**Angel** Part 20 FINISHED!

I've written a new story... Dunno if you're interested in it, but let's see how it goes... A WARNING: this is not going to be a really happy one, so... well... nothiiiiing...

Part 1

Hi! My name is Susana and I'm a real angel. You don't believe me? Well, let me tell you a story...

I lived with my two brothers in Madrid. Carlos was the eldest, Raúl 2 years younger and then there was me, 2 years younger than Raúl. Carlos was working in Barajas, the airport of Madrid. Raúl and me had moved to live with Carlos, because we were still studying. We were from Sevilla and our parents were still living there.
Me and my brothers were close. We always spent time together in bars, cafés... wherever and we always had fun. So it was natural that my friends were their friends and their friends were mine as well.
In our neighbourhood there had been an empty house for a while. We were curious to see what kind of people would move in some day. And then the day came...

- How was your day? Carlos asked me at the dinner table and ate with a good appetite.
- Mnh.. the usual, I replied and took more wine.
- Hey, I heard we have new neighbours now, Raúl said suddenly and smiled.
- Really? Have you seen them? I asked and looked at him.
- No, but we know them? he grinned.
- We do? Who are they? I asked.
- D'Nash, Carlos said and Raúl and I looked at him surprised.
- How do you know it? Raúl asked.
- 'Cause I know one of them, he grinned and finished his food.
I was surprised. Why he hadn't tell me about it...?
- Who? Raúl was curious to know.
- Javi. We're like friends already, he smiled.
- Oh..., I replied.
I had never seen them before, only on TV, and it sounded really unbelievable that my brother knew one of them.
- We'll visit them tomorrow, Carlos said then, grinned and finished his wine.
- We will? I asked.
- Nice to know, Raúl was a bit annoyed, - At least you told you've made plans for all of us.
- C'mon, bro! Carlos laughed, - They're good guys and we'll have lots of fun with them, so the least we can do is visit and welcome them to our neighbours.
- He is right, I said to Raúl, - Don't be such a jackass, I laughed and got up from the table.

D'nash as neighbour

A dream.. Me likes it

Great start!

Thanks! I think the start is a bit dull though...

Naah.. It's a great start

Minna, the beginning is awesome.

Enemmän Oh yes, it begins again.

Naaaaw, so it's the story
More more now

Oawh! Well, thankies! Ok... another part then This is just a warm up...

Part 2

Next day:

- Heyyy!!! Javi had opened the door and he smiled and greeted cheerfully Carlos, - Come in, Carlos... and the others...
Javi looked at me and Raúl for a while and decided to introduce himself then.
- I'm Javi... welcome! he smiled.
- I'm Raúl and this is Susana... Carlos is our brother, Raúl explained.
- So... I'm sure we'll become good friends as I know Carlos already and if you two are at least a bit similar to him, we'll get along very well, Javi grinned.
- They are, Carlos convinced and grinned.
- Great, great! Javi laughed, - Let's go to the living room then!
In the living room there were three other guys and they looked at us curiously. Javi introduced us to each others. I knew who they were... the rest of D'Nash. Mikel smiled and waved to us, when Javi introduced him, Ony smiled and Basty got up and shook hands with Carlos and Raúl and hugged me.
- Nice to meet you all, he smiled, - I hope we aren't too noisy neighbours, he laughed.
- Yes, Basty tends to sing in the shower loudly sometimes, Javi was joking and laughed then.
- I'm not THAT loud..., Basty looked at Javi a bit offended.
- No, it's not the singing... he listen to music too loud, you can even feel the beat in the street, Mikel laughed on the couch.

And we stayed there for several hours. We talked a lot, laughed a lot and I felt these four guys were really nice and funny. Javi and Mikel were the jokers and they were teasing somebody almost all the time. Ony was more serious, but even if Javi was teasing him too, he didn't seem to get angry at all. I realised they were true friends and even if Javi's jokes seemed to be cruel sometimes, everybody knew he didn't really want to hurt anyone. They were just like me and my brothers.

I think Basty will be an annoying neighbour.

I want D'Nash to my neighbour

Hihihihi :D:D
Basty Basty

This is just the second part and I LOVE it Minna!

Thanks, Mar... and the others as well. This might be fun at first, but things will change...

I already love it. But if I understand well, this is gonna be pretty sad. And I don't like sad stories.

Me neither.

girl1035 wrote:I already love it. But if I understand well, this is gonna be pretty sad. And I don't like sad stories.

Thanks!! Yes... if you don't like sad stories, you better stop reading this then... or you have to get a package of tissues...

Yayness! Another storaaay of Minna!

D'Nash as neighbours! Niiiiice

And don't worry I love sad stories

Parte tres?

Sergo, get tissues...
Imke, thx! Good, you love sad stories... Well, I think this is the saddest story I've ever written...
Next part tomorrow!

I have just read those two parts and what can I tell I like it very much
Can't wait for tomorrow to read part 3

Mindex wrote:Sergo, get tissues...
Imke, thx! Good, you love sad stories... Well, I think this is the saddest story I've ever written...
Next part tomorrow!

I will give you an örfil.

Sergo wrote:

Mindex wrote:Sergo, get tissues...
Imke, thx! Good, you love sad stories... Well, I think this is the saddest story I've ever written...
Next part tomorrow!

I will give you an örfil.

Do it! Well, if you mean the ones you can eat, yes please! rofl

Lauriukas199 wrote:I have just read those two parts and what can I tell I like it very much
Can't wait for tomorrow to read part 3

Thanks! But you have to wait!

Mindex wrote:

Lauriukas199 wrote:I have just read those two parts and what can I tell I like it very much
Can't wait for tomorrow to read part 3

Thanks! But you have to wait!

I guess

Lauriukas199 wrote:

Mindex wrote:

Lauriukas199 wrote:I have just read those two parts and what can I tell I like it very much
Can't wait for tomorrow to read part 3

Thanks! But you have to wait!

I guess

I'll post a new part in the morning!