**Angel** Part 20 FINISHED!
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Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: **Angel** Part 20 FINISHED!
poor javi
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Oeh sexeh Javi in pink strings haha,, just read the whole story it's not amazing but I LOVE IT
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Those pink strings...
Grrreat!
But I'm not still back.. I was at school and I'm school now too.. Dunno when I'll get my PC back..
Ja ois sulle asiaa mutta hitsi kun en tiiä millon saan sen koneen takas.. tarttis vähän enemmän aikaa selittää kun 15 minuuttia.. Argh..
Grrreat!
But I'm not still back.. I was at school and I'm school now too.. Dunno when I'll get my PC back..
Ja ois sulle asiaa mutta hitsi kun en tiiä millon saan sen koneen takas.. tarttis vähän enemmän aikaa selittää kun 15 minuuttia.. Argh..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Location : Finland
Registration date : 2007-11-18
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Thanks!
Part 6
3 months later
I had had a boyfriend for two months. He was a sweet boy and I thought maybe he was the right one. But I was wrong. I found out that he was dating with 2 other girls. I was so depressed... and the guy wasn't even sorry about it! He didn't see anything wrong being with 3 girls. I said it was over and left him. I stayed in my room for the whole weekend. Well, on Sunday Raúl had visited our neighbour and Javi had wondered where I was and Raúl had told him. Then he came to see me. I was laying on my bed and staring at the ceiling, when I realised someone was standing at the door.
- Hola..., Javi said quietly.
- I'm down... I wanna be alone, I said and turned my back to him.
I heard steps behind me.
- I heard about it, he said and I felt he sat down on my bed.
- Well, he was a jerk. He's worth nothing... I shouldn't even cry for him, I said quietly.
- Yes... but still it hurts, I know..., he said and touched my shoulder.
- I'll never find a true love, I said and felt tears in my eyes.
- You will, don't worry, Javi convinced.
Then I felt he came next to me. I felt his chest against my back and he put his arm around me and just hold me close. I couldn't help my tears. I started crying.
- Shhh..., he whispered and caressed my hair.
- Everything's going to be just fine, he said and just was there for me.
I turned to him. He looked at me and I felt he was feeling bad too.
- I'm sorry I'm like this, I said then.
- It's ok. I understand you... and it hurts to see my friend so sad and hurt, he said and hugged me. I cried against his chest and he just hold me.
- Susana... my friend... I know what is the best treatment for this, he said after a while. I raised my head and looked at him with tears on my face.
- What?
- Having a biiiiig ice-cream with your friend, he smiled.
- Ice-cream? I asked surprised.
- Yea, like one biig ball of chocolate and another biig ball of... chocolate, he grinned.
- Chocolate? I smiled. Then I laughed.
I knew his obsession to chocolate.
He wiped away the tears on my cheek.
- I got you laughing already, he smiled.
- Yes, you did, thanks! I smiled.
I got up, so did he.
- So, shall we go then? he smiled.
- Well, why not. That bastard doesn't deserve more tears, I said.
- Indeed! he winked and then we left.
And so we went for an ice-cream. Javi told me to wait, he'd buy ice-creams for us. I was sitting on a bench in the park and waited for Javi. I was thinking about my ex-boyfriend. Suddenly I didn't feel so sad anymore. I realised I had had a feeling that something wasn't right in that relationship. That's why I wasn't into it deeply. And to have a friend like Javi... I smiled. He is such a dear friend to me and knows how to cheer me up. Then I saw him coming with an ice-cream. Huh? Only one?
- Hey, didn't you say you'll bring both of us? I was annoyed.
His ice-cream was 3 big balls of chocolate! I was staring at it suspiciously.
He laughed.
Part 6
3 months later
I had had a boyfriend for two months. He was a sweet boy and I thought maybe he was the right one. But I was wrong. I found out that he was dating with 2 other girls. I was so depressed... and the guy wasn't even sorry about it! He didn't see anything wrong being with 3 girls. I said it was over and left him. I stayed in my room for the whole weekend. Well, on Sunday Raúl had visited our neighbour and Javi had wondered where I was and Raúl had told him. Then he came to see me. I was laying on my bed and staring at the ceiling, when I realised someone was standing at the door.
- Hola..., Javi said quietly.
- I'm down... I wanna be alone, I said and turned my back to him.
I heard steps behind me.
- I heard about it, he said and I felt he sat down on my bed.
- Well, he was a jerk. He's worth nothing... I shouldn't even cry for him, I said quietly.
- Yes... but still it hurts, I know..., he said and touched my shoulder.
- I'll never find a true love, I said and felt tears in my eyes.
- You will, don't worry, Javi convinced.
Then I felt he came next to me. I felt his chest against my back and he put his arm around me and just hold me close. I couldn't help my tears. I started crying.
- Shhh..., he whispered and caressed my hair.
- Everything's going to be just fine, he said and just was there for me.
I turned to him. He looked at me and I felt he was feeling bad too.
- I'm sorry I'm like this, I said then.
- It's ok. I understand you... and it hurts to see my friend so sad and hurt, he said and hugged me. I cried against his chest and he just hold me.
- Susana... my friend... I know what is the best treatment for this, he said after a while. I raised my head and looked at him with tears on my face.
- What?
- Having a biiiiig ice-cream with your friend, he smiled.
- Ice-cream? I asked surprised.
- Yea, like one biig ball of chocolate and another biig ball of... chocolate, he grinned.
- Chocolate? I smiled. Then I laughed.
I knew his obsession to chocolate.
He wiped away the tears on my cheek.
- I got you laughing already, he smiled.
- Yes, you did, thanks! I smiled.
I got up, so did he.
- So, shall we go then? he smiled.
- Well, why not. That bastard doesn't deserve more tears, I said.
- Indeed! he winked and then we left.
And so we went for an ice-cream. Javi told me to wait, he'd buy ice-creams for us. I was sitting on a bench in the park and waited for Javi. I was thinking about my ex-boyfriend. Suddenly I didn't feel so sad anymore. I realised I had had a feeling that something wasn't right in that relationship. That's why I wasn't into it deeply. And to have a friend like Javi... I smiled. He is such a dear friend to me and knows how to cheer me up. Then I saw him coming with an ice-cream. Huh? Only one?
- Hey, didn't you say you'll bring both of us? I was annoyed.
His ice-cream was 3 big balls of chocolate! I was staring at it suspiciously.
He laughed.
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: **Angel** Part 20 FINISHED!
sweet and cute
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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lololololol.... a ice cream with 3 balls of chocolate
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Poor her
Hahahahaha, Javi came with three balls of chocolate
Hahahahaha, Javi came with three balls of chocolate
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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Awww Javi!!
Great part!!!
Great part!!!
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Sharing an ice-cream?
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Weeeeellllll......
Part 7
- This IS for both of us. One for you, one for me and one for us, he grinned.
- Huh? Do I have to share one with you? I made a face.
- Yees, he laughed, - You know, it will cheer you up, you'll see! he said and gave me the ice-cream.
- You can eat the first ball, he grinned.
- Erm... thanks! I smiled.
We sat on the bench and talked while I ate the chocolate ice-cream. I forgot to give it to Javi after the first ball, but he kept me on eye.
- Don't try! It's my turn now! he said suddenly and snatched the ice-cream from me.
I laughed.
- Sorryy, I totally forgot! I giggled.
- Greedy pig! he teased me, but laughed then.
When he had finished the second ball there was that third one left.
- So... this one we share, he grinned and licked the ice-cream.
- Your turn..., he said and let me have it.
I took a big bite of it. Javi didn't grin anymore.
- Hey! Not THAT much! he said and took the ice-cream for himself.
I laughed. Javi took a bit bigger bite of it than I did.
- Now who's the greedy pig? I giggled and stole the ice-cream, sprang up and run away.
- Susana! I heard him yelling behind me.
I heard he was running after me and because I laughed so much, he caught me soon.
- Susana! Stop it now! he laughed, - Let's finish it together, ok?
- Well, ok..., I smiled and licked the ice-cream.
Javi was faster. He pressed the ice-cream against my face.
- You! What the hell are you doing? I exclaimed.
Javi had the ice-cream and he almost dropped it while laughing at me.
I grabbed on his shirt and was going to clean my face on it, when Javi stopped me.
- No! Wait! It's still ice-cream! he grinned.
- So? I asked.
- I wanna eat it! he laughed.
- Whaaat? Nooo!! I laughed, but Javi's hold of my wrist was so strong that I couldn't escape.
- Let me lick it away! he grinned.
- You're out of your mind! I laughed and pushed him away.
I took steps backwards and then I bumped into a tree.
I had my back against the tree and Javi came close to me, so I couldn't go anywhere.
He was grinning and I was laughing and trying to stop him, but couldn't because of laughing.
- My little ice-cream face, he grinned and then he licked my cheek.
- No! Stoooop!! I laughed.
His tongue tickled me.
- I paid for the ice-cream, so I'm not going to waste it, he said and licked my other cheek, then my chin and finally my lips.
Suddenly we both got serious and looked at each others a bit scared.
What was it that just happened?
- Erm..., sorry, Javi said confused.
He didn't really know where to look at.
- Well, I said, - Don't know what that was, but I wanna dry my face you just drooled, I said and dried my face on his shirt.
Now Javi couldn't stop me and he looked at his shirt then and saw a bit chocolate on it.
- Susana..., he rolled his eyes.
- Don't forget you started it, I grinned.
- Oh, well, he sighed and then laughed, - I hope you'll clean this shirt.
- Sure, it's not a big deal, I winked, - Let's go!
Part 7
- This IS for both of us. One for you, one for me and one for us, he grinned.
- Huh? Do I have to share one with you? I made a face.
- Yees, he laughed, - You know, it will cheer you up, you'll see! he said and gave me the ice-cream.
- You can eat the first ball, he grinned.
- Erm... thanks! I smiled.
We sat on the bench and talked while I ate the chocolate ice-cream. I forgot to give it to Javi after the first ball, but he kept me on eye.
- Don't try! It's my turn now! he said suddenly and snatched the ice-cream from me.
I laughed.
- Sorryy, I totally forgot! I giggled.
- Greedy pig! he teased me, but laughed then.
When he had finished the second ball there was that third one left.
- So... this one we share, he grinned and licked the ice-cream.
- Your turn..., he said and let me have it.
I took a big bite of it. Javi didn't grin anymore.
- Hey! Not THAT much! he said and took the ice-cream for himself.
I laughed. Javi took a bit bigger bite of it than I did.
- Now who's the greedy pig? I giggled and stole the ice-cream, sprang up and run away.
- Susana! I heard him yelling behind me.
I heard he was running after me and because I laughed so much, he caught me soon.
- Susana! Stop it now! he laughed, - Let's finish it together, ok?
- Well, ok..., I smiled and licked the ice-cream.
Javi was faster. He pressed the ice-cream against my face.
- You! What the hell are you doing? I exclaimed.
Javi had the ice-cream and he almost dropped it while laughing at me.
I grabbed on his shirt and was going to clean my face on it, when Javi stopped me.
- No! Wait! It's still ice-cream! he grinned.
- So? I asked.
- I wanna eat it! he laughed.
- Whaaat? Nooo!! I laughed, but Javi's hold of my wrist was so strong that I couldn't escape.
- Let me lick it away! he grinned.
- You're out of your mind! I laughed and pushed him away.
I took steps backwards and then I bumped into a tree.
I had my back against the tree and Javi came close to me, so I couldn't go anywhere.
He was grinning and I was laughing and trying to stop him, but couldn't because of laughing.
- My little ice-cream face, he grinned and then he licked my cheek.
- No! Stoooop!! I laughed.
His tongue tickled me.
- I paid for the ice-cream, so I'm not going to waste it, he said and licked my other cheek, then my chin and finally my lips.
Suddenly we both got serious and looked at each others a bit scared.
What was it that just happened?
- Erm..., sorry, Javi said confused.
He didn't really know where to look at.
- Well, I said, - Don't know what that was, but I wanna dry my face you just drooled, I said and dried my face on his shirt.
Now Javi couldn't stop me and he looked at his shirt then and saw a bit chocolate on it.
- Susana..., he rolled his eyes.
- Don't forget you started it, I grinned.
- Oh, well, he sighed and then laughed, - I hope you'll clean this shirt.
- Sure, it's not a big deal, I winked, - Let's go!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllll
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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- No! Wait! It's still ice-cream! he grinned.
- So? I asked.
- I wanna eat it! he laughed.
WHAHAHAHAHA!! LMAO!! Amazing!
- So? I asked.
- I wanna eat it! he laughed.
WHAHAHAHAHA!! LMAO!! Amazing!
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JAVI!!!!!!!!!!!
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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cutteeeeeeee
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Javi!!
Oh he licked her lips.
Minna change the topic title.
Oh he licked her lips.
Minna change the topic title.
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Sergo wrote:Javi!!
Oh he licked her lips.
Minna change the topic title.
Why? What should it be then?
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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But it said Part 5 earlier.Mindex wrote:Sergo wrote:Javi!!
Oh he licked her lips.
Minna change the topic title.
Why? What should it be then?
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Sergo wrote:But it said Part 5 earlier.Mindex wrote:Sergo wrote:Javi!!
Oh he licked her lips.
Minna change the topic title.
Why? What should it be then?
I know, but I forgot to put part 6 earlier.
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Dumma pulla. xDMindex wrote:Sergo wrote:But it said Part 5 earlier.Mindex wrote:Sergo wrote:Javi!!
Oh he licked her lips.
Minna change the topic title.
Why? What should it be then?
I know, but I forgot to put part 6 earlier.
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Örfiiiilllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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