’Nash.
- You are totally right. But not only we have to take it you too. Said Karla.
- If I will go I will. So girls are you coming to my home to drink some tea?
- Oh yeah we are! Said both.
- What time is it? Asked Karla.
- It’s 15:20. Come on girls don’t be shy. My home is your home. Let’s look into the fridge what my mum have left for us.
- So what we have? Asked Tina.
- Well, there is a pizza, some salads, chicken. So what do you want?
- I want pizza. Said Karla.
- Me too. Said Tina.
- Ok then take it and put it into the oven.
- Laura, look there is a letter to you from your mother.
- Can you give it to me?
- Here take it.
- Thanks.
The girls gave me a letter. I opened it. There was a note from my mother and three tickets.
- OMG!!!!!!
- What’s happened Laura? Asked Tina.
- Well…. there are three tickets to……. Spain. And it seems that I am going with you.
- As we said for you that everything it’s going to be ok.
- Yeah you were right.
So get ready Spain we are coming!
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- I will take my guitar, clothes, make-up, my mp3 player and….
- Oh come on Tina it seems that you are going to live there and not for holidays.
hmm... I'm in this story
- Oh come on Tina it seems that you are going to live there and not for holidays.
hmm... I'm in this story
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Maybe, maybe
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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spain... were they go
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awesome
spain huh?
mas
spain huh?
mas
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Yay, the second part
Now gimme the third one
Now gimme the third one
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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yes... the third
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Great part Mooooore
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Part 3
I was so happy that I didn’t carried about anything that was around me. The only thing that I was thinking about was D’Nash. Finally I am going to see them. My dream come true.
- Laura! The earth is calling to Laura! Said Tina
- Yeah, Laura is listening. I said.
- When we are leaving? Asked Karla.
- Well, we are leaving Sunday at 8 a.m.
- OMG it’s so early. Said Karla.
- Who are going to take us to the airport? Asked Tina.
- My mum. She has written in this note that tomorrow you can come and stay to sleep and on Sunday morning she will take us to the airport. I said.
- Oh that’s good idea! Said Tina.
- Yeah. I agree. But I got to go now. I have to call to my cousin and to tell when we are leaving. Said Karla.
- Ok then. When you are coming tomorrow?
- Maybe at 17:00. Said Karla.
- I will wait you. And Tina are you leaving too?
- Not yet. I will stay here for an hour and then I will go.
- Ok.
- So bye Karla! We said.
- Bye girls!
When Karla left I understood that I don’t know anything about her cousin.
- Tina, has Karla told for you her cousin’s name?
- No, she didn’t. She even hasn’t told how his group is called. I know the same as you that he lives in Spain and that he is a singer.
- That’s strange.
- What ever. Just wait until Sunday and we will meet him.
- Yeah you are right.
- So, where is my tea?
- Oh, yeah! I almost forgot it.
- Like always.
- What have you said?
- Nothing just nothing.
- Here is your tea.
- Thanks.
The whole hour me and Tina were talking about journey and D’Nash. Tina was dreaming how she meets Mikel and other things. Tina left. After half an hour my parents came back to home.
- Laura, are you here? Asked mother
- Yeah, I am.
- So how was your day? Asked dad.
- The day was wonderful. And I wanted to say thank you that you let me go to Spain.
- Not at all. It was your dream and we are your parents so we have to make your dreams come true. Said mother.
- I love you both. I said.
- We love you too. It’s going to be a present for your birthday. Said dad.
- Thank you again. Now I am going to my room, because I have to pack my things.
- Ok go.
I went to my room and started to search my suitcase. When I found it I opened my closet. My eyes were running through all my clothes, but I didn’t knew what to take.
I was so happy that I didn’t carried about anything that was around me. The only thing that I was thinking about was D’Nash. Finally I am going to see them. My dream come true.
- Laura! The earth is calling to Laura! Said Tina
- Yeah, Laura is listening. I said.
- When we are leaving? Asked Karla.
- Well, we are leaving Sunday at 8 a.m.
- OMG it’s so early. Said Karla.
- Who are going to take us to the airport? Asked Tina.
- My mum. She has written in this note that tomorrow you can come and stay to sleep and on Sunday morning she will take us to the airport. I said.
- Oh that’s good idea! Said Tina.
- Yeah. I agree. But I got to go now. I have to call to my cousin and to tell when we are leaving. Said Karla.
- Ok then. When you are coming tomorrow?
- Maybe at 17:00. Said Karla.
- I will wait you. And Tina are you leaving too?
- Not yet. I will stay here for an hour and then I will go.
- Ok.
- So bye Karla! We said.
- Bye girls!
When Karla left I understood that I don’t know anything about her cousin.
- Tina, has Karla told for you her cousin’s name?
- No, she didn’t. She even hasn’t told how his group is called. I know the same as you that he lives in Spain and that he is a singer.
- That’s strange.
- What ever. Just wait until Sunday and we will meet him.
- Yeah you are right.
- So, where is my tea?
- Oh, yeah! I almost forgot it.
- Like always.
- What have you said?
- Nothing just nothing.
- Here is your tea.
- Thanks.
The whole hour me and Tina were talking about journey and D’Nash. Tina was dreaming how she meets Mikel and other things. Tina left. After half an hour my parents came back to home.
- Laura, are you here? Asked mother
- Yeah, I am.
- So how was your day? Asked dad.
- The day was wonderful. And I wanted to say thank you that you let me go to Spain.
- Not at all. It was your dream and we are your parents so we have to make your dreams come true. Said mother.
- I love you both. I said.
- We love you too. It’s going to be a present for your birthday. Said dad.
- Thank you again. Now I am going to my room, because I have to pack my things.
- Ok go.
I went to my room and started to search my suitcase. When I found it I opened my closet. My eyes were running through all my clothes, but I didn’t knew what to take.
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Daugiau
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You won't be surprised, but MORE
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