*Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
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Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
Ooooooh staying with Ony, huh?
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Part 11
“So here we are.” Lily said as they got out of the car. “Home sweet home.”
“Woahhh. What is that smell?”
“It’s the country, don’t worry you’ll get used to it!”
“Who are all those people?” Ony asked.
“My family”
“Ohhh right. I knew that!”
“Hey muuuum!” Lily said as she hugged this woman. “This is Ony, my friend from Uni.”
“Nice to meet you.” Ony said.
“You too,” said Lilys mum.
“And this is my sister, Imke.” Lily said.
“Oh hi!” said Imke as she jumped up and gave Ony a hug.
“Hey you, chill out!” Lily said.
“Nice to meet you.” Said Ony
“And this is Imke’s twin brother, Tom.”
“Hi Tom.” Said Ony
“Hi.”
“Yeah, hes not the talking kind.” Imke said.
“So wheres your dad?” Ony asked.
“Oh, hes out working, he’ll be back for dinner.” Lily said. “Come on in and ill show you where to put your things.
They went inside to Lilys room.
“You can put your bags in here , Dad was sorting out your room, I don’t know if its done yet.”
“Cool.” Ony said with a smile. “I really appreciate you letting me come.”
“Your welcome” Lily smiled back.
“Lillly! Dinner!” Lily’s Mum shouted up the stairs.
“We better go down.”
“Hey dad!”
“How’s my little flower?”
“I’m fine dad!” Lily said. “This is Ony.
“Oh hello Ony,”
“Hi.”
“So how are you finding it here so far?” Lilys dad asked.
“Oh, it’s amazing. Thank you for having me sir.”
“You’re very welcome.
They ate dinner, it was filled with small talk and was soon over.
“Why don’t you and me wash up?” Tom asked.
“Sure.”
Off they went to wash up.
“How come you wanted me to wash up with you?” Ony asked.
“Well I want to talk to you.” Tom said.
“I thought you didn’t talk much.”
“I only talk when I have something worth while to say. And what I am about to say to you is very worthwhile.” Tom said. “I belive my sister thinks you are hot.”
“Which sister?”
“Lily of course you dumbass.”
“Right. Yes. Lily. She really thinks I’m hot?!” Ony asked surprised.
“Yes. I don’t know how, or why, but she does.” Tom said. “And well, I just want you to know if you break her heart, or in fact hurt her in anyway, you will have me to deal with and I will, KICK YOUR ARSE! Got that?”
“Yes sir!”
“Right that is all. I will finish drying. Be gone.” Tom said.
“So here we are.” Lily said as they got out of the car. “Home sweet home.”
“Woahhh. What is that smell?”
“It’s the country, don’t worry you’ll get used to it!”
“Who are all those people?” Ony asked.
“My family”
“Ohhh right. I knew that!”
“Hey muuuum!” Lily said as she hugged this woman. “This is Ony, my friend from Uni.”
“Nice to meet you.” Ony said.
“You too,” said Lilys mum.
“And this is my sister, Imke.” Lily said.
“Oh hi!” said Imke as she jumped up and gave Ony a hug.
“Hey you, chill out!” Lily said.
“Nice to meet you.” Said Ony
“And this is Imke’s twin brother, Tom.”
“Hi Tom.” Said Ony
“Hi.”
“Yeah, hes not the talking kind.” Imke said.
“So wheres your dad?” Ony asked.
“Oh, hes out working, he’ll be back for dinner.” Lily said. “Come on in and ill show you where to put your things.
They went inside to Lilys room.
“You can put your bags in here , Dad was sorting out your room, I don’t know if its done yet.”
“Cool.” Ony said with a smile. “I really appreciate you letting me come.”
“Your welcome” Lily smiled back.
“Lillly! Dinner!” Lily’s Mum shouted up the stairs.
“We better go down.”
“Hey dad!”
“How’s my little flower?”
“I’m fine dad!” Lily said. “This is Ony.
“Oh hello Ony,”
“Hi.”
“So how are you finding it here so far?” Lilys dad asked.
“Oh, it’s amazing. Thank you for having me sir.”
“You’re very welcome.
They ate dinner, it was filled with small talk and was soon over.
“Why don’t you and me wash up?” Tom asked.
“Sure.”
Off they went to wash up.
“How come you wanted me to wash up with you?” Ony asked.
“Well I want to talk to you.” Tom said.
“I thought you didn’t talk much.”
“I only talk when I have something worth while to say. And what I am about to say to you is very worthwhile.” Tom said. “I belive my sister thinks you are hot.”
“Which sister?”
“Lily of course you dumbass.”
“Right. Yes. Lily. She really thinks I’m hot?!” Ony asked surprised.
“Yes. I don’t know how, or why, but she does.” Tom said. “And well, I just want you to know if you break her heart, or in fact hurt her in anyway, you will have me to deal with and I will, KICK YOUR ARSE! Got that?”
“Yes sir!”
“Right that is all. I will finish drying. Be gone.” Tom said.
Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
tom was very nice
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Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
tom is sweet. he protects his sister. great part. but I just cant imagine Ony in country.
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Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
Well... Tom is a very nice guy
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haha. Tom is great
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Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
Part 12
The Next Day
“Mornin’ sleepy head,” Lily said as she walked in to Onys room carrying a tray with breakfast.
“Good Morning.” Said Ony half asleep.
“You want to eat up, you’ll need all the energy you can get.” Said Lily “You’ve got to hold your own here now, so you will be out working with us today.”
“Oh great.” said Ony.
“Yep, now eat up and get dressed, ill meet you downstairs in 20 minutes.”
20 minutes later.
“hahahahahha!!” Lily was in fits of laughter!
“Whats so funny?” Ony asked
“are you kidding me?”
“why would I be kidding you?”
“HELLO! I said we would be out working on the farm today, I don’t think what your wearing is… er…suitable!” Lily said.
Imke walked past.
“Oooh Ony! Lovin’ the shirt and tie, very posh!” imke giggled.
“Er thanks Imke, and Lily you never said we would be on the farm you said we would just be out working!”
“Well I thought you would have guessed that “out working” would mean be out on the farm doing farm stuff!”
“In all our conversations you have never said anything about doing farm work. Infact you never said anything about what we were going to do so I thought, let’s dress to impress.”
“Well you certainly impressed me, but go and change into some old clothes! I have some wellies that you can borrow.”
A bit later
“So what’s our first job?” Ony asked.
“Well we are gunna first herd the cows.” Lily answered.
“Oh my lord.”
Well as you can guess, this didn’t go well on Onys part. He was running all over the place trying to stop the cows, and falling over constantly. Even his muscular legs couldn’t keep him up right in the mud! Finally that was over, and the next job was to feed the ducks and chickens. So off they went. This also involved Ony being chased around by huge ducks all desperate for food, and falling over once or twice. By this time Ony was covered in mud and chicken and duck poop. All the while Lily, Imke and Tom were highly amused. By now it was starting to get dark, as they had started late, so the last job of the day was to go and put the hay away.
“Ony and I will do that.” Lily said.
“Oh ok.” Tom said giving Ony a warning look
“Are you sure? I’ll help if you want?” Imke said.
“No you’re alright.” Lily replied
Off Tom and Imke went inside and Lily and Ony put the hay away into the barn.
“You know when I was little I used to sleep some nights in here alone, just to get away. It was a haven.” Lily said.
“Really? Aaaw” Ony said as he gave Lily a hug.
They hugged for a while. It was pleasant and Lily found it kind of romantic.
“You know I really do appreciate you letting me come here, it was a really friendly thing to do.” Ony said
“It honestly was no problem. Please stop saying thank you or I’ll have to shut you up with a kiss.” Lily said looking deep into his brown eyes that were as huge as saucers.
“Thank-you thank-you thank-you!” Ony said with a cheeky grin.
“Well, you know what I have to do now, to shut you up!” Lily whispered
She leant in for a kiss. It was quite a calm kiss, and lasted for quite a while until they had to come up for air.
“Woah,” Lily said
“Woah?
“Yeah, woah! Is that smell you?” Lily said with a giggle.
The Next Day
“Mornin’ sleepy head,” Lily said as she walked in to Onys room carrying a tray with breakfast.
“Good Morning.” Said Ony half asleep.
“You want to eat up, you’ll need all the energy you can get.” Said Lily “You’ve got to hold your own here now, so you will be out working with us today.”
“Oh great.” said Ony.
“Yep, now eat up and get dressed, ill meet you downstairs in 20 minutes.”
20 minutes later.
“hahahahahha!!” Lily was in fits of laughter!
“Whats so funny?” Ony asked
“are you kidding me?”
“why would I be kidding you?”
“HELLO! I said we would be out working on the farm today, I don’t think what your wearing is… er…suitable!” Lily said.
Imke walked past.
“Oooh Ony! Lovin’ the shirt and tie, very posh!” imke giggled.
“Er thanks Imke, and Lily you never said we would be on the farm you said we would just be out working!”
“Well I thought you would have guessed that “out working” would mean be out on the farm doing farm stuff!”
“In all our conversations you have never said anything about doing farm work. Infact you never said anything about what we were going to do so I thought, let’s dress to impress.”
“Well you certainly impressed me, but go and change into some old clothes! I have some wellies that you can borrow.”
A bit later
“So what’s our first job?” Ony asked.
“Well we are gunna first herd the cows.” Lily answered.
“Oh my lord.”
Well as you can guess, this didn’t go well on Onys part. He was running all over the place trying to stop the cows, and falling over constantly. Even his muscular legs couldn’t keep him up right in the mud! Finally that was over, and the next job was to feed the ducks and chickens. So off they went. This also involved Ony being chased around by huge ducks all desperate for food, and falling over once or twice. By this time Ony was covered in mud and chicken and duck poop. All the while Lily, Imke and Tom were highly amused. By now it was starting to get dark, as they had started late, so the last job of the day was to go and put the hay away.
“Ony and I will do that.” Lily said.
“Oh ok.” Tom said giving Ony a warning look
“Are you sure? I’ll help if you want?” Imke said.
“No you’re alright.” Lily replied
Off Tom and Imke went inside and Lily and Ony put the hay away into the barn.
“You know when I was little I used to sleep some nights in here alone, just to get away. It was a haven.” Lily said.
“Really? Aaaw” Ony said as he gave Lily a hug.
They hugged for a while. It was pleasant and Lily found it kind of romantic.
“You know I really do appreciate you letting me come here, it was a really friendly thing to do.” Ony said
“It honestly was no problem. Please stop saying thank you or I’ll have to shut you up with a kiss.” Lily said looking deep into his brown eyes that were as huge as saucers.
“Thank-you thank-you thank-you!” Ony said with a cheeky grin.
“Well, you know what I have to do now, to shut you up!” Lily whispered
She leant in for a kiss. It was quite a calm kiss, and lasted for quite a while until they had to come up for air.
“Woah,” Lily said
“Woah?
“Yeah, woah! Is that smell you?” Lily said with a giggle.
Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
I have a twin brother? Yayy! Tom's nice
Part 11 and 12 were amazing!
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Part 11 and 12 were amazing!
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Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
erm maybe tonight - im about to go over a mates so not till later
Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
Finally they kiss
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being chased around by huge ducks all desperate for food, and falling over once or twice.
i know that feeling ^^
aahh a kiss...
i know that feeling ^^
aahh a kiss...
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Great part. Those Ony's clothes
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Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
as soon as i was gunna post is my internet decided to mess up... so here it is now...
Part 13
Back at the University.
Lily, Pris, Ony and Jake all sat around a table in the library, trying to some work. Pris and Jake couldn’t concentrate thanks to Lily and Ony. They were sat next to each other, pretending to learn some physics. It was going in one ear and straight out the other. Underneath the table they were holding hands, all the while trying to catch the others eye. Once in a while they would, and you would hear a little giggle, and they would have a quick kiss. This was doing nothing for Pris and Jake.
“Guys will you please get on with your work!?” Jake finally asked.
“I am!” Lily screeched. “Except I’ve read the same sentence like 15 times!”
“Come on, I want to take you some where.” Ony said.
“Thank the Lord! Now I can get something done!” Pris smiled.
Ony walked to the end of the library with Lily attached to his hip.
“Why are we back here, next to the old dusty book that no one uses at all?” Lily asked.
“Because no one uses them at tall, it makes it the perfect place for me to do this…” Ony replied.
He started to kiss her neck, first off slowly getting faster and faster, moving to her lips for a long soft passionate kiss. She took of his shirt, to show his muscular tanned torso. She ran her hands over his chest feeling everything, including the racing beat of his heart. His heart missed a beat as there was a flash of light. Was someone taking a picture?
“Holy crap.” Ony muttered under his breath as he grabbed Lily and said “RUN!”
They went sprinting to the front of the library and down the stairs, all the while Ony was trying to put his top back on and the paparazzi were taking pictures of the. There were 2 photographers, both middle aged and Latino looking. Lily could not fathom why they were here, taking pictures of them.
They ran out of the library, round the main building, through the park and stopped under a bridge.
“I think we lost them.” Ony said out of breath.
“Lost who?” Lily asked.
“The photographers.” Ony replied.
“I know that, but who were they and what did they want with us?”
“Well, they didn’t want US per say, they wanted me.”
“Why did they want you?”
“Well I haven’t been completely honest with you.”
“What?” By now Lily had already started to cry.
“In Spain, I, well, I am in a band. A famous band and I don’t want to sound big headed, but they love me over there and since the band split up the paparazzi have been digging around trying to find me and their latest scandal.” Ony said with his head in is hands.
“So am I just your latest scandal?” Everything he was telling her was like having salt rubbed into her wound.
“No, not at all! it’s not like that!” Ony went to hug her.
“Then what is it like?” Lily asked as she pushed him away.
“Look, I don’t say this to many people but I love you. I love you with all my heart and I never wanted to hurt you.” Ony said softly.
“Well you already did.” Lily whispered as she ran off.
Part 13
Back at the University.
Lily, Pris, Ony and Jake all sat around a table in the library, trying to some work. Pris and Jake couldn’t concentrate thanks to Lily and Ony. They were sat next to each other, pretending to learn some physics. It was going in one ear and straight out the other. Underneath the table they were holding hands, all the while trying to catch the others eye. Once in a while they would, and you would hear a little giggle, and they would have a quick kiss. This was doing nothing for Pris and Jake.
“Guys will you please get on with your work!?” Jake finally asked.
“I am!” Lily screeched. “Except I’ve read the same sentence like 15 times!”
“Come on, I want to take you some where.” Ony said.
“Thank the Lord! Now I can get something done!” Pris smiled.
Ony walked to the end of the library with Lily attached to his hip.
“Why are we back here, next to the old dusty book that no one uses at all?” Lily asked.
“Because no one uses them at tall, it makes it the perfect place for me to do this…” Ony replied.
He started to kiss her neck, first off slowly getting faster and faster, moving to her lips for a long soft passionate kiss. She took of his shirt, to show his muscular tanned torso. She ran her hands over his chest feeling everything, including the racing beat of his heart. His heart missed a beat as there was a flash of light. Was someone taking a picture?
“Holy crap.” Ony muttered under his breath as he grabbed Lily and said “RUN!”
They went sprinting to the front of the library and down the stairs, all the while Ony was trying to put his top back on and the paparazzi were taking pictures of the. There were 2 photographers, both middle aged and Latino looking. Lily could not fathom why they were here, taking pictures of them.
They ran out of the library, round the main building, through the park and stopped under a bridge.
“I think we lost them.” Ony said out of breath.
“Lost who?” Lily asked.
“The photographers.” Ony replied.
“I know that, but who were they and what did they want with us?”
“Well, they didn’t want US per say, they wanted me.”
“Why did they want you?”
“Well I haven’t been completely honest with you.”
“What?” By now Lily had already started to cry.
“In Spain, I, well, I am in a band. A famous band and I don’t want to sound big headed, but they love me over there and since the band split up the paparazzi have been digging around trying to find me and their latest scandal.” Ony said with his head in is hands.
“So am I just your latest scandal?” Everything he was telling her was like having salt rubbed into her wound.
“No, not at all! it’s not like that!” Ony went to hug her.
“Then what is it like?” Lily asked as she pushed him away.
“Look, I don’t say this to many people but I love you. I love you with all my heart and I never wanted to hurt you.” Ony said softly.
“Well you already did.” Lily whispered as she ran off.
Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
Paparazzi always ruin everything. Great part anyway.
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Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
stupid paparazzi
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paparazzii... that bastards
great part
great part
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
The paparazzi!!! God damnit!!
If I could wish a few things out of the world, paparazzi would be one of them!!
Anyway, this was a really great part!!
More please
If I could wish a few things out of the world, paparazzi would be one of them!!
Anyway, this was a really great part!!
More please
Re: *Fanfic* With ONY! (poll closed) PART 29!! THE END!
Paparazzi Not good at all.. So post more :D
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