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Post  Riikka Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:54 pm

Really cool idea Very Happy Mikel is great Very Happy and part and story too. All is great now Laughing
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Post  girl1035 Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:57 pm

Riikka wrote: All is great now Laughing

It wasnt before? *Who am I living for? * 2nd and 100% end - Page 12 Icon_wink
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Post  Heli Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:37 am

Woow! Really great! Thumbs Up
Moree! MrGreen
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Post  Riikka Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:05 am

girl1035 wrote:
Riikka wrote: All is great now Laughing

It wasnt before? *Who am I living for? * 2nd and 100% end - Page 12 Icon_wink

Well that situation in story wasn't so great.. Ony didn't even recognise Natalia some time ago and so on.. But now everything seems great or at least better. At least they are in same place now MrGreen
But no doubts about that story has been great all the time Wink
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Post  emilia Mon Jan 07, 2008 3:12 pm

This is really good Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Mon Jan 07, 2008 6:56 pm

Oh this sounds sooooo exciting! Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  girl1035 Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:52 pm

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Natalia was still sleeping when her cell phone started to ring. She answered it.
“Hello?”
“Natalia? This is señor Santiago. I just wanted to tell you that you were booked by one singer. He wants just you to prepare his performance.”
“OK. Who it is?” asked Natalia with closed eyes. She wanted to sleep so much.
“Spanish singer called Ony.”
“What?” Natalia was immediately awaken.
“Like I said. Be at the studios 6 exactly at 1PM. Thank you.” said señor Santiago and hung up.
Natalia was in shock. She was going to meet Ony. She was afraid, but not of meeting him,but because of what Mikel have told her earlier. And she still wasn’t sure about her feelings. After few minutes she forced herself to get up and get ready. When she finished all the procedures in the bathroom and get dressed, it was already 12.30. Natalia got into the studio at 12.55 and she greeted the dancers. Ony showed up after another 30 minutes. Natalia was pretty pissed at him, but she didn’t let him know. She was acting like everything was fine.
“Hey Natalia. It’s great to see you.” he said when he came.
“Hey. It’s good to see you again too.” Natalia said happily.
Then they started. Ony’s manager played her the song and Natalia told him what she thinks it should look like. They were excited. The rehearsing took the the whole afternoon. When it was about 7 PM they decided that it was enough for today and went home. Natalia was on her way outta the studio when Ony ran close to her.
“That was amazing what you made today.” he said.
“Thank you. You were also pretty good.”
“Would you like to go go for lunch with me?” he asked.
“Now?”
“Yes. I know a really cool restaurant nearby. Please.” Ony made puppy eyes.
“Ahh. OK.” she said.
They got into Ony’s car and he drove to the restaurant. It was really amazing. They got a table in a quite corner. When a waiter got to them, Ony ordered for the calamari, french fries, for Nat pepsi light and for him mirinda. Natalia was surprised he still remembers it.
“Wow. You still remember it. That’s amazing.”
“How could I forget. You know, since you left I was just thinking where you are and what you are doing. And I also wanted to tell you how terribly sorry I am for the thing Javi did.”
“Thank you. But many things has happened and Javi is no more in my head, neither in my heart.”
These words made Ony happy. Maybe he still has a chance he thought. After they ate their food they went for a walk by the sea. It was very beautiful. The weather was still warm, the water was washing their feet. Natalia told him what she was doing in Valencia and Ony told her about his journey in Madrid. She felt sorry for him. She could see in his eyes that he wanted to get back with the guys, but he didn’t think it was possible. When they got back to the car, Ony drove Natalia to their hotel and he walked with her to her room. They said each other goodbye in front of her door and when Ony was about to kiss her, she turned her head so instead on lips he kissed her on cheek.
“Good night.” Nat said.
“Night.” Ony replied and walked to his room.
Natalia knew what he wanted to do, but since she didn’t want to hurt him, she decided to be just a friend. She needed to make it clear for herself. Then she could play with someone’s feelings.
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Post  emilia Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:55 pm

amazing story Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:01 pm

Nooo not a friend Mad
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Post  Hen «3 Javi Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:02 pm

Yess only a friend! Very Happy
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Post  girl1035 Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:08 pm

No wars please. The last part is coming I guess.
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Post  Prisca Tue Jan 08, 2008 1:59 am

ooohhh... the last one....

great part.. friend or not friend is ok Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Mindex Tue Jan 08, 2008 10:07 am

Great parts! Thumbs Up but what will happen....? Surprised
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Post  Heli Tue Jan 08, 2008 1:55 pm

^^wondering the same.. Rolling Eyes
But really great part! Wink
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Post  Sergo Tue Jan 08, 2008 4:16 pm

Can't wait for the part to come Shocked
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Post  girl1035 Tue Jan 08, 2008 8:55 pm

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The next day, when Natalia came to the studio, Ony was already there, but the dancers not.
“Hey. Where is everyone?”
“I gave them a free time.”
“You did what? They need to practise.” Natalia was angry.
“C’mon. It’s just one day.” Ony was insisting.
“Ok. “
“Great. I made a plan for us how we could spend afternoon.”
“You did what?”
“I hadn’t seen you for almost 2 years. So don’t be so surprised I wanna be with you.”
“So what are we going to do?”
“That’s surprise.”
They went to his car and when Ony was driving for some time, he told Natalia to put a scarf on her eyes.
“I don’t like it.” she was protesting.
But Ony was saying nothing and was driving further.
“Here we are.” he said and stopped the car. He got outta the car and helped Natalia out too.Ony didn’t want Natalia to immediately recognize where they were so he took her into his arms.
“Ahh. What are you doing?” she was screaming.
“Is it possible that I smell sea? Yea, and I can also hear it.” she was trying to make Ony tell her where they are.
“I’m not telling where we are. You’ll se it soon.” He said and after few more minutes he put her on the ground and took the scarf from her eyes. Natalia was looking around her. They were on a very beautiful place. She was staring at the beauty with open mouth.
“I see you like it here.”
“Like it? This is amazing. How did you find such a place?”
“I didn’t. Mikel did.”
“I see.”
“Are you hungry?” Ony asked.
“Not hungry. Starving.” Nat replied with smile.
“I made some sendwitches, cookies and a cake.”
“You made this?” Natalia didn’t want to believe her ears.
“Kind of.” said Ony but Natalia looking at his unbelievably.
“With a little help of Mikel.” he finally said.
“I knew that.” Natalia said laughing.
“What?”
“Sorry, but you have never been exactly good cook.”
“OK OK. Now let’s eat.”
They ate all the sendwitches and cookies, but they left the cake for later.
“Do you have your bikini with you?”
“Yes. I wear bikini when I go to a studio.” Natalia said sarcastically.
“Nevermind. I allowed myself to buy you one.” Ony said and handed Natalia her new bikini.
“Thx.” she suttered.
“No prob.”
Natalia turned her back to Ony and started to undress.
“Can you please look for a moment in a different direction?” Natalia was feeling his eyes on her back.
“OK.”
“Thx.”
“Wow. You look great in these.” said Ony when he was allowed to look at her.
“Well, I have to say you have a good taste.”
“And now let’s go swimming.” he said and took Natalalia into his arms again and when he was in the water he throw her into it.
“I’m gonna kill you.” Natalia yelled back and jumped after Ony. They were acting like this whole afternoon. After few hours they were pretty tired and decided to go back to the hotel.
“We still have the cake.” said Ony when they were in the elevator.
“Is it good?”
“It tastes like heaven.”
“I wanna eat it.”
“OK.” said Ony and stepped outta the elevator. Natalia was following him. They went into his room and sat on the couch. Ony get the cake outta the bag and went for some forks. The cake dissapeared almost immediately. After that they watched a romantic movie. It was almost over when Ony noticed Natalia is sleeping in his arms. He kissed her forehead.
“Good night my beauty.” said Ony and hold her even tighter.
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Post  Mindex Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:12 pm

woooow!!! Beating heart In love great part! so romantic MrGreen
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Post  Heli Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:16 pm

Naaaww.. MrGreen
So sweet and cute... Beating heart
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Post  emilia Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:24 pm

sooooo great part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Tue Jan 08, 2008 10:09 pm

aaaaaaaw ony is sooo sweet What a Face
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Post  Riikka Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:04 am

So romantic part! Beating heart
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Post  Prisca Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:24 am

ony was so sweettttt


great part Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  girl1035 Wed Jan 09, 2008 11:08 pm

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Ony was watching sleeping Natalia for few more hours and then he fall asleep too. When Natalia woke up in the morning, she found herself lying in Ony’s arms. It was very pleasant. She slowely got up and went to order room service. They arrived soon and in few minutes the smell of freshly baked food was everywhere. Ony was still sleeping but his nose noticed the smell and sent signal to the brain to wake Ony up. And Ony really woke up.
“Hmm. What’s this smell?”
“Fresh croissantes, cookies, tea and smething else I can’t identifie.”
“You made it?”
“Kind of.”
“A? Mikel helped?”
“No. I orderd it?” Natalia smiled. “Do you have food connected with something else than Mikel?” she asked him.
“It’s just that back in Madrid he was the one who cooked for us. And I got used to it.”
“Times had changed.”
“Tell me ‘bout it.” said Ony and then they ate together.
“Oh my. It’s so late.” said Nat after she watched the clock.
“It’s not.”
“Yes it is. We are supposed to be at the studios in an hour. Or you gave them free day also today?”
“I guess not.” said Ony.
“In that case I got to get ready. See ya in the studio. Bye.” said Natalia and kissed Ony on his cheek.
After she left Ony was holding his hand on his cheek. He wanted the kiss to last forever.

Everything went great in the studio. And ‘coz there were just few days left to the contest everyone was satisfied.
“What are you doing in the evening?” asked Natalia after rehearsing.
“I was planning sleeping, but if you have something better I wouldn’t mind it.”
“I need you help.”
“With what?”
“I don’t know what to wear on the contest.”
“Don’t you have a stylist?”
“Yes, but all the clothes she chosed I didn’t like. So she told me to choose them on my own.”
“OK. I will help.”
“Thx. You are the best.” smiled Ony.
In half an hour they arrived to the mall.
“What kind of clothes you want?”
“Dunno. I just wanna be myself.”
“OK. I think I have an idea.”
Natalia led him into a clothes store. In hour they chose all they needed in the right sizes. When Ony tried it fit on him perfectly.
“Wow. This is awesome.” Ony was astonished.
“I told you I have a perfect idea.”

The contest was here. Ony was wearing black trousers, white opened shirt and black waistcoast. Before he went on the stage, he hugged Natalia.
“Good luck.” she wished him.
“Thx. I will need it.” he said and went on the stage.
He made the whole hall dance with the song. After it the girls were fainting and screaming for more. He went back to the backstage and was looking for Natalia. He wanted to thank her for everything. He found her in her greenroom. But at that moment he was so happy that he was like in trans. Without realizing what he is doing he kissed her. And Natalia wasn’t fighting back.
“I … I … I’m sorry.” Ony suttered when he realized what he did.
“Why? I thought this is what you wanted to do.”
He looked straight into her eyes and noticed that her look changed.
“You’re right.” he said and kissed her with even more passion.
“We’d better close the door.”
“What for? I wanna let the whole world to know about our love.”
“Do you also wnt the whole world to see me naked?”
“I guess not.” said Ony and closed the door. Then they continued in their love.*Who am I living for? * 2nd and 100% end - Page 12 132322




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Post  emilia Wed Jan 09, 2008 11:18 pm

sooooo GREAT and amazing and cute Very Happy Very Happy Beating heart
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Post  Prisca Wed Jan 09, 2008 11:22 pm

fantastic end....


i loved this story so much MrGreen MrGreen MrGreen
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