vacation in valencia part 20 THE END

Awesome!!

More soon?

Part 15:
is he gonna be ok I asked. Yes the doctor answered but it is possible his head would hurt sometimes, you can go to him now he’s awake. Thanks. I went inside and saw him. Now I knew what doc meant, his head was all bloody. Are you ok I asked. Well, I had better days, did you took mido. No he still is at basty’s home, I think pris can be glad with him he’ll be a good dad. Well one time he had a baby for a week, and they where smiling the hole day, u know what they’re doing? When I left they where playing soccer. WHAT how old is he and you and me, how long I was away? Don’t yell it’s not good for you’re head, I was just joking. Aaah one time I take you back. One time but first you have to repair. But what happened? Well I was at the studio and I just went to the bathroom, when I herd footsteps from another room which used to be empty, I opened the door and after that I don’t know anything he said .

Great part!!!

poor mikel

poor mikelito.

Part 16
A month later he was kinda fine. You only could only see some scars and he could come home he was very glad so we celebrated it. It was a big party so I had to go to the shop cause the drink was off. When I came back it was a even bigger party some other people had come. I went to the kitchen and saw mikel sitting on the ground with bounded hands and a towel for his mouth. I walked to him and I tried to take it off. But while I was doing that I felt a terrible pain in my head and it became black for my eyes…

Great part!!!! I want more

i think you'll have to wait till vacation becouse i have to lern for testweek

omg.

wow... what now??

sorry it took so long but as i told testweek

Part 17:
I woke up and looked around. I didn’t recognize the place and as I wanted to stand up I felt a terrible pain in my legs. I looked what it was and saw both legs where broken. I didn’t remember anything. when I herd something I looked and saw it was the clock. It was 1.16 in the night. I was very tired and I slept almost immediately. The next day I still didn’t remember what happened but now I recognized the place. It was the hospital. I was glad that there wasn’t anything. But that feeling suddenly went away when I saw my legs again. Now I really was scared. I started yelling for help and fast there came a nurse. I asked what happened and she said they didn’t know. I was really scared and when mikel came in I almost attacked him. Easy he said it’s just me. Gosh I thought you were someone else. Can you remember what happened? No why do you ask. Maybe it were the same attackers as mine he said fast. Is there something is asked? No why do you ask? Just a question, where is mido? At your parents. But they went to Holland to go help my grandpa. A long quietness and than….

ohhh so mido is with them??

i liked the part

Where is Mido?
Great part!!!

Part 18:
What?! I gave him to Vivian and she said she would give him to your parents. No she doesn’t she’s the bad girl you know. But I thought she was your friend? Yes before she made me unconsciousness. But… give my clothes I said. I changed clothes and I went to her home. No one opened the door so I got in by the window. I saw petra en john laying on the ground. with the mound bounded. I took it off and asked where Vivian was. They said she was in the plain to Holland we went after her but we just missed the plain…

and now??

And what's next?????

Part 19:
We waited for another plain. When it came we step in. we came in Holland and we couldn’t find them on the airport. we went to her home and looked if she was there but she wasn’t. than we looked at my old house and she wasn’t there either. Where can they be mikel asked. Perhaps she went to Venlo to go shop I answered. How can u go shopping when you stole a baby? I told u she isn’t really normal. We went to Venlo and searched for her. Than I saw lisanne. Hey she said. Hey have you see Vivian? Yes she went to c&a.ok thanks. We went to there and saw her on top of the roof. Vivian I yelled. She looked behind and said: stay there otherwise mido is gonna feel how high he is…

woow that girl is really crazy

OMG!!!!!!!!!
That girl really lost her mind
Poor Mido

i'm sorry it took so long but i was on holiday and because of the lightning my pc wouldn't word but now it's finally finished i know it's a poor and but i couldnb't think of something else so..



Part 20 :
No vivian come back. No I’m not coming back? I’ve waited to long for this you with you’re perfect little life and me… no vivian come back you’re life will be fine to but just don’t throw mido. I won’t she said I’ll take him with me. No! you can’t jump look how high we are. Yeah the higher the better she laughed to bad we’re not in new york that would be a lot higher. No vivian please come here. I herd sirens and knew someone called the police. Or should we wait till they arrive with you’re mikel than mum and dad perfect life can se us die and the police to what a nice thing isn’t it. No it isn’t c… o than I should jump no, hmm? No vivian please I beg you. Naah I think I prefer to jump. The police came and put something sown but vivian didn’t see it. Hmm now I can jump right bye demi I hope you’re dead will be very ‘perfect’. She jumped before I could stop her but the police cached her and mido. I came down to we had to go to the office. After what seemed like a century we could go home vivian was put in jail and mikel mido and I would leaf Holland next week.

THE END

Amazing part and the most important happy ending!!!!!
Thanks Demi for this story

ohh a happy end.. nice