Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
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Sergo
girl1035
emilia
Prisca
Laura
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
oppss we have to wait
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
Tomorrow is good
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Part 13
At the morning. I went to the kitchen. There I found Andrea. She looked very sad.
- Hey what’s happened? I asked.
- I fall in love with Ony and I don’t know what to do. And what happened for you? Yesterday Mikel left very sad.
- After Oliver’s words that he won’t leave everything like this I told to Mikel that between us there can’t be anything.
- What have you done? Asked Andrea.
- What do you mean?
- You really made a big mistake. I saw your eyes. They were shining like small child when he gets a candy. For all my life I haven’t seen you happy like now. Even when you were with Oliver. You fall in love and now for real. And oh my good when Mikel looks at you…… into his eyes you can see everything what he is thinking about and what he is feeling. Don’t make a mistake again. Look into his eyes very good, because eyes says a lot.
When I heard these Andrea’s words I become worry.
After a month. I look bad. After that day when I say those words to Mikel I became very sad, I don’t go anywhere, I don’t talk with people except Andrea. Everyone saw that something is wrong with me. At the company.
- Let’s go to have a lunch. Said Andrea.
- No thanks. I said.
- Come on everyone is going and you not.
- I have to do a lot of work.
- Ok, then.
Andrea left. Past 10 minutes. I heard steps. I thought that Andrea left something. Doors opened, but there wasn’t Andrea. There was Oliver.
- What are you doing here? I shouted. Please go away. I don’t wanna see you anymore and listen your stupid fairytales.
- No I won’t go anywhere. I came here and you will listen what I am going to say. It doesn’t matter if you want or not.
He come closer to me and grabbed my hands. I started to shout for help, but no one come.
- Now you are going to pay for everything. He said. You didn’t wanted to be with me. You chose that singer. What’s his name? Mikel?
In the morning. I waked up at the hospital. I saw near me sitting Andrea and Ony. They were sleeping. I still couldn’t understand what’s happened. Had Oliver hit me? They waked up.
- Hey, Monika. How are you? Asked Andrea.
- It hurts everywhere. Where is Oliver?
- He is at the jail. Diego came and he saw everything, so he called to the police.
- Where is Daniel? Why are you with Ony?
- He again went to the Portugal and Ony was the only person that I could call, of-course Mikel too.
- Mikel? Is he here?
- Yeah.
- We have to go. Said Ony. Mikel is going to be with you.
When Ony said that Mikel is going to be with me I thought that my heart will stop. They went and Mikel came. I didn’t said anything to him. I was afraid to look into his eyes that the last time I saw sad. I turned my eyes to the window.
At the morning. I went to the kitchen. There I found Andrea. She looked very sad.
- Hey what’s happened? I asked.
- I fall in love with Ony and I don’t know what to do. And what happened for you? Yesterday Mikel left very sad.
- After Oliver’s words that he won’t leave everything like this I told to Mikel that between us there can’t be anything.
- What have you done? Asked Andrea.
- What do you mean?
- You really made a big mistake. I saw your eyes. They were shining like small child when he gets a candy. For all my life I haven’t seen you happy like now. Even when you were with Oliver. You fall in love and now for real. And oh my good when Mikel looks at you…… into his eyes you can see everything what he is thinking about and what he is feeling. Don’t make a mistake again. Look into his eyes very good, because eyes says a lot.
When I heard these Andrea’s words I become worry.
After a month. I look bad. After that day when I say those words to Mikel I became very sad, I don’t go anywhere, I don’t talk with people except Andrea. Everyone saw that something is wrong with me. At the company.
- Let’s go to have a lunch. Said Andrea.
- No thanks. I said.
- Come on everyone is going and you not.
- I have to do a lot of work.
- Ok, then.
Andrea left. Past 10 minutes. I heard steps. I thought that Andrea left something. Doors opened, but there wasn’t Andrea. There was Oliver.
- What are you doing here? I shouted. Please go away. I don’t wanna see you anymore and listen your stupid fairytales.
- No I won’t go anywhere. I came here and you will listen what I am going to say. It doesn’t matter if you want or not.
He come closer to me and grabbed my hands. I started to shout for help, but no one come.
- Now you are going to pay for everything. He said. You didn’t wanted to be with me. You chose that singer. What’s his name? Mikel?
In the morning. I waked up at the hospital. I saw near me sitting Andrea and Ony. They were sleeping. I still couldn’t understand what’s happened. Had Oliver hit me? They waked up.
- Hey, Monika. How are you? Asked Andrea.
- It hurts everywhere. Where is Oliver?
- He is at the jail. Diego came and he saw everything, so he called to the police.
- Where is Daniel? Why are you with Ony?
- He again went to the Portugal and Ony was the only person that I could call, of-course Mikel too.
- Mikel? Is he here?
- Yeah.
- We have to go. Said Ony. Mikel is going to be with you.
When Ony said that Mikel is going to be with me I thought that my heart will stop. They went and Mikel came. I didn’t said anything to him. I was afraid to look into his eyes that the last time I saw sad. I turned my eyes to the window.
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
great part again
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
that oliver bastard
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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what happened to her?
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Prisca wrote:that oliver bastard
Oh yes he is real bastard
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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WHAT THE FUCK OLIVER!!
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Thanks girls
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Part 14
I didn’t said anything to him, because I thought that maybe he don’t wanna talk with me after that what I have told. He started to talk first.
- So how are you? It’s nothing bad that I am here? He asked.
- No. Everything is ok. I just can’t believe that you came after everything that I said for you. I thought that you don’t wanna see me.
- You are wrong. That evening when I saw you, your eyes….. I saw in them something that made me feel something strange. It made my eyes shine.
I felt that a tear fall down. Passed four days.
- Mikel can you drove me to the jail? I asked.
- For what?
- Don’t ask.
- Ok.
I went to see Oliver. He was shocked that I came.
- You know asshole. I hate you. Then I hit to him and left. Mikel was waiting me in the car.
- Now we can go. I said.
- Where do you want?
- To the company please.
When we came in there was a lunch. On my table I found a note.
“Hola chica !!!! I miss you….
So at 8 p.m. at the café
Your old friend Duncan”
When I saw this note I was a bit surprised that after long time of Duncan’s love without answer he wants to meet with me.
- From whom that note? Asked Mikel. It’s another ex-boyfriend?
- No he is old friend. Andreas brother. He wants to meet me.
Then I looked into Mikel’s eyes. They become sad again.
- Is something wrong? Are you jealous? I asked, but he didn’t answered.
So I went to meet Duncan. We have had a good time. We talked a lot. Next day when me and Andrea came to the office we found Mikel sitting in my place.
- What are you doing here? Maybe something happened? I asked.
- No. I just wanted to ask how was date with that old friend.
- It was good and Mikel I want you to ask one thing as a guy. Would you want to be with a girl after few months relationship? Or maybe after long time?
- Well…. I think that I would want to be with her.
- Oh than it means that I have a hope that he will be with me and that he can love me.
His eyes become sad, but he didn’t knew that I am talking about him, that I wanna be with him.
- Ok. I have to go. Mikel said.
- Maybe you wanna come to me today? I asked.
- Yeah, sure.
- Ok than see you later.
At the Andreas house.
- Hi Mikel. I said.
- Hi.
- Maybe you wanna drink something?
- Something from alcohol please.
- Ok and Mikel I wanna ask one more question.
- Go on.
- How could I ask that guy if he is not mad on me and if he loves me?
- I don’t know. Maybe just tell everything into his eyes. I think that he will understand. Well I have to go. Bye.
He stood up and went out very fast that I couldn’t say anything.
I didn’t said anything to him, because I thought that maybe he don’t wanna talk with me after that what I have told. He started to talk first.
- So how are you? It’s nothing bad that I am here? He asked.
- No. Everything is ok. I just can’t believe that you came after everything that I said for you. I thought that you don’t wanna see me.
- You are wrong. That evening when I saw you, your eyes….. I saw in them something that made me feel something strange. It made my eyes shine.
I felt that a tear fall down. Passed four days.
- Mikel can you drove me to the jail? I asked.
- For what?
- Don’t ask.
- Ok.
I went to see Oliver. He was shocked that I came.
- You know asshole. I hate you. Then I hit to him and left. Mikel was waiting me in the car.
- Now we can go. I said.
- Where do you want?
- To the company please.
When we came in there was a lunch. On my table I found a note.
“Hola chica !!!! I miss you….
So at 8 p.m. at the café
Your old friend Duncan”
When I saw this note I was a bit surprised that after long time of Duncan’s love without answer he wants to meet with me.
- From whom that note? Asked Mikel. It’s another ex-boyfriend?
- No he is old friend. Andreas brother. He wants to meet me.
Then I looked into Mikel’s eyes. They become sad again.
- Is something wrong? Are you jealous? I asked, but he didn’t answered.
So I went to meet Duncan. We have had a good time. We talked a lot. Next day when me and Andrea came to the office we found Mikel sitting in my place.
- What are you doing here? Maybe something happened? I asked.
- No. I just wanted to ask how was date with that old friend.
- It was good and Mikel I want you to ask one thing as a guy. Would you want to be with a girl after few months relationship? Or maybe after long time?
- Well…. I think that I would want to be with her.
- Oh than it means that I have a hope that he will be with me and that he can love me.
His eyes become sad, but he didn’t knew that I am talking about him, that I wanna be with him.
- Ok. I have to go. Mikel said.
- Maybe you wanna come to me today? I asked.
- Yeah, sure.
- Ok than see you later.
At the Andreas house.
- Hi Mikel. I said.
- Hi.
- Maybe you wanna drink something?
- Something from alcohol please.
- Ok and Mikel I wanna ask one more question.
- Go on.
- How could I ask that guy if he is not mad on me and if he loves me?
- I don’t know. Maybe just tell everything into his eyes. I think that he will understand. Well I have to go. Bye.
He stood up and went out very fast that I couldn’t say anything.
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
he should stay there, not run
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Great part as usual
now i can go to sleep
now i can go to sleep
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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emilia wrote:Great part as usual
now i can go to sleep
Why you couldn't?
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Of course i could went earlier but soon i have to go to sleep anyway.Because i have to wake up so early in morning...
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Oh I get it
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Poor Mikel is too sad to listen.
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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But Sergo..Monica was talking about him and he will know that...anyway
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Re: Entra en mi vida- Part 20 THE END
I knew she did but he didn't.
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Sergo wrote:I knew she did but he didn't.
Oh that Mikel
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