Mi vida II...continuation Part 25 THE END
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Mi vida II...continuation Part 25 THE END
Tell me am i crazy?
Because i have write continuation of story called Mi vida.If you remember that.
So should i post that story here or not?
Because i have write continuation of story called Mi vida.If you remember that.
So should i post that story here or not?
Last edited by emilia on Mon Apr 07, 2008 4:12 pm; edited 26 times in total
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girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Okey i will post first part soon
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Part 1
Two years later...
I don't know how i could start this my story.
I don't even know who am i and what is my
name.Only thing what i know is that i'm in
hospital now.Doctors have say to me that
i have lost my memory.It's true because i
don't remember anything about me.But they
don't tell me how i lost my memory.Something
happened to me but what.I really like to
know that.
I have been here about one month already
but first two and half weeks i was in coma.
But then i wake up and i didn't remember anything.
I have my own room and i have alone here.I don't
have any visitors.Well one young woman visit
here sometimes.She haven't tell her name
to me at all.She have brown hair and green eyes.
Also she is so friendly to me but why.I have
ask but she doesn't answer and she just smile
to me.She was here yesterday and she stayed
about two hours.She brought to me some candies.
Those are my fave.At least she said so.But how
she knows that.And i feel that she knows lot of
things about me.But i don't know anything
about her.
There is also one guy.Always when he see me
he smile to me.but sometimes he have sad look
on his face when he looked at me.Who the hell
is he?Why also he visit here?I have so many
question but no answer.
Two years later...
I don't know how i could start this my story.
I don't even know who am i and what is my
name.Only thing what i know is that i'm in
hospital now.Doctors have say to me that
i have lost my memory.It's true because i
don't remember anything about me.But they
don't tell me how i lost my memory.Something
happened to me but what.I really like to
know that.
I have been here about one month already
but first two and half weeks i was in coma.
But then i wake up and i didn't remember anything.
I have my own room and i have alone here.I don't
have any visitors.Well one young woman visit
here sometimes.She haven't tell her name
to me at all.She have brown hair and green eyes.
Also she is so friendly to me but why.I have
ask but she doesn't answer and she just smile
to me.She was here yesterday and she stayed
about two hours.She brought to me some candies.
Those are my fave.At least she said so.But how
she knows that.And i feel that she knows lot of
things about me.But i don't know anything
about her.
There is also one guy.Always when he see me
he smile to me.but sometimes he have sad look
on his face when he looked at me.Who the hell
is he?Why also he visit here?I have so many
question but no answer.
Last edited by emilia on Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:06 pm; edited 1 time in total
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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MMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEE
Great beginning!
Great beginning!
Sabine- Number of posts : 696
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Thank you
Maybe later today you will get more
Maybe later today you will get more
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Woow Good beginning Waiting more
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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This sounds sooo interesting..
Can't wait for more!
Can't wait for more!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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More, more Great beginning
gabrielle- Number of posts : 198
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Later later later
You have to wait
You have to wait
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Part 2
One day when she came we went to walk in hospital
garden.The was one peacefull place and we sit down.
-How are you today?-She ask.
-I'm fine but why you even care about how i am.-I say.
-I just care about because you are so important
to me.-She say.
-So tell me who are you.-I say.
-I'm sorry...I can't say say that because you have
to remember all by yourself.I'm so sorry.-She say.
-Yeah right.And you can go to the hell.-I say and stood up.
But then that guy came and he smile to me.But he
stop smiling when he saw her.he just stared at her
and didn't say anything.
-What the hell you are doing here?You are last
person who i wanna see.-She say.
-but i didn't come to see you.One of my good
friend is here now and i came to meet him.When
i saw her here i decise to say hi.-He say.
-But now you can go to the hell.And never come
back.-She say
-Nope i don't go.I will go to meet my friend now.
Besides you can't say what she can do or who
she will meet.Can i come to see you someday?-He say.
-Why you would come to see me?And who are
you even.-I say.
-What?You don't remember me at all anymore.-He say.
-She have lost her memory.-She say.
-And that's why i'm here.-I say.
-Oh...That is so sad.Poor you.-He say and tried to hug me.
-Don't!!!-I say and push him away.
I sit down and close my eyes.But then i open my
eyes again and stood up.Then i went back to my room.
One day when she came we went to walk in hospital
garden.The was one peacefull place and we sit down.
-How are you today?-She ask.
-I'm fine but why you even care about how i am.-I say.
-I just care about because you are so important
to me.-She say.
-So tell me who are you.-I say.
-I'm sorry...I can't say say that because you have
to remember all by yourself.I'm so sorry.-She say.
-Yeah right.And you can go to the hell.-I say and stood up.
But then that guy came and he smile to me.But he
stop smiling when he saw her.he just stared at her
and didn't say anything.
-What the hell you are doing here?You are last
person who i wanna see.-She say.
-but i didn't come to see you.One of my good
friend is here now and i came to meet him.When
i saw her here i decise to say hi.-He say.
-But now you can go to the hell.And never come
back.-She say
-Nope i don't go.I will go to meet my friend now.
Besides you can't say what she can do or who
she will meet.Can i come to see you someday?-He say.
-Why you would come to see me?And who are
you even.-I say.
-What?You don't remember me at all anymore.-He say.
-She have lost her memory.-She say.
-And that's why i'm here.-I say.
-Oh...That is so sad.Poor you.-He say and tried to hug me.
-Don't!!!-I say and push him away.
I sit down and close my eyes.But then i open my
eyes again and stood up.Then i went back to my room.
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Oh... Great part!
I'm curious to know more...
I'm curious to know more...
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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I'm really curious also to know more
what's happening there?
what's happening there?
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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woow... this is really goood
i wanna know what will happen next
i wanna know what will happen next
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Just read this... sounds exciting!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Thank you girls
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Part 3
Then came that day when i could go away from
hospital.but i didn't have any place where i could go.
At least i don't remember that i would have some
place.But then she came.
-Are you ready?You will come to live at my home.-She say.
-But tell me first...Who are you?I really wanna know
that.-I say.
-Okey i tell you...I'm your sister and my name
is Riikka.-She say.
-I'm four years younger than you and we have been
almost always so close.-Riikka say.
-You...are...my...sister.But i don't remember you
at all.Actually i don't remember anything.-I say.
-Someday you will remember everything.Just let
time goes.But maybe we could go now.-Riikka say.
I nodded and stood up.We went to corridor and that
guy was there with some other guy.They looked at us
but then that guy smile to me.
-Oh nice...Can you go away from here?Maybe we
could meet someday.-He say.
-Why you wanna even know that?Tell me who are you.-I say.
He just smile to me and went away with other guy.
We went to Riikka's home and she show me my
room where i can sleep.
-Thank you...-I say.
-You're welcome.-Riikka say and hugs me.
Then she left me alone and i sit on bed.I hate this
my situation.and all what i need now is patience but
i don't have that.I will get my memory back someday
but doctors says also that maybe i don't get.
Then came that day when i could go away from
hospital.but i didn't have any place where i could go.
At least i don't remember that i would have some
place.But then she came.
-Are you ready?You will come to live at my home.-She say.
-But tell me first...Who are you?I really wanna know
that.-I say.
-Okey i tell you...I'm your sister and my name
is Riikka.-She say.
-I'm four years younger than you and we have been
almost always so close.-Riikka say.
-You...are...my...sister.But i don't remember you
at all.Actually i don't remember anything.-I say.
-Someday you will remember everything.Just let
time goes.But maybe we could go now.-Riikka say.
I nodded and stood up.We went to corridor and that
guy was there with some other guy.They looked at us
but then that guy smile to me.
-Oh nice...Can you go away from here?Maybe we
could meet someday.-He say.
-Why you wanna even know that?Tell me who are you.-I say.
He just smile to me and went away with other guy.
We went to Riikka's home and she show me my
room where i can sleep.
-Thank you...-I say.
-You're welcome.-Riikka say and hugs me.
Then she left me alone and i sit on bed.I hate this
my situation.and all what i need now is patience but
i don't have that.I will get my memory back someday
but doctors says also that maybe i don't get.
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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I feel sorry for him. But I like this story.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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this part was great
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Part 4
Two weeks later i went to at cafe alone.It was so
nice feeling when you can buy your own cup of
coffee by yourself.Of course it's nice when Riikka
look after me but too much is too much.I wanna
be alone sometimes.I still don't remember anything
about me.
Then that guy came at cafe.When he saw me he
smile to me.He came to my table and sit down.
-Hi...How are you?-He say and smile.
-I'm okey...but i still can't remember anything.And
i hate that.-I say.
-Poor you.Do you know what happened?Why you
lost your memory?-He say.
-Doctors said to me that i got into some accident.
They told to me that i was crossing on road when
some car hit to me.And that driver called to
ambulance.-I say.
He just nodded and suddenly he hugs me.And i
hugs him back.But then i push him away.
-Tell me...Who are you?How i know you?-I say.
-I can't tell you those things.You have to remember
all by yourself.I really like to help you but i can't.-He say.
-All say that same thing to me.-I say.
-Maybe because it's true.-He say.
-Yeah...but i hate this situation.-i say.
-Can i ask...Where do you live now?I'm quite sure
that you don't live alone.-He say.
-Yes you are right.I don't live alone.I live now at
Riikka's home.And i know that she is my sis.Well
at least she have say so.-I say.
-Yes she is your sis.But i have to go now.Maybe
we could meet some other day again?-He say.
-Yes maybe we could.-I say.
He smile and stood up.He kisses me on my cheek.
Then he went out of cafe.I look after him and smile.
Two weeks later i went to at cafe alone.It was so
nice feeling when you can buy your own cup of
coffee by yourself.Of course it's nice when Riikka
look after me but too much is too much.I wanna
be alone sometimes.I still don't remember anything
about me.
Then that guy came at cafe.When he saw me he
smile to me.He came to my table and sit down.
-Hi...How are you?-He say and smile.
-I'm okey...but i still can't remember anything.And
i hate that.-I say.
-Poor you.Do you know what happened?Why you
lost your memory?-He say.
-Doctors said to me that i got into some accident.
They told to me that i was crossing on road when
some car hit to me.And that driver called to
ambulance.-I say.
He just nodded and suddenly he hugs me.And i
hugs him back.But then i push him away.
-Tell me...Who are you?How i know you?-I say.
-I can't tell you those things.You have to remember
all by yourself.I really like to help you but i can't.-He say.
-All say that same thing to me.-I say.
-Maybe because it's true.-He say.
-Yeah...but i hate this situation.-i say.
-Can i ask...Where do you live now?I'm quite sure
that you don't live alone.-He say.
-Yes you are right.I don't live alone.I live now at
Riikka's home.And i know that she is my sis.Well
at least she have say so.-I say.
-Yes she is your sis.But i have to go now.Maybe
we could meet some other day again?-He say.
-Yes maybe we could.-I say.
He smile and stood up.He kisses me on my cheek.
Then he went out of cafe.I look after him and smile.
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Sad that she can't remember anything...
But great parts!
But great parts!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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