Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
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Sergo
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emilia
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Laura
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
oohhh very good
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
Poor Mikelito
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
Sergo wrote:Poor Mikelito
Oh Sergo...he's poor just for now..... believe me
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
A short part
Part 11
I waked up at night and looked to the clock. It was 2 a.m. I went down stairs where Mikel was watching TV. TV was still on, but Mikel was sleeping. He looked so sweet. I understood that my feelings for him are serious. I fall in love with him. I went to my room to take a blanket for him. Also I took a sheet of paper and a pencil. I sat down on a sofa next to Mikel and started to draw him sleeping. On the other side of paper I wrote “Why again?”. I fall asleep. In the morning. I waked up and looked to the sofa where Mikel was sleeping, but he wasn’t there. I heard some noise at the kitchen and went there. He was drinking a coffee and looking to the paper where I have drawn him.
- You know you draw very beautiful. He said.
- Thanks.
- But I don’t understand one thing.
- What?
- Why did you wrote these words “Why again?”
That moment I didn’t knew what to say.
- Mmmm. Nothing important.
- Really?
- Yeah.
- Let’s go.
- Where?
- To one very beautiful place.
- Ok.
We went to the beach. We sat down on sand and started to talk.
- Today weather is wonderful.
- Yeah and I wanna go to swim.
- You don’t have a swimsuit.
- So what?
I stood up and ran to the sea. I went into the water with my clothes. Mikel came after me. We were swimming it was so fun. Mikel swam to me and hugged me. He was so near me that I felt his breathing. I looked into his green eyes and said:
- Why again I fall in love?
After those my words I felt his lips on mine’s. That kiss was very sweet. I felt that my heart was beating like crazy. I felt that my soul got wings.
Part 11
I waked up at night and looked to the clock. It was 2 a.m. I went down stairs where Mikel was watching TV. TV was still on, but Mikel was sleeping. He looked so sweet. I understood that my feelings for him are serious. I fall in love with him. I went to my room to take a blanket for him. Also I took a sheet of paper and a pencil. I sat down on a sofa next to Mikel and started to draw him sleeping. On the other side of paper I wrote “Why again?”. I fall asleep. In the morning. I waked up and looked to the sofa where Mikel was sleeping, but he wasn’t there. I heard some noise at the kitchen and went there. He was drinking a coffee and looking to the paper where I have drawn him.
- You know you draw very beautiful. He said.
- Thanks.
- But I don’t understand one thing.
- What?
- Why did you wrote these words “Why again?”
That moment I didn’t knew what to say.
- Mmmm. Nothing important.
- Really?
- Yeah.
- Let’s go.
- Where?
- To one very beautiful place.
- Ok.
We went to the beach. We sat down on sand and started to talk.
- Today weather is wonderful.
- Yeah and I wanna go to swim.
- You don’t have a swimsuit.
- So what?
I stood up and ran to the sea. I went into the water with my clothes. Mikel came after me. We were swimming it was so fun. Mikel swam to me and hugged me. He was so near me that I felt his breathing. I looked into his green eyes and said:
- Why again I fall in love?
After those my words I felt his lips on mine’s. That kiss was very sweet. I felt that my heart was beating like crazy. I felt that my soul got wings.
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
this was cute
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
OH!!!!! I like it....
Buckis vandenyje
I said Sergo...he's not poor
Buckis vandenyje
I said Sergo...he's not poor
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Part 12
Madrid. At the Andreas house. I am so bored. All weekend alone. Finally Monika today is coming back. I heard a door bell maybe she is there. I opened the door.
- Oliver? What are you doing here? I asked.
- Hi, Andrea. I come to see Monika.
- She is no at home.
- Can I come in?
- Yes, sure.
We went to the living room.
- Where is she? Asked Oliver.
- At Barcelona.
- What is she doing there?
- Having fun. From where did you know that we are here?
- Daniel told me.
- Oh, someone is talking too much.
- Sorry?
- Nothing.
When we were talking I heard a door bell again.
- Feel like at home. I am going to open the door.
- Ok.
I opened the door. There was Ony.
- What do you want?
- Hi. I missed you too. Can I come in?
- Yeah.
- I wanted to talk about that what’s happened between us.
- It was a mistake.
- I made you feel happy.
- Ony that’s enough.
He hugged me and wanted to kiss me when doors opened. It was Monika and Mikel.
- Monika!!!!
- Hi, you both.
- You have a guest. I said.
- Whom? Asked Monika.
- Go to the living room he is waiting you.
- Ok.
At the living room. Monika and Oliver.
- What the hell are you doing here? I asked.
- Hi my love. Said Oliver.
- You break my heart and now my love.
- I now that I made a mistake. I still love you.
- Have you finished?
He grabbed my hand.
- Let my hand it hurts. I said.
Then to the living room came Mikel.
- Let her hand. If you won’t I don’t know what I am going to do for you. Said Mikel.
- Who do you think you are? Asked Oliver.
- That is not your business. Said Mikel and hit Oliver. Leave now. Mikel shouted.
- I am going, but Monika I won’t leave everything like this.
I still hear his words in my ears. I ran to my room. Mikel came after me.
- Who is he? Asked Mikel.
- My ex-boyfriend.
- How he dare to say such a things for you.
- I don’t know, but he can do everything.
- I won’t let him.
- Mikel between us there can’t be anything. That kiss was a mistake.
I looked into his eyes they become very sad. He went out. It made me to think that maybe I made the biggest mistake.
Madrid. At the Andreas house. I am so bored. All weekend alone. Finally Monika today is coming back. I heard a door bell maybe she is there. I opened the door.
- Oliver? What are you doing here? I asked.
- Hi, Andrea. I come to see Monika.
- She is no at home.
- Can I come in?
- Yes, sure.
We went to the living room.
- Where is she? Asked Oliver.
- At Barcelona.
- What is she doing there?
- Having fun. From where did you know that we are here?
- Daniel told me.
- Oh, someone is talking too much.
- Sorry?
- Nothing.
When we were talking I heard a door bell again.
- Feel like at home. I am going to open the door.
- Ok.
I opened the door. There was Ony.
- What do you want?
- Hi. I missed you too. Can I come in?
- Yeah.
- I wanted to talk about that what’s happened between us.
- It was a mistake.
- I made you feel happy.
- Ony that’s enough.
He hugged me and wanted to kiss me when doors opened. It was Monika and Mikel.
- Monika!!!!
- Hi, you both.
- You have a guest. I said.
- Whom? Asked Monika.
- Go to the living room he is waiting you.
- Ok.
At the living room. Monika and Oliver.
- What the hell are you doing here? I asked.
- Hi my love. Said Oliver.
- You break my heart and now my love.
- I now that I made a mistake. I still love you.
- Have you finished?
He grabbed my hand.
- Let my hand it hurts. I said.
Then to the living room came Mikel.
- Let her hand. If you won’t I don’t know what I am going to do for you. Said Mikel.
- Who do you think you are? Asked Oliver.
- That is not your business. Said Mikel and hit Oliver. Leave now. Mikel shouted.
- I am going, but Monika I won’t leave everything like this.
I still hear his words in my ears. I ran to my room. Mikel came after me.
- Who is he? Asked Mikel.
- My ex-boyfriend.
- How he dare to say such a things for you.
- I don’t know, but he can do everything.
- I won’t let him.
- Mikel between us there can’t be anything. That kiss was a mistake.
I looked into his eyes they become very sad. He went out. It made me to think that maybe I made the biggest mistake.
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
a hugeeee mistake
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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i'm speechless
but this was great part
but this was great part
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
don't say those things to mikeeeeel.
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
Oh..... poor Mikel...but anyway...I hope that everything will be ok with Mikel ....(I now that )
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Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
Thanks girls for your comments
Soon more
Soon more
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
Maybe tomorrow
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
maybe i have to wait then...
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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