*Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!

thanks guys maybe more later

AAAAAAAAAAW!

woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

i loved this away of propose

i was gunna have it on the beach - then i realised there is no beach in madrid, as its in the middle of spain so i did some research and the terrace thingies came up so they got engaged on a terrace

Part 23

The next day

Lily was woken suddenly as a woman came running into the bedroom and sat on her bed, and bounced on it until she opened her eyes.
“eeeh… morning?” lily said still half asleep.
“Isn’t this great?” The woman asked. “We’re going to be like sisters!” The woman was smiling, her teeth were pearly white. She had blonde hair and icy blue eyes. She was in a baby blue dressing gown with white fluff around the edges. She had a pearl necklace on with matching earrings.
“Pardon me, I don’t want to seem rude, but what the HELL are you doing in my room?!” Lily asked confused. She looked to the empty space next to her, and wondered where Ony was, and how this lunatic got in here!
“Oh I am sorry! I forgot to introduce myself! I’m Tet.” She said with another smile.
“Tet?”
“Yes! Tet!”
“Tet? Ohhh! Tet!” Lily smiled. “Hi!”
“Hi!”
“So how come you are here? I thought you were still on holiday?” Lily asked.
“Well, I was but I came back last night, and you and Ony were already asleep, and when Ony came down this morning he told us all about it! It sounded so romantic!” Tet said.
“Yes… it was.” Lily said with a glazed look over her face as she reminisced.
“So lets see the ring!”
Lily held out her hand, with the MASSIVE diamond on it.
“You can’t even see the dent where the titanic hit it!” Tet laughed.
“Is it really that big?”
“HELLO! You could live off that ring!”
“Aww…”

Meanwhile downstairs.

“So, you sneaky man! You are going to be married!” Mikel said with a huge smile.
“You know I really didn’t see this coming!” Basty said.
“No, nor me!” Ony replied.
“If you ask me, I thought you would be the last of us to get married.” Javi laughed.
“And why do you say that?” Ony asked deadly seriously.
“Well…you know…” Javi’s laughing stopped.
“No I don’t, enlighten me.” Ony crossed his arms.
“Well, er.. before you went to England…. You… er… had a lot of…girls… and didn’t… really seem to…keep them.” Javi trailed off.
“Are you saying I was a man whore?!” Ony asked, a little bit pissed off.
“No not exactly… I was just…”
“Stop digging before you reach Australia!” Ony laughed. “I know I slept around, but I’ve changed. I’ve grown up. She has changed me for the better.”
Javi laughed nervously. “You got me there!” he slapped Ony on the back.
“So…” Basty changed the subject sensing the tension. “When you said you had something to do…”
“I was buying the ring, yes.” Ony said with a smile.
“Oh you little romancer you….” Mikel giggled.

Upstairs

There was a knock on the door.
“That will be Rachel.” Tet said.
“Rachel?”
“Yes! The infamous copy-cat designer! She will design you anything, from D&G to Prada, from Vivienne Westwood to Ralf Lauren! She fabulous!”
“Oh… right… and why do I need a designer again?”
“Now you are in the public eye you have to look amazing 24/7!”
“Oh okay…”
Rachel walked in dressed in a long robe made of satin. She seemed to float above the ground. She was followed by two other women, but they didn’t look as good as her obviously.
“Where is the model?”
“She is here!” tet said as she pointed at Lily.
“Stand.” Rachel barked.
Lily did as she was told.
“Turn.” Lily did as she was told, again. “Hmm… this could be challenging.” She snapped her fingers and the two women came rushing forward. She muttered something to them in Italien. And then shouted at Lily “DON’T SLOUCH!”
“Will that be all?” Tet asked.
“Yes, I have my measurements.” Rachel said and left.

As soon as Rachel had left, there was another knock at the door. It was man this time.
“Ahh George darling!” Tet said as she gave him a peck on the cheek.
“Hello. I am here to see the future Mrs. Ony.”
Tet once again pointed at Lily.
“Hi.” Lily waved.
“Here is your schedule miss.” He handed her a piece of paper, filled with times and places to be. There were public appearances with Ony, a performance she had to be at, lunch with some people she didn’t know. She had only been engaged for less than 24 hours and she already had a sister, a designer, and a schedule! This was madness.

What the?
First of all... My picture of Tet is a girl from the countryside in the 1950's
Then the rest was just weird

well she meant to be like from the 1950's or whatever,by the way she dresses,but she is just in modern circumstances kinda...
i guess im not very good at characterisation.

well that all people appearing sounds very crazy

wow, that sounds a bit.. hard

“Here is your schedule miss.”

eh.. ... I wanna more!

glad you like it more tomorrw

tomorrow?
awesome!

yeah, i try and post as much as i can on the weekend, then less in the week with school and crap

great

great part!! <3

heya peeps... sorry i said that i would post a part on sunday, and then didnt post one. i've had a whole load of homework (blame Charles Dickens & I.T. Courswork ) but my deadlines are on wednesday and thursday so possible new part then...

ok... no problem...

I understand completely. School sucks.
Can't wait

Its been a long time coming, but here it is

Part 24

“Can we get these boys into styling please?” There was a faint shout coming from somewhere.
“That’s my cue baby, I’ve got to go…” Ony said as he leaned in to kiss Lily.
“Sure thing…” she replied. “Hurry back!” she blew him a kiss as he went through the door. He caught it and put it on his lips.

Ony went to find the styling section and met the other boys.
“Hey dude.” Mikel said.” How are you?”
Ony merely looked at him with a glazed look on his face.
“I guess everything is good, looking at you!”
“Its amazing, I am so totally smitten!” Ony replied with a huge smile.
“Good for you mate!” Basty said as he smacked him on the back.
“You know I really don’t wanna do this opening today.” Javi said.
“Oh it will be fine! All we have to do is smile, compliment the work of the doctors and nurses that are gunna work in this new wing of the hospital, and sing acapella.” Mikel smiled.
“Yeah I guess… but I dunno, hospitals freak me out.”
“Well know one has done anything here yet, so I wouldn’t worry.” Ony answered.
By this time they were already dressed and prepped. Time to go and face the music.


“This sucks.” Lily thought. “I am so bored! I gunna go find something to do.”
She left the room, and explored the quiet hospital. She stumbled upon the children’s ward and it was play time. She told the nurse in charge why she was there and asked if she could play with the children. She was allowed too as soon as she said she was with d’nash. She was having such fun, the best part was the smiles on the children’s faces.


*Meanwhile*


The boys went out to the front of the hospital where they were greeted by photographers and news reporters. They started the interview and did their thing. After a few minutes there were a photographer and a journalist stood at the back of the crowd.
One whispered to the other “Look, I’m tired of this crap, it’s the same old, same old. Let’s see what we can dig up.”

Off they went exploring the rest of the hospital. They of course came across Lily, and took pictures. They would never know how many people those pictures upset.

Upset who?

you'll have to wait and see

post it now

i havent written it! new part tomorrow

who


great part

Poor Lily. This is awesome. More?

great part!
more nooooow