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Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...

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Post  ~Mar~ Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:46 pm

I love that poem too.. I love you My parents have it on a door in our house. But then the dutch version
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Post  Kath Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:49 pm

My nan gave it to me in a frame one Chistmas, and a bracelet with the last few sentences on the inside of a bracelet (:
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Post  emilia Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:04 pm

Great part Very Happy
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Post  ~Mar~ Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:55 pm

Kath: That's such a sweet gift I love you
Emilia; thanks
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Post  Prisca Sun Jul 27, 2008 1:26 am

woow... now i wanna know what will happen next because the last sentence Neutral Neutral


great part Smile Smile
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Post  Sergo Sun Jul 27, 2008 4:19 am

Such sweet birthdaygifts I love you
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Post  ~Mar~ Sun Jul 27, 2008 11:29 am

Already writing part 9 Wink Wink
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Post  NETTTE Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:23 pm

What will happen?? I want to know...
But great part!! Very Happy
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Post  ~Mar~ Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:30 pm

Patience Razz ASAP part 9 Wink
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Post  Laura Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:15 pm

Woow really great part Smile Smile Smile Smile
That poem is really beautiful I love you I love you I love you I love you
I know that I have it in lithuanian language, but dunno were scratch scratch scratch
Waiting part 9 bounce bounce bounce bounce
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Post  Prisca Tue Jul 29, 2008 2:18 am

~Mar~ wrote:Patience Razz ASAP part 9 Wink


hmmm Laughing Laughing
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Post  ~Mar~ Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:11 am

O-oh.. Laughing Laughing
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Post  Prisca Tue Jul 29, 2008 8:01 pm

now you remind me.. oh oh merry christmas Laughing Laughing
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Post  ~Mar~ Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:35 pm

Isn't that ho-ho? Laughing Laughing Okay, new part for you, coz I'm in a good mood Razz
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Post  ~Mar~ Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:37 pm

Capítulo 9


It had been a warm day in April. I took a shower and walked back into my bedroom. Tonight we –and with ‘we’ I mean Kevin, Raúl, Stevie, Tess and Kate(Charlotte was ill)- were going out. Not in town, but in the city. My clothes were lying on the bed: A blue blouse and a black skinny jeans. Next to the bookcase stood a pair of black heels. I was standing with my back to the door. The radio was turned on and the CD from Mikel was playing. ‘I kissed a girl, and I liked it lalalala..’ Soon I heard a slight ‘ahem’. Frightened I turned around and sighed relieved. ‘Oh, it’s you.. You scared me..’ I turned back to the bed. The radio began to play the next song. ‘Home’ from Daughtry. How often I haven’t wished to be home at that moment.. I heard him walking into my room. Deep inside me I wanted him to turn around and leave. But I knew he wouldn’t. He shut the door and walked to me. He pumped the volume from the radio up. He looked at me. A weird twinkle shinned in his eyes. On his face was a dirty grin. That in combination with him walking towards me, made me afraid. Alarm bells were ringing loud in my head, but I couldn’t move an inch. ‘Dave? What’s going on?’ he didn’t said a thing, he just grinned and walked to me. Finally he spoke. ‘Don’t try to scream. Nobody will hear you..’ He laughed softly. ‘Dave? What’s going on?’ I asked again. This time more scared. No reaction.. The grin disappeared and his laughter died in the music. The only thing what was still there, was that twinkle. I’ll never forget about that twinkle. He grabbed my wrist and held it high above my head. ‘Au!’ He pushed me down on my bed, holding my arms down with his knees. He unbuttoned his jeans and took something from his back pocket. He switched his knees for his hands. ‘If you scream, I’ll hit you hard. And besides: No one will hear you screaming..’ His voice was cold and hating. His breathe burned on my skin and the words in my mind. He placed my arms so that he could held them with one hand. With the other he ripped my towel off. Again that dirty grin followed by the feeling of his knee separating my legs. I closed my eyes, afraid of what would come. I felt a sharp pain, striking through my body. Tears of fear and pain rolled over my cheeks. Dave laughed about me. It looked like an hour before he was finally done. He got off me and hit me in my face. ‘Don’t dare to tell anyone about this. If you do, I’ll tell that you wanted it. Got it?’ I nodded and swallowed. He smiled. ‘Good girl.’ I heard him walking out of my room and he closed the door. I putted my underwear on and laid down under the covers. I cried and I cried until I didn’t had a tear left. My eyes were sticky of the tears. They had left marks on my cheeks. I took a big T-shirt and putted it on. Soon I heard some one knocking on the door. Quick I wiped my tears away. ‘Yes?’ My voice was weak and trembled a bit. The door opened and Lynn walked in. ‘Are you coming for dinner?’ ‘No.. I don’t feel so well.. If you don’t mind I stay here..’ ‘Okay. I’ll let one of the others bring you some tea, ok?’ I nodded. Lynn smiled and walked out of the room. I sighed and turned the radio back on.
‘I’m standing on a bridge
I’m waitin in the dark
I thought that you’d be here by now
There’s nothing but the rain
No footsteps on the ground
I’m listening but there’s no sound

Isn’t anyone tryin’ to find me?
Won’t someone come take me home..’

Again someone knocked on my door. ‘Yes?’ Kevin walked inside with a cup of tea. ‘Hey, Lynn told us that you didn’t feel so well.. Here’s some tea.’ He putted the cup down on the bedside table. ‘Are you sure that there’s nothing else?’ He looked at me with his friendly brown eyes. ‘Yes, I’m sure.. I don’t feel well.. That’s all.. Maybe some sleep would.. Would do me some.. Some good..’ Again I began to cry. Kevin sat down next to me on my bed and pulled me against himself. ‘Ssshh.. It’s okay..’ I laid my head against his chest and cried. I couldn’t stop. He caressed my back and hair. Finally I calmed down and he let me go. ‘Now, tell me. What’s really bothering you?’ I took the ring from my mother in my hand and sighed deep. ‘He.. He raped me.. He just came in and shut the door.. I couldn’t do a single thing.. I feel so dirty..’ Kevin looked at me. ‘Who did that Mar?’ I didn’t answered. ‘Who did this to you Maria?’ His voice was calm but still forcing. ‘Dave..’ I whispered. ‘WHAAT?!’ ‘Dave.. he did it.. And if I dared to tell anyone he would say that I wanted it, so that no one would believe me..’ Tears were still rolling over my cheeks. ‘That piece of.. We need to get you out of here.. Do you mind if I tell Raúl? Maybe he can help us.. Do you know somewhere you can go to?’ I nodded. ‘School settled a place in Miami for me, where I could stay during the study.. Maybe I could go earlier.. I have a phone number of the woman..’ ‘Good.. I’ll call Raúl, and we’ll think about a way to get you outta here. But you’re just going with us tonight. You can’t stay here al night. Especially not with that creep, okay?’ I nodded again. ‘Good, take another shower and put your clothes on. I’ll see you in 45 minutes.’ He gave me a big bear hug and left. Again I took a shower, turned some happy songs on and tried to forget about it for a while. Quick I drank the tea before it would be cold, putted my clothes on, did my hair and make-up and walked downstairs. With a self-confidence look in my eyes I walked into the livingroom. ‘I thought that you were staying there al night?’ ‘I told her to come with us.. Maybe she’d feel better after some fresh air.’ Kevin winked to me. ‘Okay, have fun!’ And she turned her head back to the TV. Dave didn’t even looked at me and I ignored him. ‘Okay, are you ready?’ Kevin took the car keys and we walked outside, ready for some fun in town. Ready to forget this. At least for a while.
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Post  Laura Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:49 pm

OMG!!!!!!!! Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked
Dave raped her....... Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad
He is real asshole Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad
I love this story a lot cheers cheers cheers
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Post  emilia Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:49 pm

OMG Shocked Shocked
Poor she....
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Post  Kath Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:57 pm

HOLLY CRAP! Shocked Shocked
That Dave is a really knobhead Mad

I kissed a girl, and I liked it lalalala..
TUNE! Cool Mikel has good taste in music Razz
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Post  ~Mar~ Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:58 pm

Sure he does Cool

And I warned ya with the last sentence
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Post  Prisca Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:02 pm

what the hell Shocked Shocked Shocked

poor her... Neutral Neutral

tha man Mad Mad Mad
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Post  girl1035 Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:06 pm

Whatcha mean "for a while"? Can't she be safe forever?
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Post  ~Mar~ Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:11 pm

She can forget the happenings for a while.. About safty.. silent
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Post  Laura Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:13 pm

I already want more bounce bounce bounce
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Post  ~Mar~ Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:18 pm

I was already waiting for this one Laughing I dunno when Wink
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Post  Prisca Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:20 pm

~Mar~ wrote:She can forget the happenings for a while.. About safty.. silent


oohh... now i want more... and i know, i have to wait
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