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Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...

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Post  Sergo Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:59 am

SHE KILLED HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a Face What a Face What a Face
*Doing my happydance*
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Post  ~Mar~ Thu Aug 07, 2008 2:04 pm

girl1035 wrote:great part. I see huge inspiration by one episode of CSI: New York.

After I wrote it, I had the same idea yeah.. It wasn't my intention tho..

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Post  Sergo Thu Aug 07, 2008 3:22 pm

Hehehe Razz
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Post  NETTTE Thu Aug 07, 2008 4:59 pm

Woow, she killed him!! Cool Good Very Happy
Soon more??
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Post  Laura Thu Aug 07, 2008 5:26 pm

She killed him cheers cheers cheers cheers
But what now is waiting for her? Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
Anyway great part Smile Smile Smile
I love it Cool Cool Cool Cool
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Post  ~Mar~ Thu Aug 07, 2008 5:46 pm

I don't know when you'll get a new part.. Maybe I start with it today and otherwise ASAP Wink
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Post  Prisca Fri Aug 08, 2008 1:29 am

ok Razz Razz
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Post  Laura Fri Aug 08, 2008 2:40 pm

Mar Ik heb geen geduld bounce bounce bounce
Ik wil niet wachten Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
Toe (puppy eyes)
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Post  ~Mar~ Fri Aug 08, 2008 2:48 pm

xD I knew this would happen Laughing Lmoa

Greitu laiku Razz
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Post  Laura Fri Aug 08, 2008 2:55 pm

Oke Razz Razz Razz Razz
I speak in dutch Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing I wanna go there


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Post  ~Mar~ Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:00 pm

You're bery welcome over here

Just bepatient.. At least try to be..
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Post  Laura Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:06 pm

I hope that soon I will come Cool Cool
Oke I will try my best Laughing Laughing
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Post  Prisca Fri Aug 08, 2008 8:31 pm

patience... patience... xD
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Post  Sergo Fri Aug 08, 2008 9:26 pm

So... When's the new part coming? Razz
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Post  ~Mar~ Sat Aug 09, 2008 1:02 pm

I dunno yet.. Maybe if I have time, I'll try to finish it today
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Post  Prisca Sat Aug 09, 2008 4:43 pm

great Very Happy
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Post  ~Mar~ Sun Aug 10, 2008 4:56 pm

Capítulo 15


Tony drove with me to the hospital. ‘Shall I call Eva?’ he asked me when they helped me out of it. ‘No.. I just wanna sleep now.. Tell her about it and say that she can come visit me, together with Sam.. I feel like I can sleep for an eternity..’ I sighed. Tony helped me into the hospital. A doctor and nurse were waiting for me. Of course I had to have a medical exam first. I had only wounds around my wrists from the rob, my lip was swollen and blue and some scratches from the fight. Soon they brought me to a room where I could sleep. I didn’t even tried to take my clothes off. ‘I wanna sleep.. And wake up, thinking this was a nightmare..’ I laid my head on the pillow and began to think about nice things. Not much later I fell asleep and the whole thing played like a movie in my head.


The next morning I woke up and rubbed my eyes. First I couldn’t place the room, but soon I knew it again. I had a bandage around my wrists. A woman was sitting on a chair in my room. She looked up from the magazine she was reading. Two blue eyes looked at me. ‘Heya sis..’ One of her eyes was a bit greenish, still from a black eye. ‘Hey..’ She walked to my bed and sat down on the edge. ‘How did you came here so fast?’ I asked her. ‘They called us on the farm.. My number was one of the numbers Dave called a lot, so they tried it. And then they told me that a blonde woman was brought to the hospital.. I asked if they knew her name and when they told your’s, I had to sit down for a moment.. I took the earliest plane to Miami..’ I nodded and she hugged me. ‘Good to see you again Lynn..’ Lynn smiled. ‘I brought someone with me.. This person wanted to see with own eyes if you were allright.’ The door opened and the person walked inside. ‘Morning mate!’ ‘Kevin!’ I began to cry of happiness. He smiled and walked to my bed and sat down. ‘The last time we saw each other you were 19.. I can’t call you a girl anymore..’ He hugged me tight. ‘It’s so good to see you again. Both of you.. I missed you.’ Lynn wanted to know what happened yesterday. I told her everything, even that I shot him down. You could see that she still cared about him. When I told her that he was dead, a tear rolled over her cheek. ‘But when did he hurt you?’ I asked her after I finished my story. Lynn wiped her tears away and said: ‘Like two weeks ago maybe.. Do you remember Kevin?’ Kevin thought deep and said: ‘I think so yes.. When did Mango got her foal?’ ‘Wait, wait.. Mango got a foal?’ They turned their faces to me. ‘Yes.. A brown foal.. He doesn’t have a name yet..’ Kevin took his mobile and showed me a picture of the little horse. ‘Aww! He’s so cute! Can I give him a name?’ Kevin shrugged. ‘Sure.. I mean, Mango’s your horse..’ Lynn nodded. I looked again at the picture of the horse. ‘What about Kiwi? He reminds me of one..’ I smiled. Kevin and Lynn looked at each other. ‘Sure, Kiwi it is then!’ Lynn smiled. Soon her smile disappeared and she ran out of my room with her hand in front of her mouth. I looked at Kevin. ‘I don’t know what’s wrong with her.. She’s like that for like a month and a half almost..’ Lynn came back, whipping her mouth of with a tissue. ‘Kevin, can I talk with my sister?’ Kevin looked at me. After a few minutes and a look he got the hint. ‘Sure.. I’ll get some coffee..’ And he walked out of my room. Lynn sat back down on my bed. I looked at her. ‘Lynn, I don’t know how to ask it so I just do it on the easiest way.. Are you pregnant?’ Lynn looked shocked at me. ‘I.. I don’t know where you’re talking ‘bout..’ She turned her head and looked out of the window. ‘Lynn, look at me.. I know when you tell a lie, and you’re doing it now.. You are, right? Is it from Dave?’ She nodded. Suddenly she burst out on crying. I held her and tried to comfort her. ‘I still loved him Mar.. I still did after everything he had done with you, me.. With Kevin.. He had kicked him in his stomach.. And I’m carrying his child.. I’m too scared to do a test but deep inside me, I know that it’s true.. What can I do now? Keep it?’ I didn’t said a thing. I only caressed her hair. After a while she calmed down. ‘Do you wanna keep the baby Lynn? Although it’s from Dave?’ She let her head hang. ‘I can’t kill this baby Mar.. I just can’t.. It’s a piece of me.. I keep it.’ She smiled. ‘But first you’re gonna do that test!’ I said and she nodded. ‘O my God! I’m going to be an aunt!’ And I hugged her. Kevin opened the door. ‘Can I come back inside?’ We nodded and he walked back inside with a mug coffee. ‘Kevin, mate, I’m an aunt! Well, probably I am.’ He looked confused at me. And then at Lynn. She began to explain it and he began to smile. ‘Congratulations!!’ And he hugged both of us. ‘Let’s hope it’s a girl..’ He said and we all smiled. But I knew he meant it, and Lynn was hoping the same just like me.
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Post  Kath Sun Aug 10, 2008 5:09 pm

Poor Lynn...
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Post  Sergo Sun Aug 10, 2008 5:28 pm

I'd do an abortion if I was her Rolling Eyes

btw Mango & Kiwi xD If that horse had a sister you could call it Melon Razz
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Post  ~Mar~ Sun Aug 10, 2008 5:29 pm

Sergo wrote:
btw Mango & Kiwi xD If that horse had a sister you could call it Melon Razz


That made me serious laugh xD
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Post  emilia Sun Aug 10, 2008 5:37 pm

Great part Very Happy
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Post  Laura Sun Aug 10, 2008 8:20 pm

Poor Lynn Sad Sad Sad Sad
And Kiwi.... I love that name Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
Amazing part!!!!!
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Post  ~Mar~ Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:28 pm

I love kiwies xD And bananas Razz

Thanks (:
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Post  Prisca Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:30 am

a poor Lynn.. and a baby... Neutral Neutral Neutral


Kiwi XD great name xD
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Post  ~Mar~ Tue Aug 12, 2008 9:17 pm

I'm really sorry girls, but no part for a while.. Coz of my little accident with my bike, I had to get an operation.. My crossband was damaged too much, so the docs took it out of my knee.. I can't sport for probably the rest of the year and need physiotherapy to learn how to use my knee again.. Neutral When I can walk upstairs without having the feeling doing a marathon, you'll get a new part Wink
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