~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)

Hi, girls
Well, I was thinking of a new story, but I don't know what to do This time I started something different (a little bit), in some parts I try to show the "real blondes" (I hope you won't find it mean of me) and all... I am just would like to know if you are interested in such kind of story
Or would you like the continuation of the ~Fairytale~ instead?
Or maybe no stories from me at all?

Well, anyways, thanks

well.. i want this new one and the continuation of the fairytale

New story? YEEESSSS!! Please!!! and continuation as well!!!

I want this new one

and continuation of the fairytale

What? Huh?
No no no, that's not the deal, I said OR, not AND

booth options

and of course, it's not mean, i'm blonde and i know i'm blonde, and i show it sometimes too well

But we say AND

Tet&Ony is <3 wrote:

and of course, it's not mean, i'm blonde and i know i'm blonde, and i show it sometimes too well

i'm with you

high-five pris

Alright, so in gen I see that I will have to write both, I can just choose the order...alright...
I just wonder how do you manipulate me like that

we have speciall powers

*Pris* wrote:we have speciall powers

Hahaha

Wiihooo...sounds great

Part 1
‘Oh MIIIIIIIKEEEEEEEL,‘ Javi yelled.
‘WHAT?‘ Mikel replied. He suddenly bumped into Basty, who muttered. The whole dance was ruined and they had to start from beginning.
‘What what?!!! You should be moving to the RIGHT, but instead you turn left…’ Javi explained, but it was obvious already.
‘Oh…Uhm…Sorry,’ Mikel muttered.
‘What?’ Javi asked. The music was very loud, because Basty enjoyed it a lot.
‘SORRY,’ Mikel yelled. ‘Can somebody turn the music off already? My head’s gonna blow!’ he added.
‘Oh, right, sorry,’ Basty said and lowered the music sound.
‘I am so sick of that song…’ Ony said when he came to Mikel and Javi. ‘So, no more practice today?’ he asked in a lazy voice.
‘How about…no?’ Mikel asked.
‘Hey, guys, I still can’t do that tricky thing in the end,’ Basty complained. ‘I will stay and practice that bit without being pushed by some…mikel-kind persons.’
‘I guess I should stay too and work on my muscles a little bit,’ Ony muttered. He knew others will laugh, but Ony more than the others realized that good looks were also helping them. He couldn’t imagine four totally fat guys with big beer-bellies getting on top of charts.
‘Yeah, Ony and his muscles,’ Javi smiled. ‘Well, have to also stay, because I feel like dancing today,’ he smiled even wider. Javi was very active when he had enough sleep and it seemed that last night Javi had some double of it.
‘And I feel like falling on my bed and sleeping 24 hours,’ Mikel said tiredly.
‘You feel so – you do so,’ Basty said and turn the music on again.
‘Yes, you’re the best friends in the world, I love you too,’ Mikel said sarcastically. Mikel grabbed his clothes and left. While doing so, he slapped the doors hardly.
‘Basty, you should have been nicer,’ Javi said when Mikel was away.
‘I didn’t think he was in SUCH bad mood… Mikel is…well…Mikeliuos usually,’ Basty said.
‘Will you STOP TALKING? You’re irritating me,’ Ony yelled and turned on the music louder so that he can feel the rhythm better.

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OoooooOoOoooo...fight ...sorry, i'm just freakin' bored todday
Great part Can't wait for more

Kyra wrote:

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this story sounds familiar to me, dunno why

moreeeee

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moreeeee

Cause I showed it to you some time ago

yes, I just realized I told you to post it

Part 2
‘What? Hell no!’ a girl yelled.
‘Come on, a kiss!’ he whined and tried to hug her. That guy waited for her next to ladies room and now he didn’t let go back inside that main room of the nightclub. The girl was getting pissed off.
‘I said NO!’ she yelled once again and pushed him away.
‘A little kiss!!!!’ he almost begged and fell on her.
‘You freak!!! Get off me!’ she said and tried to push him. His hands were on her ass. ‘You shall sooooo regret this!!!’ the girl yelled and hit him hard. He released a sound like dying animals do and let her go. ‘Asshole!!!’ she yelled at him once again. The girl smoothed her hair and walked away proud.
‘Found a new friend?’ a guy by the bar asked.
‘Yeah, right, you wish,’ the girl said and took a glass out of his hand. ‘I need a drink,’ she explained and drank all the drink in his glass.
‘Ohohoho, you want me to take you home or something?’ he laughed. ‘You drank all my whiskey…damn you!’ he said and smiled. The girl smiled back.
‘Hot,’ she only said and took off her jacket.
‘Oh mama,’ the guy only winked to her and put the glass on the bar. He took her hand and led her to the dance floor. Although there were many people in the nightclub, he managed to get them some space and they started dancing. ‘Na na na…nanana…’ he was whispering the melody of the song into her ear.
She sooo hated it. He was such a bad singer even if he wasn’t singing!
‘Uhm, Miguel,’ the girl said.
‘What?’ he stopped whispering.
‘When does Big Daddy come tomorrow?’ she asked.
‘Jesus, you always ruin the moment,’ the guy whined and his hands on her back became colder.
‘Well, work is work. You know me,’ she said and stopped dancing.
‘Yes, I do know you, but…come on…’ he was trying to say.
‘No, never mind. I will call Carla and find it out myself,’ she said and went back to the bar. The girl asked the bartender to give her some tequila.
‘You will become drunk soon,’ the guy came closer and sat next to her.
‘Well, sometimes I want to become drunk,’ she said. Her mood was spoilt.
‘Look, it is our date…’ the guy tried to tell her something, but she looked at him with the killer’s look.
‘Miguel, we cannot talk about job at home, we cannot do it on dates, definitely not at workplace and not at public places as well… How on Earth then we can talk about it?’ she asked.
‘Well, we don’t need to talk about it at all! We made these rules…’ he was saying, but the girl interrupted him.
‘YOU made those rules. I just followed them,’ she said unhappily.
‘Are you not happy with me?’ Miguel asked suddenly.
‘I am happy, but I am not a bird in a cage. I just need some freedom,’ she said.
‘Come on, baby… I am sorry… It won’t happen again,’ Miguel said, but he didn’t sound sincere. He tried taking her hand, but she grabbed the tequila.
‘Cheers,’ she said and drank it. Her eyes were already seeing a little bit gloomy, she felt she was getting drunk little by little.
‘Baby, you drank three tequilas, two whiskeys and a bottle of cider. Maybe it’s enough?’ Miguel asked.
‘Don’t…call me…BABY,’ the girl said. Then the girl leaned and gave to the guy huuuuge and looong and totally hooooot kiss. Then she leaned back and looked at him. Miguel was surprised and pleased. She liked him like that. He was hers for a moment.
‘That was…uffff, you should drink that much more often,’ Miguel just said and the girl laughed. Then he leaned closer and whispered almost into her ear ‘I now need you more than I love you’.
The girl suddenly pushed him away a little bit and looked at him.
‘You are sick, I’m telling you… Is sex all you think of?’ she asked. ‘You know, we are together for only three weeks and I don’t plan to fuck you anytime soon,’ she said.
‘Baby, no, you didn’t get me right,’ Miguel tried to defend himself. But she wasn’t THAT drunk to misunderstand him.
‘I thought you are at least a little bit different… Yes, you all think of sex, but saying me you love me less than you want to satisfy your needs…’ she just muttered and stood up.
‘Baby, no, please, hey, don’t go yet!’ Miguel said and also stood up.
‘Don’t call me BABY!!!’ the girl yelled at him. Suddenly alcohol played its role and she just pushed Miguel. ‘You know, I…I will go home now and…and sleep…and you…you can choose any girl to fuck with…cause you don’t really love…love me much,’ she said and hiccupped after every three words. Her sane mind was trying to say it might be all her fault, but she made it shut up.
The girl looked at Miguel and hiccupped once again. ‘Damn,’ she muttered to herself.
‘I will take you home,’ Miguel said.
‘No no, I will walk. I need some…fresh air,’ she said feeling that alcohol’s effect will soon leave her away. She grabbed her leather jacket, because the wind was very hard outside, then she turned around and left Miguel standing in the middle of nightclub, next to the bar.
And she didn’t notice the same guy from the ladies room following her.

Great part
I want moreee!!

Holy shit!!! This will be an awesome story - AGAIN!!!! We have a real writer here!!! :doublethumbsup

ooohhhh.... this is amazing