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Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)

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Post  Mindex Thu Jan 10, 2008 2:17 pm

Surprise! Smile I wrote a new story! Shocked I must be ill or something.. Suspect Anyway, this isn't a long one and I thought maybe you want to read it... Smile So, here it goes... and btw, this girl isn't me. Wink


Part 1

I was on a walk like I usually did every evening. Sometimes I went for a walk in the morning as well, if I had time. I really liked walking by myself and listening to music with my mp3. It was relaxing and also helped me to keep fit. Sometimes I felt like running, but mostly I just walked.
My life was going on pretty well. I had a job and I was living with my boyfriend. We were happy together, if anyone wants to know. But then things started to change. I didn't realize it right away, but later I understood that it was the beginning...

I was on my usual route on a walk and listening to music. Actually I was on a good mood and I felt nothing could spoil it. Then I saw him again. He was one of the D'Nash guys... the boyband, which had that stupid "love you my life" song. I had never liked any boybands and I never believed I could like one. I saw this guy quite often on a walk and sometimes he sent me a kiss over the street. I ignored him. He was annoying. We had never talked and he acted like he knew me. Now I saw him waving his hand to me! Uh.. my good mood was spoilt. I didn't look at him, I just continued walking faster. I saw him crossing the street and coming toward me. Shit! I wanted to run, but it would have looked stupid, so I just walked and tried to look like I didn't care about anything.
I heard him saying something to me, but I couldn't hear what he said because of the music I was listening to.
He was walking next to me and I felt he was staring at me while I just continued walking and ignored him. He pushed me gently, but still I didn't look at him. Suddenly I stopped walking. He wasn't prepared to that and continued few steps until he realized that I had stopped. He turned back and smiled to me.
- What? I asked annoyed.
- You actually CAN speak? he grinned.
- Meaning? I asked suspiciously.
- I spoke to you a while ago, but you were like a deaf and dumb, he smiled.
- I don't like being interfered when I'm on a walk, I said and made a face.
- So, you could have said something then, he still smiled.
- Like what?
- Like... get lost or something, he laughed.
- Actually I didn't hear what you said, I replied coldly and continued walking.
- So you ARE deaf! he was teasing.
- No... I'm just listening to music, I said and walked faster, but he followed me.
- Let me guess... D'Nash! he suggested.
I stopped and stared at him.
- I'd never listen to that gayband! I almost yelled and pushed him from my way. I almost saw red, I was so mad at him! I walked forward and then I turned back and yelled
- Don't you ever follow me again!
The guy just laughed, but shouted back
- I love you too!


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Post  Onyone Thu Jan 10, 2008 2:48 pm

I love it! <3
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Post  emilia Thu Jan 10, 2008 4:06 pm

this is sooo great Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Thu Jan 10, 2008 4:32 pm

Weird guy Suspect
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Post  Mindex Thu Jan 10, 2008 4:33 pm

Laughing Laughing Laughing indeed!! Laughing Laughing
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Post  ...::NatashaBelle::... Thu Jan 10, 2008 5:36 pm

NIce!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Thu Jan 10, 2008 5:49 pm

stupid guy Suspect Suspect Suspect


great first part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Kyra - Angie Thu Jan 10, 2008 5:51 pm

Hahaha Laughing Laughing Laughing
Well let's see what comes next Laughing Your "hero" wants to read more, so come on, post a new part Laughing
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Post  ...::NatashaBelle::... Thu Jan 10, 2008 5:52 pm

I want to know what will be next Suspect
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Post  girl1035 Thu Jan 10, 2008 6:16 pm

Awesome beginning. Yassou Maria part 9 (finished) Icon_cheers More please. Yassou Maria part 9 (finished) Icon_biggrin
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Post  Heli Thu Jan 10, 2008 6:40 pm

"the boyband, which had that stupid "love you my life" song."
Gosh I laughed at that... Laughing

You're already posting this? Great then.. MrGreen cheers
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Post  Eveline Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:07 pm

ooow great Very Happy can't wait to read more, but now have to study economy Mad

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Post  ...::NatashaBelle::... Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:33 pm

Laughing Laughing Laughing moooree!!
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Post  Mindex Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:39 pm

Thanks! Glad to hear you like it! Laughing Ok, here's some more!

Part 2

I walked back home, but I was angry. Marco was watching tv when I came in. He looked at me like asking what has happened.
- Just don't ask, I said to him.
- Just come here and tell me! he said.
- I'll take a shower at first, I replied and walked straight to the bathroom.

After the shower I went to the living room and sat down next to Marco. He put his arm around me, gave a kiss and hold me close. I felt better. Then I told him about the D'Nash guy and Marco laughed.
- You always get so angry so quickly! Poor guy, he said.
- He certainly wasn't poor! He deserved it! I said annoyed and stood up.
- Where you're going? Marco asked.
- To the bed. I'm tired.
- Maybe I'll come too, he winked.
- If you feel like, I smiled and I knew he would follow me soon.
It was the last time we slept together.

Next morning Marco left early to the airport. He had to fly to London because of his work.
I would be alone for a week. But I didn't mind. I had to go to work as well and I didn't mind being alone. I had been before, so it wasn't new to me.

In the evening I was on a walk again. I was thinking about Marco. I missed him, but we would see soon again. I was in my thoughts, when suddenly I realized someone next to me. I turned my head to look who it was, though I already knew.
- Hola! the D'Nash guy said smiling.
- Get lost! I said. I didn't smile.
He laughed.
- You remembered! I'm touched! he grinned.
- I'm annoyed, I replied and tried to act like he wasn't here.
- Why?
- Because you won't leave me alone! I almost yelled.
- I'm sorry, he said with puppy eyes, - but I have a suggestion.
I stopped walking and stared at him.
- Suggestion? I was suspicious.
- Yes, since we both are into walking, would you like to walk with me? he asked smiling.
- Aren't I walking already? I asked annoyed. Then I continued walking.
- Yes, but not of your own will, he grinned.
- And why would I do that? 'Cause I want to torture myself? No, thanks!
He laughed.
- Think about it! Wouldn't it be more fun to have someone to walk with? We could chat and have fun while walking, he said.
I couldn't believe my ears. A celebrity was suggesting to me about going for a walk regularly.
- Actually I've planned to start running, I replied and didn't look at him.
- Aw...well, I could start it as well, he said then.
I looked at him. He smiled.
- Are you crazy or something? I asked.
- Maybe, maybe, he grinned.
- Why me?
- Why not?
- I don't get it. Why you ask me? I started to be angry again.
- Because you go for a walk regularly, I've seen it. And we both live around here AND we're both alone, so... isn't that a good idea to go together?
- I have a boyfriend, I said
- Where? he looked around.
I rolled my eyes.
- He wouldn't like it, I said coldly.
- But you would? he grinned.
- NO I WOULDN'T! I yelled.
Some people were staring at us already. I didn't care about them.
- Why don't you just leave me alone! I don't need any company! I wanna be alone! I yelled at him.
- Really? he smiled.
- Yes! Really! I already said get lost, but you don't seem to understand! I was angry now.
- Ok... I'm off, but promise to think about it, ok? he said then.
- No, I won't! I yelled.
I crossed the street and hoped that he wouldn't follow me. Well, he didn't. I was relieved.
Such an idiot!!
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Post  Prisca Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:42 pm

he is really annoy Suspect Suspect Suspect
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Post  ...::NatashaBelle::... Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:45 pm

He must be really in love... Shocked he is loco Rambo
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Post  Heli Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:02 pm

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Hahahah.. Really annoying guy... Laughing
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Post  Onyone Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:07 pm

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Post  Sergo Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:08 pm

That guy is stubborn Laughing
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Post  emilia Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:17 pm

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Post  girl1035 Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:33 pm

He is not annoying. He is cute. Yassou Maria part 9 (finished) Icon_biggrin
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Post  Sergo Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:36 pm

Lisää What a Face
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Post  Mindex Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:43 pm

Laughing Laughing More tomorrow! Wink This is a short story.... so I'm not posting it any faster.... Razz
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Post  Sergo Thu Jan 10, 2008 9:55 pm

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Sad
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Post  Eveline Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:46 pm

ooooh please post it now Sad

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