~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)

Don't worry, the pistol won't be used for bad things...yet
I mean, even shooting Miguel isn't bad...is it?

Shooting Mikel is not bad at all.

I like Miguel

girl1035 wrote:Shooting Mikel is not bad at all.

Do you hate Mikel that much?

Sergo wrote:I like Miguel

He is rude, brutal and sick man, who imagines that this girl is his property and that he will have her one day Without revealing too much, I am sure you will hate him one day...

Wow... good.. good... as always!

i hate miguel

*Pris* wrote:i hate miguel

Me too And I hate him even more when I think of the future...

Mindex wrote:Wow... good.. good... as always!

Thank'uo

know that you said that... he must be killed

*Pris* wrote:know that you said that... he must be killed

Maybe he will be killed, who knows

good

*Pris* wrote:good

Sergo's gonna be sad then

Kyra wrote:

girl1035 wrote:Shooting Mikel is not bad at all.

Do you hate Mikel that much?

Just in this story.

girl1035 wrote:

Kyra wrote:

girl1035 wrote:Shooting Mikel is not bad at all.

Do you hate Mikel that much?

Just in this story.

Wow, I thought people will hate Miguel and look how all turned around
Damn

the first part I didn't read before

and I loved! <3

Kyra wrote:

girl1035 wrote:

Kyra wrote:

girl1035 wrote:Shooting Mikel is not bad at all.

Do you hate Mikel that much?

Just in this story.

Wow, I thought people will hate Miguel and look how all turned around
Damn

she wants to kill mikel

Naah I still like Miguel

Part 6
She took a pistol into her hands and looked at it. Yes, it was her good old gun. When she first got it, she was a little bit scared, but now she was a professional and nothing could scare her. Well, almost nothing…
‘Miguel!!! Big Daddy will kill us!’ she yelled and saw Miguel coming out of the kitchen. His mouth was full of ice cubes. ‘At least you won’t try to kiss me now,’ she muttered.
‘Ha… Funny… It hurts, you know,’ Miguel said.
‘And it hurts when you kiss me when I don’t want that. You squeeze me so much that I feel my stomach getting up to mouth,’ she said.
‘Damn, why can’t you just LOVE me?’ Miguel asked and put on his jacket. Then they left the number and closed the door. Miguel locked it and out the key into his pocket.
‘I do love you,’ she lied and acted like there was really interesting on her nails.
‘You lie and it makes me mad!’ Miguel said.
‘Well and that makes ME mad! You are a brutal man just like your profession sometimes asks, but I don’t need you to demonstrate your strength against me,’ I said.
‘Oh come on, baby, what was in the room before, it was just…just…just…’ Miguel was trying to find words.
‘It felt as if you were trying to molest me,’ she said instead and started walking faster. ‘Come on, BD won’t wait for long.’

Mikel was out of his breath and all sweaty after few hours of dancing. He was trying to keep up, but for some reasons he was like a stick. He was feeling broken in half and his eye was hurting from time to time.
‘Is Mikelito tired?’ Ony asked.
‘Miss Ony, I think your perfection is sweating as well,’ Mikel said.
‘That’s sexy on me,’ Ony laughed.
‘Uhm, Ony… What are those two doing?’ Mikel then asked when he noticed Basty and Javi throwing towels at each other. ‘I hope those towels are at least clean…’
‘EW!’ they both said.
‘I think…uhm…no, don’t ask me,’ Ony said then.
‘Sometimes they act like children,’ Mikel commented.
‘Sometimes they act like blonds!’ Ony replied and they both laughed. ‘How’s your eye?’ Ony asked after a moment.
‘Still hurts a bit, but I will survive,’ Mikel said. Javi’s towel appeared on Basty’s face.
‘JAVI!!!’ Basty yelled.
‘Kids,’ Mikel muttered.
‘I have to agree,’ Ony said. ‘Ehem, Mikel, I don’t remember, who you said hit you?’ Ony asked after few seconds when Basty and Javi calmed down.
‘Well, obviously you don’t remember, cause I never told it,’ Mikel said. Suddenly he felt ashamed to say a girl hit him like that (even though he was happy his teeth and nose was alright, not like that guy’s who attacked the girl), so Mikel just gulped. ‘Well, there were three of them,’ he then said.
‘Three?’ Ony asked. He was interested. ‘Hey, Basty, Javi, come, Mikel’s telling us a story,’ Ony then shouted to the guys.
‘I hope it’s not about Cinderella…’ Javi said.
‘Sure not, Javi. I bet it’s about Mermaid,’ Basty teased him.
‘It’s about three guys who attacked Mikel,’ Ony explained and Javi with Basty started moving faster.
‘Hey, really, it’s not a show!’ Mikel said a bit annoyed. ‘Gosh, like it’s the event of the year…’
‘It’s almost,’ Javi said. ‘Not everyday one of us is attacked!’
‘Well, whatever…’ Mikel said. ‘They were three…that’s about it,’ he said cause he didn’t know what else to say.
‘So, they beat you up and left in the alley or something?’ Ony asked.
‘Ehm…no…uhm…well…I hit one of them…uhm…then I took care of another, but the third approached me in that time and…and he hit me…but I showed him….well…anyways…they…they said I will regret and ran away like scared girls,’ Mikel lied and saw Ony, Basty and Javi really interested and proud.
‘I am proud of our little boy,’ Javi said.
‘Even I couldn’t do better,’ Ony said. Basty shook his head and put his hand on Mikel’s shoulder.
‘Well done,’ he said.
‘Yes…well done,’ Mikel said sarcastically.

haha
I love this

soo great and somehow it was also funny

well done for survive


great part

Great job!

Mikel just gulped. ‘Well, there were three of them,’ he then said.

yea right
This is great story as usually !!

This is amazing.