*Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Ahah.... mistakes aren't important for me... i just wanna new part today... that's it!
but... are you sure Sonia is a "real girl" ?
but... are you sure Sonia is a "real girl" ?
tuLicia- Number of posts : 401
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Yeeha... Sonia IS a REAL girl... A little bit more story perhaps...? Now?
Part 22
- Oh, no..., Javi continued speaking calmly and his face was near mine.
- I don't want! I exclaimed and tried to push him away, but I couldn't. Javi's hold was like a lock.
- Yes, you do, he whispered to my ear and let his cheek touch mine and his stubble tickled my face. I felt his lips on my cheek and slowly he moved them nearer my lips and in the end I felt his lips on mine. I felt a pleasant cramp in my stomach. He was right... I wanted him, but I was still angry.
But Javi continued kissing me, I felt his tongue in my mouth and I wanted him more... He realised I wasn't fighting back anymore and released his hold of my wrists. But right after he released me, I was ready to escape and pushed him off me and sprang up from the floor.
We both were gasping. Javi got up from the floor as well.
- Well, you were smarter, he said staring at me, - So, you don't want me, huh?
- It's not about wanting..., I said, - I'm angry at you, you should talk more, not act like an idiot!
- Well..., he said and took a step closer to me, - I just realised it... Is it ok, if I promise to talk to Sonia? I mean... I'll tell her how I feel.... and..., Javi said and seemed to think hard what to say.
- How do you feel then? I asked and tried to fix my mixed hair.
He looked at me.
- Don't you know? he asked.
- Well, after your recent acts it's a bit difficult... I don't know who you want...
- After I met you I've never thought seriously anyone else. You are my everything, Javi said seriously.
- Then what is this Sonia thing? I wanted to know.
- We're just friends.
- Where do you need her?
- We are just having fun together, that's all.
- Aren't you having fun with me? I was curious to know.
- I am! But it's different! Like... like she was one of the guys..., he tried so hard to explain.
- And what was I in the beginning? One of the guys? Just a friend?
Javi looked helpless.
- Yes... no... I mean... you were, but things changed...
- Why things can't change between you and her as well? I asked.
- Because this time it's different. I have you! I love you! When I met you, I didn't have anyone. When I met Sonia, I already had you.
- But what about Sonia? I mean you're breaking her heart. She loves you... can you be just a friend? I asked and I really felt sorry for her.
Then Javi seemed to realise something. He thought something for a while and then looked at me.
- Susana... I... I know I've been a fool... I've hurt her... but I never meant it! he looked a bit scared.
- You have to talk to her... explain everything... she deserves it, I said quietly.
- You're right... and I can't see her so often. She has to get over me... because... I don't want that you're worried about her.. nor me... nor... us, Javi stared at me now.
I saw tears in his eyes.
- I've made you jealous, angry... and I almost lost you, he whispered, - I'm so sorry, Susana... I'm so sorry about all this mess! he sobbed and took the last steps to me and took me in his arms. Tears were falling on my cheeks as well and I hold him strongly. Finally he understood. And I understood that he didn't mean to hurt anyone.
- And... I was so lonely without you, Javi confessed in the end.
- I was too... but now we can be together, I said.
- You got a job in Madrid? Javi asked.
- Yes... and I wanted to surprise you, but..., I sobbed.
- I spoiled everything, Javi said ashamed.
He wiped away the tears on my cheeks. I wiped away his tears.
- I want to make it up to you, he whispered, - if you let me...
Javi kissed my neck again and caressed my back and then my hair.
I felt his stubble on my cheek again and then his lips met mine and he kissed me passionately... and I kissed back.
- Mmm... you're not fighting back anymore..., Javi mumbled and suddenly took me in his arms and carried me to our bedroom.
Part 22
- Oh, no..., Javi continued speaking calmly and his face was near mine.
- I don't want! I exclaimed and tried to push him away, but I couldn't. Javi's hold was like a lock.
- Yes, you do, he whispered to my ear and let his cheek touch mine and his stubble tickled my face. I felt his lips on my cheek and slowly he moved them nearer my lips and in the end I felt his lips on mine. I felt a pleasant cramp in my stomach. He was right... I wanted him, but I was still angry.
But Javi continued kissing me, I felt his tongue in my mouth and I wanted him more... He realised I wasn't fighting back anymore and released his hold of my wrists. But right after he released me, I was ready to escape and pushed him off me and sprang up from the floor.
We both were gasping. Javi got up from the floor as well.
- Well, you were smarter, he said staring at me, - So, you don't want me, huh?
- It's not about wanting..., I said, - I'm angry at you, you should talk more, not act like an idiot!
- Well..., he said and took a step closer to me, - I just realised it... Is it ok, if I promise to talk to Sonia? I mean... I'll tell her how I feel.... and..., Javi said and seemed to think hard what to say.
- How do you feel then? I asked and tried to fix my mixed hair.
He looked at me.
- Don't you know? he asked.
- Well, after your recent acts it's a bit difficult... I don't know who you want...
- After I met you I've never thought seriously anyone else. You are my everything, Javi said seriously.
- Then what is this Sonia thing? I wanted to know.
- We're just friends.
- Where do you need her?
- We are just having fun together, that's all.
- Aren't you having fun with me? I was curious to know.
- I am! But it's different! Like... like she was one of the guys..., he tried so hard to explain.
- And what was I in the beginning? One of the guys? Just a friend?
Javi looked helpless.
- Yes... no... I mean... you were, but things changed...
- Why things can't change between you and her as well? I asked.
- Because this time it's different. I have you! I love you! When I met you, I didn't have anyone. When I met Sonia, I already had you.
- But what about Sonia? I mean you're breaking her heart. She loves you... can you be just a friend? I asked and I really felt sorry for her.
Then Javi seemed to realise something. He thought something for a while and then looked at me.
- Susana... I... I know I've been a fool... I've hurt her... but I never meant it! he looked a bit scared.
- You have to talk to her... explain everything... she deserves it, I said quietly.
- You're right... and I can't see her so often. She has to get over me... because... I don't want that you're worried about her.. nor me... nor... us, Javi stared at me now.
I saw tears in his eyes.
- I've made you jealous, angry... and I almost lost you, he whispered, - I'm so sorry, Susana... I'm so sorry about all this mess! he sobbed and took the last steps to me and took me in his arms. Tears were falling on my cheeks as well and I hold him strongly. Finally he understood. And I understood that he didn't mean to hurt anyone.
- And... I was so lonely without you, Javi confessed in the end.
- I was too... but now we can be together, I said.
- You got a job in Madrid? Javi asked.
- Yes... and I wanted to surprise you, but..., I sobbed.
- I spoiled everything, Javi said ashamed.
He wiped away the tears on my cheeks. I wiped away his tears.
- I want to make it up to you, he whispered, - if you let me...
Javi kissed my neck again and caressed my back and then my hair.
I felt his stubble on my cheek again and then his lips met mine and he kissed me passionately... and I kissed back.
- Mmm... you're not fighting back anymore..., Javi mumbled and suddenly took me in his arms and carried me to our bedroom.
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
I don't care about the Soniabitch even if she's a nice person
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
No.
I'm just playing it fair
I'm just playing it fair
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
I'm snäll.x Imke x wrote:Still you're mean.
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Sergo wrote:I'm snäll.x Imke x wrote:Still you're mean.
Oh yeah, sure! As snäll as me.
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
ahhhh good things
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Everything it's ok between them
But for how long?
I think that when Javi will talk with Sonia something bad is going to happen
Maybe I am not right
So to found out give us more
But for how long?
I think that when Javi will talk with Sonia something bad is going to happen
Maybe I am not right
So to found out give us more
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Hmm.. yeh.... for how long? Or what is gonna happen... let's see...
Part 23
- You're my sweet angel, Javi whispered and caressed my cheek, - A real angel, you know. You made me realise the truth.
- And the truth is? I asked.
- That I love you and... that I have to tell Sonia the truth about my feelings.
- Good, I smiled.
- Mwaah! Javi gave a kiss, - I'll take a shower now..., he winked and left the room.
Soon I heard the shower and almost fell asleep while listening to it.
Then Javi's phone started ringing. I decided to reply and took the phone. I saw the name on the display: Sonia!
- Hello! I replied.
- Oh... hello..., Sonia sounded surprised.
- Javi is in the shower, he couldn't reply, I explained.
- Oh... okay, Sonia sounded a bit weird, - Maybe later then, she said and was about to hang up.
- Wait! I said, - Could you come over? I think you and Javi need to talk, I said then.
- Erm... really? Sonia sounded suspicious.
- Yes...you have to talk things through. I know that you love him and Javi has treated you... well, not so well, I guess...
- How do you know? Sonia sounded surprised.
- Well, I'm not blind... Can you come here?
- Sure..., she replied and said she'll be here soon.
Javi wasn't pleased when I told him that Sonia would drop by.
- I'm not prepared to see her, he said and walked restless around the room.
- The sooner the better, I said, - I can leave you alone, so that you can talk.
- No, you can stay, Javi stopped and looked at me.
- She doesn't want me here, I said.
- I want you to be by my side, Javi insisted.
- Why? I wondered.
- Well... I... I'm afraid to tell her... I'm afraid of her reaction, Javi confessed.
- But you have to do it...
The doorbell rang. Javi stood still like he was frozen.
I sighed.
- Ok, I'll get it..., I said and went to open the door.
Sonia stood there and looked scared and embarrassed.
- He is in the living room, I said and she came in.
I went to the bedroom. I didn't want to listen to them. I laid down to the bed and put my headphones on and started listening to music. I closed my eyes and concentrated to listening. I didn't want to think about how Javi can handle the situation.
Part 23
- You're my sweet angel, Javi whispered and caressed my cheek, - A real angel, you know. You made me realise the truth.
- And the truth is? I asked.
- That I love you and... that I have to tell Sonia the truth about my feelings.
- Good, I smiled.
- Mwaah! Javi gave a kiss, - I'll take a shower now..., he winked and left the room.
Soon I heard the shower and almost fell asleep while listening to it.
Then Javi's phone started ringing. I decided to reply and took the phone. I saw the name on the display: Sonia!
- Hello! I replied.
- Oh... hello..., Sonia sounded surprised.
- Javi is in the shower, he couldn't reply, I explained.
- Oh... okay, Sonia sounded a bit weird, - Maybe later then, she said and was about to hang up.
- Wait! I said, - Could you come over? I think you and Javi need to talk, I said then.
- Erm... really? Sonia sounded suspicious.
- Yes...you have to talk things through. I know that you love him and Javi has treated you... well, not so well, I guess...
- How do you know? Sonia sounded surprised.
- Well, I'm not blind... Can you come here?
- Sure..., she replied and said she'll be here soon.
Javi wasn't pleased when I told him that Sonia would drop by.
- I'm not prepared to see her, he said and walked restless around the room.
- The sooner the better, I said, - I can leave you alone, so that you can talk.
- No, you can stay, Javi stopped and looked at me.
- She doesn't want me here, I said.
- I want you to be by my side, Javi insisted.
- Why? I wondered.
- Well... I... I'm afraid to tell her... I'm afraid of her reaction, Javi confessed.
- But you have to do it...
The doorbell rang. Javi stood still like he was frozen.
I sighed.
- Ok, I'll get it..., I said and went to open the door.
Sonia stood there and looked scared and embarrassed.
- He is in the living room, I said and she came in.
I went to the bedroom. I didn't want to listen to them. I laid down to the bed and put my headphones on and started listening to music. I closed my eyes and concentrated to listening. I didn't want to think about how Javi can handle the situation.
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Hey!!!!!! You ended not in right place
I want to know about Javi's and Sonia's conversation
I want to know about Javi's and Sonia's conversation
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Huh? Is it right time for music,huh???
I think I can listen their conservation instead of music!!! Shuuuuwww....
I think I can listen their conservation instead of music!!! Shuuuuwww....
tuLicia- Number of posts : 401
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
this version is awesome so far.
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
The transsexual
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
So, no new part today anymore! Maybe not even tomorrow!
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Sergo, transsexual, wtf? xD
Oh Javi and Sonia are going to talk. I'm curious to her reaction.
MORE!
Oh Javi and Sonia are going to talk. I'm curious to her reaction.
MORE!
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Sonia's a transsexual. We don't know if he/she has a komkommer or not
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Ok.. I'll cancel this story!...
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
What?
No Minna don't try to do it I beg you
And Sergo please don't talk about Sonia like this anymore,because Minna will become angry and cancel this story oh no
No Minna don't try to do it I beg you
And Sergo please don't talk about Sonia like this anymore,because Minna will become angry and cancel this story oh no
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