Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
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Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
This ... was ... so ... sad. I had tears in my eyes when they were saying goodbye to each other. I hope for more today.
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Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
How sad
Great part though
Great part though
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Ididn't get a mail
something is wrong with my msn now
mas partes imke
something is wrong with my msn now
mas partes imke
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aaaaw so sweet! and the toy car!
great parts!
morrrre!
great parts!
morrrre!
Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
This was so sad part..
Please, post more soon!
I wanna know what's happening to them...
Please, post more soon!
I wanna know what's happening to them...
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Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
As I said, the new part!
Part 10 (part 9 is 2 posts further!)
14 July 2008
Age: 25
'Catedral de Santa Maria de la Sede was begun in 1402, with construction continuing into the 16th century. It is the largest of all Roman Catholic cathedrals and also the largest Medieval Gothic religious building, in terms of both area and volume. It is 76 by 115 metres, and was built to cover the land previously occupied by the Almohad Mosque. Its central nave rises to an 42 metres and even the side chapels seem tall enough to contain an ordinary church. Its main altarpiece is considered the largest in the Christian world.'
Chasity was telling about the cathedral to a group of tourists. After Javi left she studied Tourism to become a tourguide. While concentrating on her study she slowly began to forget about Javi. Well, not completely of course. But she didn't thought a lot about him as she did before. Sometimes, when she's talking with her friends or family about something that can be compared with something with Javi or their friendship, she thinks about him but not for long because she knew she would probably never see him again.
Maybe in magazines, tv or radio. If she saw him there she didn't care much. But she never seen him in any of them anyway. She thought he'd became a spoilt, selfish brat because of the glamourworld he's living in. She didn't know if he still was a solo singer like a few years ago. She didn't care actually. She started to hate Javi a bit.
She always sent him a birthday card but never got any back from him. She called him many times but he never picked up. She tried to reach his parents to ask if she could come along but they never had time nor Javi.
She gave the hope up and started her own career, bought a house and made some new friends. From then Javi became less important to her day by day. She didn't even know how he looked like now.
Now she stood in front of the Santa Maria Catedral in Sevilla doing her work. And she did her work good. Oh yes, she still lived in Sevilla in a pretty big apartment not so far from her parents. She earnt good and got promotion many times.
When the tour was finished she had the opportunity to relax at a restaurant. She step in and sat down. Immediately a waiter came to take her order. 'Just a capuccino,' she smiled.
She looked at the tv that was hanging on the wall in the restaurant. The news was on. It immediately started with this boyband which was amazingly popular at the moment. 'This week D'Nash started their Todo Va A Cambiar-tour, starting in Sevilla.' She saw how a few teenage girls in the restaurant yelled from happiness. Woohoo, she thought and the waiter brought her the capuccino. She paid and stirred with a spoon in the cup.
'The first concert will take place this evening in Sevilla. The tickets were sold out within two hours,' the news woman continued, 'tomorrow they will have a sign session in the biggest media shop in Sevilla. So be there!' she finished.
'Lovely,' Chasity said sarcastic and started taking a sip of the capuccino as it cooled down a bit. 'Do you still have the tickets?' she heard behind her.
'Yep, they are safely in my bag! I will protect them with my life!' another voice said.
'I still can't believe we're going to a concert of D'Nash!!'
'Me neither! Oooh I can't wait to see Mikel!'
'Basty!'
Typical teenage girls, Chasity thought and grinned. Suddenly her cellphone went off. She got a textmessage.
Hey sweetie! Where are you? Xx V.
It was Veronica, one of her best friends she met some day at a party.
@ Franco's. Why? X Chas she texted back.
Her phone went off again.
Got something to tell you! You won't believe it! Xx
Ok, come quick. My capuccino is almost empty haha! X
I'm coming in 10 min! Xx V.
Ok! I'm waiting with capuccino for you hehe X Chas
She didn't got a textmessage back.
10 minutes later she saw indeed Veronica coming in the restaurant. Chasity waved and Veronica came to sit on the opposite side of her.
'Want capuccino?' Chasity smiled.
'You know I don't like that. I'd prefer just cola,' she said and called for the waiter who took the order. Chasity ordered another capuccino.
'So, what's the thing you wanted to tell me and what I couldn't believe?' Chasity said. 'Ok, just listen carefully and don't interrupt me, ok?' she smiled.
Part 10 (part 9 is 2 posts further!)
14 July 2008
Age: 25
'Catedral de Santa Maria de la Sede was begun in 1402, with construction continuing into the 16th century. It is the largest of all Roman Catholic cathedrals and also the largest Medieval Gothic religious building, in terms of both area and volume. It is 76 by 115 metres, and was built to cover the land previously occupied by the Almohad Mosque. Its central nave rises to an 42 metres and even the side chapels seem tall enough to contain an ordinary church. Its main altarpiece is considered the largest in the Christian world.'
Chasity was telling about the cathedral to a group of tourists. After Javi left she studied Tourism to become a tourguide. While concentrating on her study she slowly began to forget about Javi. Well, not completely of course. But she didn't thought a lot about him as she did before. Sometimes, when she's talking with her friends or family about something that can be compared with something with Javi or their friendship, she thinks about him but not for long because she knew she would probably never see him again.
Maybe in magazines, tv or radio. If she saw him there she didn't care much. But she never seen him in any of them anyway. She thought he'd became a spoilt, selfish brat because of the glamourworld he's living in. She didn't know if he still was a solo singer like a few years ago. She didn't care actually. She started to hate Javi a bit.
She always sent him a birthday card but never got any back from him. She called him many times but he never picked up. She tried to reach his parents to ask if she could come along but they never had time nor Javi.
She gave the hope up and started her own career, bought a house and made some new friends. From then Javi became less important to her day by day. She didn't even know how he looked like now.
Now she stood in front of the Santa Maria Catedral in Sevilla doing her work. And she did her work good. Oh yes, she still lived in Sevilla in a pretty big apartment not so far from her parents. She earnt good and got promotion many times.
When the tour was finished she had the opportunity to relax at a restaurant. She step in and sat down. Immediately a waiter came to take her order. 'Just a capuccino,' she smiled.
She looked at the tv that was hanging on the wall in the restaurant. The news was on. It immediately started with this boyband which was amazingly popular at the moment. 'This week D'Nash started their Todo Va A Cambiar-tour, starting in Sevilla.' She saw how a few teenage girls in the restaurant yelled from happiness. Woohoo, she thought and the waiter brought her the capuccino. She paid and stirred with a spoon in the cup.
'The first concert will take place this evening in Sevilla. The tickets were sold out within two hours,' the news woman continued, 'tomorrow they will have a sign session in the biggest media shop in Sevilla. So be there!' she finished.
'Lovely,' Chasity said sarcastic and started taking a sip of the capuccino as it cooled down a bit. 'Do you still have the tickets?' she heard behind her.
'Yep, they are safely in my bag! I will protect them with my life!' another voice said.
'I still can't believe we're going to a concert of D'Nash!!'
'Me neither! Oooh I can't wait to see Mikel!'
'Basty!'
Typical teenage girls, Chasity thought and grinned. Suddenly her cellphone went off. She got a textmessage.
Hey sweetie! Where are you? Xx V.
It was Veronica, one of her best friends she met some day at a party.
@ Franco's. Why? X Chas she texted back.
Her phone went off again.
Got something to tell you! You won't believe it! Xx
Ok, come quick. My capuccino is almost empty haha! X
I'm coming in 10 min! Xx V.
Ok! I'm waiting with capuccino for you hehe X Chas
She didn't got a textmessage back.
10 minutes later she saw indeed Veronica coming in the restaurant. Chasity waved and Veronica came to sit on the opposite side of her.
'Want capuccino?' Chasity smiled.
'You know I don't like that. I'd prefer just cola,' she said and called for the waiter who took the order. Chasity ordered another capuccino.
'So, what's the thing you wanted to tell me and what I couldn't believe?' Chasity said. 'Ok, just listen carefully and don't interrupt me, ok?' she smiled.
Last edited by Imke ~ Javi on Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:48 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
So exciting end. But we need more.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
I AM SO DUMB! I SKIPPED A PART! This was supposed to be part 10 instead of 9!! So here's part 9, I'll edit the previous part to part 10..
Damn, how stupid!!
Part 9
She felt two hands on her shoulders and turned her head. It was her mother. 'It's going to be fine,' she smiled.
'No it's not! How can you say that?!' Chasity said, threw her mother's hands away and ran inside. Simona sighed and walked back into the house.
Chasity ran upstairs to her bedroom and fell on bed and cried herself a river.
Suddenly she heard a few knocks on the door. 'GO AWAY!' she screamed.
'It's dad.'
'LEAVE ME ALONE!'
She didn't hear anything back. She put the radio on and pressed play without looking if there was a cd in it or not. There was. But she didn't remember it was one of her cd's. She pressed stop and took the cd out of it. It wasn't a legal cd. She looked at the cover.
To Chas was written on it. Underneath Love Javi was written. Her heart skipped a beat. What's this?
She put the cd back in the radio and pressed play again.
The song began slow. She gasped because she heard Javi singing.
Don't you know its time for me to go
Even though it hurts to see you cry
But don't you know you'll never be alone
If you hold me deep inside
You know that I would rather stay
But now before I turn away
There's one last thing to you I wanna say
Baby there's no goodbyes
I'll always be right by your side
Though I may be far away
You know that my heart will stay with you always
Now cripter is in the distance
Even though it seems a million miles
But there'll be no space between us
I'll be there every time you close your eyes
Yes I will
You know that I would rather stay
But now before I turn away
There's one last thing to you I wanna say
Baby there's no goodbyes
I'll always be right by your side
Though I may be far away
You know that my heart will stay with you always
I don't wanna say
The words that people say
Cause when I go away my love will stay
In the heart of you
To help you make it through
Baby that is why
There can't be no no goodbyes
Baby there's no goodbyes
I'll always be right by your side
Though I may be far away
You know that my heart will stay with you always
Baby there's no goodbyes
I'll always be right by your side
Though I may be far away
You know that my heart will stay with you always
You know what
No more goodbyes
Chasity cried while listening to the song. He said he didn't know what he was feeling. She knew it now. He loved her more than a friend.
But it was too late to even think about a relation. He was gone for so long. Probably forever. Slowly she fell asleep while thinking about Javi.
That was part 9!
If you want to know whom the lyric is from.. It's from Blue - No Goodbyes
So you got 2 parts at the same time actually, you lucky bastards
Damn, how stupid!!
Part 9
She felt two hands on her shoulders and turned her head. It was her mother. 'It's going to be fine,' she smiled.
'No it's not! How can you say that?!' Chasity said, threw her mother's hands away and ran inside. Simona sighed and walked back into the house.
Chasity ran upstairs to her bedroom and fell on bed and cried herself a river.
Suddenly she heard a few knocks on the door. 'GO AWAY!' she screamed.
'It's dad.'
'LEAVE ME ALONE!'
She didn't hear anything back. She put the radio on and pressed play without looking if there was a cd in it or not. There was. But she didn't remember it was one of her cd's. She pressed stop and took the cd out of it. It wasn't a legal cd. She looked at the cover.
To Chas was written on it. Underneath Love Javi was written. Her heart skipped a beat. What's this?
She put the cd back in the radio and pressed play again.
The song began slow. She gasped because she heard Javi singing.
Don't you know its time for me to go
Even though it hurts to see you cry
But don't you know you'll never be alone
If you hold me deep inside
You know that I would rather stay
But now before I turn away
There's one last thing to you I wanna say
Baby there's no goodbyes
I'll always be right by your side
Though I may be far away
You know that my heart will stay with you always
Now cripter is in the distance
Even though it seems a million miles
But there'll be no space between us
I'll be there every time you close your eyes
Yes I will
You know that I would rather stay
But now before I turn away
There's one last thing to you I wanna say
Baby there's no goodbyes
I'll always be right by your side
Though I may be far away
You know that my heart will stay with you always
I don't wanna say
The words that people say
Cause when I go away my love will stay
In the heart of you
To help you make it through
Baby that is why
There can't be no no goodbyes
Baby there's no goodbyes
I'll always be right by your side
Though I may be far away
You know that my heart will stay with you always
Baby there's no goodbyes
I'll always be right by your side
Though I may be far away
You know that my heart will stay with you always
You know what
No more goodbyes
Chasity cried while listening to the song. He said he didn't know what he was feeling. She knew it now. He loved her more than a friend.
But it was too late to even think about a relation. He was gone for so long. Probably forever. Slowly she fell asleep while thinking about Javi.
That was part 9!
If you want to know whom the lyric is from.. It's from Blue - No Goodbyes
So you got 2 parts at the same time actually, you lucky bastards
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Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
down, up, down
don't tell me that she got tickets
great parts, 10 and 9
don't tell me that she got tickets
great parts, 10 and 9
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Finally someone!! Gosh i thought you all disappeared
Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
looool.... maybe is time to dinner
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*looks on clock* naah here it's 20:21
Unless there are other times than Holland
What's the time in Portugal?
Unless there are other times than Holland
What's the time in Portugal?
Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
19:23 and here, we usually eat at 20:00
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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20:00
Oh yes now I understand
I usually eat around 18:00 !
Oh yes now I understand
I usually eat around 18:00 !
Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
that is too early... at that time we usually snack something
in spain they have dinner at 21:00
in spain they have dinner at 21:00
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Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Location : Portugal
Registration date : 2007-11-08
Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
btw; how should Chasity and Veronica get the tickets while its sold out??
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this was awesome.
maybe they should find the tickets in a waste bin.
maybe they should find the tickets in a waste bin.
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Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
Imke ~ Javi wrote:btw; how should Chasity and Veronica get the tickets while its sold out??
magic
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great parts!! the song was beautiful, and with javis voice, magic.
14th July 2008 = my 15th Birthday
i want moooooore!!
14th July 2008 = my 15th Birthday
i want moooooore!!
Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
Part 11
Veronica is 23 years old and a really fashionfreak. Silver eye-shadow, black mascara. Pink lipgloss and her long nails were light-pink varnished. She had long blonde hair, this time she had it in a ponytail. From her looks you would say she's a first class bitch but she isn't at all. She knows everything about her together with two other girls called Alicia, 27 years old and the oldest, and Susi, 21 years old and so the youngest of all.
The waiter brought their drinks. 'Tell! I'm curious!' Chasity said.
'Ok, I was walking through the shopping centre looking for some pumps and then I saw this gorgeous man!' she said. 'Oh here we go!' Chasity sighed.
'I told you not to interrupt me!' she said. 'Ok but he was so handsome! And when I looked better at him I regonised him!'
'You regonised him? From what?'
'D'Nash!' she whispered and looked around.
'What?! You gotta be kidding!' Chasity whispered back.
'He was from D'Nash! I've seen him on a poster!'
'And who from D'Nash was it?'
'Mikel!'
'I have no idea how they look like, but what happened then?'
'I looked at him I mean... I couldn't get my eyes of him so hot as he was! But he noticed I was looking at him and also looked at me. Well, of course you know me. I walked to the counter and he was standing close to it. Then I "accidentally" dropped my keys. He bowed, I bowed and, like I expected, our hands touched. It was like a movie! But his hands are so big! You should see those! But they are so manly and his smile. Oh man, it was like I was melting away! I'm not even a fan of that D'Nash band but I'd love to meet him again! But I have no idea how,' Veronica rambled on.
The two teenagers behind Chasity went away. She turned around and saw two concert tickets falling out of the girl's bag. 'I know how you can meet him again,' Chasity smiled, stood up and, without being noticed, she grabbed the tickets. 'Wait, those fell out of the girl's bag! You should give them back!' Veronica said. 'Ssh! We keep them! Look what the tickets say,' Chasity said and held one ticket in front of Veronica's face.
'A ticket for the concert of D'Nash! Tonight!' Veronica said surprised, 'luck is absolutely on my side today!'
'And it's tonight, if we leave early we're getting the chance to go to the front row!' she smiled. 'Oh Chas! You're a genious!' Veronica said excited and took one ticket in her hand. 'I can't wait till tonight! Shall I pick you up?' Veronica continued.
'Ok, what about 7 o'clock?' Chasity proposed. Veronica nodded. They talked some more. Veronica especially about Mikel. When it was 4 o'clock they left to their own home and prepared for the concert. They both didn't know any songs of D'Nash but this night was about this guy called Mikel.
7.30 - At the D'Nash concert
Chasity and Veronica managed to get a place in the front row. It was the best place a fan could get, though these two girls weren't fans at all.
The stage lights turned off and a white light was blinking. The whole crowd went wild. Chasity and Veronica just screamed with them.
Four shadows came in the back of the stage and the crowd screamed even more. Then the lights went on and a huge beat pumped out of the boxes and the four guys called D'Nash were dancing. The tall guy began to sing.
'Look! There is Mikel!' Veronica whispered and pointed at a skinny guy with short, brown hair. Veronica was right, he is hot.
In fact all four were pretty hot, no wonder the girls were screaming so loud. After 5 songs they were going to sing a ballad. But for that they asked four girls to come on stage. Of course, for each guy a girl. Typical men.
Veronica stick her hand in the air and yelled extremely loud. Of course, she wanted to sit on the stool with Mikel, as there were four stools put on the stage. First a black haired girl was picked out of the audience.
Veronica got nervous when the second girl got chosen. One sat next to the tall one and the other to a blonde guy. Still Mikel was left.
She took her arm and helped her with waving and screaming. She really wanted her friend to come on stage with Mikel. 'Here! She wants! Take her!' she screamed. Then Mikel noticed them and pointed at Veronica. She yelled and quickly ran out of the audience. The guards helped her on stage. But Mikel was still pointing at the place Veronica stood. Wait... he was pointing at Chasity!
Now you know how they got the tickets
Veronica is 23 years old and a really fashionfreak. Silver eye-shadow, black mascara. Pink lipgloss and her long nails were light-pink varnished. She had long blonde hair, this time she had it in a ponytail. From her looks you would say she's a first class bitch but she isn't at all. She knows everything about her together with two other girls called Alicia, 27 years old and the oldest, and Susi, 21 years old and so the youngest of all.
The waiter brought their drinks. 'Tell! I'm curious!' Chasity said.
'Ok, I was walking through the shopping centre looking for some pumps and then I saw this gorgeous man!' she said. 'Oh here we go!' Chasity sighed.
'I told you not to interrupt me!' she said. 'Ok but he was so handsome! And when I looked better at him I regonised him!'
'You regonised him? From what?'
'D'Nash!' she whispered and looked around.
'What?! You gotta be kidding!' Chasity whispered back.
'He was from D'Nash! I've seen him on a poster!'
'And who from D'Nash was it?'
'Mikel!'
'I have no idea how they look like, but what happened then?'
'I looked at him I mean... I couldn't get my eyes of him so hot as he was! But he noticed I was looking at him and also looked at me. Well, of course you know me. I walked to the counter and he was standing close to it. Then I "accidentally" dropped my keys. He bowed, I bowed and, like I expected, our hands touched. It was like a movie! But his hands are so big! You should see those! But they are so manly and his smile. Oh man, it was like I was melting away! I'm not even a fan of that D'Nash band but I'd love to meet him again! But I have no idea how,' Veronica rambled on.
The two teenagers behind Chasity went away. She turned around and saw two concert tickets falling out of the girl's bag. 'I know how you can meet him again,' Chasity smiled, stood up and, without being noticed, she grabbed the tickets. 'Wait, those fell out of the girl's bag! You should give them back!' Veronica said. 'Ssh! We keep them! Look what the tickets say,' Chasity said and held one ticket in front of Veronica's face.
'A ticket for the concert of D'Nash! Tonight!' Veronica said surprised, 'luck is absolutely on my side today!'
'And it's tonight, if we leave early we're getting the chance to go to the front row!' she smiled. 'Oh Chas! You're a genious!' Veronica said excited and took one ticket in her hand. 'I can't wait till tonight! Shall I pick you up?' Veronica continued.
'Ok, what about 7 o'clock?' Chasity proposed. Veronica nodded. They talked some more. Veronica especially about Mikel. When it was 4 o'clock they left to their own home and prepared for the concert. They both didn't know any songs of D'Nash but this night was about this guy called Mikel.
7.30 - At the D'Nash concert
Chasity and Veronica managed to get a place in the front row. It was the best place a fan could get, though these two girls weren't fans at all.
The stage lights turned off and a white light was blinking. The whole crowd went wild. Chasity and Veronica just screamed with them.
Four shadows came in the back of the stage and the crowd screamed even more. Then the lights went on and a huge beat pumped out of the boxes and the four guys called D'Nash were dancing. The tall guy began to sing.
'Look! There is Mikel!' Veronica whispered and pointed at a skinny guy with short, brown hair. Veronica was right, he is hot.
In fact all four were pretty hot, no wonder the girls were screaming so loud. After 5 songs they were going to sing a ballad. But for that they asked four girls to come on stage. Of course, for each guy a girl. Typical men.
Veronica stick her hand in the air and yelled extremely loud. Of course, she wanted to sit on the stool with Mikel, as there were four stools put on the stage. First a black haired girl was picked out of the audience.
Veronica got nervous when the second girl got chosen. One sat next to the tall one and the other to a blonde guy. Still Mikel was left.
She took her arm and helped her with waving and screaming. She really wanted her friend to come on stage with Mikel. 'Here! She wants! Take her!' she screamed. Then Mikel noticed them and pointed at Veronica. She yelled and quickly ran out of the audience. The guards helped her on stage. But Mikel was still pointing at the place Veronica stood. Wait... he was pointing at Chasity!
Now you know how they got the tickets
Re: Friends, Enemies & Lovers [ Part 28, THE END! ]
d'Kath wrote:great parts!! the song was beautiful, and with javis voice, magic.
14th July 2008 = my 15th Birthday
i want moooooore!!
Omg! That is a huge coincidence!!
Scary
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