My first Story With D'Nash!!!(parts 9+10 THE END)

aaahhh... why story don't become true....




i loved this 2 parts

Part 9
They arrived at the place where the concert was taking place, just when the rehearsal was in the middle. They went in, and they all stared like they were seeing something sobrenatural. They were all so great, dancing and singing. After an hour and a half, the rehearsal ended, and D’Nash went to get dressed in their dressing rooms, they were all so anxious… especially Ony and Mikel, who had received an anonymous letter, that a surprise was waiting for them after the concert.
Two hours later, the concert began, it was a total success, the stadium was full of fans from Spain, and all over the world. It was great.
When they went to the place where they would sign the autographs, Ony was standing and taking a photo, when he heard a voice talking…”Come on…don’t be so shy, you came all this way to talk to him, and now you want to scream and leave?” asked the voice “yes, I knew that I would do something like that” said a very familiar voice…Ony turned, and saw the girl that talked, not only it was the voice he had heard 4 years ago on the phone talking to him and shaking, but it also was the girl of his dream, he went towards her “too late Dim, he’s already coming…” said the other girl. “Hi” said Ony, “ hello” said Dimitra. “Hi Ony, sorry, I have to go, kisses, you are great Ony” said the other girl, “thanks…emmm…”Athina” she said “ Hey, if you are Tina, then you can go over there, Mikel’s waiting for you” said Ony “ Thanks, bye Ony, nice to meet you, I’ll come for a photo later” said Athina.

To be continued…

Part 10
“Well, Ony…??? May I have your autograph please?” said Dimitra. “Yeah, sure” said Ony, and signed in a photo, and gave it to her. “Sooo… did you like the surprise?” asked Dimitra, “You’re the surprise?… yeah, I did, I like it a lot” said Ony. “Laura…” said Dimitra, “Can you take a photo of me and Ony please?” asked Dimitra. “Yep, sure” said Laura. Dimitra went near Ony, “How about a photo with a hug and a kiss?” said Ony “Emmm… that sounds great” said Dimitra happily. They hugged each other, and took four photos, one with Ony kissing Dimitra, one with Dimitra kissing Ony, one with a hug, and one with Ony opening his present (a pair of new earrings). “They are great, gracias” said Ony. “De nada” said Dimitra. “Did you enjoy the concert?” asked Ony like if her opinion meant something important. “Yeah, it was great, and even more great is now that I’m speaking to you” said Dimitra.
Athina came near them, “So, how about that photo I said about?” she said, “Yeah, guys… come on” said Ony, and they all took a photo, with a big hug!!!
After that concert, Dimitra decided to move to Spain, and stay there, so she was going in every concert of D’Nash, and in every concert, she had a photo with all of them. Athina, stayed in Spain too, in the same apartment as Dimitra, they stayed forever-best friends, and always were helping one another. They did everything together!!! And always were there when D’Nash needed them!!! Finally, Ony asked Dimitra to become his girlfriend, and Mikel asked Athina. So they lived happily ever after…

THE END

Hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Happy ending!!!!!!!!
But I don't like the idea that it finished
Thanks Dimitra for writting it!!!!!!!!!!!

I agree with Laura... The story finished too early
But I liked the story!!

I know, but it's just my first story!!! I didn't like it that short too, but I had no inspiration!!! I hate it when nothing comes in my mind!!!! Thanks girls for reading it!!!

I just read this story and it was really good...I like it :D

it was very good all this story... good work

Thanks girls, I realy appreciate your words

Dimitra grafeis istories kai den mas to les? Are you writing fics in Greek too?

Hey Rania!!! Well, I just wrote this story to see if I write well, and now I''m writing a new story with Athina and Vasia( a friend) and I'm going to post it as soon as I translate it cause it's in greek!!!

Can't wait for new story

me neither but I have to wait for Athina to write the last parts!!! The translating is the easiest part!!!

Come on Athina hurry up

Well, she has just gone on vacation to Italy, and she's coming back at 25th I think, soo you'll have to wait, and so will I!!! But I believe I can translate the first parts that I wrote!!!

Oh she is coming back the same day when I will have internet again

you are lucky!!!!

Yes I am, because than it means that I won't miss any part
Am I right?

I think that you are right!!!

Yayness

ohhh a new story is coming

Yep, and I asure you, it will be bigger than this one

So we will wait till she's back

Dimitra_Ony wrote:Hey Rania!!! Well, I just wrote this story to see if I write well, and now I''m writing a new story with Athina and Vasia( a friend) and I'm going to post it as soon as I translate it cause it's in greek!!!

Dimitra that's great!! If you want we can make a fanfic section on the Greek forum so that you can post the stories in Greek there

Rania wrote:So we will wait till she's back

Dimitra_Ony wrote:Hey Rania!!! Well, I just wrote this story to see if I write well, and now I''m writing a new story with Athina and Vasia( a friend) and I'm going to post it as soon as I translate it cause it's in greek!!!

Dimitra that's great!! If you want we can make a fanfic section on the Greek forum so that you can post the stories in Greek there

Well, I don't know, let me ask the other girls first cause it's their story too, and I will tell you!!!

Dimitra_Ony wrote:Yep, and I asure you, it will be bigger than this one

great