My life....Part 4 The End
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emilia
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My life....Part 4 The End
Here is new mini story from me before i will post that one continuation...
Prologue
Here I am sitting on my bed in prison. I have been here now almost for two years and I still have to be for two more years. But my life is already over because I can't do what I really want when I'm free again. But still I wait for that time. Maybe I'll find out something what I can do.
My days are the same everyday here. We have to wake up at 7 in the morning and then we'll get breakfast. Then we are working for about 4 hours before we can go out. After that we have free time. Usually I just sit on my bed and write. I love writing and I have written a lot. Usually I write songs and poems but sometimes I keep a diary. There I write all things what is in my head. All my thoughts and hopes. Well, actually sometimes all my songs and poems are like a diary. Keeping the diary is keeping me alive here. I don't know where I would be now if I couldn't write. Sometimes I sing my songs and everyone likes it. Usually someone ask me to sing. They think that I have a great voice and actually it's true. I have sung whole my life. So maybe I should tell you how I ended up here.
Prologue
Here I am sitting on my bed in prison. I have been here now almost for two years and I still have to be for two more years. But my life is already over because I can't do what I really want when I'm free again. But still I wait for that time. Maybe I'll find out something what I can do.
My days are the same everyday here. We have to wake up at 7 in the morning and then we'll get breakfast. Then we are working for about 4 hours before we can go out. After that we have free time. Usually I just sit on my bed and write. I love writing and I have written a lot. Usually I write songs and poems but sometimes I keep a diary. There I write all things what is in my head. All my thoughts and hopes. Well, actually sometimes all my songs and poems are like a diary. Keeping the diary is keeping me alive here. I don't know where I would be now if I couldn't write. Sometimes I sing my songs and everyone likes it. Usually someone ask me to sing. They think that I have a great voice and actually it's true. I have sung whole my life. So maybe I should tell you how I ended up here.
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
New story
Sounds goood!!
More??
Sounds goood!!
More??
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Some other day
This is so short story...
This is so short story...
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Thank you
Mas you will get some other day I don't say that word here...
Mas you will get some other day I don't say that word here...
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Sounds nice!!! Please more!!! I hope I will be able to post my new story soon
Re: My life....Part 4 The End
It sounds amazing well no wonder it's Katja's story
Can't wait that day when you will post part1
I hope that soon we will find some free time to write more of our story that we started on MSN I got some new ideas
Can't wait that day when you will post part1
I hope that soon we will find some free time to write more of our story that we started on MSN I got some new ideas
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
this sounds fantastic.... i can't wait to read more
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Thank you
Today you will get more
Today you will get more
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Part 1
I was walking to my singing class when I saw my old friend Mikel. We were best friends when we were kids. I haven't seen him for a long time and I was about 17 when I saw him last time. Now I'm 21.
I walked to Mikel.
-Hey Mikel...Is it really you? -I said.
-Hey Marie...It's so nice to see you after all these years. -Mikel said and hugged me.
-Yes it's so nice to see you. I have to admit that I have missed you a lot. -I said and hugged him back.
-I have missed you too...-Mikel said.
-Are you going somewhere?-I asked.
-Yes I'm... We have a tour coming soon so we have to practice. -Mikel said.
-Who we? -I asked.
-I'm in a band called D'Nash. There are three other guys too on that band and they are my best friends. -Mikel said.
-Hmmm... Why that D'Nash sounds so familiar? I'm sure that I have heard your music somewhere but I don't remember where.-I said.
-Would you like to come to watch when we practise?-Mikel asked.
-I would like to come but I can't now. I have my singing class now and that takes about one hour. But maybe after that if you still practise. -I said.
-We will practise about three hours so welcome. -Mikel said.
Mikel gave me the address to their dance studio and then we hugged one more time. I went to my class but I thought about Mikel all the time. He was such a nice boy when we were just kids, and I was sad when he moved away from my neighbour. But now I'm happy again because I met him now.
I was walking to my singing class when I saw my old friend Mikel. We were best friends when we were kids. I haven't seen him for a long time and I was about 17 when I saw him last time. Now I'm 21.
I walked to Mikel.
-Hey Mikel...Is it really you? -I said.
-Hey Marie...It's so nice to see you after all these years. -Mikel said and hugged me.
-Yes it's so nice to see you. I have to admit that I have missed you a lot. -I said and hugged him back.
-I have missed you too...-Mikel said.
-Are you going somewhere?-I asked.
-Yes I'm... We have a tour coming soon so we have to practice. -Mikel said.
-Who we? -I asked.
-I'm in a band called D'Nash. There are three other guys too on that band and they are my best friends. -Mikel said.
-Hmmm... Why that D'Nash sounds so familiar? I'm sure that I have heard your music somewhere but I don't remember where.-I said.
-Would you like to come to watch when we practise?-Mikel asked.
-I would like to come but I can't now. I have my singing class now and that takes about one hour. But maybe after that if you still practise. -I said.
-We will practise about three hours so welcome. -Mikel said.
Mikel gave me the address to their dance studio and then we hugged one more time. I went to my class but I thought about Mikel all the time. He was such a nice boy when we were just kids, and I was sad when he moved away from my neighbour. But now I'm happy again because I met him now.
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
She met Mikel
Such a great part
Waiting for more
Such a great part
Waiting for more
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Thank you
More you will get some other day
More you will get some other day
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Thank you so much
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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ohhhh they meet again... so nice
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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She's Mikel's friend
Great part!!
More!!
Great part!!
More!!
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
I have no idea when you will get more...
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Like you know my internet haven't work but now it works again...So you will get now 2 parts...
Part 2
After my class I went to their dance studio. When I went in, they were dancing, so I went to sit next to the wall. And I just watched them. They were great and the song was also great. Now I remembered that I really had heard their music before but I didn't have their cd's yet. Then I saw that tallest one looking at me and he also winked to me. I just smiled to him. He was quite cute and I wanted to know him better. I looked at him when they were still dancing and I smiled. Soon they kept a break and they came to sit next to me.
-Hey... Tell me what do you like about us. -Mikel said and smiled.
-You look and sound great... -I said and smiled.
-Thank you... Guys, she is my old best friend Marie...And here are Ony, Javi and Basty. -Mikel say.
-Hey...nice to meet you.-I said and smiled.
-Nice to meet you too... -Basty said and smiled.
So, the tallest of them is Basty. It's a cute name for a cute guy. We talked a little bit and then they started to practise again. I watched them a little bit before I started to sing. I wasn't so sure about lyrics but still I just sang. I totally forgot where I was.
-Wow... your voice is amazing. -Basty said.
-Thank you... -I said and smiled.
-Hey boys... Maybe she could be our background singer because we really need that. -Mikel said.
-That is a good idea... What do you think about it, Marie? -Basty said.
-I... I don't know what to say. -I said.
-You can think about it and let's meet tomorrow here about 2. -Mikel say.
Part 3
Next day I went to the dance studio and I knew what I would tell to the boys. When I went in, I saw only Basty dancing.
-Hey... where are the others? -I said.
-Hey... They haven't come yet but they will come soon. -Basty said.
-Do you know already what you are going to do? -Basty continued.
-Yes I know but I tell you when the others are here too. -I said.
I went to sit next to the wall and Basty continued dancing. Even if I didn't know him, I really liked him. But soon the others came and they wanted to know what I would do.
-Maybe I will tell you that later. -I said.
-No no no...You will tell that now. -Mikel said.
-Okey then I will tell you. I thought about it a lot yesterday and I will come to your background singer. -I said.
-Thank you so much... You saved our day. -Basty said and smiled.
Boys came to hug me and Basty hugged me last. Maybe it took a little bit too much because boys started to smile and laugh.
-Basty Basty... You just broke up with your girlfriend and now you already try to get a new one. -Ony said.
-So what? I can admit that she is a beautiful and a nice girl. So Marie, would you like go to date with me today... Actually now? -Basty said.
-Yes, I would like to come. So when we go to those date? -I said.
-Now like I said...-Basty said.
I nodded and we went out. We just walked around the town and talked a lot. We had so much fun together and we decided to meet also next day.
Part 2
After my class I went to their dance studio. When I went in, they were dancing, so I went to sit next to the wall. And I just watched them. They were great and the song was also great. Now I remembered that I really had heard their music before but I didn't have their cd's yet. Then I saw that tallest one looking at me and he also winked to me. I just smiled to him. He was quite cute and I wanted to know him better. I looked at him when they were still dancing and I smiled. Soon they kept a break and they came to sit next to me.
-Hey... Tell me what do you like about us. -Mikel said and smiled.
-You look and sound great... -I said and smiled.
-Thank you... Guys, she is my old best friend Marie...And here are Ony, Javi and Basty. -Mikel say.
-Hey...nice to meet you.-I said and smiled.
-Nice to meet you too... -Basty said and smiled.
So, the tallest of them is Basty. It's a cute name for a cute guy. We talked a little bit and then they started to practise again. I watched them a little bit before I started to sing. I wasn't so sure about lyrics but still I just sang. I totally forgot where I was.
-Wow... your voice is amazing. -Basty said.
-Thank you... -I said and smiled.
-Hey boys... Maybe she could be our background singer because we really need that. -Mikel said.
-That is a good idea... What do you think about it, Marie? -Basty said.
-I... I don't know what to say. -I said.
-You can think about it and let's meet tomorrow here about 2. -Mikel say.
Part 3
Next day I went to the dance studio and I knew what I would tell to the boys. When I went in, I saw only Basty dancing.
-Hey... where are the others? -I said.
-Hey... They haven't come yet but they will come soon. -Basty said.
-Do you know already what you are going to do? -Basty continued.
-Yes I know but I tell you when the others are here too. -I said.
I went to sit next to the wall and Basty continued dancing. Even if I didn't know him, I really liked him. But soon the others came and they wanted to know what I would do.
-Maybe I will tell you that later. -I said.
-No no no...You will tell that now. -Mikel said.
-Okey then I will tell you. I thought about it a lot yesterday and I will come to your background singer. -I said.
-Thank you so much... You saved our day. -Basty said and smiled.
Boys came to hug me and Basty hugged me last. Maybe it took a little bit too much because boys started to smile and laugh.
-Basty Basty... You just broke up with your girlfriend and now you already try to get a new one. -Ony said.
-So what? I can admit that she is a beautiful and a nice girl. So Marie, would you like go to date with me today... Actually now? -Basty said.
-Yes, I would like to come. So when we go to those date? -I said.
-Now like I said...-Basty said.
I nodded and we went out. We just walked around the town and talked a lot. We had so much fun together and we decided to meet also next day.
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
he was fast
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: My life....Part 4 The End
Yeey 2 parts
And they are amazing
Oh man Basty is so fast
And they are amazing
Oh man Basty is so fast
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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