Promise - Part 27 THE END
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Re: Promise - Part 27 THE END
Cause I'm smart Naah KiddingMonikute wrote:And Sergo/...like always agree with you
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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I think it's enough for today next part you will get tomorrow. I PROMISE!!!!
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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ooohhh... she is dead... too bad
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Part 25
After Karla’s death past two months. Today guys are coming back from Tenerife.They got a concert there.
- We have to go to the shop. Said Tina.
- For what? I asked
- Well I want to buy something new. You know Mikel is coming back.
- I get it. Ok. We can go.
We went to the shop.
- Oh, look in this magazine there is written about D’Nash concert In Tenerife. Said Tina.
- Let’s buy it.
We bought the magazine. I started to look it and opened that page where was written about them.
- I can’t believe in my eyes. I said.
- What’s happened?
- There is a photo…..
- Yeah and…..
- In that photo Basty is kissing that dancer Isabella.
- How he could do that?
- I hate him. Everything it’s over. Can we go home Tina? I don’t feel very good.
- Ok.
We went back to home. They already were there.
- Hey, my little angel. Said Basty and hugged me.
- Don’t touch me. I said.
- What’s happened?
- You are asking what’s happened. How you will explain me this. I showed magazine to Basty.
- Well……
- I am listening.
- I was a bit drunk.
- Have you slept with her? Basty answer me.
- Yes, I have.
- How could you do this to me.
- It was a mistake.
- You know everything it’s over between us.
- No. You can’t leave me. Please forgive me.
- No Basty. I can’t.
- When you and Ony kissed I forgive you.
- You forgive me? For what Basty? I haven’t slept with him.
- Stop yelling on each other. Said Javi.
- Everything it’s over. Thank you for those three months. They were wonderful.
- But we promised be together all life.
- I can’t be with you when I know that you have slept with other.
And I ran to the beach. I was sitting on sand and looking to the horizon.
- How are you? Asked Ony.
- I think that bad.
- I thought that I will found you crying.
- Crying? I smiled. Not for Basty.
- Why?
- Ony if you wanna be here with me please don’t talk about Basty. I want to forget him.
- Ok. Said Ony and hugged me.
After Karla’s death past two months. Today guys are coming back from Tenerife.They got a concert there.
- We have to go to the shop. Said Tina.
- For what? I asked
- Well I want to buy something new. You know Mikel is coming back.
- I get it. Ok. We can go.
We went to the shop.
- Oh, look in this magazine there is written about D’Nash concert In Tenerife. Said Tina.
- Let’s buy it.
We bought the magazine. I started to look it and opened that page where was written about them.
- I can’t believe in my eyes. I said.
- What’s happened?
- There is a photo…..
- Yeah and…..
- In that photo Basty is kissing that dancer Isabella.
- How he could do that?
- I hate him. Everything it’s over. Can we go home Tina? I don’t feel very good.
- Ok.
We went back to home. They already were there.
- Hey, my little angel. Said Basty and hugged me.
- Don’t touch me. I said.
- What’s happened?
- You are asking what’s happened. How you will explain me this. I showed magazine to Basty.
- Well……
- I am listening.
- I was a bit drunk.
- Have you slept with her? Basty answer me.
- Yes, I have.
- How could you do this to me.
- It was a mistake.
- You know everything it’s over between us.
- No. You can’t leave me. Please forgive me.
- No Basty. I can’t.
- When you and Ony kissed I forgive you.
- You forgive me? For what Basty? I haven’t slept with him.
- Stop yelling on each other. Said Javi.
- Everything it’s over. Thank you for those three months. They were wonderful.
- But we promised be together all life.
- I can’t be with you when I know that you have slept with other.
And I ran to the beach. I was sitting on sand and looking to the horizon.
- How are you? Asked Ony.
- I think that bad.
- I thought that I will found you crying.
- Crying? I smiled. Not for Basty.
- Why?
- Ony if you wanna be here with me please don’t talk about Basty. I want to forget him.
- Ok. Said Ony and hugged me.
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Stupid Bastay
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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What the....
He just said that he slept with somebody else? Just like that? As if he said "Yeah, I ate cookies"?
Stupid Basty indeed...
And Karla's dead... Aw...
He just said that he slept with somebody else? Just like that? As if he said "Yeah, I ate cookies"?
Stupid Basty indeed...
And Karla's dead... Aw...
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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aaahh stupid bastard...
but ony is there
but ony is there
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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- I was a bit drunk.
- Have you slept with her? Basty answer me.
- Yes, I have.
hnbm,,, nori pasakyt jis taip lengvai prisipazino....?
Stupid him...
- Have you slept with her? Basty answer me.
- Yes, I have.
hnbm,,, nori pasakyt jis taip lengvai prisipazino....?
Stupid him...
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Holy crap. I considered this story ar peaceful, but this is real drama. More please.
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Tinute wrote:- I was a bit drunk.
- Have you slept with her? Basty answer me.
- Yes, I have.
hnbm,,, nori pasakyt jis taip lengvai prisipazino....?
Stupid him...
As irgi sakau, kad tik debilas prisipazintu
Na, bet... Eeeer... Stupid Basty
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Kyra - Angie wrote:Tinute wrote:- I was a bit drunk.
- Have you slept with her? Basty answer me.
- Yes, I have.
hnbm,,, nori pasakyt jis taip lengvai prisipazino....?
Stupid him...
As irgi sakau, kad tik debilas prisipazintu
Na, bet... Eeeer... Stupid Basty
Niu nebutu Basty.... heheh.. ups.. sorry Laura:oops:
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Tinute wrote:Kyra - Angie wrote:Tinute wrote:- I was a bit drunk.
- Have you slept with her? Basty answer me.
- Yes, I have.
hnbm,,, nori pasakyt jis taip lengvai prisipazino....?
Stupid him...
As irgi sakau, kad tik debilas prisipazintu
Na, bet... Eeeer... Stupid Basty
Niu nebutu Basty.... heheh.. ups.. sorry Laura:oops:
AHAHAHAHA
Ai nu
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Oh....Basty....agree..he's stupid...
Angie..Tina....jis tikrai durnas nors dabar.....bus dar idomiau...
More
Angie..Tina....jis tikrai durnas nors dabar.....bus dar idomiau...
More
Re: Promise - Part 27 THE END
Tinute wrote:Kyra - Angie wrote:Tinute wrote:- I was a bit drunk.
- Have you slept with her? Basty answer me.
- Yes, I have.
hnbm,,, nori pasakyt jis taip lengvai prisipazino....?
Stupid him...
As irgi sakau, kad tik debilas prisipazintu
Na, bet... Eeeer... Stupid Basty
Niu nebutu Basty.... heheh.. ups.. sorry Laura:oops:
Su tavim apie tai bus atskira kalba
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Part 26
When Ony hugged me my heart started to beat very fast. In his arms I felt safe. We were sitting and I didn’t wanted to go home.
- It mentioned. I said.
- What? Asked Ony.
- Our kiss.
- I knew it. He smiled and kissed my forehead.
- I am so lost in my feelings.
- What do you mean?
- Now it seems that I didn’t love Basty. It was just a passion. Everything happened very fast. And it was the biggest mistake in my life.
- And what about me?
- You……. I…… I don’t know.
- But I know what I feel for you. Said Ony and kissed me.
- Mmmmmh
- What?
- Your lips are very tasty. I said and kissed him.
- You will be mine and I won’t give you to anyone I pro…..
- Don’t promise. Please.
We came back to home. Basty was gone.
- Finally you came back. I was worried about you. Said Tina.
- I am fine.
- Can we talk? Asked Tina.
- Yeah.
- Basty left very sad.
- So what?
- You didn’t love him.
- I know it. I realized it too late.
- But it’s better late than never.
- I guess.
- And what’s with Ony?
- He loves me and I think that I feel the same.
- I am very happy for you.
- Thanks.
After six months. In the shopping centre.
- How do I look with this?
- Mmmmh. No I don’t like this colour.
- And this one?
- No.
- And that?
- No.
- Ony?
- What?
- It seems that you don’t care how I will dress up.
- You are right. The most I like you without any clothes.
- Ony…..
- It’s true. He said and kissed me.
- Ok then. Let’s go to drink some coffee.
- I thought that you will offer something else.
- In your dreams. I said and started to laugh.
When we were sitting in café we saw Isabella. She waved to us.
- Hi. She said.
- Hi. We said.
- Can we talk Laura? She asked.
- Yeah.
Tomorrow I will post last part
When Ony hugged me my heart started to beat very fast. In his arms I felt safe. We were sitting and I didn’t wanted to go home.
- It mentioned. I said.
- What? Asked Ony.
- Our kiss.
- I knew it. He smiled and kissed my forehead.
- I am so lost in my feelings.
- What do you mean?
- Now it seems that I didn’t love Basty. It was just a passion. Everything happened very fast. And it was the biggest mistake in my life.
- And what about me?
- You……. I…… I don’t know.
- But I know what I feel for you. Said Ony and kissed me.
- Mmmmmh
- What?
- Your lips are very tasty. I said and kissed him.
- You will be mine and I won’t give you to anyone I pro…..
- Don’t promise. Please.
We came back to home. Basty was gone.
- Finally you came back. I was worried about you. Said Tina.
- I am fine.
- Can we talk? Asked Tina.
- Yeah.
- Basty left very sad.
- So what?
- You didn’t love him.
- I know it. I realized it too late.
- But it’s better late than never.
- I guess.
- And what’s with Ony?
- He loves me and I think that I feel the same.
- I am very happy for you.
- Thanks.
After six months. In the shopping centre.
- How do I look with this?
- Mmmmh. No I don’t like this colour.
- And this one?
- No.
- And that?
- No.
- Ony?
- What?
- It seems that you don’t care how I will dress up.
- You are right. The most I like you without any clothes.
- Ony…..
- It’s true. He said and kissed me.
- Ok then. Let’s go to drink some coffee.
- I thought that you will offer something else.
- In your dreams. I said and started to laugh.
When we were sitting in café we saw Isabella. She waved to us.
- Hi. She said.
- Hi. We said.
- Can we talk Laura? She asked.
- Yeah.
Tomorrow I will post last part
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Well I don't like it too But when I was posting parts of this story I have written another story.So if you will want I will post it when I will finish this onedemi wrote:i don't like the word last i think i would prefer ony anyway
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Lauriukas199 wrote:Well I don't like it too But when I was posting parts of this story I have written another story.So if you will want I will post it when I will finish this onedemi wrote:i don't like the word last i think i would prefer ony anyway
yay new storie but i still don't like that word
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aahhh ony... always nice
to bad that it is the last part... but i want to read the new one
to bad that it is the last part... but i want to read the new one
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Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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wait... can someone remind me who is that Isabella... my memorie isn't very good..
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