Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
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Entra en mi vida- Part 1
Well there goes another story from me. I hope you will like it too like "Promise" ;)P.S:Monika thank you a lot for help
Part 1
I waked up in the morning. The sun was shining. I dressed up and went down stairs.
- Morning to all. I said
- Morning Andrea. Said mother.
- Dad told that he wants to talk with you. Said brother.
- Really? About what?
- He needs a help from you both. Said mother.
- Oh, ok. Where is he? I asked.
- He is at his office, waiting us. Said brother.
- Ok, we can go. I said.
- Yeah just wait a bit.
- Come on Duncan I don’t have much time. After an hour I have to meet with Monika.
- Ok. I am going. So, how is Monika? I haven’t seen her for a long time. Said Duncan.
- Well she is quite good after divorces with Oliver.
- Don’t mention that asshole.
- Do you still love her?
- I don’t wanna talk about it.
- Ok.
- Hey, dad. Said Duncan.
- Hi, daddy. I said.
- Hello.
- So what help do you need. I asked.
- Well I don’t have much time to go to all offices, so I need that one of you to go to the Spain and other to Australia.
- So where do you want to go? Asked Duncan.
- Mmmmh, let me think. I want to go to the Spain.
- Ok then I will go to Australia.
- Is that all dad? I asked.
- Yeah.
- Then I am going.
- Where? Asked dad.
- I am meeting with Monika.
- Ok.
- Bye.
- Bye.
I went out of the office and my mobile phone started to ring. It was Monika.
- Hey where are you? She asked.
- Near the restaurant after 10 minutes I will be there.
- Ok. I am waiting.
- Hi Monika. I said.
- Hi. Where have you been?
- At fathers office.
- Oh.
- Next week I am leaving.
- Really? Where?
- To the Spain.
- I want to go there too. I don’t wanna live here anymore.
- It’s for Oliver?
- Yeah he break my heart and I wanna run from it.
- So go with me.
- Really?
- Yeah. Why not. I will need a help and you will help me.
- Yes sure.
- Let’s eat and then we have to go to buy tickets.
- Yeah. Ok.
Part 1
I waked up in the morning. The sun was shining. I dressed up and went down stairs.
- Morning to all. I said
- Morning Andrea. Said mother.
- Dad told that he wants to talk with you. Said brother.
- Really? About what?
- He needs a help from you both. Said mother.
- Oh, ok. Where is he? I asked.
- He is at his office, waiting us. Said brother.
- Ok, we can go. I said.
- Yeah just wait a bit.
- Come on Duncan I don’t have much time. After an hour I have to meet with Monika.
- Ok. I am going. So, how is Monika? I haven’t seen her for a long time. Said Duncan.
- Well she is quite good after divorces with Oliver.
- Don’t mention that asshole.
- Do you still love her?
- I don’t wanna talk about it.
- Ok.
- Hey, dad. Said Duncan.
- Hi, daddy. I said.
- Hello.
- So what help do you need. I asked.
- Well I don’t have much time to go to all offices, so I need that one of you to go to the Spain and other to Australia.
- So where do you want to go? Asked Duncan.
- Mmmmh, let me think. I want to go to the Spain.
- Ok then I will go to Australia.
- Is that all dad? I asked.
- Yeah.
- Then I am going.
- Where? Asked dad.
- I am meeting with Monika.
- Ok.
- Bye.
- Bye.
I went out of the office and my mobile phone started to ring. It was Monika.
- Hey where are you? She asked.
- Near the restaurant after 10 minutes I will be there.
- Ok. I am waiting.
- Hi Monika. I said.
- Hi. Where have you been?
- At fathers office.
- Oh.
- Next week I am leaving.
- Really? Where?
- To the Spain.
- I want to go there too. I don’t wanna live here anymore.
- It’s for Oliver?
- Yeah he break my heart and I wanna run from it.
- So go with me.
- Really?
- Yeah. Why not. I will need a help and you will help me.
- Yes sure.
- Let’s eat and then we have to go to buy tickets.
- Yeah. Ok.
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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great beginnig... i loved
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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sounds good
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Thanks girls
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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I want father like that too. Great 1st part.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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I wish my dad could give me that choice; Spain or Australia.
Nice beginning
Nice beginning
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Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Oooohhh....!!!! Finally more Laura....
p.s.....there will be a lot of fun in this story....aaa????
p.s.....there will be a lot of fun in this story....aaa????
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Monikute wrote:Oooohhh....!!!! Finally more Laura....
p.s.....there will be a lot of fun in this story....aaa????
ammmmm, mmmmmmh ..................
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Part 2
After few days.
- Finally you arrived. Said Monika.
- I am sorry. There was a traffic jam.
- Oh, ok.
Plane took off. After two hours we were at Spain.
- I feel very tired. Said Monika.
- You know me too. Let’s go to the hotel and tomorrow we will go to the office.
- Agree.
At the hotel.
- These beds look very comfortable. I said.
- Yeah.
- Let’s look what a Spain TV shows.
- It looks boring.
- Mmmmh. Oh some kind of concert. Spanish boy band.
- They look quite good, especially that one.
- Maybe, maybe, but I would prefer that one blond. You know if you want to watch TV watch, but I am going to sleep.
- Ok go sleep. I am going to bath.
When I waked up Monika was sitting in balcony and drinking coffee.
- Morning! I said.
- Morning! Said Monika.
- What time is it?
- It’s 7:30. Do you want a coffee?
- No thanks. I will dress up and we will go.
- Yes, sure.
We went out of the hotel.
- Is it far away? Asked Monika.
- Don’t ask me that. I have the address if we won’t found we will ask people.
- How?
- In Spanish.
- Do you know how to speak?
- Well a bit, but I think that we won’t need to ask, because it is here.
- That’s good.
- Morning! Can I help you? Asked man.
- Morning! Yeah you can. I am owner’s daughter.
- Oh miss’s Andrea. We were waiting you.
- So here I am. Can you show were is my cabinet.
- Yes, please follow me. This one.
- Thanks. Can you tell me about everything here?
- Of- course. Tomorrow we are having a party. There will be all workers and all singers which CD’s we are making.
- Can you show me the list?
- Yes, here it is.
- Well let’s look. This one I know that one too. D’Nash….. is this new group? I haven’t heard it.
- It’s very popular group in Spain and after your speech they will sing.
- Speech?
- Yeah speech. Don’t worry you don’t have to write it. Your father has sent it to us.
- Oh that’s good. I said and smiled.
- Have you got dresses for tomorrow?
- No we don’t have.
- That’s not very good.
- We didn’t know.
- This is our fault that we didn’t tell it. After lunch a driver will drive you to the shop.
- Ok, thanks.
- Not at all. This is our work.
After few days.
- Finally you arrived. Said Monika.
- I am sorry. There was a traffic jam.
- Oh, ok.
Plane took off. After two hours we were at Spain.
- I feel very tired. Said Monika.
- You know me too. Let’s go to the hotel and tomorrow we will go to the office.
- Agree.
At the hotel.
- These beds look very comfortable. I said.
- Yeah.
- Let’s look what a Spain TV shows.
- It looks boring.
- Mmmmh. Oh some kind of concert. Spanish boy band.
- They look quite good, especially that one.
- Maybe, maybe, but I would prefer that one blond. You know if you want to watch TV watch, but I am going to sleep.
- Ok go sleep. I am going to bath.
When I waked up Monika was sitting in balcony and drinking coffee.
- Morning! I said.
- Morning! Said Monika.
- What time is it?
- It’s 7:30. Do you want a coffee?
- No thanks. I will dress up and we will go.
- Yes, sure.
We went out of the hotel.
- Is it far away? Asked Monika.
- Don’t ask me that. I have the address if we won’t found we will ask people.
- How?
- In Spanish.
- Do you know how to speak?
- Well a bit, but I think that we won’t need to ask, because it is here.
- That’s good.
- Morning! Can I help you? Asked man.
- Morning! Yeah you can. I am owner’s daughter.
- Oh miss’s Andrea. We were waiting you.
- So here I am. Can you show were is my cabinet.
- Yes, please follow me. This one.
- Thanks. Can you tell me about everything here?
- Of- course. Tomorrow we are having a party. There will be all workers and all singers which CD’s we are making.
- Can you show me the list?
- Yes, here it is.
- Well let’s look. This one I know that one too. D’Nash….. is this new group? I haven’t heard it.
- It’s very popular group in Spain and after your speech they will sing.
- Speech?
- Yeah speech. Don’t worry you don’t have to write it. Your father has sent it to us.
- Oh that’s good. I said and smiled.
- Have you got dresses for tomorrow?
- No we don’t have.
- That’s not very good.
- We didn’t know.
- This is our fault that we didn’t tell it. After lunch a driver will drive you to the shop.
- Ok, thanks.
- Not at all. This is our work.
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This is good I like it
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Spanish TV boring? lol They are about to meet D'Nash. What kind of dresses will they buy?
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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oohh... the boys in that party
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Party timeee
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Oh...party with D'Nash It will be fun!
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More you will get a bit later!!
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Part 3
- That man is very friendly. Said Monika.
- Yeah.
- Where I will sit?
- This cabinet is very big, so I will ask them if they can bring one more table.
- Ok.
Somebody knocked on the door.
- Please come in.
- Hello. I am a driver. Diego told that I have to take you to the shop.
- Hi. Well yes. We were waiting you.
- So, we can go.
- Sure.
After 15 minutes.
- Let’s go to this shop. That dress is very beautiful. Said Monika.
- Ok. Go to try it on. I will look there. I said.
- Yeah.
- What such a beautiful girl is doing here? Asked man’s voice.
- Sorry? I said and turned to him.
- Have you forgotten me?
- OMG!!!! Daniel!!!
- It’s really me. He said and smiled.
- What are you doing here?
- Well I am living here and come to shop and you?
- I arrived to work here to my father’s office.
- That’s amazing. I missed you a lot.
- Really?
- Yeah. Four years passed, but I still love you.
- Daniel……
- I know that you don’t feel the same for me.
- I didn’t say so. You were my first true love and I still feel something for you.
- Are you alone here?
- No with Monika.
- Oh, Monika. How is she?
- Well you can ask her yourself there she is coming.
- Hi, Monika.
- Oh, hi Daniel.
- How are you?
- I am fine. And you?
- Well amazing, I met Andrea again. And tell me how is Oliver?
- I don’t know. We divorced.
- Oh, didn’t know that. I am sorry.
- Everything is ok.
- Have you planned something for tomorrow? I asked.
- No.
- Ok, then tomorrow you are going to the party with me.
- Mmmmh. It sounds interesting. When does is starts?
- At 7 p.m.
- I will come at 6 p.m. to take you. Where are you staying?
- At the hotel near my fathers office.
- I know it. Ok I have to go. See you tomorrow. Said Daniel and kissed me.
- Bye.
- Do you still love him? Asked Monika.
- I guess.
- No, you don’t.
- Why?
- Because your eyes didn’t started to shine when you saw him
- But my heart almost stopped when he kissed me. I said and started to laugh.
- That man is very friendly. Said Monika.
- Yeah.
- Where I will sit?
- This cabinet is very big, so I will ask them if they can bring one more table.
- Ok.
Somebody knocked on the door.
- Please come in.
- Hello. I am a driver. Diego told that I have to take you to the shop.
- Hi. Well yes. We were waiting you.
- So, we can go.
- Sure.
After 15 minutes.
- Let’s go to this shop. That dress is very beautiful. Said Monika.
- Ok. Go to try it on. I will look there. I said.
- Yeah.
- What such a beautiful girl is doing here? Asked man’s voice.
- Sorry? I said and turned to him.
- Have you forgotten me?
- OMG!!!! Daniel!!!
- It’s really me. He said and smiled.
- What are you doing here?
- Well I am living here and come to shop and you?
- I arrived to work here to my father’s office.
- That’s amazing. I missed you a lot.
- Really?
- Yeah. Four years passed, but I still love you.
- Daniel……
- I know that you don’t feel the same for me.
- I didn’t say so. You were my first true love and I still feel something for you.
- Are you alone here?
- No with Monika.
- Oh, Monika. How is she?
- Well you can ask her yourself there she is coming.
- Hi, Monika.
- Oh, hi Daniel.
- How are you?
- I am fine. And you?
- Well amazing, I met Andrea again. And tell me how is Oliver?
- I don’t know. We divorced.
- Oh, didn’t know that. I am sorry.
- Everything is ok.
- Have you planned something for tomorrow? I asked.
- No.
- Ok, then tomorrow you are going to the party with me.
- Mmmmh. It sounds interesting. When does is starts?
- At 7 p.m.
- I will come at 6 p.m. to take you. Where are you staying?
- At the hotel near my fathers office.
- I know it. Ok I have to go. See you tomorrow. Said Daniel and kissed me.
- Bye.
- Do you still love him? Asked Monika.
- I guess.
- No, you don’t.
- Why?
- Because your eyes didn’t started to shine when you saw him
- But my heart almost stopped when he kissed me. I said and started to laugh.
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she doesn't like him
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Wonder if Daniel is hot
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