"Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
wow so great part again
moreee
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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OMG a man that likes shopping... ... rare thing...
i hate snakes
i hate snakes
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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This story is slowly coming to the ending... Just few parts left..
Part 22
I had only a week left and then I had to leave back home, because of my studies. I wanted to take all of this last week with Javi.
I was at the work again. I had said to Javi that I would come in the afternoon to home. But I was so fast that I could leave few hours earlier. I decided to surprise Javi. I bought some groceries and I planned to make some food at the evening.
I opened the front door quiet. I wanted to surprise him totally. I heard some laughing and voices from the living room. I thought that maybe he had invited some friends or something. I went to the kitchen and put the groceries to the fridge. Then I opened slightly the door to living room.
That scene I won’t forget ever. That moment my heart broke into thousands pieces. I saw Javi with some woman. It looked like the same woman whose I had seen before at the town. But I wasn’t sure. And I didn’t care who it was. They were lying on the couch. And kissing. And caressing each others. I didn’t want to see more. I knew where that caressing would end up. And that happening I really didn’t want to see. I closed the door quietly and left the house. I haven’t any idea where I should go. But I didn’t want see Javi ever. I thought that he would be different man than the others. But same kind of bastard he was, like every man, who I had met. That moment I decided that I won’t ever trust any men. Never!
Then I burst crying. I was so shocked that I just started to run. I didn’t know where. Suddenly I ran into somebody.
“Hey, what’s up?” a voice asked.
I raised my look, and looked straight to Mikel.
“Hey, why are you crying?” he asked again.
“I…I…” I couldn’t say anything. I was so shocked.
“Come here.” he leaded me to the park bench.
“Now, tell me. I can see that something is happened.” he said.
Finally, I started to explain, slowly and confusedly, because I was crying all the time. But Mikel listened to me, and that was all I wanted then. He didn’t interrupt me but let me tell everything. Finally I finished.
“Well, I can’t believe that about Javi.” he finally said. “We all have seen how much he loves you.”
“Not enough, if he wants another woman too.” I said sad.
“But can’t you talk about this to him?” Mikel asked.
“I don’t want to talk or see him ever!” I yelled. “I just want to go home.” I continued quiet.
“But how are you able to get your stuff there?” he asked.
“I really don’t know.” I answered. “I haven’t thought that far.”
“I know. I take you to my house and I’ll call to Ony and Basty there. Then I’ll go to Javi and go somewhere with him that you can get your stuff there with Ony and Basty.” Mikel explained.
“Could you really do that?” I asked.
“Yes, I want to help you.” he said.
“Thanks a lot.” I said and hugged him. “You’re really good friend.”
We went to Mikel’s house and soon Ony and Basty were there too. Mikel called to Javi and invited him to a coffee with him. Ony drove us to Javi’s house. He stayed at the car while I and Basty went to the house and I started to pack my things. Soon I was ready.
“I still can’t believe that Javi has done something like that.” Basty said suddenly.
“You don’t believe me?” I asked little angry.
“Of course I believe you, but he usually doesn’t do anything like this.” he replied. “My opinion is still that you should talk with him.”
“Don’t you understand that I DON’T WANT TO TALK WITH HIM!” I finally yelled.
“Hey, calm down.” Basty said calmly.
“I’m sorry.” I whispered and started to cry again. “I’m so confused right now.”
“Come here.” Basty said and hugged me tight. “You still have me, Ony and Mikel. We want to be your friends.”
“I know. And I really appreciate that.” I whispered.
Basty left me alone for a while. Javi didn’t still know that I knew what he had done. So I left a short message to him. “I saw you. Don’t call me. I don’t want to see you ever.” I left it on the kitchen table. Then I felt the necklace on my neck. I pulled it a little and it broke.
“So our trust was as durable as this necklace.” I thought. I left my keys and the necklace next to my note. Then I left from the apartment and didn’t look back.
Part 22
I had only a week left and then I had to leave back home, because of my studies. I wanted to take all of this last week with Javi.
I was at the work again. I had said to Javi that I would come in the afternoon to home. But I was so fast that I could leave few hours earlier. I decided to surprise Javi. I bought some groceries and I planned to make some food at the evening.
I opened the front door quiet. I wanted to surprise him totally. I heard some laughing and voices from the living room. I thought that maybe he had invited some friends or something. I went to the kitchen and put the groceries to the fridge. Then I opened slightly the door to living room.
That scene I won’t forget ever. That moment my heart broke into thousands pieces. I saw Javi with some woman. It looked like the same woman whose I had seen before at the town. But I wasn’t sure. And I didn’t care who it was. They were lying on the couch. And kissing. And caressing each others. I didn’t want to see more. I knew where that caressing would end up. And that happening I really didn’t want to see. I closed the door quietly and left the house. I haven’t any idea where I should go. But I didn’t want see Javi ever. I thought that he would be different man than the others. But same kind of bastard he was, like every man, who I had met. That moment I decided that I won’t ever trust any men. Never!
Then I burst crying. I was so shocked that I just started to run. I didn’t know where. Suddenly I ran into somebody.
“Hey, what’s up?” a voice asked.
I raised my look, and looked straight to Mikel.
“Hey, why are you crying?” he asked again.
“I…I…” I couldn’t say anything. I was so shocked.
“Come here.” he leaded me to the park bench.
“Now, tell me. I can see that something is happened.” he said.
Finally, I started to explain, slowly and confusedly, because I was crying all the time. But Mikel listened to me, and that was all I wanted then. He didn’t interrupt me but let me tell everything. Finally I finished.
“Well, I can’t believe that about Javi.” he finally said. “We all have seen how much he loves you.”
“Not enough, if he wants another woman too.” I said sad.
“But can’t you talk about this to him?” Mikel asked.
“I don’t want to talk or see him ever!” I yelled. “I just want to go home.” I continued quiet.
“But how are you able to get your stuff there?” he asked.
“I really don’t know.” I answered. “I haven’t thought that far.”
“I know. I take you to my house and I’ll call to Ony and Basty there. Then I’ll go to Javi and go somewhere with him that you can get your stuff there with Ony and Basty.” Mikel explained.
“Could you really do that?” I asked.
“Yes, I want to help you.” he said.
“Thanks a lot.” I said and hugged him. “You’re really good friend.”
We went to Mikel’s house and soon Ony and Basty were there too. Mikel called to Javi and invited him to a coffee with him. Ony drove us to Javi’s house. He stayed at the car while I and Basty went to the house and I started to pack my things. Soon I was ready.
“I still can’t believe that Javi has done something like that.” Basty said suddenly.
“You don’t believe me?” I asked little angry.
“Of course I believe you, but he usually doesn’t do anything like this.” he replied. “My opinion is still that you should talk with him.”
“Don’t you understand that I DON’T WANT TO TALK WITH HIM!” I finally yelled.
“Hey, calm down.” Basty said calmly.
“I’m sorry.” I whispered and started to cry again. “I’m so confused right now.”
“Come here.” Basty said and hugged me tight. “You still have me, Ony and Mikel. We want to be your friends.”
“I know. And I really appreciate that.” I whispered.
Basty left me alone for a while. Javi didn’t still know that I knew what he had done. So I left a short message to him. “I saw you. Don’t call me. I don’t want to see you ever.” I left it on the kitchen table. Then I felt the necklace on my neck. I pulled it a little and it broke.
“So our trust was as durable as this necklace.” I thought. I left my keys and the necklace next to my note. Then I left from the apartment and didn’t look back.
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
This is unbelievabely great story. Keep it rocking.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Oh, nooo...
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Stupid Javi
Mikel is so sweet for taking care of her
Mikel is so sweet for taking care of her
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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How Javi could do something like that?
But this was sooo GREAT again
But this was sooo GREAT again
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Stupid stupid Javi
Hen «3 Javi- Number of posts : 140
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Stupid Javi
Moooore please
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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JAVI what he has done??
More!
More!
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Javi Stupid chickenass!
How he could do that?!
Naaaw the other boys are so sweet!!
Javi should take an example to them
A M A Z I N G !!!!!!
M O R E !!!!!!
How he could do that?!
Naaaw the other boys are so sweet!!
Javi should take an example to them
A M A Z I N G !!!!!!
M O R E !!!!!!
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that bastard, that asshole, that animal...
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Part 23
Ony drove us to María where I was supposed to spend the rest of the night. I had booked a flight when I was waiting Ony and Basty at Mikel’s house. It was a night fly, so I decided to spend the evening at María’s house.
“I’m sorry that I have to leave like this.” I said to María. “But I have no other choice.”
“It’s okay. But I can’t believe that Javi could do anything like this.” she said and shook her head and smiled sad.
“Me either.” I whispered. Tears were so close again.
“Thanks all of you that you haven’t told anything to Javi. I really appreciate this.” I said.
“But in my opinion, you should talk with Javi.” María said. “Maybe he has a good reason for his behaviour.”
“What would be a good reason for kissing and caressing other woman?” I asked. “I can’t think any.”
Finally I had to leave to the airport. Ony promised to take me there, because he had the car. I said goodbyes to everyone and promised to call them, when I arrived at home.
“Goodbye then.” I said when Ony took my luggage from the car.
“Goodbye.” Ony answered. “Please, think about talking with Javi. He hasn’t ever behaved like this.”
“I’ll promise to think it but I can’t promise that I would talk with him.” I said.
“Well, that’s enough for me.” he said and hugged me. “Goodbye and take care of yourself.”
“Goodbye.” I mumbled to his shoulder and then I left to the passport control.
Flight to home was like a hell. I couldn’t stop crying. I could control myself when others were with me. But now, when I was alone, I just cried. Some people looked me at strange way but I didn’t care about it. I still cried when I got to my home. I threw my luggage somewhere and walked straight to bed. And cried.
My friends were worried about me. But luckily my studies started and I concentrated on them. All evenings I just read my school books and I didn’t think anything else.
Every night was like a hell. I cried always myself to sleep. And at the morning I hoped that night wouldn’t come ever. I was scared them because then my thoughts started to round and round on Javi.
I called once to Mikel, Ony and Basty. Their opinion was still that I should talk to Javi. They said that he was very sad and he wanted to talk to me. There was just one problem. I still didn’t want to talk to him.
Ony drove us to María where I was supposed to spend the rest of the night. I had booked a flight when I was waiting Ony and Basty at Mikel’s house. It was a night fly, so I decided to spend the evening at María’s house.
“I’m sorry that I have to leave like this.” I said to María. “But I have no other choice.”
“It’s okay. But I can’t believe that Javi could do anything like this.” she said and shook her head and smiled sad.
“Me either.” I whispered. Tears were so close again.
“Thanks all of you that you haven’t told anything to Javi. I really appreciate this.” I said.
“But in my opinion, you should talk with Javi.” María said. “Maybe he has a good reason for his behaviour.”
“What would be a good reason for kissing and caressing other woman?” I asked. “I can’t think any.”
Finally I had to leave to the airport. Ony promised to take me there, because he had the car. I said goodbyes to everyone and promised to call them, when I arrived at home.
“Goodbye then.” I said when Ony took my luggage from the car.
“Goodbye.” Ony answered. “Please, think about talking with Javi. He hasn’t ever behaved like this.”
“I’ll promise to think it but I can’t promise that I would talk with him.” I said.
“Well, that’s enough for me.” he said and hugged me. “Goodbye and take care of yourself.”
“Goodbye.” I mumbled to his shoulder and then I left to the passport control.
Flight to home was like a hell. I couldn’t stop crying. I could control myself when others were with me. But now, when I was alone, I just cried. Some people looked me at strange way but I didn’t care about it. I still cried when I got to my home. I threw my luggage somewhere and walked straight to bed. And cried.
My friends were worried about me. But luckily my studies started and I concentrated on them. All evenings I just read my school books and I didn’t think anything else.
Every night was like a hell. I cried always myself to sleep. And at the morning I hoped that night wouldn’t come ever. I was scared them because then my thoughts started to round and round on Javi.
I called once to Mikel, Ony and Basty. Their opinion was still that I should talk to Javi. They said that he was very sad and he wanted to talk to me. There was just one problem. I still didn’t want to talk to him.
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Great part, but also so sad...
Talk to Javi...I wanna know what he has to say
Talk to Javi...I wanna know what he has to say
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Great part. She really should talk to Javi.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Yes... so sad... but she will talk to him.? Right?
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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You'll know next part is she going to talk with him or not..
Because it's the final part then...
Because it's the final part then...
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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the others are right so TALK to him
Hen «3 Javi- Number of posts : 140
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Stupid Javi...
But still. talk to him
But still. talk to him
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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I'm totally speechless now...This is so amazing story
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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he acted like a really bastard but she must talk to him....
good part
good part
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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So sad
I think she should listen to what Javi has to say
Great part
I think she should listen to what Javi has to say
Great part
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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She have to speak with him!
This is great story, sad that end is so close
This is great story, sad that end is so close
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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How close is the end?
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Heli wrote:You'll know next part is she going to talk with him or not..
Because it's the final part then...
At least she said so...
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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