Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
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Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Surprise! I wrote a new story! I must be ill or something.. Anyway, this isn't a long one and I thought maybe you want to read it... So, here it goes... and btw, this girl isn't me.
Part 1
I was on a walk like I usually did every evening. Sometimes I went for a walk in the morning as well, if I had time. I really liked walking by myself and listening to music with my mp3. It was relaxing and also helped me to keep fit. Sometimes I felt like running, but mostly I just walked.
My life was going on pretty well. I had a job and I was living with my boyfriend. We were happy together, if anyone wants to know. But then things started to change. I didn't realize it right away, but later I understood that it was the beginning...
I was on my usual route on a walk and listening to music. Actually I was on a good mood and I felt nothing could spoil it. Then I saw him again. He was one of the D'Nash guys... the boyband, which had that stupid "love you my life" song. I had never liked any boybands and I never believed I could like one. I saw this guy quite often on a walk and sometimes he sent me a kiss over the street. I ignored him. He was annoying. We had never talked and he acted like he knew me. Now I saw him waving his hand to me! Uh.. my good mood was spoilt. I didn't look at him, I just continued walking faster. I saw him crossing the street and coming toward me. Shit! I wanted to run, but it would have looked stupid, so I just walked and tried to look like I didn't care about anything.
I heard him saying something to me, but I couldn't hear what he said because of the music I was listening to.
He was walking next to me and I felt he was staring at me while I just continued walking and ignored him. He pushed me gently, but still I didn't look at him. Suddenly I stopped walking. He wasn't prepared to that and continued few steps until he realized that I had stopped. He turned back and smiled to me.
- What? I asked annoyed.
- You actually CAN speak? he grinned.
- Meaning? I asked suspiciously.
- I spoke to you a while ago, but you were like a deaf and dumb, he smiled.
- I don't like being interfered when I'm on a walk, I said and made a face.
- So, you could have said something then, he still smiled.
- Like what?
- Like... get lost or something, he laughed.
- Actually I didn't hear what you said, I replied coldly and continued walking.
- So you ARE deaf! he was teasing.
- No... I'm just listening to music, I said and walked faster, but he followed me.
- Let me guess... D'Nash! he suggested.
I stopped and stared at him.
- I'd never listen to that gayband! I almost yelled and pushed him from my way. I almost saw red, I was so mad at him! I walked forward and then I turned back and yelled
- Don't you ever follow me again!
The guy just laughed, but shouted back
- I love you too!
Part 1
I was on a walk like I usually did every evening. Sometimes I went for a walk in the morning as well, if I had time. I really liked walking by myself and listening to music with my mp3. It was relaxing and also helped me to keep fit. Sometimes I felt like running, but mostly I just walked.
My life was going on pretty well. I had a job and I was living with my boyfriend. We were happy together, if anyone wants to know. But then things started to change. I didn't realize it right away, but later I understood that it was the beginning...
I was on my usual route on a walk and listening to music. Actually I was on a good mood and I felt nothing could spoil it. Then I saw him again. He was one of the D'Nash guys... the boyband, which had that stupid "love you my life" song. I had never liked any boybands and I never believed I could like one. I saw this guy quite often on a walk and sometimes he sent me a kiss over the street. I ignored him. He was annoying. We had never talked and he acted like he knew me. Now I saw him waving his hand to me! Uh.. my good mood was spoilt. I didn't look at him, I just continued walking faster. I saw him crossing the street and coming toward me. Shit! I wanted to run, but it would have looked stupid, so I just walked and tried to look like I didn't care about anything.
I heard him saying something to me, but I couldn't hear what he said because of the music I was listening to.
He was walking next to me and I felt he was staring at me while I just continued walking and ignored him. He pushed me gently, but still I didn't look at him. Suddenly I stopped walking. He wasn't prepared to that and continued few steps until he realized that I had stopped. He turned back and smiled to me.
- What? I asked annoyed.
- You actually CAN speak? he grinned.
- Meaning? I asked suspiciously.
- I spoke to you a while ago, but you were like a deaf and dumb, he smiled.
- I don't like being interfered when I'm on a walk, I said and made a face.
- So, you could have said something then, he still smiled.
- Like what?
- Like... get lost or something, he laughed.
- Actually I didn't hear what you said, I replied coldly and continued walking.
- So you ARE deaf! he was teasing.
- No... I'm just listening to music, I said and walked faster, but he followed me.
- Let me guess... D'Nash! he suggested.
I stopped and stared at him.
- I'd never listen to that gayband! I almost yelled and pushed him from my way. I almost saw red, I was so mad at him! I walked forward and then I turned back and yelled
- Don't you ever follow me again!
The guy just laughed, but shouted back
- I love you too!
Last edited by on Sun Jan 13, 2008 2:09 pm; edited 2 times in total
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
this is sooo great
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Weird guy
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
indeed!!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
stupid guy
great first part
great first part
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Hahaha
Well let's see what comes next Your "hero" wants to read more, so come on, post a new part
Well let's see what comes next Your "hero" wants to read more, so come on, post a new part
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Awesome beginning. More please.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
"the boyband, which had that stupid "love you my life" song."
Gosh I laughed at that...
You're already posting this? Great then..
Gosh I laughed at that...
You're already posting this? Great then..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
ooow great can't wait to read more, but now have to study economy
Eveline- Number of posts : 1222
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Thanks! Glad to hear you like it! Ok, here's some more!
Part 2
I walked back home, but I was angry. Marco was watching tv when I came in. He looked at me like asking what has happened.
- Just don't ask, I said to him.
- Just come here and tell me! he said.
- I'll take a shower at first, I replied and walked straight to the bathroom.
After the shower I went to the living room and sat down next to Marco. He put his arm around me, gave a kiss and hold me close. I felt better. Then I told him about the D'Nash guy and Marco laughed.
- You always get so angry so quickly! Poor guy, he said.
- He certainly wasn't poor! He deserved it! I said annoyed and stood up.
- Where you're going? Marco asked.
- To the bed. I'm tired.
- Maybe I'll come too, he winked.
- If you feel like, I smiled and I knew he would follow me soon.
It was the last time we slept together.
Next morning Marco left early to the airport. He had to fly to London because of his work.
I would be alone for a week. But I didn't mind. I had to go to work as well and I didn't mind being alone. I had been before, so it wasn't new to me.
In the evening I was on a walk again. I was thinking about Marco. I missed him, but we would see soon again. I was in my thoughts, when suddenly I realized someone next to me. I turned my head to look who it was, though I already knew.
- Hola! the D'Nash guy said smiling.
- Get lost! I said. I didn't smile.
He laughed.
- You remembered! I'm touched! he grinned.
- I'm annoyed, I replied and tried to act like he wasn't here.
- Why?
- Because you won't leave me alone! I almost yelled.
- I'm sorry, he said with puppy eyes, - but I have a suggestion.
I stopped walking and stared at him.
- Suggestion? I was suspicious.
- Yes, since we both are into walking, would you like to walk with me? he asked smiling.
- Aren't I walking already? I asked annoyed. Then I continued walking.
- Yes, but not of your own will, he grinned.
- And why would I do that? 'Cause I want to torture myself? No, thanks!
He laughed.
- Think about it! Wouldn't it be more fun to have someone to walk with? We could chat and have fun while walking, he said.
I couldn't believe my ears. A celebrity was suggesting to me about going for a walk regularly.
- Actually I've planned to start running, I replied and didn't look at him.
- Aw...well, I could start it as well, he said then.
I looked at him. He smiled.
- Are you crazy or something? I asked.
- Maybe, maybe, he grinned.
- Why me?
- Why not?
- I don't get it. Why you ask me? I started to be angry again.
- Because you go for a walk regularly, I've seen it. And we both live around here AND we're both alone, so... isn't that a good idea to go together?
- I have a boyfriend, I said
- Where? he looked around.
I rolled my eyes.
- He wouldn't like it, I said coldly.
- But you would? he grinned.
- NO I WOULDN'T! I yelled.
Some people were staring at us already. I didn't care about them.
- Why don't you just leave me alone! I don't need any company! I wanna be alone! I yelled at him.
- Really? he smiled.
- Yes! Really! I already said get lost, but you don't seem to understand! I was angry now.
- Ok... I'm off, but promise to think about it, ok? he said then.
- No, I won't! I yelled.
I crossed the street and hoped that he wouldn't follow me. Well, he didn't. I was relieved.
Such an idiot!!
Part 2
I walked back home, but I was angry. Marco was watching tv when I came in. He looked at me like asking what has happened.
- Just don't ask, I said to him.
- Just come here and tell me! he said.
- I'll take a shower at first, I replied and walked straight to the bathroom.
After the shower I went to the living room and sat down next to Marco. He put his arm around me, gave a kiss and hold me close. I felt better. Then I told him about the D'Nash guy and Marco laughed.
- You always get so angry so quickly! Poor guy, he said.
- He certainly wasn't poor! He deserved it! I said annoyed and stood up.
- Where you're going? Marco asked.
- To the bed. I'm tired.
- Maybe I'll come too, he winked.
- If you feel like, I smiled and I knew he would follow me soon.
It was the last time we slept together.
Next morning Marco left early to the airport. He had to fly to London because of his work.
I would be alone for a week. But I didn't mind. I had to go to work as well and I didn't mind being alone. I had been before, so it wasn't new to me.
In the evening I was on a walk again. I was thinking about Marco. I missed him, but we would see soon again. I was in my thoughts, when suddenly I realized someone next to me. I turned my head to look who it was, though I already knew.
- Hola! the D'Nash guy said smiling.
- Get lost! I said. I didn't smile.
He laughed.
- You remembered! I'm touched! he grinned.
- I'm annoyed, I replied and tried to act like he wasn't here.
- Why?
- Because you won't leave me alone! I almost yelled.
- I'm sorry, he said with puppy eyes, - but I have a suggestion.
I stopped walking and stared at him.
- Suggestion? I was suspicious.
- Yes, since we both are into walking, would you like to walk with me? he asked smiling.
- Aren't I walking already? I asked annoyed. Then I continued walking.
- Yes, but not of your own will, he grinned.
- And why would I do that? 'Cause I want to torture myself? No, thanks!
He laughed.
- Think about it! Wouldn't it be more fun to have someone to walk with? We could chat and have fun while walking, he said.
I couldn't believe my ears. A celebrity was suggesting to me about going for a walk regularly.
- Actually I've planned to start running, I replied and didn't look at him.
- Aw...well, I could start it as well, he said then.
I looked at him. He smiled.
- Are you crazy or something? I asked.
- Maybe, maybe, he grinned.
- Why me?
- Why not?
- I don't get it. Why you ask me? I started to be angry again.
- Because you go for a walk regularly, I've seen it. And we both live around here AND we're both alone, so... isn't that a good idea to go together?
- I have a boyfriend, I said
- Where? he looked around.
I rolled my eyes.
- He wouldn't like it, I said coldly.
- But you would? he grinned.
- NO I WOULDN'T! I yelled.
Some people were staring at us already. I didn't care about them.
- Why don't you just leave me alone! I don't need any company! I wanna be alone! I yelled at him.
- Really? he smiled.
- Yes! Really! I already said get lost, but you don't seem to understand! I was angry now.
- Ok... I'm off, but promise to think about it, ok? he said then.
- No, I won't! I yelled.
I crossed the street and hoped that he wouldn't follow me. Well, he didn't. I was relieved.
Such an idiot!!
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
he is really annoy
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Grreat!
Hahahah.. Really annoying guy...
Hahahah.. Really annoying guy...
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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That guy is stubborn
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He is not annoying. He is cute.
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Lisää
New word
New word
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More tomorrow! This is a short story.... so I'm not posting it any faster....
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Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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ooooh please post it now
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