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"Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part

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Post  emilia Sat Jan 12, 2008 4:29 pm

wow so great part again Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Sat Jan 12, 2008 5:26 pm

OMG a man that likes shopping... Shocked Shocked ... rare thing... Laughing Laughing


i hate snakes Mad
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Post  Heli Sat Jan 12, 2008 5:31 pm

This story is slowly coming to the ending... Sad Just few parts left..

Part 22

I had only a week left and then I had to leave back home, because of my studies. I wanted to take all of this last week with Javi.
I was at the work again. I had said to Javi that I would come in the afternoon to home. But I was so fast that I could leave few hours earlier. I decided to surprise Javi. I bought some groceries and I planned to make some food at the evening.
I opened the front door quiet. I wanted to surprise him totally. I heard some laughing and voices from the living room. I thought that maybe he had invited some friends or something. I went to the kitchen and put the groceries to the fridge. Then I opened slightly the door to living room.

That scene I won’t forget ever. That moment my heart broke into thousands pieces. I saw Javi with some woman. It looked like the same woman whose I had seen before at the town. But I wasn’t sure. And I didn’t care who it was. They were lying on the couch. And kissing. And caressing each others. I didn’t want to see more. I knew where that caressing would end up. And that happening I really didn’t want to see. I closed the door quietly and left the house. I haven’t any idea where I should go. But I didn’t want see Javi ever. I thought that he would be different man than the others. But same kind of bastard he was, like every man, who I had met. That moment I decided that I won’t ever trust any men. Never!

Then I burst crying. I was so shocked that I just started to run. I didn’t know where. Suddenly I ran into somebody.
“Hey, what’s up?” a voice asked.
I raised my look, and looked straight to Mikel.
“Hey, why are you crying?” he asked again.
“I…I…” I couldn’t say anything. I was so shocked.
“Come here.” he leaded me to the park bench.
“Now, tell me. I can see that something is happened.” he said.
Finally, I started to explain, slowly and confusedly, because I was crying all the time. But Mikel listened to me, and that was all I wanted then. He didn’t interrupt me but let me tell everything. Finally I finished.
“Well, I can’t believe that about Javi.” he finally said. “We all have seen how much he loves you.”
“Not enough, if he wants another woman too.” I said sad.
“But can’t you talk about this to him?” Mikel asked.
“I don’t want to talk or see him ever!” I yelled. “I just want to go home.” I continued quiet.
“But how are you able to get your stuff there?” he asked.
“I really don’t know.” I answered. “I haven’t thought that far.”
“I know. I take you to my house and I’ll call to Ony and Basty there. Then I’ll go to Javi and go somewhere with him that you can get your stuff there with Ony and Basty.” Mikel explained.
“Could you really do that?” I asked.
“Yes, I want to help you.” he said.
“Thanks a lot.” I said and hugged him. “You’re really good friend.”

We went to Mikel’s house and soon Ony and Basty were there too. Mikel called to Javi and invited him to a coffee with him. Ony drove us to Javi’s house. He stayed at the car while I and Basty went to the house and I started to pack my things. Soon I was ready.
“I still can’t believe that Javi has done something like that.” Basty said suddenly.
“You don’t believe me?” I asked little angry.
“Of course I believe you, but he usually doesn’t do anything like this.” he replied. “My opinion is still that you should talk with him.”
“Don’t you understand that I DON’T WANT TO TALK WITH HIM!” I finally yelled.
“Hey, calm down.” Basty said calmly.
“I’m sorry.” I whispered and started to cry again. “I’m so confused right now.”
“Come here.” Basty said and hugged me tight. “You still have me, Ony and Mikel. We want to be your friends.”
“I know. And I really appreciate that.” I whispered.
Basty left me alone for a while. Javi didn’t still know that I knew what he had done. So I left a short message to him. “I saw you. Don’t call me. I don’t want to see you ever.” I left it on the kitchen table. Then I felt the necklace on my neck. I pulled it a little and it broke.
“So our trust was as durable as this necklace.” I thought. I left my keys and the necklace next to my note. Then I left from the apartment and didn’t look back.
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Post  girl1035 Sat Jan 12, 2008 5:36 pm

This is unbelievabely great story. Keep it rocking. "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part - Page 10 Icon_biggrin
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Post  Mindex Sat Jan 12, 2008 5:38 pm

Shocked Shocked Oh, nooo... Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Sad Sad Crying or Very sad Sad Sad Sad
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Post  Sergo Sat Jan 12, 2008 5:42 pm

Stupid Javi Mad
Mikel is so sweet for taking care of her What a Face
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Post  emilia Sat Jan 12, 2008 5:58 pm

How Javi could do something like that?
But this was sooo GREAT again Very Happy ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐
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Post  Hen «3 Javi Sat Jan 12, 2008 7:27 pm

Stupid stupid Javi Mad
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Post  Aida Sat Jan 12, 2008 8:34 pm

Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Sad
Stupid Javi Sad

Moooore please Very Happy
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Post  Riikka Sat Jan 12, 2008 8:45 pm

JAVI Shocked Shocked what he has done?? Shocked
More! Smile
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Post  x Imke x Sat Jan 12, 2008 11:05 pm

Javi Shocked Stupid chickenass! Mad
How he could do that?! Shocked
Naaaw the other boys are so sweet!! MrGreen
Javi should take an example to them Suspect

A M A Z I N G !!!!!! bounce
M O R E !!!!!! Very Happy Rambo
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Post  Prisca Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:05 am

that bastard, that asshole, that animal... Mad Mad Mad
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Post  Heli Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:26 pm

Part 23

Ony drove us to María where I was supposed to spend the rest of the night. I had booked a flight when I was waiting Ony and Basty at Mikel’s house. It was a night fly, so I decided to spend the evening at María’s house.
“I’m sorry that I have to leave like this.” I said to María. “But I have no other choice.”
“It’s okay. But I can’t believe that Javi could do anything like this.” she said and shook her head and smiled sad.
“Me either.” I whispered. Tears were so close again.
“Thanks all of you that you haven’t told anything to Javi. I really appreciate this.” I said.
“But in my opinion, you should talk with Javi.” María said. “Maybe he has a good reason for his behaviour.”
“What would be a good reason for kissing and caressing other woman?” I asked. “I can’t think any.”

Finally I had to leave to the airport. Ony promised to take me there, because he had the car. I said goodbyes to everyone and promised to call them, when I arrived at home.
“Goodbye then.” I said when Ony took my luggage from the car.
“Goodbye.” Ony answered. “Please, think about talking with Javi. He hasn’t ever behaved like this.”
“I’ll promise to think it but I can’t promise that I would talk with him.” I said.
“Well, that’s enough for me.” he said and hugged me. “Goodbye and take care of yourself.”
“Goodbye.” I mumbled to his shoulder and then I left to the passport control.

Flight to home was like a hell. I couldn’t stop crying. I could control myself when others were with me. But now, when I was alone, I just cried. Some people looked me at strange way but I didn’t care about it. I still cried when I got to my home. I threw my luggage somewhere and walked straight to bed. And cried.

My friends were worried about me. But luckily my studies started and I concentrated on them. All evenings I just read my school books and I didn’t think anything else.
Every night was like a hell. I cried always myself to sleep. And at the morning I hoped that night wouldn’t come ever. I was scared them because then my thoughts started to round and round on Javi.
I called once to Mikel, Ony and Basty. Their opinion was still that I should talk to Javi. They said that he was very sad and he wanted to talk to me. There was just one problem. I still didn’t want to talk to him.
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Post  Rania Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:31 pm

Great part, but also so sad...
Talk to Javi...I wanna know what he has to say Wink
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Post  girl1035 Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:37 pm

Great part. She really should talk to Javi.
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Post  Mindex Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:53 pm

Yes... so sad... but she will talk to him.? Right? What a Face
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Post  Heli Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:55 pm

You'll know next part is she going to talk with him or not.. Wink
Because it's the final part then... Rolling Eyes
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Post  Hen «3 Javi Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:55 pm

the others are right so TALK to him
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Post  Sergo Sun Jan 13, 2008 2:06 pm

Stupid Javi... Mad

But still. talk to him Smile
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Post  emilia Sun Jan 13, 2008 5:15 pm

I'm totally speechless now...This is so amazing story
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Post  Prisca Sun Jan 13, 2008 5:24 pm

he acted like a really bastard but she must talk to him.... Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes


good part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Aida Sun Jan 13, 2008 5:44 pm

So sad Sad
I think she should listen to what Javi has to say Rolling Eyes

Great part Very Happy
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Post  Riikka Sun Jan 13, 2008 6:16 pm

She have to speak with him! Neutral
This is great story, sad that end is so close Sad
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Post  girl1035 Sun Jan 13, 2008 6:28 pm

How close is the end? "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part - Page 10 Icon_sad
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Post  Riikka Sun Jan 13, 2008 7:33 pm

Heli wrote:You'll know next part is she going to talk with him or not.. Wink
Because it's the final part then... Rolling Eyes

At least she said so... Rolling Eyes
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