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Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END

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Post  emilia Sun May 04, 2008 1:39 pm

great Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Sun May 04, 2008 2:44 pm

oohhh very good Smile Smile
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Post  Sergo Sun May 04, 2008 4:28 pm

Poor Mikelito monkey
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Post  Monikute Mon May 05, 2008 6:53 pm

Sergo wrote:Poor Mikelito monkey


Oh Sergo...he's poor just for now..... Laughing believe me Cool
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Post  Sergo Mon May 05, 2008 7:35 pm

Good. Twisted Evil Laughing
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Post  demi Mon May 05, 2008 8:16 pm

Very Happy good part Very Happy
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Post  Laura Tue May 06, 2008 11:03 pm

A short part


Part 11


I waked up at night and looked to the clock. It was 2 a.m. I went down stairs where Mikel was watching TV. TV was still on, but Mikel was sleeping. He looked so sweet. I understood that my feelings for him are serious. I fall in love with him. I went to my room to take a blanket for him. Also I took a sheet of paper and a pencil. I sat down on a sofa next to Mikel and started to draw him sleeping. On the other side of paper I wrote “Why again?”. I fall asleep. In the morning. I waked up and looked to the sofa where Mikel was sleeping, but he wasn’t there. I heard some noise at the kitchen and went there. He was drinking a coffee and looking to the paper where I have drawn him.
- You know you draw very beautiful. He said.
- Thanks.
- But I don’t understand one thing.
- What?
- Why did you wrote these words “Why again?”
That moment I didn’t knew what to say.
- Mmmm. Nothing important.
- Really?
- Yeah.
- Let’s go.
- Where?
- To one very beautiful place.
- Ok.
We went to the beach. We sat down on sand and started to talk.
- Today weather is wonderful.
- Yeah and I wanna go to swim.
- You don’t have a swimsuit.
- So what?
I stood up and ran to the sea. I went into the water with my clothes. Mikel came after me. We were swimming it was so fun. Mikel swam to me and hugged me. He was so near me that I felt his breathing. I looked into his green eyes and said:
- Why again I fall in love?
After those my words I felt his lips on mine’s. That kiss was very sweet. I felt that my heart was beating like crazy. I felt that my soul got wings.
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Post  emilia Tue May 06, 2008 11:36 pm

Great Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Wed May 07, 2008 12:17 am

this was cute Razz Razz Razz
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Post  Sergo Wed May 07, 2008 3:36 pm

Sweeeeet. Cool
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Post  Monikute Wed May 07, 2008 4:41 pm

OH!!!!! Twisted Evil I like it....
Buckis vandenyje Laughing
I said Sergo...he's not poor Laughing Cool
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Post  Hen «3 Thu May 08, 2008 9:53 am

I love this story amazing parts :d
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Post  demi Thu May 08, 2008 12:31 pm

really sweet I love you
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Post  Prisca Thu May 08, 2008 4:06 pm

more Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  Laura Thu May 08, 2008 7:36 pm

Part 12


Madrid. At the Andreas house. I am so bored. All weekend alone. Finally Monika today is coming back. I heard a door bell maybe she is there. I opened the door.
- Oliver? What are you doing here? I asked.
- Hi, Andrea. I come to see Monika.
- She is no at home.
- Can I come in?
- Yes, sure.
We went to the living room.
- Where is she? Asked Oliver.
- At Barcelona.
- What is she doing there?
- Having fun. From where did you know that we are here?
- Daniel told me.
- Oh, someone is talking too much.
- Sorry?
- Nothing.
When we were talking I heard a door bell again.
- Feel like at home. I am going to open the door.
- Ok.
I opened the door. There was Ony.
- What do you want?
- Hi. I missed you too. Can I come in?
- Yeah.
- I wanted to talk about that what’s happened between us.
- It was a mistake.
- I made you feel happy.
- Ony that’s enough.
He hugged me and wanted to kiss me when doors opened. It was Monika and Mikel.
- Monika!!!!
- Hi, you both.
- You have a guest. I said.
- Whom? Asked Monika.
- Go to the living room he is waiting you.
- Ok.





At the living room. Monika and Oliver.
- What the hell are you doing here? I asked.
- Hi my love. Said Oliver.
- You break my heart and now my love.
- I now that I made a mistake. I still love you.
- Have you finished?
He grabbed my hand.
- Let my hand it hurts. I said.
Then to the living room came Mikel.
- Let her hand. If you won’t I don’t know what I am going to do for you. Said Mikel.
- Who do you think you are? Asked Oliver.
- That is not your business. Said Mikel and hit Oliver. Leave now. Mikel shouted.
- I am going, but Monika I won’t leave everything like this.
I still hear his words in my ears. I ran to my room. Mikel came after me.
- Who is he? Asked Mikel.
- My ex-boyfriend.
- How he dare to say such a things for you.
- I don’t know, but he can do everything.
- I won’t let him.
- Mikel between us there can’t be anything. That kiss was a mistake.
I looked into his eyes they become very sad. He went out. It made me to think that maybe I made the biggest mistake.
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Post  Prisca Thu May 08, 2008 7:38 pm

a hugeeee mistake Shocked Shocked
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Post  emilia Thu May 08, 2008 7:39 pm

i'm speechless
but this was great part Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Thu May 08, 2008 7:44 pm

don't say those things to mikeeeeel. WTF
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Post  Monikute Fri May 09, 2008 3:29 pm

Oh..... Sad poor Mikel...but anyway...I hope that everything will be ok with Mikel Cool ....(I now that Laughing )
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Post  Prisca Fri May 09, 2008 3:39 pm

oh ^^ Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Post  Laura Fri May 09, 2008 9:05 pm

Thanks girls for your comments Smile Smile Smile
Soon more Wink Wink
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Post  emilia Fri May 09, 2008 9:06 pm

How soon? Razz
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Post  Laura Fri May 09, 2008 9:14 pm

Maybe tomorrow Razz Razz
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Post  emilia Fri May 09, 2008 9:17 pm

maybe i have to wait then... Razz
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Post  Laura Fri May 09, 2008 9:20 pm

Maybe Laughing Laughing Laughing
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